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雅思大作文思路
教育类
理论知识的重要性
理论知识为未来的的事业发展打好基础。
Theoreticalknowledgelaysasolidfoundationforcareerdevelopmentinfuture.
理论知识有助于提高思考问题、分析问题和解决问题的能力。
Theoreticalknowledgepromotescriticalthinkingskills,analyticalskillsandproblem-solvingskillsofstudents.
终生接受教育的原因
媒体和信息科技的发展提供了更多接受教育的机会。
Mediaandinformationtechnologiesmakedifferentlearningopportunitiesavailable.
人们为了能在激烈的竞争中求得生存需要不断地再教育。
Peopleshouldcontinueeducationinordertosurvivethefiercecompetition.
教育的观念有所改变,所以学生已经不限制在一个特定的年龄段了。
Theeducationconceptisintransition,sostudentscan'tbelimited/confinedtoaparticular/certainagegroup.
按能力分组教育的好处和坏处(DG)
(1)好处
老师可以调整教学材料和教学方法适应学生的接受能力。
Teacherscanadjustthematerialandmethodofinstructiontosuitastudent'scapability/aptitude.
(2)坏处
按能力分组教育是对成绩差的学生的一种歧视,因此养成对学业的不积极的态度。
Abilitygroupingisakindofdiscriminationforstudentsoflow(test/score)/pooracademicperformance,sotheydevelopnegativeattitudestowardsschool.
按能力分组教育拉大优秀学生和落后学生的差距。
Thegapbetweenthepoorandhighachieversiswidenedbyabilitygrouping.
学生评价老师
1.Drawbacks:
(1)学生还不够成熟,他们往往从自身的经验和利益出发来评价老师,因此unabletoevaluateteachers’performanceinasoundway。
可能会出现要求严格的老师不受欢迎的情况。
(2)学生评价老师也会对老师产生不好的影响,老师为了caterfortheneedsofchildrenandgetahighevaluation,从而放松对学生的要求,而且对教学内容和教学效果也会有影响
2.Advantages:
(1)对学生来说,评价老师有利于培养学生thinkindependently.应该鼓励学生challenge老师,这样他们不但学到知识,而且具有innovative思维,敢于超越老师。
(2)对老师来说,获得feedback也是提高自己教学能力和教学效果的有效途径,也有利于培养老师的竞争意识,不断学习,不断完善自己来满足学生的学习要求。
(3)学生交了学费,就是customer,老师提供教学服务,从这点上说,学生也有权评价老师。
大学是否应该根据就业教授学生知识,大学的主要功能是什么
平衡写:
1.认为应该提供实际知识的:
(1)大学生毕业就要找工作,因此要培养学生掌握futurejob的技能
(2)有人甚至声称理论没用,不是每个大学生都要做科学家
2.反对方
(1)Itwilldefinitelybeshortsightedto…目光短浅理论知识非常重要,理论指导实践,大学的职责不仅是教会学生一门技术,更重要的是教授一种方法
(2)不学理论只学实际知识,会使学生变成utilitarian,narrow-minded,lackofimagination,如果学生要学的只是生存的技能,那就去vocationalschool
3.总之,我认为大学的功能是versatile的,促进学生all-arounddevelopment,培养学生具有creativemindinsomespecialfield,而不只是教授该领域的实际知识,可以通过一些part-timejob来获得。
Tele-education
For:
1.Improvetheflexibilityoflearningintermsofspace,time,choiceofcontentorteachingresources.
2.Openupvocationaloptionsforpeoplewho,foravarietyofreasons,areunabletoattendconventionaltrainingcenters.
3.Veryeconomicalandsavesocialresourcesbecausetheadministrationisalmostcomputerized.
Against:
1.Face-to-facecontactcannotbereplaced.Intraditionalclassroom,studentsandteacherscancommunicatedirectlyandfreely.
2.Itmayleadtosomeside-effectssuchaspsychologicalproblemlikeisolation,selfishness,self-centeredness,stubbornness.
3.Studentsreceivingtele-educationtendtobesociallyunadaptable,lackingthenecessaryinterpersonalskills.
4.Studentsfailtocultivateteamworkspirit,cooperationandcompetition.
5.Intraditionalclassroom,bydiscussingwiththeclassmatesandexchangingideaswiththeteacher,studentslearnhowtosharetheideasormethodswitheachotherandhowtocooperatewitheachothertoseekabettersolution.
UnpaidCommunityWorks
Somepeoplebelievethatunpaidcommunityworks(eg.workinginacharityorganization;teachingsportstochildren)shouldbecomeacompulsorypartofhighschoolcurriculum.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?
Pros:
•I.Itisagoodwaytocultivatesomespecialqualitiesandessentialforstudents’growing.
•II.Thisactivitycanenrichstudents’schoollifeandmakeitmorecolorful.
•III.Unpaidcommunityworkscouldimprovethestudents’socialskillstoadapttothechangingworldwell.
•IV.Itcancultivateindependenceanddevelopastrongsenseofresponsibility.
•V.Itmaycultivatethespiritofdevotion.
Cons:
•I.Whenworkingmore,problemssuchasahighstresslevel,illnessandpoorgradesmayafflictstudents.
•II.Theworksmaycostlotsoftimewhichshouldbeusedtolearnknowledgeandtechniques.
•III.Themainfunctionofhighschoolistoteachstudentsknowledgeandskills.It’snotpropertoforcestudentstodounpaidcommunityworksascompulsorycourses.
赞同或者反对年轻人做义工的观点(AD)
(1)赞同
义工有助于获得社会经验
Volunteerworkcanhelptoacquire/gain/accumulateworkingexperience.
(2)反对
如果义工是强制性的,那么有可能会影响年轻人的积极性。
Ifunpaidcommunityworkismandatory,itwillaffect/dampenmotivation/enthusiasmofyoungpeople.
家庭教育类
Caringchildrenhasbecomeamoreandmoreimportantjobinmanysocieties,sothereissomeonearguingthattheparentsshouldberequiredtotakethetrainingchildrencourses,towhatextenddoyouagreeordisagree?
正方段:
someparentsshouldtakesomecoursestocompensatetheirshortcomingsineducatingchildren:
弥补家长在孩子教育中的不足:
1.what:
theycouldlearnagreatdealofnecessaryknowledgeinchildreneducation,suchashealthcare,literature,history,geography,andsoon.家长能够学习一些与孩子教育相关的基本知识,比如医疗、文化、历史、地理等。
2.How:
Byattendingtrainingchildrencourses,parentswouldgraspafeweducatingskillstobeagoodteacherandafriendtotheirchildren.让家长学习一些关于如何更好的教育孩子的技巧。
反方段:
itwillbringsomenegativeinfluencessimultaneously.这也会带来一些负面影响。
Youngpeopleareofteninfluencedintheirbehaviorsandsituationsbyothersinthesameage.Thisiscalled“peerpressure".Dothedisadvantagesoutweightheadvantages?
(教育类)
提示,定义法开头:
Youngpeopleoftenfeelthepressurefromthoseofthesameagearoundthem.Forexample,youngstersmaylearntosmokeiftheyaresurroundedbyyoungsmokerseventhoughtheyarenotawarewhytheysmoke.Thispracticeisdefinedaspeerpressure,whichisnotuncommonamongtheyouth.Asforadvantagesanddisadvantagescausedbythisphenomenon,itshouldbeviewfromwiderperspectives.
Body1:
negativeeffects.1.Peerpressuretendstoencourageyoungpeopletoimitate/copywhatothersdoregardlessofwhetheritisrightorwrong.Forexample,cuttingclassedisnotararethingintoday’suniversitiesinchina.Manypeopleattributethisphenomenontosomefactorssuchasboringclassesandlackofsupervision.However,asformanystudents,theyjustplaytruantbecausetheirpeersdoso.2.Ontheotherhand,peerpressuremaycausesomeseriousconsequencessuchascommittingcrimes.Youngpeopletendtobeimmatureandcannotmakeunbiasedjudgmentaboutsocialconventionsandlaws.Undertheinfluenceoftheirfriendsorfellowstudents,theymaylearnsomeviolentbehaviorsandevenembarkonthecrimeroad.3.Peerpressuremaycausesomepsychologicalimpactsonchildren.Ifateenagerfailstoconformtothehiddenrulesofpeerpressure,theymaybeisolatedfromtheothers,whichmayhurtthempsychologically.
Body2:
positiveeffects.Ontheotherhand,peerpressure,ifputinanappropriatesurrounding,mayhavesomepositiveeffects.Forexample,ifachildisputinanenvironmentwherehisfriendsandfellowstudentsdevotethemselvestostudy,heorshemayfeelpressuredtoengageinstudyarduouslytoo.What’smore,peerpressuremayenableyoungpeopletobefullofambition.Specifically,whenayoungpersonseepeoplearoundhimorhermakegreatprogressinstudy,musicorsport,instinctivemotivationmayspurhimorhertomoveforwardandcompetewithhisorherutmosttoachievethesametarget.
Consideringadvantagesanddisadvantages,itseemshardtodefinepeerpressureaspositiveornegative.However,afteranalyzingnumeroussocialcases,wemayfindthatyoungpeopleexposedtopeerpressuretendtobeinfluencednegatively.Therefore,inansweringthequestionofthetopic,wemaysayitsdisadvantagesoutweighadvantages.
2006/10/14
Somepeoplethinkthemainpurposeofschoolsistoturnthechildrenintogoodcitizensandworkers,ratherthantobenefitthemasindividuals.
Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?
(freedom,democracy)
1.Inmyviewthetwoarenotmutuallyexclusive.Itisbyhelpingchildrendeveloptheirownmoresandprinciples,aswellasinstillinginthemknowledgeneededforgoodemployees,thatteachersbestpreparechildrenforthefuturelife.
2.Oneoftheaimsofeducationistomakeyoungpeoplegoodcivilians.Oursisaworldoffreedomanddemocracy,therightsandneedsoftheindividualshouldbeputonthetopofgovernments’list.Butweshouldalwaysbearinmindthatthefeelingofeuphoriaofapersonisfirmlydependedonthestabilityandharmonyofthesociety.
3.Anotherequallyimportantpurposeofeducationistobenefitpeopleasindividuals.Nothingelsethanindividualownershipcanbemoreeffectiveforamantoexerthisorherinnerpower.
4.Inorderforthefarrangingbenefitsofeducationtobeachievedbyindividualsandcountries,educatorsmustemphasizethesignificanceofeducationforthesocietyasawhole,aswellasforapersonastheindividual.
电脑(互联网)是否会取代老师(学校),在哪些方面老师重要,哪些方面电脑重要
1.先承认电脑教学的好处
(1)studyinanyconvenienttimeandlocationatapersonalspeedandintensity
(2)提供的信息量大
2.不可能替换,因为其缺点1:
littlesocialcontact,lackofinteractivity,在学习中遇到困难得不到老师的指导
3.不可替换2:
学生不成熟,控制不了自己
电脑的好处:
CAI(ComputerAidedIntroduction)multimediatechnology
可以用于自动化考试系统onlinetestsystem
教师:
现代教育技术受制于学习软件,好的学习软件需要老师的参与开发
教学生如何学习,分析问题,解决问题
在智力教育方面,计算机可能部分的替代或者辅助老师,但是道德教育,价值观的培养离不开老师和学校。
社会问题
支持和反对提高油价的原因(AD)
(1)支持
提高油价鼓励人们更多的使用公共交通从而降低燃料的消耗
Increasing/promotionofpetrolpricescanencouragepeopletousemorepublictransportationsothatitreducesconsumptionoffuel
提高油价增加制造商其他新能源的汽车的发展
Increasingpetrolpricescanimprovethemanufacturers'developmentofvehiclesthatarepoweredbyotherformsofenergy
(2)反对
提高油价不能阻止汽车的使用,汽车是大部分国家必要的运输手段
Increasingpetrolpricescan'tpreventuseofvehicleswhichisthenecessarymeansoftransportinmostcountries
提高油价可能导致燃料市场的混乱
Itmayresultinchaos/disorder/messinfuelmarket