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1.将现象转变成趋势。
Eg.ThereisagrowingtendencynowadaysthatpeopleinmountingnumbersarepurchasinggoodsontheInternet.
2.将现象转变成发展的结果。
Eg.Withthedevelopmentofinformationtechnology,digitalproductshaveattractedtheattentionfromalloursociety.
Eg.Withtheadvancementofsocietyandthedevelopmentofeconomy...
Eg.Withtheimprovementofpeople'
slivingstandard,
3.将现象转变成“热烈讨论中”
Eg.Nowadays,thereisaheateddiscussionwhether...
4.将现象转变成“令人关注”
Recently,theimportanceof“certificatecraze”hasarousewide/deep/greatconcernamongthepublic.
5.最偷懒的方式-自问自答。
Whenpeopleareasked“…?
”,answersmayvaryfrompersontoperson.
第二段模板句替换和自创
✧1.那些支持…观点的人认为…
Thosewhoareinfavoroftheideathat…claimthat,firstly,理由之一…
✧2.相反,有很多人认为
Onthecontrary,amajorityofpeoplemaintainthat…,tobeginwith,理由之一…
whiletherestholdtheothersideofthepicture,foronething,理由之一…
第三段第7句个人观点替换句
●1.在我看来
Frommyperspective,
个人观点
Tomywayofthinking,
SofarasIamconcerned,
●2.如果我必须要选择一个观点的话,毫无疑问,我支持…
IfIwereforcedtoagreewithoneofthetwoopinions,I,doubtlessly,standbytheideathat…
●3.第三段第9句再次强调个人观点
考虑到我刚刚说过的因素,我强烈认同…观点
Accordingly,giventhefactorsIhavejustoutlined,Istronglycommittothenotionthat...
观点如何陈述?
(第3和第5句)
✓观点陈述法一
…是有利的
Sth.isbeneficialto…
Sth.playsapositiverolein…
✓观点陈述法二
…是有害的
Sth.isdetrimentalto…
Sth.playsanegativerolein…
✓观点陈述法三
…的优点远远大于其缺点
Theadvantagesofsth.faroutweighthedisadvantages.
✓观点陈述法四
A的优点远远大于B
TheadvantagesofAaremuchgreaterthanthoseofB.
2.问题解决性作文
陈述现状(第1、2句)
[1]Thepastseveralyearshavewitnessedanotuncommonsocialphenomenonthat…
[2]Takingalookaround,onecanfindnumerousexampleswithease:
举例补充第[1]句,增加文章生动性和真实性(同时凑字)
阐明问题产生的原因、后果(第3、4、5、6句)
[3]Whatexactlycontributestosuchphenomenon?
It'
sathought-provokingquestion.Firstly,原因之一
[4]Secondly,原因之二
[5]Theproblemmentionedaboveisboundtogeneratesevereconsequencesifwekeepturningablindeyetoit.firstandforemost,危害之一
[6]Moreover,危害之二
阐明问题的解决策略(第7、8、9句)
[7]Confrontedwithsuchproblem,effectivemeasuresmustbetakenbeforethingsgetworse.Inthefirstplace,措施之一
[8]inthesecondplace,措施之二
[9]Onlywiththesemeasurestakencanwe提出美好愿景
第一段:
写作一:
套近乎—众所周知
[1]Itiswidelyacknowledgedthat...hasbecomeanincreasinglyseriousproblem.
[2]AlmostnooneinChinacanhavefailedtonoticethephenomenonthat...inrecentyears.
写作二:
见诸报端,引发热议。
[3]Recently,itoftenhitsheadlinesofnewspapersthat...,whichhasarousedaheateddiscussionamongthepublic.
第一段第2句保持不动
[1]Takingalookaround,onecanfindnumerousexampleswithease:
举例补充第[1]句,增加文章生动性和真实性(同时凑字)
第二段第3句现象产生的原因替换句
1.这个现象为什么会出现?
理由很明显,如下解释…
Whysuchaphenomenonemerges?
Thereasons,whichareobvioustoall,canbelistedasfollows:
Firstly,原因之一
2.很多因素可以解释这个现象,如下几点是最重要的
Anumberoffactorscanaccountforsuchphenomenon,butthefollowingsmightbethecriticalones.Firstly,原因之一
第二段第5句危害或后果替换句
1.如果我们听之任之,将会带来巨大的问题
Itwillgiverisetoahostofsevereproblemsifweleavethesituationasitis.Firstly,危害之一
2.如果这个状况没有得到处理,将危害极大
Itisextremelyharmfulifthesituationisleftunfettered.Firstly,危害之一
第三段第7句-号召注意-替换句
3.鉴于这个问题的严重性,我们必须在事态恶化前采取有效措施
Inviewoftheseriousnessoftheproblem,effectivemeasuresshouldbetakenbeforethingsgetworse.Inthefirstplace,措施之一
4.鉴于这个问题的严重性,我们必须马上关注这个问题
Inlightoftheseriousnessoftheproblem,Dueattentionhastobepaidtothisissue.Inthefirstplace,措施之一
5.很明显,我们必须采取有效措施来阻止这个情况
Obviously,itisimperativethateffectiveactionsshouldbetakentopreventtheabovesituation.firstly,措施之一
第三段第9句-美好愿景-替换句
1.通过这些方法,我们有理由相信这个问题,在不久的将来,就会解决
Withthesemeasurestaken,itisreasonableforustobelievethattheproblemwillbesolvedinthenearfuture.
2.只有采取这些措施,我们才能…
Onlywiththesemeasurestakencanwe…
expectacomprehensivedevelopmentofcollegestudents.
3.只有这样,我们才能…
Onlyinthiswaycanwe…
makethesocietymoreharmonious.
措施有哪些?
(第7和第8句)
1.因此,我们应该吸取好的一面,而回避坏的一面.
Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageofthefruitsandavoidtheoppositefacet.
2.因此,我们应该“取其精华,取其糟粕”
Weshould,therefore,Asthecommonsayinggoes,“Taketheessence,discardthedregs.”
3.我们应该发扬长处,并将其坏处减少到最低程度
Whatwemustdoistoencouragethestrengthanddiminishtheweaknessestotheleastextent.
4.政府制定法律法规
Itisessentialthatlawsandregulationsshouldbeworkedoutandenforcedto…(ban/reducesmoking.)
5.个人应该提高意识
Thepublic(weourselves)shouldenhancetheconsciousnessoftheimportanceof…(Health/education/independence)
模板作文范文赏析
一、对立观点作文范文赏析
v2009年12月
现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班;
1.对这种做法有人表示支持,
2、有人并不赞成;
3、我认为…
文章第一段:
陈述现状+引出正反
[1]Thereisagrowingtendencynowadaysthatparentssendtheirchildrentoattendvariouskindsofartscourses,suchasdancing,calligraphyandmusicalinstrumentstraining,etc.[2]Doesanyoneholdthesameattitudetowardsthisphenomenon?
Theanswerisno.Astothisissue,opinionsvaryfrompersontoperson.
文章第二段:
正反观点论述
正方观点
[3]Someclaimthatitisbeneficialforchildren.firstly,mostparentsareconvincedthattheearliertheirchildrenareexposedtoarts,themorelikelyitistotaptheirartisticpotential.[4],theirkidscanmakebetteruseofleisuretimetomastermoreskillsandbepreparedforthefuturefiercecompetition.
反方观点
[5]Therearesomepeoplewhoholdcontraryopinions.Ontheonehand,somekidsspendalargeamountoftimeintheclass,theyevencan'
tsetasidetimetostaytogetherwiththeirparentsandsharetheirfeelings.[6]Ontheotherhand,itwillimposeheavierburdenonthem,whichisdetrimentaltotheirgrowthbothphysicallyandmentally.
文章第三段:
阐述个人观点
[7]Tomywayofthinking,themeritsofattendingartclassesoutweighitsdemerits.Foronething,sincechildrenspendmostoftheirtimewatchingTV、playingvideogamesafterclass.Instead,theycanmakebetteruseoftimethroughattendingartclasses.[8]Foranother,childrencanbemoreversatile,whichwillalsoprovidethemwithmoreopportunitiesinthefuture.[9]GiventhefactorsIhavejustoutlined,Istronglyrecommendparentstosendtheirchildrentoattendartclasses.
v二.问题解决(现象)作文范文赏析
2011年6月TheCertificateCraze
1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试
2.其目的各不相同
3.我的看法
陈述现状+举例
[1]AlmostnooneinChinahasfailedtonoticethephenomenonthatagrowingnumberofpeopleareenthusiasticaboutpursuingvariouskindsofcertificates.[2]Takingalookaround,onecanfindnumerousexampleswithease.[3]Acommoncaseinpointisthatstudentsspendagreatdealoftimeandenergyattendingvariouskindsofcertificate-orientedtrainingcoursestoensureabetterscore.
目的–原因
[4]Thepurposeofacquiringcertificatesvariesfromindividualstoindividuals.Forstudents,asthejobmarketcompetitionisbecomingincreasinglyfierce,notonlycanacertaincertificateprovetheircapabilities,butalsowillputtheminafavorablepositionintheemploymentmarket.[5]Whenitcomestowhite-collaredworkers,morejob-relatedcertificatesoftenguaranteegreateropportunitiesforsalaryraiseandpromotion.[6]What'
smore,itisalsoanidealwaytoenhancetheirjobtechniquesandsharpentheircompetitiveness.
个人看法+措施
[7]Frommyperspective,themeritsofpursuingcertificatesareself-evident.[8]However,weshouldalsobearinmindthatitisthepracticalskills,suchasmanagement,cooperation,communication,ratherthancertificatesthatguaranteeone'
saccomplishmentincareer.[9]Accordingly,wemightaswellattachgreatimportancetobothcertificatesandtheimprovementofone'
scomprehensiveabilities.