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届高三英语江苏省上学期月考应用文写作编含详解
2021高三英语江苏省高三全真模拟应用文写作编第二版(含详解)
(2021届江苏省2020-2021学年百校联考高三第二次考试)
假定你是李华,你校正在举办英语作文竞赛。
请你以“MusicandMe”为题,写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.音乐对你的重要性;
2.你喜欢的音乐类型及原因。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
MusicandMe
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【答案】MusicandMe
Ilikesharingthesayingwithothersthatmusicistomewhatairistolife.Ialwaysthinkmusicisthemostbeautifullanguageintheworld.Itisanimportantpartofmylife,whichoffersmeenergyandpowerwhenIambusystudyingorgetstuckindifficulties.
Amongsomuchmusic,Ilikepopmusicmost.Icanlistentoitanywhereintheworld.ItmakesmehappywhenIfeelupsetandhelpsmefacemychallengeswithapeacefulmind.Mostimportantly,Ifeelconfidentwhensingingapopsong.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生以“MusicandMe”为题,写一篇短文投稿。
详解】第一步:
审题
体裁:
应用文
时态:
根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时。
结构:
总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.音乐对你的重要性;
2.你喜欢的音乐类型及原因。
第二步:
列提纲(重点词组)
sharesth.withsb.;partof;offersb.sth.;bebusydoing;bestuckin;helpsb.dosth.
第三步:
连词成句
1.Ilikesharingthesayingwithothersthatmusicistomewhatairistolife.
2.Itisanimportantpartofmylife,whichoffersmeenergyandpowerwhenIambusystudyingorgetstuckindifficulties.
3.ItmakesmehappywhenIfeelupsetandhelpsmefacemychallengeswithapeacefulmind.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:
连句成篇(衔接词)(供参考)
1.表文章结构顺序:
Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast
2.表并列补充关系:
Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including,
3.表转折对比关系:
However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(从句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…
4.表因果关系:
Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]:
Ilikesharingthesayingwithothersthatmusicistomewhatairistolife.这句话运用了名词性从句。
[高分句型2]:
Itisanimportantpartofmylife,whichoffersmeenergyandpowerwhenIambusystudyingorgetstuckindifficulties.这句话运用了关系代词which引导的非限定性定语从句。
[高分句型3]:
Mostimportantly,Ifeelconfidentwhensingingapopsong.这句话运用了现在分词作状语。
(2021届江苏省海门中学、姜堰中学、淮阴中学12月联考)
假如你是李华,你一个在英国的笔友William得知上月你校组织了校园义卖(CharitySale)活动,来信向你询问活动详情,请给他写封回信,内容如下:
1、活动详情;2、你的感受。
注意:
1、写作词数应为80左右;2、请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
DearMr.William,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
LiHua
【答案】DearMr.William,
VerygladtoknowthatyouareinterestedintheCharitySaleheldinourschoollastmonth,I’mwillingtogiveyouabriefintroductiontotheactivity.
TheCharitySalestartedat2:
30p.m.onNovember29,whensometeachersandallstudentsinSeniorThreegottogetherontheplayground.Smallboothsweresetupasarrangedtoadvertisetheirgoods,includingfood,booksandevensomegreetingcards,someofwhichweremadebythemselves.Teachersandstudentswalkedaround,searchingforwhattheywereinterestedin.Itwentwellandfinishedat4:
30p.m..Intheend,allthemoneyearnedwouldgotothestudentsinneed.Ithinkitsignificantandworthwhiletoexperiencethisactivity,forwecanbuildupoursenseofresponsibilityandjoinourhandstohelpothers.
Lookforwardtointerestingstoriesinyourschool!
Yours,
LiHua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。
要求考生给英国的笔友William写封回信,介绍学校组织的校园义卖(CharitySale)活动的详情。
【详解】第一步:
审题
体裁:
应用文
时态:
根据提示,时态主要为一般过去时。
结构:
总分法
总分法是指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.表示问候;
2.说明活动详情;
3.表达自己的感受。
第二步:
列提纲(重点词组)
beinterestedin;bewillingtodosth.;gettogether;ontheplayground;setup;walkaround;searchfor;intheend;inneed;buildup;senseofresponsibility;lookforwardto
第三步:
连词成句
1.VerygladtoknowthatyouareinterestedintheCharitySaleheldinourschoollastmonth,I’mwillingtogiveyouabriefintroductiontotheactivity.
2.TheCharitySalestartedat2:
30p.m.onNovember29,whensometeachersandallstudentsinSeniorThreegottogetherontheplayground.
3.Smallboothsweresetupasarrangedtoadvertisetheirgoods,includingfood,booksandevensomegreetingcards,someofwhichweremadebythemselves.
4.Teachersandstudentswalkedaround,searchingforwhattheywereinterestedin.
5.Itwentwellandfinishedat4:
30p.m..
6.Allthemoneyearnedwouldgotothestudentsinneed.
7.Ithinkitsignificantandworthwhiletoexperiencethisactivity,forwecanbuildupoursenseofresponsibilityandjoinourhandstohelpothers.
8.Lookforwardtointerestingstoriesinyourschool!
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态的问题。
第四步:
连句成篇(衔接词)
表文章结构顺序:
Intheend
2.表并列补充关系:
Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including(供参考)
3.表转折对比关系:
However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(从句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…(供参考)
4.表因果关系:
Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult(供参考)
连句成文,注意使用恰当
连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:
润色修改
【点睛】[高分句型1]
VerygladtoknowthatyouareinterestedintheCharitySaleheldinourschoollastmonth,I’mwillingtogiveyouabriefintroductiontotheactivity.(that引导宾语从句,held为过去分词作后置定语)
[高分句型2]
Smallboothsweresetupasarrangedtoadvertisetheirgoods,includingfood,booksandevensomegreetingcards,someofwhichweremadebythemselves.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3]
Ithinkitsignificantandworthwhiletoexperiencethisactivity,forwecanbuildupoursenseofresponsibilityandjoinourhandstohelpothers.(it为形式宾语,动词不定式为真正的宾语)
(2021届江苏省淮安市高中校协作体高三上学期检测)
假定你是李华,今天(星期六,4月2日,多云)学校组织去科学馆参加主题为“HumanActivitiesandWildlifeProtection”的活动。
请围绕这次活动写一篇日记。
要点如下:
1.野生动植物的现状;
2.保护野生动植物的意义;
3.保护野生动植物的措施。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】SaturdayApril2Cloudy
ThisafternoonItookpartinanorganizedactivitywiththethemeof“HumanActivitiesandWildlifeProtection”inthesciencemuseum.Fromtheactivity,Ilearnthatatpresenttheenvironmentisbeingdestroyedbecauseofpeople'sharmfulactivities,whichcausesadecreaseofwildlife.Besides,manypeoplehuntwildanimalsfortheirmeatandmoney.Tomakemattersworse,inresponse,thedecreaseisdoingharmtopeople'slife.
Soitisnecessarytotakeeffectivemeasurestoprotectourenvironment,suchascreatingwildlifereservesandpassinglawstoraisetheawarenessofwildlifeprotection.Wildanimalsarefriendsofourhumanbeings.Toprotectthemistoprotectourselves.Allinall,Ibenefitalotfromtoday'sactivity.
【解析】
【分析】本文属于提纲类作文。
要求考生就参加的学校组织去科学馆主题为“HumanActivitiesandWildlifeProtection”的活动写一篇日记。
【详解】第一步:
审题
时态:
根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时,个别处可用现在进行时和一般过去时。
结构:
总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.野生动植物的现状;2.保护野生动植物的意义;3.保护野生动植物的措施。
第二步:
列提纲(重点词组):
takepartin,withthethemeof,atpresent,becauseof,causesadecreaseofwildlife,huntwildanimals,doharmto,takeeffectivemeasurestoprotectourenvironment,raisetheawarenessof,
第三步:
连词成句:
1.ThisafternoonItookpartinanorganizedactivitywiththethemeof“HumanActivitiesandWildlifeProtection”inthesciencemuseum.
2.Fromtheactivity,Ilearnthatatpresenttheenvironmentisbeingdestroyedbecauseofpeople'sharmfulactivities,whichcausesadecreaseofwildlife.
3.Manypeoplehuntwildanimalsfortheirmeatandmoney.
4.Thedecreaseisdoingharmtopeople'slife.
5.Itisnecessarytotakeeffectivemeasurestoprotectourenvironment,suchascreatingwildlifereservesandpassinglawstoraisetheawarenessofwildlifeprotection.
6.Wildanimalsarefriendsofourhumanbeings.
7.Toprotectthemistoprotectourselves.8.Allinall,Ibenefitalotfromtoday'sactivity.根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:
连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表并列补充关系:
besides,tomakemattersworse,allinall
2.表因果关系:
so
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]Ilearnthatatpresenttheenvironmentisbeingdestroyedbecauseofpeople'sharmfulactivities,whichcausesadecreaseofwildlife.使用宾语从句、非限制性定语从句
[高分句型2]Soitisnecessarytotakeeffectivemeasurestoprotectourenvironment,suchascreatingwildlifereservesandpassinglawstoraisetheawarenessofwildlifeprotection.用it做形式主语
[高分句型3]Toprotectthemistoprotectourselves.使用不定式做主语
(2021届江苏省南京市六校联合体高三上学期12月联考)
假定你是学生会主席李华,新年即将来临,你校将举办晚会,请你写信给你校外教老师John,内容包括:
1.邀请他参加晚会;
2.晚会的时间、地点;
3.活动安排。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】DearJohn,
IamLiHua,chairmanoftheStudents’Union.IamwritingtoinviteyoutoourpartyincelebrationofthecomingNewYear.
First,thepartyisscheduledtobeheldintheMusicHallat6:
00p.m.onDecember31st.Second,studentsandteachersinourschoolwillputonvariousperformancesrangingfromdancingtotalkshows.Atlast,therewillalsobeinterestinggames,inwhichthewinnerscangetprizes.Shouldyousingasongattheparty,itwoulddousagreathonor.
Isincerelyhopeyoucanattendtheparty.Lookingforwardtoyourpresence.
Yours,
LiHu