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大学四级英语高分作文标志课堂用
高分作文标志
1.四级120-180字;六级150-200字;
2.是否长短句交叉;
3.用词是否恰当,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老
师的亮点词汇;4.关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词;
写好一篇作文的注意事项:
1.适当用被动代替主动,这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we/I（比如写结尾时不用weshouldpayattentionto而用Attentionshouldbepaidto.）
2.善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
如however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
比如说:
Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitudethat…
3.一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的代替太宽泛的。
（考试中一般不要出现good,bad,many,thing,think,people,opinion等等）比如上面例子中,applicable代替proper,approaches代替ways,implement代替carryout,sharpenone’scompetitiveedge代替enhanceone’scompetitiveness（提高某物竞争力）
Example1
Ineverforgettheexceedinglythrillingdaywhenmymotherboughtmeacomputerasbirthdaypresent,whichexertedatremendousfascinationonmesothatIindulgedmyselfingooglinganarmyofusefulinformationihadexpected,andenjoyaseaofmelodiousclassicmusic.ThatnightIwassleepless,feelingthatthewholeworldbelongedtome.
exceedingly替换verythrilling替换exciting
sth.exertatremendousfascinationonsb替换sb.beinterestedinsth.
google替换searchanarmyof替换alotof
Example2
Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessedtheincreasingpopularityofcomputers.Coincidentwiththeadvancementofscienceandtechnology,computerspouringintothecurrentsocietyasafashionareappealingtogrowingindividuals.Itisnoexaggerationtosaywehavebeensubmergedbythem,inlargemeasure!
Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessed…是一个精彩句型,用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;
Increasingpopularity替换moreandmorepopular
Coincidentwith…非常地道的词汇,表达"与…一致"的意思,替换With…
Advancement替换development
Pourinto（floodinto/swarminto）替换enterinto
Current（currently）替换now
Appealtosb.替换sb.beinterestedinsth.
Growingindividuals替换moreandmorepeople
Itisnoexaggerationtosay经典句型,说某事是毫不夸张的
Example3
Forastart,wecan,freely,searchdesiredinformationatanymoment.Littlebylittle,ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.Additionally,wecangethugerecreationsonlinebychatting,playinggames,ordeliveringemail.
Forastart替换Tobeginwith
Wecan,freely,search用了插入语的写作手法
ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.用了非常精彩的被动
1:
individuals,characters,folks替换（people,persons）
2:
positive,favorable,rosy（美好的）,promising（有希望的）,perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,superior替换good
3:
dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse,ill（有害的）替换bad如果bad做表语,可以有belessimpressive替换
eg.Anarmyofcollegestudentsindulgethemselvesinplayinggames,enjoyingromancewithgirls/boysorkillingtimepassivelyintheirdorms.Whenitapproachestograduation,asaresult,theyfindtheiracademicrecordsarelessimpressive.
4.（anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof,ahostof,many,ifnotmost）替换many.
注:
用many,ifnotmost一定要小心,many后一定要有词。
Eg.Manyindividuals,ifnotmost,harbortheideathat….同理用most,ifnotall,替换most.
5:
asliceof,quietafew,several替换some
6:
harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat）替think（因为是书面语,所以要加that）7:
affair,business,matter替换thing
8:
shared代common
9.reaphugefruits替换getmanybenefits）
10:
formypart,frommyownperspective替换inmyopinion
11:
Increasing（ly）,growing替换moreandmore（注意没有growingly这种形式。
所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词,副词用increasingly.
Eg.sthhasgainedgrowingpopularity.
Sthisincreasinglypopularwiththeadvancementofsth.
12.littleifanything,或littleornothing替换hardly
13..beneficial,rewarding替换helpful,
14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,替换customer
15.exceedingly,extremely,intensely替换very
16.hardlynecessary,hardlyinevitable...替换unnecessary,avoidable
17.sthappealstosb,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb替换sbtakeinterestin/sb.beinterestedin
18.captureone’sattention替换attractone’sattention.
19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect
20.beindicativeof,besuggestiveof,befearfulof代indicate,suggest,fear
21.giveriseto,leadto,resultin,trigger替换cause.
22.Thereareseveralreasonsbehindsth替换..reasonsforsth
23.desire替换want.
24.pourattentioninto替换payattentionto
25.bearinmindthat替换remember
26.enjoy,possess替换have（注意process是过程的意思）
27.interaction替换communication
28.frownonsth替换beagainst,disagreewithsth
29.tonameonlyafew,asanexample替换forexample,forinstance
30.nextto/virtuallyimpossible,替换nearly/almostimpossible
形容词adjs.
important-vital-crucial-prominentmeaningful-significant-sensible
necessary-essential-indispensable
good-beneficial-rewarding
pleasant-delightful-jolly-exhilarating
useful-helpful-assisting
strong-strengthened
safe-sound-secure
convenient-expedient-advantageouscomfortable-cozy
profitable-gainful-lucrative
active-positive
ambitious-aspiring-enterprising
special-exceptional-outstanding-extraordinaryequal-just
obvious-apparent-evident
best-greatest-first-class
colorful-various-diversifiedavailable-attainable-usabledifferent-distinct-diversepopular-welcome-lovableindependent-self-helpingcompetitive-fightful
lucky-fortunate-auspiciouscarefree-unconcerned-relaxedinteresting-amusing-entertaininghelpful-assistant
positive-active-zealous
boring-senseless-annoying
tiring-tiresome-fatiguesomelonely-solitary-isolated
negative-passive-unaspiringharmful-disastrous-detrimentaluseless-void-futile
limited-short-sighted-improvidentworse-inferior
副词advs.
generally-normally-commonly-universallywidely-well-extensively
freely-unrestrictedly
partly-partially
possibly-probably-likelyalmost-nearly
very-most-extremelyespecially-specially-particularlygenerally-widely-universally
动词v.
think-hold-claim-argue-emphasizebelieve-presume-deem
practise-fulfill-carryout
travel-journey
learn-acquire-obtain-gain
lookfor-seek-discover-pursue
relate-connect-associate
provide-offer-supply
ask-inquire-question
give-grant-bestow
do-perform-dealwith-copewithrecognize-ratify-identify
succeed-makeit
cannot-beunableto-failto
appear-arise-happen
show-express-reveal
introduce（介绍）-recommendintroduce（引进）-bringin
lookforwardto-expect-longfor-aspirethrough-undergo-comethroughunderstand-comprehend
support-sustain
continuetodo-goondoing-keepondoingremember-bearinmind
suggest-makesuggestions-propose
see-behold-witness
advocate-callfor
thinkof…as--regard…as--lookon…as
tendtodo-prefer-beinclinedto-bepronetomakeprogress-progress-getahead-advancemean-canbeexplainedby-Thesignificanceiscause-leadto-bringon-resultin
prefer-beinfavorof
flourish-prosper-thrive
rise-increase-goup-shootup
giveaboostto
-optimize-enhance-boost-accelerate
名词Nouns
opinion-standpoint-viewpoint
attitude-sight-notion
bound-range-scope
thought-sight-idea
chance-opportunity
practice-exercise-training
college-university-campus
student-learner
teacher-instructor-tutor-supervisor
Manykindsof-varietiesof
saying-proverb-aphorism
competition-strife-rivalry
efficiency-effectiveness
belief-faith-conviction
independence-autonomy
confidence-（self-trust）-（self-assertion）
health-exuberance-healthiness
strength-power-vigor
recreation-entertainment
joy-pleasure-bliss
safety-security-sureness
book（cartoon,novel,essay,encyclopedia）experience-story
experiment-test-trial
freedom-liberty-independence
society-world-community
knowledge-information-lore
energy-strength-potence-vigor
environment-surroundings-circumstance
risk-venture
development-progress-evolution
danger-hazard-jeopardy
pollution-contamination
money-cash-dough
choice-selection-option
emphasis-focus-stress
comparison-antithesis
tool-means-instrument
suggestion-advice-proposition
people-human-man
mass（大众）-generalpublic
future-aftertime-tomorrow
country-nation-state
time时代-age-epoch-era
activity-action-behavior
work-job-assignment-task
effect-impact-influence
life-living-existence
theInternet-theNet-theweb-thevirtualworldadvantage-good-benefitdisadvantage-adversity-disbenefit
function-utility-use
reason-cause
harm-damage-harmfulness
change-transformation
measure-step
analysis-construal
trend-current-tide-stream
conclusion-summary
improvement-reform-enhancement
evidence-proof
meaning-significance-sense
example-instance
area-field-domain-realm
ability-competence-capacity-capability
rule-regulation-order
position-place-location-situation
question-problem-issue
world-society
goods-commodity-merchandise
education-instruction-teaching
luck-auspice-fortune
English-theuniversallanguage-thegloballangua
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