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6级改错练习

Whenyoustarttalkingaboutgoodandbadmanners

　　youimmediatelystartmeetingdifficulties.Manypeoplejust

　　cannotagreewhattheymean.Weaskedalady,whorepliedthatshe

　　thoughtyoucouldtellawell-manneredpersononthewaythey（71）

　　occupiedthespacearoundthem—forexample,whensucha

　　personwalksdownastreetheorsheisconstantlyunawareof（72）

　　others.Suchpeopleneverbumpintootherpeople.

　　However,asecondpersonthoughtthatthiswasmorea

　　questionofcivilizedbehaviorasgoodmanners.Instead,this（73）

　　otherpersontoldusastory,ithesaidwasquitewellknown,（74）

　　aboutanAmericanwhohadbeeninvitedtoanArabmealat（75）

　　oneofthecountriesoftheMiddleEast.TheAmericanhasn’t（76）

　　beentoldverymuchaboutthekindoffoodhemightexpect.If

　　hehadknownaboutAmericanfood,hemighthavebehaved（77）

　　better.

　　Immediatelybeforehimwasaveryflatpieceofbreadthat

　　looked,tohim,verymuchasanapkin（餐巾）Pickingit（78）

　　up,heputitintohiscollar,sothatitfallsacrosshisshirt.（79）

　　HisArabhost,whohadbeenwatching,saidofnothing,but（80）

　　immediatelycopiedtheactionofhisguest.

　　Andthat,saidthissecondperson,wasafineexampleofgoodmanners.

　　参考答案：

　　71.on→by

　　72.unaware→aware

　　73.as→than

　　74.it→which

　　75.at→in

　　76.hasn’t→hadn’t

　　77.American→Arab

　　78.as→like

　　79.falls→fell

　　80.of→/

Weareallnaturallyattractedtopeoplewithideas,

　　beliefsandinterestslikeourown.Similarly,wefeelcomfortable

　　withpeoplewithphysicalqualitiessimilarasours.（71）

　　Youmayhavenoticedabouthowpeoplewholiveorwork（72）

　　closelytogethercometobehaveinasimilarway.Unconsciouslywe

　　copytheseweareclosetoorloveoradmire.Soasportsman’s（73）

 individualwayofwalkingwithraisedshouldersisimitatedbyanadmired（74）

　　fan;apairofloversbothshaketheirheadsinthesameway;an

　　employerfindshimselfduplicatinghisboss’shabitofwagging（摆动）（75）

　　apenbetweenhisfingerswhilethinking.

　　Ineverycase,theinfluentialpersonmayconsciouslynoticethe（76）

　　imitationbuthewillfeelcomfortablyinitspresence.Andifhedoes（77）

　　noticethematchingofhisgesturesormovements,hefindsitpleasing

　　heisinfluencingpeople;theyaredrawntothem.（78）

　　Sensitivepeoplehavebeenmirroringtheirfriendandacquaintances（79）

　　alltheirlives,andwinningaffectionandrespectinthisway

　　withoutawareoftheirmethods.Now,forpeoplewhowanttowin（80）

　　agreementortrust,affectionorsympathy,somepsychologistsrecommend

　　thedeliberateuseofphysicalimitation.

　参考答案：

　　71.as→to

　　72.about→/

　　73.these→those

　　74.admired→admiring

　　75.employer→employee

　　76.consciously→unconsciously

　　77.comfortably→comfortable

　　78.them→him

　　79.friend→friends

　　80.（without）→（without）being

Agreatmanycitiesareexperiencingdifficultieswhichare

　　nothingnewinthehistoryofcities,exceptintheirscale.

　　Somecitieshavelosttheiroriginalpurposeandhavenotfound

　　newone.Andanylargeorrichcityisgoingtoattractpoor（S1）

　　immigrants,whofloodin,fillingwithhopesofprosperity（S2）

　　whicharethenoftendisappointing.Therearebackwardtowns

　　ontheedgeofBombayorBrasilia,justasthoughtherewere（S3）

　　ontheedgeofseventeenth-centuryLondonorearly

　　nineteenthcenturyParis.Thisisnewisinthescale.Descriptions（S4）

　　writtenbyeighteenth-centurytravelersofthepoorofMexico

　　City,andtheenormouscontraststhatwastobefoundthere,（S5）

　　areverydissimilartodescriptionsofMexicoCitytoday—the（S6）

　　poorcanstillbenumberedinmillions.

　　Thewholemonstrousgrowthrestsoneconomic

　　prosperity,butbehinditliestwomyths:

themythofthecityasa（S7）

　　promisedland,thatattractsimmigrantsfromruralpoverty（S8）

　　andbringsitfloodingintocitycenters,andthemythofthe（S9）

　　countryasaGardenofEden,which,afewgenerationslate,（S10）

　　sendsthemfloodingoutagaintothesuburbs.

　参考答案：

　　S1.And→But

　　S2.filling→filled

　　S3.there→they

　　S4.This→What

　　S5.was→are

　　S6.dissimilar→similar

　　S7.lies→in

　　S8.that→which

　　S9.it→them

　　S10.late→later

TheSeattleTimesCompanyisonenewspaperfirmthat

　　hasrecognizedtheneedforchangeanddonesomethingaboutit.

　　Inthenewspaperindustry,papersmustreflectthediversityof

　　thecommunitiestowhichtheyprovideinformation.

　　Itmustreflectthatdiversitywiththeirnewscoverageorrisk（S1）

　　losingtheirreaders’interestandtheiradvertisers’support.

　　OperatingwithinSeattle,whichhas20percentsracial（S2）

　　minorities,thepaperhasputintoplacepoliciesand

　　proceduresforhiringandmaintainadiverseworkforce.The（S3）

　　underlyingreasonforthechangeisthatforinformationtobe

　　fair,appropriate,andsubjective,itshouldbereportedbythe（S4）

　　samekindofpopulationthatreadsit.

　　Adiversitycommitteecomposedofreporters,editors,and

　　photographersmeetsregularlytovaluetheSeattleTimes’（S5）

　　contentandtoeducatetherestofthenewsroomstaffabout

　　diversityissues.Inanaddition,thepaperinstitutedacontent（S6）

　　audit（审查）thatevaluatesthefrequencyandmannerof

　　representationofwomanandpeopleofcolorinphotographs.（S7）

　　Earlyauditsshowedthatminoritieswerepictured

　　fartooinfrequentlyandwerepicturedwithadisproportion

　　atenumberofnegativearticles.Theauditresultsfrom（S8）

　　improvementinthefrequencyofmajorityrepresentationand（S9）

　　theirportrayalinneutralorpositivesituations.And,witha（S10）

　　result,theSeattleTimeshasimprovedasanewspaper.

　　ThediversitytrainingandcontentauditshelpedtheSeattleTimesCompany

　　towinthePersonnelJournalOptimalAwardforexcellenceinmanagingchange.

参考答案：

　　71.it→they

　　72.percents→percent

　　73.maintain→maintaining

　　74.subjective→objective

　　75.meets→meet

　　76.去掉an

　　77.woman→women

　　78.from→in

　　79.majority→minority

　　80.with→as

ThomasMalthuspublishedhis“Essayonthe

　　PrincipleofPopulation”almost200yearsago.Eversincethen,

　　forecastershavebeingwarningthatworldwidefaminewas（S1）

　　justaroundthenextcorner.Thefast-growingpopulation’s

　　demandforfood,theywarned,wouldsoonexceedtheir（S2）

　　supply,leadingtowidespreadfoodshortagesandstarvation.

　　Butinreality,theworld’stotalgrainharvesthasrisen

　　steadilyovertheyears.Exceptforrelativeisolatedtrouble（S3）

　　spotslikepresent-daySomalia,andoccasionalyearsof

　　goodharvests,theworld’sfoodcrisishasremainedjust（S4）

　　aroundthecorner.Mostexpertsbelievethiscancontinue

　　evenasifthepopulationdoublesbythemid-21stcentury,（S5）

　　althoughfeeding10billionpeoplewillnotbeeasyfor

　　politics,economicandenvironmentalreasons.Optimists（S6）

　　pointtoconcreteexamplesofcontinuedimprovements

　　inyield.InAfrica,byinstance,improvedseed,more（S7）

　　fertilizerandadvancedgrowingpracticeshavemorethan

　　doublecornandwheatyieldsinanexperiment.Elsewhere,（S8）

　　riceexpertsinthePhilippinesareproducingaplantwithfew（S9）

　　stemsandmoreseeds.Thereisnoguaranteethatplant

　　breederscancontinuetodevelopnew,higher-yielding

　　crop,butmostresearchersseetheirsuccesstodateasreason（S10）

　　forhope.

参考答案：

　　S1.being→been

　　S2.their→its

　　S3.relative→relatively

　　S4.good→bad

　　S5.as→去掉

　　S6.politics→political

　　S7.by→for

　　S8.double→doubled

　　S9.more→fewer

　　S10.reason→thereason

Agreatmanycitiesareexperiencingdifficultieswhich

　　arenothingnewinthehistoryofcities,exceptintheirscale.

　　Somecitieshavelosttheiroriginalpurposeandhavenotfound

　　newone.AndanylargeorrichcityisgoingtoattractpoorS1.__________

　　immigrants,whofloodin,fillingwithhopesofprosperityS2.__________

　　whicharethenoftendisappointing.Therearebackwardtowns

　　ontheedgeofBombayorBrasilia,justasthoughtherewereS3.__________

　　ontheedgeofseventeenth-centuryLondonorearlynine-

　　teenth-centuryParis.Thisisnewisthescale.DescriptionsS4.__________

　　writtenbyeighteenth-centurytravelersofthepoorofMexico

　　City,andtheenormouscontraststhatwastobefoundthere,S5.__________

　　areverydissimilartodescriptionsofMexicoCitytoday—theS6.__________

　　poorcanstillbenumberedinmillions.

　　Thewholemonstrousgrowthrestsoneconomicprosper-

　　ity,butbehinditliestwomyths:

themythofthecityasaS7.__________

　　promisedland,thatattractsimmigrantsfromruralpovertyS8.__________

　　andbringsitfloodingintocitycenters,andthemythoftheS9.__________

　　countryasaGardenofEden,which,afewgenerationslate,S10.__________

　　sendsthemfloodingoutagaintothesuburbs.

　S1.newàanewS2.fillingàfilled

　　S3.thoughàifS4.ThisàWhat

　　S5.wasàwereS6.dissimilaràsimilar

　　S7.liesàlieS8.thatàwhich

　　S9.itàthemS10.lateàlater

Morepeopledieoftuberculosis（结核病）thanofany

　　otherdiseasecausedbyasingleagent.Thishasprobably

　　beenthecaseinquiteawhile.DuringtheearlystagesofS1.________

　　theindustrialrevolution,perhapsoneineveryseventhS2.________

　　deathsinEurope'scrowdedcitieswerecausedbytheS3.________

　　disease.Fromnowon,though,westerneyes,missingtheS4.________

　　globalpicture,sawthetroublegoingintodecline.With

　　occasionalbreaksforwar,thera