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不错的写作模块MPA考前培训
作文概述
1、幅:
120字
2、布局:
三段式。
3、评分标准(5个模块评分,平均1分钟一份卷)
※结构、内容、语言:
3段,长短句结合,一定难度的词汇和短语,少词汇语法错误
※卷面书写工整:
心情一好分数就不会低
※篇幅一定要不长不短
※字大一号
4、行文要求:
●切题
●条理清楚
●简洁
●准确
2006
Somecollegegraduateschoosetoworkasvillageofficials.
1.Doyouthinkitisagoodidea?
2.Whatcantheyofferthecountryside?
3.Whatcantheygainfromtheirvillagepositions?
2005
1.Chooseeitherofthetwopositions:
Collegestudentsshould(not)beallowedtogetmarried.
2.Stateyourreasonsfororagainsttheissue
3.Conclusion
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2003Whatwillmoneybringus,fortuneormisfortune?
2002TheIncreaseintheNumberofChineseTravelingAbroad
2001TheGreatestInventioninthePastCentury
2000WhichisMoreImportant,WealthorHealth?
1999TheQualitiesoftheCross-CenturyTalents
1998WhyWeWork?
1997TheProblemsIHaveinMyEnglishStudy
e.g.
Itisinevitablethatastechnologydevelopssotraditionalculturesmustbelost.Technologyandtraditionareincompatible,youcannothavebothtogether.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?
Scienceortraditionalculture?
Itisafactoflifethatthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnologyhasbeenaccompaniedbyadeclineintraditionalculture.Inmyopinion,thisisnotnecessarilyabadthing,becausesomeaspectsoftraditionalculturehamperprogressandshouldbeabandoned.
Inthefirstplace,scienceandtechnologyhaveclearedupmanymattersthatweremysterioustousinthepast.Forinstance,wenowknowthatthunderandlightningarenotcausedbygodsbeingangry,butarenormalnaturalphenomena.Asaresult,agreatnumberofharmfulsuperstitionshavedisappeared.
Inthesecondplace,oureverydayliveshavebeenmademoreconvenientbyscientificandtechnologicalinventions.Nowadayse-mailandtelephoneshavealmostreplacedthetraditionalletter-writing,andcomputersenableustomakequickerandmoreaccuratecalculations.EvenmoreimportantisthefactthatInternetbringsthewholeworldtogether.
Inconclusion,advancesinscienceandtechnologyhavebroughtusmanybenefitsbyeliminatingthebadpartsoftraditionalculturewhilepreservingtheessence.
※文章的内容不重要!
重要的是框架(背)!
习惯先看每段的首句+文章末句,再浏览全文挑错字和语法错误,所以要写成3~4段,每段首句为中心句,结尾再总结一下,这样老师只看4句话就可以给出分数了,节省时间自然分数就高了。
※中心句的写法模式性,一般背20句,不管出什么题都能从中挑出3~4句用上,各种题型背一些。
※拼写不大确定的词一定不要写!
判卷老师最强的能力就是找错字,而且这是他判断你写作能力的重要尺度!
当你文章中出现了3个以上的拼写错误的时候,可以说你已经missionfail了。
※作文中出现一些闪光词汇和句型,对分数的提高有很大帮助的!
建议背一些模块长句。
如“重要”一词,用important太一般了,如果用vital,critical,essential,crucial就能使老师眼前一亮!
moreandmore这个词是一定不要用,可以用Agrowingnumberofsth或Anincreasingnumberofsth,或说…isontherise。
词汇和句式的转化很重要,你背的中心句一定要能体现这两点,如问题解决型文章末段首句可以这样写Animmediatestepmustbetakenbeforetheproblembecomestooserioustosolve.(必须在问题严重之前及时采取有效措施解决)
正反观点对比可以说Weighingtheprosandconsofthesearguments,Iaminclinedtoagreewiththelatter/formerpointofview.(权衡正反两种观点,我倾向于后者/前者的看法),这样就不用为字数发愁了!
※作文的时间30分钟,5分钟构思(确定模块,举例,论据等),20分钟写,5分钟检查。
※内容切题,但不新颖不重要,不要为了想个好的例子浪费时间,第一是你未必想的出来,第二是你想出来了也写不出来,第三是你写出来了老师也不会看!
所以要写最简单的例子。
※检查,这个时间千万不要数字数,主要是找拼写和语法的错误,主要是全篇文章时态一致、单复数、主谓一致!
记住小的地方可以改,但决不要整句整句的改,缩短老师的评卷时间、使老师高兴是及格和打高分的首要条件!
2.模块
1.议论型模块(89words)
●Somepeoplebelieve(argue,recognize,think)that观点1.Butotherpeopletakeanoppositeside.Theyfirmlybelievethat观点2.Asforme,Iagreetotheformer/latteridea.
●Thereareadozenofreasonsbehindmybelief.Firstofall,论据1.Moreimportantly,论据2.Mostimportantofall,论据3.
●Insummary,总结观点.Asacitizenoftheglobalvillage,Iamsupposedto表决心.
或Fromabove,wecanpredictthat预测.
(一)议论文
填空:
WillGlobalizationbenefitmankind?
Somepeoplebelieve(recognize,think)thatglobalizationwillbenefitmankind.Butotherpeopletakeanoppositeside.Theyfirmlybelievethatitwilldoharmtotheworld.Asforme,Iagreetotheformer.
Thereareadozenofreasonsbehindmybelief.Firstofall,globalizationenablespeoplefromallovertheworldtoshareinformation,intelligence,productsandservices,whichhelpstocultivateourqualities,enrichourlifeandraisethequalityofourliving.Moreimportantly,globalizationsupplies/endowsuswithmoreopportunitiesandchallenges,whichmayleadtoourself-fulfillmentandsuccess.Mostimportantofall,withtheconceptofglobalization,everyindividualofus,everyfirmandeverynationwilldoubleoureffortstocontributetothesustainabledevelopment可持续性发展ofourcommonearth.
Insummary,asacitizenoftheglobalvillage,IamthrilledaboutitsbrightfutureandIwillmakebestuseoftheopportunitiestorealizemydream.
2.现象解释型模版(32words)
1.Nowadays,现象.Whatamazesusmostisthat…
2.Therearemanyreasonsexplainingwhy…Themainreasonisthat…What’smore,…Thirdly,…
3.Inconclusion,…
填空:
Nowadays,agrowingnumberofpeople,especiallygirls,choosetohaveplasticsurgery整容.Whatamazesusmostisthatevensomemenandagedpeopledoso.
Therearemanyreasonsexplainingwhyplasticsurgeryisbecomingincreasinglypopular.Themainreasonisthatwithintensecompetitionandrareopportunitiespeoplehavetoimprovetheirphysicalappearance外表todeveloptheirpersonalimage个人形象sothattheymaybeinanadvantageouspositionintheircareer.Whatismore,plasticsurgerymayturnanuglydarklingintoabeautifulswan,whichhelpstoboostpeople’sconfidenceintheirworkandlife.Thirdly,lovingbeautyishumannature.Iftheworldisfullofbeauty,bothphysicalbeautyandinnerbeauty,wejustcannotimaginewhataparadiseitwillbe!
Inconclusion,plasticsurgery,anadvanceinmedicalscience,canhelppeoplerealizetheirdreamandpursuitforbeauty.WereIgivenachance,enoughtimeandmoney,Iwouldnothesitatetotakeit.
3.对比选择型模版(56words)
1.Thereisaheateddebateover__________________.Itiscommonlyacceptedthat___________________.Incontrast,others____________________.
2.Thosewhoholdthefirstopinionsuggest______________.Intheirview,__________________.However,othersthink________________.Theyarguethat__________________.
3.Consideringoneafteranother,Istandonthesideof…
OnMarriageofCollegeStudents
1.Thereisaheateddebateoverwhethercollegestudentsshouldgetmarriedornot.Itiscommonlyacceptedthattheyareentitledto有权利getmarried.Incontrast,asmallminorityofpeopleareagainstit.
2.Thosewhoholdthefirstopinionsuggestthatcollegestudentsarebothphysicallyandmentallymatureenoughtogetmarriedandthattheyknowwhattheyaredoing.Intheirview,ifcollegestudentsgetmarried,theywillbemoredisciplined,moremotivatedandmoreresponsible.However,othersthinktoday’scollegestudentsaremostlyfromonechild’sfamily.Asamatteroffact,theyareusuallyspoiltandnotpsychologicallypreparedforundertakingtheresponsibilityofafamily.Theyarguethatmarriagewilldistractthemfromstudyandplungethemintofinancialdilemma.
3.Consideringoneafteranother,Istandonthesideoftheformer.IfIamluckyenoughtomeetmyMr.Right,Imaymarryhim.Thenwemayloveeachother,supporteachotherandencourageeachother.Oh,whatarosypictureitis!
BenefitsofSportsandGames
Withthequickerpaceofourlifeandgreaterstressfromourwork,anincreasingnumberofmodernpeopleattachmuchimportancetosportsandgames.Whyaretheybecomingsopopular?
First,sportsandgamesdoalotofgoodtoourhealth.Theycanmakeusstrong,preventusfromgettingtoofat,andkeepushealthy.Theycanbeofgreatvaluetopeoplewhoworkwiththeirbrainsmostoftheday,forsportsandgamesgivepeoplevaluablepracticeinbuildingupastrongconstitution.
What’smore,theymakeourlifericherandmorecolorful.“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy”,justasthesayinggoes.Sopeopleofallagesenjoywatchingandtakingpartinvariouskindsofsports–trackandfield,skating,swimming,volleyball,basketball,football,etc..
Sportsandgamesarealsoveryusefulincharactertraining.Theydemandnotonlyphysicalskillandstrengthbutalsocourage,enthusiasm,disciplineandusuallyteamwork.Forboysandgirls,whatislearnedintheplaygroundoftenhasadeepeffectontheircharacter.Ifeachofthemlearnstoworkforhisteamandnotforhimselfonthefootballfield,hewilllaterfinditnaturaltoworkforthegoodofhiscountryinsteadofonlyforhisownbenefit.
Withallthesebenefits,itisnowonderthatsportsandgamesseemtohavebecomepartofourdailylife.
书信模版1
DearJohn,
IamdelightedtohearthatyouwillcometoGuangzhouforavisitsoon.Ican’twaittoseeyou.HereI’dliketogiveyouseveraltips.
First,Guangzhouisabigmetropolitancitywithalotofvehiclesandahugecrowdofpeopleandthetrafficjamisextremelyheavy,forwhichIhopeyouwillbeprepared.Second,peoplehereareaddictedtofoodsofdifferentflavors,esp.seafoodsandlivinganimals,eveninsects.Idoubtyou’lllikethem.Besides,theweatherhereischangeable,soyou’dbetterbringmoreclothesandmedicine.
Withpeoplefromdifferentregionsandcountries,diverseculturesandexoticcustoms,youwilldefinitelyenjoyyourself.ThenImayserveasyourguide.Ifyouhaveanydoubts,pleasedon’thesitatetoinformme.
Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyou.
SincerelyYours,
Signature:
______.
书信模版2Aletterofcomplaint(投诉信)
DearSirorMadam,
Iamwritingtoyoutocomplainoftheinternetsystemofouroffice,whichseriouslyaffectsourroutinebusinesswork.Themajorproblemsareasfollows.
First,whenwegetonline,wecannotmakeaphonecallatthesametime,becausethereisaloudnoiseinterruptingourtalk.Second,wehavetowaitforalongtim