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如何做好书面表达2
如何做好书面表达
A.做好书面表达的几点建议
一.认真审题,明确表达要点.
审体裁（记叙文,议论文,说明文,描写文,应用文）,从而确定文章的格式,语言,时态,人称,段落层次,明确要点（明确要写些甚么,怎样写,怎样开头,怎样叙述,怎样结尾）.
二.紧扣内容要求,开始写作（若有要点提示,不要写漏）
1.不要离题,偏题。
2.谴词造句必须符合语言规范,切忌硬译,或写中式英语.
3.连词成篇,行文连贯.注意使用连词,过渡词,常用的过渡词有:
Firstofall,then,afterthat,lateron,andthen,before,but,however,although,so,therefore
Sothat,so...that…,ingeneral（一般说来），since（由于,既然，自从），assoonas,Inall（总之），inaword（一句话，总而言之），ononehand（一方面），ontheotherhand（另一方面）等。
4.详略得当,语言紧扣主题,废话少写.
5.选词组句要避难求易,避生就熟.
6.在能力范围内,尽量写高质量的句子（复合句,并列句;名言警句,具有生活哲理的句子）
三.仔细检查,认真核对,力求做到文章的结构严谨,内容连贯完整,布局合理.
1.内容是否紧扣主题;
2.所提示的材料内容是否全部包括,有无遗漏,是否符合题目要求;
3.格式,大小写,标点符号是否正确;
4.句子结构是否正确,有无病句;
5.是否有语法错误,拼写错误;
四.誊写规范,书面整洁.
B.英语作文中常犯的语法错误。
一.谓语部分的错误
1.句子中无谓语动词.（这种错误常出现于没有明显行为动词的汉语句子中）
Iveryhappy.→
OurschoolinthemiddleofQiaoDian.→
MyEnglishteachermediumheightandmediumbuild.
→
Myparentsverybusylastweek.→
Ieatingfruittwiceaweek.→
Shedidn’tangrywithme.→
Weshouldtobehonest.
Henottall.→
2.谓语动词太多（既有be动词，又有实义动词的原型，第三人称单数，过去式；或实义动词有两个或两个以上）
如：
Ilikeplaybasketball.→
Iamlikejunkfood.→
ShewasstartedlearnEnglishin1995.→
Mybrotherisdoeshishomework.→
Theyare’twantstudyhard.→
It’shelpmegrowup.→
3.主谓不一致（即主语和谓语的人称和数不一致）
如：
Someonelikesinging.→
MyfriendandIamplayingcomputergames
→
Ioftenborrowsbooksfromtheschoollibrary.
→
Wewashappy.→
Mymotherdon’tlikepopsongs.→
Readinggivemeknowledge.→
Ihasboughtmanybooksalready.→
Shegotoworkearlyandcomebackverylate.
→
Differentpeoplehasdifferenthobbies.
→
Henotonlystudygoodbutalsosinggood.
→
4.时态，语态的错误及动词用错。
如：
Oneday,Iamillbutmymotherdoesn’tathome.
→
OnweekendsIamwatchingTV.→
Ourschoolbuiltin1983.→
IstarttolearnEnglishthreeyearsago.
→
Thereisapartyinourschoolnextweek.
→
Icollectcoinssince2001.→
LuXunwritedmanyfamousbooks.→
Ourhomeworkmusthandinbeforeeveningclass.
→
Ihavesixteenyearsold.→
Thedeskhas1.5meterslong.→
二.主语错误.
1.句子无主语.
如.At11:
00eatlunch.→
Asforfruit,likeapplesandpears→
Lastweekendwastired.→
2.主语重复
Myfatherheisadoctor.→
Mymothershe’snameisLiLan.→
3.主语形式错误。
Playedfootballisveryinteresting.→
Smokeisbadforourhealth.→
MylikeEnglish.→
HerisanAmericangirl.→
三.数不一致
如.Therearefourbuildinginourschool.→
Ihaveabrothers.→
Shelikestomatoandpotato.→
Myteacherisaboutthirtyyearold.→
Areyouanhonestchildren→
四.代词用错.
如:
Myisveryhealthy→
InameisMary.→
DoyoulikeI?
→
HisteachesMath.→
Wealllikehimclasses.→
Iverylikeyour.→
Sheisusfriend.→
Mybackpackisbetterthanher.→
Imetafriendofmyyesterday.→
Thisismyselfhobby.→
Theboyoftenlooksathiminamirror.→
He’snameisCaoLi.→
Itcostmy20dollars.→
Inourslife,weshouldhonest.→
五.语序错误.（尤其是状语位置放错）
如:
Iwithmyfriendsplaybasketballintheafternoon.
→
Sheoftenbybikegotoschool.→
WeusuallyonSundaysgotothemountains.
→
Inthemorning,weat6:
00getup.→
Don’tontheroadplay.→
Thisisoursdudy’splace.→
Edisonisahasthought’sperson.→
六.very和verymuch用错
Very用于形容词或副词前。
如：
It’sveryhottoday.Weareveryhappy.
Ourteacherisverystrictwithus.
Verymuch放于实义动词及其宾语后用来加强程度。
如：
Ilikeyouverymuch.而不是Iverylikeyou.
Shelikestostudyverymuch.Thankyouverymuch.
范文
1.请你以Happy为题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对幸福的理解。
Happiness
Ioftenfeelhappy.Therearemanythingsthatmakemehappy.Forexample,whenIgetpresentsfromothers,Ifeelhappy,whichmakesmefeelthatpeoplearoundmeareniceandfriendlytome.WhenIhelpothers,IalsofeelhappybecauseIthinkhelpingothersalsohelpmyself.Iamhappyeveryday.Happinessislikeflowers.Thiskindoffeelingisgoodforme.Ialwaysfeelthattheworldissobeautiful.Inthefuture,Iwanttobeahappygirl.Doyouhavethesamefeelingasme?
点评：
本文用词简洁，语言流畅，并且用了高级句型，如：
定语从句、时间状语从句等，增强了语句的表现力。
2.假如你是LiLei,现在请你以ALetterToMyEnglishTeacher为题，写一篇英语短文，表达你对老师的感激之情和祝福。
ALetterToMyEnglishTeacher
DearMissLi，
Howtimeflies!
Iamgraduatingfromschool.Atthismoment,Iwouldliketoexpressmythankstoyou.Thankyouverymuchforyourhelpinthesethreeyears.Withyourhelp,I’vemadegreatprogressinEnglish.Youaresokindtousallandtryyourbesttohelpuseveryway.Allofmyclassmatesareinterestedinyourteaching.Inclass,Youmakeeverythingeasierforustounderstand.Youarealwayssmilinginclass.Wewillalwaysrememberyoursmiles.We’llalwaysrememberyou.Wishyouhappy,healthyandbeautifulforever.
BestwishesYours,
LiLei
点评：
文章写作格式正确，作者流露出对老师的真情实感，开头的感叹句，给文章增添了文采。
3. ToBeHonest
提示：
诚实是美德。
在生活中，我们应该为人真诚，相互信任。
根据所给的题目，用英语写一篇短文。
要求；1记一件小事，说明你是如何以诚代人的；
2词数不少于60个；
3语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁。
文中不得使用真实人名、校名，否则以零分计。
Inlife,somepeoplethinkitsillytobehonest.Intheiropinion,honestpeopleoftendomorebutgetless.Actuallyitisnotthecase.
Oneday,Isawawalletlyingbythesideoftheroad“Whoseisit?
”.Iwaswonderingwhensuddenlyamancameup.Hepikeitupandaskedifitwasmine.BeforeIcouldmakeananswers,Hesaid“Let’ssharewhat’sinittogetherbecausethereisnoonearound.”.Isaidhonestlythatitwasneitherminenorhis.weshouldgiveittothepolice.Herefused.Justatthatmoment,apolicemanappeared.Holdinghishandfirmly,thepolicemantoldmethemanwasacheatwhooftenusedthewallettocheatpeople.Hefollowedthemanforalongtime.Hesawwhatwashappening.SoIwasn’tcheatedbecauseofmyhonesty.See,howimportanttobehonest!
4.请你以“AnInterestingTrip”为题，写一篇英语短文。
AnInterestingTrip
Iwenthikingtoamountainwithmyfriendslastsummer.Itwasagoodtripatthebeginningbutsomethingunexpectedhappenedonthehalfway.Oneofmyfriendsuddenlyfeltaterriblepaininhisstomachandhecouldn’tmoveanyfurther.Nobodyknewwhattodo.Onegirltriedtocallhermobilephonebuttherewasnosignal（信号）inthemountainarea.Luckilywebroughtatentwithus.Weputitupandlethimrestinit.Hetooksomemedicine.Thenhedranksomewater,andatesomefood.Afterawhile,hefeltmuchbetterandwewalkedon.Weallenjoyedourselvesinthetopofthemountain.
[点评]全文用过去时态描写了一次有趣的旅行，时态准确，用词到位。
5.请以“BelieveinMyself,andIWillWin”为题，写一篇自己在学习或生活中遇见并战胜困难的一件小事的短文。
BelieveinMyself,andIWillWin
Twoyeasago,IwasweakinEnglishandIlostinterestinit.IthoughtIwasintrouble,IevenfeltIhadnohopeuntilonedayImetaforeignerandwetalkedhappily.HetoldmeIspokegoodEnglish.Withhisencouragement,IhadastrongbeliefthatIcouldlearnEnglishwell.Iworkedharderandharder.Withthehelpoftheteachersandfriends,ImadegoodprogressinEnglishandevenwonthefirstprizeintheEnglishContest.Irealizethatifwebelieveinourselves,wecandoeverythingwell.
[点评]作者抓住主题谈到自己的切身体会，语言真挚、简练、用词准确、到位。
6.请以“ThevalueofTime”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈时间的重要性。
ThevalueofTime
Everyonerealizesthevalueoftime.Whentimeislost,itneverreturns.
Inourdailylife,wecanseethatmanypeoplearemakinggooduseoftime.Lifeisshort,soweshoulduseourvaluabletimeproperly.Asastudent,wemustdevoteourtimetostudysothatwemaybeofservicetoourmotherland.It’sgoodmannerstoformagoodhabitofsavingtimeinsteadofspendingitinjustplaying.Neverwasteabitoftime.
[点评]文章主题鲜明，作为学生，尤其要珍惜时间，以便将来更好地建设祖国。
句子“Asastudent,wemustdevoteourtimetostudy……”中，应将“study”改为“studying”，因为“devote…to…”to是介词，其后的动词需用－ing形式。
7.请以“HowtoLearnEnglishWell”为题，谈谈你学习英语的体会。
HowtoLearnEnglishWell
InthebeginningofEnglishstudy,weshouldpaymoreattentiontolisteningandspeaking.Trytohavegoodintonationandpronunciation.Besides,weshouldkeeponusingEnglishifwewanttolearnitwell.Oftenpracticelistening,speaking,readingandwritingandwewillimproveourabilitytousethelanguage.Grammarisalsoimportant.IthelpsusunderstandanduseEnglishbetterandmorefreely.Finally,Iwillremindyou,“Interestisthebestteacher.”InthiswayyouaresuretobecomeagoodEnglishlearner.
[点评]文章中巧妙动作了过渡语“besides”,“finally”和“inthisway”等，使文章变得流畅，逻辑性强。
8.四季使我们的生活变得丰富多彩，请你用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你最喜爱的季节。
IloveSpring
Ofthefourseasons,Ilovespringbest,theweathergetswarmerandwarmerandeverythingbeginstogrowrapidly.It’sagoodtimetogooutforapicnicinspring.Wecangetclosetonature,enjoythebeautifulsceneryandbreathethefreshair.Springbringsnewlifetoeverything.Treesbegintoturngreenandflowersbegintobloom.WhatIlikespringmostisthatitsignifies（意味）hopesandprogress.Itisalsoapromising（有希望的）season.Ilovespring.
[点评]文章主题鲜明，抓住春天的特点进行描写，用词准确、到位，文中几个习惯用语的使用，如“gooutforapicnic”,“getclosetonature”,“breathethefreshair”,“bringnewlifeto”和“apromisingseason”等，使文章更加生动活泼。
9.团队合作是我们生活和工作中的一项重要能力，请你以“Teamwork”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
Teamwork
Intheworldtoday,itisveryimportantforustohavetheabilityofteamwork.Butwhatisteamwork?
Teamworkmeanshavingtheabilityofworkingwithothersandcommunicatingwithothers.Inateam,wemustlearntohelpeachother,learnfromeachother,careforeachother,respecteachotherandmakeprogresstogether.Itisbecauseofteamworkthatourspaceshipcanbesentintospace.ItisbecauseofteamworkthatItalianfootballteamcouldwintheWorldCup.Ateamcansolvetheproblemsthatonecan’t.Asaproverbgoes,“Twoheadsarebetterthanone.”Inaword,teamworkcanmakeimpossiblepossible.Let’sworkhardtoimproveourselvesinteamwork.
[点评]本文属议论文，文章结构紧凑，紧紧围绕论点，论据充分。
文中的强调结构“Itisbecause
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