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TeachingMethodsandthoughts
Task-basedInstruction
CommunicativeLanguageTeaching
Demonstrationandlecture
Elicitationmethod
Reference
Textbookanditsreferences
Tapes,electronicteaching-notesandmovie-episodes
IntegratedCourseTeachingProcedure
Period
Arrangement&
Minutes
Notes
Period1
Period3&
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Period7&
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•四六级作文的提纲多数都符合这样的模式：
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•1.首段现象、背景、观点——目前有越来越多的……或……问题日益严重
•2.中段不同人对此持不同观点，背后隐藏的各种原因，或从几个方面提出自己的建议和安排
•3.尾段个人看法，解决措施，或者深入分析现象的社会影响
首段：
启动观点、引出话题。
•经典句型：
•1.Nowadays,thereisagrowingconcernovertheissueof…
•2.Recentlytheissueof…hasbeenbroughttopublicattention.
•3.Whenitcomesto…,people’snotionsmayvaryfromoneto
another.
•4.Whenaskedabout…,differentpeoplewillholddifferentopinions.
•5.Withthedevelopmentof…,theproblemof…hasbecomeincreasinglyserious.
•6.Nowadays,…playsanincreasinglyimportantroleinoureverydaylife.
中段：
承接论据，正反论述。
•1.Tounderstandthepointof…,itisnecessarytodiscuss/analyze…
•2.Thereisnodenyingthat…
•3.Thereisnodoubtthat…
•4.Itisreportedthat…
•5.Aclosestudyof...willprobablymakethispointclear.
•6.Wemustrecognizethat…
•7.Somepeopleholdtheviewthat…whileotherpeoplearguethat…
•8.Someotherpeoplehaveexpressedtheoppositeopinion.
尾段：
合并总结，归纳全文
•1.Onthebasisoftheanalysesabove,wemayconfidentlycometoaconclusionthat…
•2.Alltheevidencesupportsasoundconclusionthat…
•3.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelyconcludethat…
•4.Judgingfromalltheevidenceoffered,wemayarriveataconclusionthat…
•5.Thereiscertaintruthinbotharguments,butIbelievetheadvantagesof…outweighitsdisadvantages.
•6.It’shightimethatwetriedeverymeanstoputanendto…
•7.Itisobviousthateffectivemeasuresmustbeimmediatelytakentosolvetheproblem.
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华研高分作文点评
ShouldCollegeStudentsOwnCreditCards?
1.一些银行开始向大学生开放信用卡业务
2.人们对此看法不一
3.你的观点
写作指南：
这是四级作文中典型的分析议论型习作，要求考生先分析人们对大学生持信用卡的不同意见及理由，然后阐述自己的观点，可选择支持，反对或中立三种立场。
根据题目要求，文章结构如下：
第一段（二句话模式）：
提出现象+说明争议的存在。
第二段：
有的人认为信用卡对大学生有利；
1.信用卡方便了学生的生活并能帮助他们树立健康的理财观；
2.信用卡可以帮助学生建立良好的信用记录。
第三段：
有的人认为大学生使用信用卡弊大于利；
1.信用卡助长了大学生超负荷消费之风。
2.信用卡可能使学生沦为“卡奴”，为还债而影响学习。
第四段；
持中立观点提出信用卡本身无所谓好坏，建议大学生可以使用有较低透支上限的信用卡。
sample
analysis
1.Somebanksbegintooffercreditcardstocollege
students,2.whichraisesageneraldebate.People’sviewsonthe
issuevary.
3.Somepeoplebelievethatcreditcardnotonlymakesstudent’slifemoreconvenient,4.butalsogivesstudentsagoodopportunitytodevelopasoundsenseoffinancing.5.Furthermore,6.itcanhelpthemestablishagoodcredithistory.
7.However,othersthinkthedisadvantagesweighmuchmorethantheadvantages.
Theyarguethatcreditcardinvitesstudentstobecome
lavishspenders.8.Studensmayspendwell
beyondtheirmeansandendupindebtthat
theycan’tpayoff.9.What’smore,sinceinterest
ratesareoftenhighandpenaltiesaresevereif
onefailstopayontime.10.Studentsmaygradually
become“creditcardslaves”andcanhardly
focusontheiracademiclife.
11.Thereisprobablysomethingtrueinboth
arguemens,butthecreditcardinitselfisneither\
goodnorbad.12.Perhapsahappymediumisto
getacreditcardthathasacertaincreditlimit.
1.主题句引出现象
2.阐述才争论的经典句型，起承上启下的作用。
3.7引出对立观点的经典句型somepeoplebelieveotherthink.
5.furthermore使上下文衔接得更流畅。
7.however表转折，起承上启下的作用。
8短语beyondtheirmeans和endupindebt是文中的亮点。
使句子更生动。
9，what’smore使文章更紧凑。
11用欲擒故纵法引出自己的观点，先承认两方的观点都有可取性，然后笔锋一转，提出自己的观点，使文章的论述更为客观。
12ahappymedium（折中的办法）是语言亮点，语言的使用很贴切。
1.somebanksbegintooffercreditcardstocollegestudents,whichraisesageneraldebat.
1.Thereisageneraldebateonthephenomenonthatsomebanksbegintoissuecreditcardstocollegestudents.
2.Withcollgestudentsbecomingelgibleapplicantsofcreditcards,thereismuchdiscussionontheissue.
3.Thatwhethercollegestudentsshouldowncreditcardsarousescontroversiesassomebankshaveallowedcollegestudentstobecomecreditcardusers.
1.people’sviewsontheissuevary.
2.peopleholddifferentviewstowardstheissue.
3.Therearemanyargumentsforandagainstthispractice.
4.Peopledifferintheirviewsontheissue.
1.butalsogivesstudentsagoodopportunitytodevelopasoundsenseoffinancing.
2.butalsohelpsstudentslearnhowtousemoneywisely.
3.butalsocultivatesstudents’financialmanagementskillstheywillneedtosucceedinlife.
4.butalsopreparestudentsfortheirindependentlifeintermsoffinancingaftergraduation.
1.itcanhelpthemestablishagoodcredithistory
2.youngcreditusersmaybeabletocreateagoodcredithistory
3.ithelpscredituserstobuildupagoodcreditrecord.
4.it’shelpfulforyounguserstostartagoodcreditrecord.
However,othersthinkthedisadvantagesweighmuchmorethattheadvantages.
However,someotherpeoplebelievetherearemoredisadvantagesthanadvantages.
However,someotherpeopletendstoviewittheotherwayround.
However,someotherpeoplethinktherearemoreconsthanprosinit.
Studentsmayspendwellbeyondtheirmeansandendupindebtthattheycan’tpayoff.
Studentsarelikelytospendwellbeyondtheirmeansandunabletopayofftheirdebts.
Likelytospendmorethantheycouldafford,studentsmayendupindebtthattheycannotpayback.
Studentsmaygetintodebtthattheycan’tpaybackwhentheyspendmorethantheyhave.
Studentsmaygraduallybecome“creditcardslaves”andcanhardlyfocusontheiracademiclife.
Howcanastudentwhoturnsintoa“creditcardslave”focusonhisacademiclife?
Becominga“creditcardslave”,astudentcanhardlyfocusonhisacademiclife.\
Underthepressureofpayingoffbills,astudentcanhardlyfocusonhisacademiclife.
Thereisprobablysomethingtrueinbotharguments,
\perhapsbothargumentsarereasonabletosomeextent.
Perhapsbothsidesholdconvincingpoints\
Perhapstheaboveargumentsareallquitereasonableandlogical.
HowtoAchieveSuccess
1.有人说成功要靠运气
2.有人则认为成功主要靠勤奋，与运气毫无关系
3.你的观点如何？
并说明理由。
这是四级作文中典型的观点分析型习作，要求考生先阐述人们对成功主要因素的不同看法，然后在此基础上明确个人观点并说明理由。
根据写作要求，文章结构如下：
第一段；
先阐述两种不同观点，在表明自己的立场；
我认为勤奋，投入和坚持不懈是取得成功的三个基本要素。
第二段；
说明勤奋对取得成功的重要性。
第三段；
说明投入对取得成功的重要性，
说明坚持不懈对取得成功的重要性。
第五段结尾段；
用两句名言总结全文，重申主题。
Sample
Analysis
1.Somepeoplesaythekeytosuccessisgoodluck,whileothersclaimitishardworkthatreallycounts.2.Thereisnodoubtthatsuccessfulpeopledotaketheadvantageofopportunities.Butiftheydonotworkhard,theycanonlywaittoseeopportunitiespassby.3.Soinmyopinion,diligence,devotionandperseverancearethreefundamentalfactorsinsuccess.
4.diligenceisthefirstkeytosuccess,whichsimplymeanstoworkpersistentlywithoutanywasteoftime.Diligencemakesafoolwiseandapoorrich,Ifweworkhardnowwecouldexpectasuccesslateron,andifwedon’t,ourfuturelifewillprobablybegloomy.
5.Devotion,whichmeanstheconcentrationofourmindondoingthings,isanotherkeyfactortosuccess.6.onlywhenwefocusourmindsonthejob,canwedoitwell.
7.persveranceisalsoindispensableforsuccess.Withoutastrongwillwecanhardlyovercomethedifficulties.
8.toconclude,successisnotsomethingeasytoachieve,anditisbasedondiligence,devotionandperseverance.9.justasthefamoussayingsgo:
“nopainsnogains.”And“wherethereisawill,thereisaway.”
1.观点分析型作文的典型开头；
引述别人的观点
3，在主题句中明确个人观点
4.thefirstkeyto开门见山点出获得成功的第一个重要因素。
Lateron和gloomy为亮点词汇。
5.用another起到承上启下的作用，进一步分析获得成功的另一个不可或缺的因素。
6.only+状语从句的倒装结构起强调作用。
7.用also这个过渡词再次说明持之以恒对成功的重要性。
8，9，在结尾段用toconclude和两句名言总结全文，并重申主题。
somepeoplesaythekeytosuccessisgoodluck,whileothersclaimitis
somepeoplebelievethatthekeytosuccessisgoodluck,whileotherpeoplearguethat
whenitcomestothekeytosuccess,manypeoplesaythatgoodluckisthemosstimportantthing,butothersregard…as…
asfarasthekeytosuccessisconcerned,somepeoplethinkthatgoodluckisindispensable,whereasothersholdtheviewthat…
thereisnodoubtthat
thereisnodenyingofthefactthat
undoubtedly
itistruethat
soinmyopinion
sofrommypointofview
asIseeit
frommyperspective
diligenceisthefirstkeyto
diligenceisoftheutmostimportancefor
diligenceistheforemostelemenof
diligenceisofvitalsignificancefor
isanotherkeyfactortosuccess
isalsoavitalfactorinsuccess
weighsalottosuccessaswell
alsoplaysagreatroleinachievingsuccess
toconclude
tosumup
inshort
inaword
justasthefamoussayingsgo
asissaidinthesayings
asisillustratedinthesayings
justasthefamoussayingstell
最新英语四六级作文高分超级模板：
阐述主题题型
第一段、总结描述
先用一句话描述当今社会的某种现象或者事物，并且用简单的话扩展说几句：
主题句＋扩展句
第二段、举例说明现象
主题句＋举例1+举例2+举例3
第三段、表明自己的观点并结束全文
在结尾的时候，一定要表明自己的观点。
第二部分、阐述主题题型作文写作范文练习
［实战演练］
Directions：
Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicPollutions.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinebelow:
1、目前污染问题已经成为人们普遍关注的一个问题；
2、造成污染问题的原因；
3、解决办法。
［写作模板：
架构阶段］
第一段：
主题句：
________hasbecomeaseriousproblemaboutwhichweworry.
扩展句：
1、Whereverweturn,wefind________.
2、Andthisisthreateningt
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