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基础写作
托福基础写作
范文：
dangeroussports
Whydoyouthinksomepeopleareattractedtododangeroussportsorotherdangerousactivities?
Usespecificreasonandexamplestosupportyouranswer.
开头：
lManypeopleareattractedtodangeroussportsorsimilaractivities.
lThereasonforthismaybethatthesepeoplefindacertainthrillorexcitementindoingsuchactivities.Theycanexperienceasenseofachievementindoingthingsmostordinarypeopledearnotdo.
Manypeopleareattractedtodangeroussportsorsimilaractivities.Thereasonforthismaybethatthesepeoplefindacertainthrillorexcitementindoingsuchactivities.Theycanexperienceasenseofachievementindoingthingsmostordinarypeopledearnotdo.
主体：
第一段：
lDaredevilswhoconstantlyseekgreatexcitementbasicallywanttostandapartfromtherest.
lTheyarereadytododangerousthings,consciouslyorunconsciously,tryingtoprovetheirdifferent,boldnessandindividuality.
lPeopleinvolvedindangeroussportslikewrestling,bungeejumpingandotherlife-threateningactivitieswouldgotoanylengthtoprovetheirmightanddemonstratetheirdifference.
Daredevilswhoconstantlyseekgreatexcitementbasicallywanttostandapartfromtherest.Theyarereadytododangerousthings,consciouslyorunconsciously,tryingtoprovetheirdifferent,boldnessandindividuality.Peopleinvolvedindangeroussportslikewrestling,bungeejumpingandotherlife-threateningactivitieswouldgotoanylengthtoprovetheirmightanddemonstratetheirdifference.
主体第二段：
lPerformingriskystuntsgivestheparticipantsasenseofachievementthathelpsthemovercometheirmostterriblefear.
lItishumannaturetofeelextremelyconfidentafterovercomingthegreatestfearsinlife,aftercomingsoclosetodeath,yetescapingit!
lManyhavetriedunimaginablydangerousstuntsjusttogainfameforsettingnewworldrecordsortobeseeninshowsorjusttowinprizes！
Performingriskystuntsgivestheparticipantsasenseofachievementthathelpsthemovercometheirmostterriblefear.Itishumannaturetofeelextremelyconfidentafterovercomingthegreatestfearsinlife,aftercomingsoclosetodeath,yetescapingit!
Manyhavetriedunimaginablydangerousstuntsjusttogainfameforsettingnewworldrecordsortobeseeninshowsorjusttowinprizes！
主体第三段：
lSomepeoplearesimplymotivatedbythesenseoffunandexcitementthewillcolortheirdullandboringlives.
lSportslikeshydivingandbungeejumpinghavebecomepopularamongthosewhogothoughdailyroutinesofmonotonousofficework.
lDangerousastheyare,thesesportstakethosepeopleawayfromtheirunbearableboredomforawhileandsurelyasfunandenthusiasmtotheirlife.
Somepeoplearesimplymotivatedbythesenseoffunandexcitementthewillcolortheirdullandboringlives.Sportslikeshydivingandbungeejumpinghavebecomepopularamongthosewhogothoughdailyroutinesofmonotonousofficework.Dangerousastheyare,thesesportstakethosepeopleawayfromtheirunbearableboredomforawhileandsurelyasfunandenthusiasmtotheirlife.
结尾段：
Allinall,dangeroussportsandactivitiesbasicallyattractthosethrill-lovingpeoplewhowanttostandaclassapartbyprovingtheirindividualitytotheworldaroundthem,orthosewhoenjoythesenseofachievementdrawnfromsurmountingfearinfaceofdanger,orthosedepressedbyrepetitivelifestyles.
范文：
Manypeopleareattractedtodangeroussportsorsimilaractivities.Thereasonforthismaybethatthesepeoplefindacertainthrillorexcitementindoingsuchactivities.Theycanexperienceasenseofachievementindoingthingsmostordinarypeopledearnotdo.
Daredevilswhoconstantlyseekgreatexcitementbasicallywanttostandapartfromtherest.Theyarereadytododangerousthings,consciouslyorunconsciously,tryingtoprovetheirdifferent,boldnessandindividuality.Peopleinvolvedindangeroussportslikewrestling,bungeejumpingandotherlife-threateningactivitieswouldgotoanylengthtoprovetheirmightanddemonstratetheirdifference.
Performingriskystuntsgivestheparticipantsasenseofachievementthathelpsthemovercometheirmostterriblefear.Itishumannaturetofeelextremelyconfidentafterovercomingthegreatestfearsinlife,aftercomingsoclosetodeath,yetescapingit!
Manyhavetriedunimaginablydangerousstuntsjusttogainfameforsettingnewworldrecordsortobeseeninshowsorjusttowinprizes！
Somepeoplearesimplymotivatedbythesenseoffunandexcitementthewillcolortheirdullandboringlives.Sportslikeshydivingandbungeejumpinghavebecomepopularamongthosewhogothoughdailyroutinesofmonotonousofficework.Dangerousastheyare,thesesportstakethosepeopleawayfromtheirunbearableboredomforawhileandsurelyasfunandenthusiasmtotheirlife.
Dangeroussportsandactivitiesbasicallyattractthosethrill-lovingpeoplewhowanttostandaclassapartbyprovingtheirindividualitytotheworldaroundthem,orthosewhoenjoythesenseofachievementdrawnfromsurmountingfearinfaceofdanger,orthosedepressedbyrepetitivelifestyles.
范文：
advertisingtellacountry
Topic：
Doyouagreeordisagree?
Advertisingcantellyoualotaboutacountry.
广告可以告诉我们关于一个国家很多。
Inordertodeterminewhetheradvertisingcanprovidealotofinformationaboutacountry,itisnecessarytoputadvertisingintotwoseparatecategories:
public-interestadvertisementsandcommercialones.Carefulinspectionofbothtypes,Ibelieve,willrevealapanoramicviewofacountry.Thepublic-interestadvertisementsusuallyrevealtheinnerpartofanation,whilethecommercialadvertisementsprovidelessprofoundbutstillimpartmentknowledge.
Itiswellknowledgethatgovernmentsuseallkindsofstrategies,likelaws,regulationsandeducationalmediacampaigns,tocontrolandguideacountry.Thus,public-interestadvertisementsthataresponsoredbythegovernmentundoubtedlyreflectanation’sthoughts.Forexample,in2003,whenSARSappearedinChina,SARS-preventionadvertisementswereproducedandbroadcastalloverthecountryviatelevision,radio,andeventheInternet.Bywatchingthem,youcanseethenation’sstrongwillanddeterminationtowinthebattleagainstthisdisease.In2008,alsoinChina,thethemesofmostpublic-interestadvertisementshaveshiftedtotheOlympic.Bywatchingthem,youcanrealizethenation’sprioritiesthisyearwithoutanydifficulty.
Secondly,thelargerportionofadvertisement,commercialones,shouldbetakenintoconsideration.Comparedwithpublic-interestones,commercialadvertisementsprovidetheaudienceamorevividandexactpictureofwhat’shappeninginthecountry.Onthehand,itcaninformyouofthecurrentnewproducts.Oncetheyreleasedthefastestandthemosteffectivewaytomakethemknownandacceptedbythepublicistoadvertisethem.Forinstance,youcanfindthingsfromupdatedSonylaptopstoPorsche’snewestsports-car,fromRejoce’srecentshampootoNike’snewseasonofrunningshoesbeingadvertised.Ontheotherhand,itcanalsoprovideyouinformationonwhatcelebritiesarepopulartoday,forthesimplereasonthatcompaniestendtoinvitepopularcelebritiestodotheirpromotions.Therefore,justbyglancingatsomeadvertisements,youcaneasilyfigureoutwhoisenjoyingtheadorationof,andevenservingasarole-modelforasociety.InChinacelebritiessuchasChinesemoviestarJackyChen,AmericanbasketballplayerMichaelJordan,andJapanesesingerHikaruUtadagracecommercialadvertisements.
Insummary,bothpublic-interestadvertisingandcommercialadvertisingcontainabundantinformationaboutacountry.Whileyoumayneedtoreadbetweenthelinestoappreciatethewealthofknowledge,thereisdefinitelyinformationtheretoglean.
范文：
饮食方式类
Somepeopleprefertoeatatfoodstandsorrestaurants.Otherpeopleprefertoprepareandeatfoodathome.
Whichdoyouprefer?
Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.
『分析』
不要急于作出选择，先进行比较，然后根据情况选择
方案一：
在不同的情况下会有不同的选择。
l周末休息应该跟家人在家里吃饭。
l与老朋友久别重逢应该找一家安静的餐馆……
方案二：
去餐馆或者吃快餐的优缺点：
l优点：
方便、
快捷、
多种口味；
l缺点：
昂贵、
卫生可能得不到保障、
快餐使人发胖
在家吃饭的优缺点：
l优点：
干净、
可以做出自己喜欢的口味、
节省、
与家人和朋友共同准备食物很开心；
l缺点：
花费时间、
可能做的没有餐馆那么好吃；
Somepeopleprefertoeatatfoodstandsorrestaurants.Otherpeopleprefertoprepareandeatfoodathome.
Whichdoyouprefer?
Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.
『分析』
不要急于作出选择，先进行比较，然后根据情况选择
方案一：
在不同的情况下会有不同的选择。
l周末休息应该跟家人在家里吃饭。
l与老朋友久别重逢应该找一家安静的餐馆……
方案二：
去餐馆或者吃快餐的优缺点：
l优点：
方便、
快捷、
多种口味；
l缺点：
昂贵、
卫生可能得不到保障、
快餐使人发胖
在家吃饭的优缺点：
l优点：
干净、
可以做出自己喜欢的口味、
节省、
与家人和朋友共同准备食物很开心；
l缺点：
花费时间、
可能做的没有餐馆那么好吃；
开头：
lAfteraharddayofworkorstudy,manypeoplefeellikecookingforthemselvesistoomuchtrouble.
lTheyprefertograbaquickbitetoeatatarestaurantandgohomeforrestasquicklyaspossible.
lButformecookingathomeisworththetimeandtroublebecauseitischeaper,healthier,andmoreenjoyable.
Afteraharddayofworkorstudy,manypeoplefeellikecookingforthemselvesistoomuchtrouble.Theyprefertograbaquickbitetoeatatarestaurantandgohomeforrestasquicklyaspossible.Butformecookingathomeisworththetimeandtroublebecauseitischeaper,healthier,andmoreenjoyable.
主体：
第一段：
lBuyingmyowngroceriesandcookingformyselfismuchlessexpensivethaneatinginarestaurant.
lIfindthatamealthatIcookmyselfonaveragecostshalftotwo-thirdslessthanacomparablemealinar
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