3四级句子写作文档格式.docx

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四级考生在措词方面存在的问题：

⏹1可供“调遣”的词汇量贫乏，用词大部分局限于中学词汇。

Eg.Goodpoints=benefits,advantages,merits,strongpoints.

Problems,badpoints=drawbacks,disadvantages,shortcomings,defects,weakpoints

⏹2表达相近意义时，常重复用一个词，用词单调。

Eg.Good=helpful,useful,beneficial,favorable,advantageous,doesgood/harmto,benefit.

策略

⏹1调动大学期间学过的更生动，更丰富的词汇表达意思。

Eg.Cause,leadto,resultin,bringabout,bringon,giverise/birthto

Resultfrom,dueto,attributeto,owingto,asaresultof

⏹2用具体，生动，有针对性的词语。

Eg.Use,makeuseof,make（good,effective,wide,wise,full）useofsth,take（full）advantageof

⏹3文中如需要多次表达同一词义时，以原词，同义词，近义词等避免重复使用同一词。

Eg.Adaptto,adjust,make…fit,get/beusedto,beaccustomedto

四级写作中如何造句

英语句子的基本类型

（1）

⏹简单句：

一个主语（或并列主语）和一个谓语动词（或并列谓语动词）或表语。

表达简单思想，用词较少。

Eg.Collegestudentsshouldgettoknowtheworldoutsidethecampus.

Eg.ToStudyabroadisbeneficialtoyoungpeopleinmanydifferentaspects.

Eg.Informationassumesanimportantpartinourlifeandwork.

Eg.Whatwelearntodayinschoolcanlayasolidfoundationforourfuturecareer.

英语句子的基本类型

（2）

⏹并列句：

用并列连词或分号连接两个或以上简单句。

各个简单句是并列关系。

Eg.Behonest,or/otherwiseyouwillneverlearnanything.（Or表选择关系）

Eg.Weshouldnotjustsitherecomplaining,foritwouldbeofnouse.（For表因果关系）

Itisofnousesittingherecomplaining

Eg.Asthegapbetweentherichandthepoorbecomeswiderandwider,

Somepeoplehavenomoneytospend,whileothershavenothingtospendmoneyon.（While表对比关系）

常见的并列连词

⏹And,notonly…butalso,then

⏹ButWhileFor

⏹Either…or,neither…nor,or,orelse,nor

英语句子的基本类型（3）

⏹复合句：

定语从句，主语从句等常用

⏹Eg.Thosewholikefastfoodarenotverylikelytogetenoughnutritionfromit.

⏹Eg.Thoughstudymethodsmaydiffer/varyfrompersontoperson,thefollowingsuggestionsmightbebeneficialtoall.

⏹Eg.Itiswell-known/generallywidely/commonlybelieved/thatlanguageisthemostcommonmeansofcommunication.

从句的种类

（1）

⏹名词性从句：

主，表，宾，同位语从句（nounclauses）

⏹Eg.Manypeopleholdtheopinionthatcountrylifeisinferior/superiortocitylife.

⏹Eg.Ithinkthatthepositiveaspectsofsportsfaroutweighthenegativeones.

⏹Eg.Itisgenerallyrecognizedthatdiligenceisakeyfactortosuccess.

⏹Eg.Myviewtowardsopportunityisthateverybodystandsachanceofsucceedinginhisworkandlifeaslongasheisdeterminedto/makeupone’smindtoworkhardforhisgoals.

从句的种类

（2）定语从句

⏹Inrecentyears/Nowadays/Atpresent/currently,moreandmorepeoplehavebecomeawareoftheimportantrolethatinformationplaysinourmodernlife.

⏹Thereasonswhystudyingabroadhasbecomemoreandmorepopularlieinthefollowingaspects./beasfollows

⏹Itisthehightimethatthegovernmenttakeeffectivemeasurestofightagainstcrime.

从句的种类（3）状语从句

⏹Ifyoupracticedoingsomethingregularly,chancesarethatyouwillbecomeskillfulinit.

⏹Althoughwomen’sliberationmovementhasachievedsomesuccess,thereisstillalongwaytogo/towardsrealequality.

Thereisstillsomeroomtoimpove

⏹EversinceChinaadoptedthepolicyofreformandopening（totheoutsideworld）,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinthecountry.

其它句子在写作中的运用

⏹疑问句

Eg.Whichwayisthebesttogettoknowthesociety,throughlisteningtotheradio,watchingTV,readingthenewspapers,ortakingpartinsocialactivities?

Eg.Haveyouevertakenapart-timejob?

Doyouthinkitisagoodpracticeforcollegestudentstodotemporaryjobsintheirfreetime?

OtherExamples

⏹Nowthatwehaverealizedtheimportanceofchoosingarightcareer,whatfactorsshouldwetakeintoaccountwhenweareplanningourcareerandmakingourdecisions?

Well,readonandyouwillfindtheanswer.

⏹Howcanwedealwiththeproblemofwastedisposal?

Myproposalsareasfollows.

⏹Whydosomanystudentsinourcountrylongforstudyingabroad?

Thereasonslieinthefollowingaspects.

⏹反问句

Eg.Nowthatwehaverealizedtheimportanceofpractice,whynotputitintopractice?

Eg.Don’tyouagreewithmyideathatatestoforalEnglishbeincludedintheCET-4and6?

Eg.Don’tyouthinkthatitishightimethateverybodyjoinedintheefforttoprotectourenvironmentandsavetheearth?

⏹强调句

Itissurfingoninternetconstantlythatdoesharmtochildren’shealth.

Itisgoodhealththatenablesapersontogoalloutinhiscareerandaccomplishgreatsuccess.

Itiseducationthatmakesapersonwise.

ItisthroughregularpracticethataEnglishlearnergetstoknowthelanguagewell.

⏹感叹句

Howtimeflies!

Howthingshavechanged!

Howwonderfulitistohavecomputerdotheheavyworkforman!

Whatanadvantageousthingitistostudyabroad!

Withoutlearningenglish,wecan’tspeakenglish,norcanwewriteinEnglish

句型多样

⏹简单句，并列句和复合句交替使用，灵活使用各种句子结构如：

倒装句，省略句。

强调句，非谓语动词，疑问句，祈使句和感叹句等。

⏹若要写好作文，要写好句子，首先要掌握句子结构和句式变化及句子类型，可通过对泛读课文经典句子的背诵提高应用语言基本句型的能力。

⏹要善于模仿。

Imitationisagoodwaytolearn.

短文写作中句型变换技巧

一．平行结构的运用

主题句：

Videogamesareakindofentertainment.

利用平行结构拓展为：

Theybringpleasurestoyoungsters,trainthemtorespondquicklyandstimulatetheirimaginationinelectronics.

二．句式灵活多变的运用

Booksareworthreading

Bookstellingpeoplehowtoadaptthemselvestothesocietyareworthreading.

Harrystoodattheedgeofthepath,watchingthecarsrunning.

三．改变句子开头

少用与人有关的词性（名词或代词），多用状语，同位语，表语，短语修辞语及therebe句式。

Itisafactthat（thedevelopmentofscienceandtechnologyhasbeenaccompaniedbyadeclineintraditionalculture.）

四．长短句交叉

长句中因为使用的定语，状语较多，限制了概念的外延，增大了概念的内涵，比较精确，严密。

写作时最好长短句交替使用。

Justimaginethebeautifulsurroundingsifwemakeourcitiesgreener.Greentreeslinethestreets.Acleanriverwindsthroughthecity,inwhichalotoffishesabound.Ontheonesidestandrowsofwillow（柳树）trees.Ontheothersideliesastretchofgrasslandsprinklewithmanyyellowandredflowers.

五．句子扩展方法的运用

（1.）Tea

Cometotea

Cometoteawithme

Cometoteawithmebythesea

Ifyouarefreeonweekends,cometogreenteawithmebythesea,please.

（2）TVispopular

Nowadays,TVispopularinChina

Nowadays,TVissopopularinChinathatalmosteveryfamilyownsone

Thefactthat（NowadaysTVissopopularinChinathatalmosteveryfamilyownsone）hascausedalotofproblems

（3）LiMingisplayingfootball.

LiMing,theboyinwhitefootballclothesandredhat,isplayingfootball.

It’safineJuneday,LiMing,theboyinwhitefootballclothesandredhat,isplayingfootballwithhisclassmates.

It’safineJuneday,LiMing,theboyinwhitefootballclothesandredhat,isplayingfootballwithhisclassmates,withsweatdroppingdownfromhisface.

写作中常见的句式错误

一．一致性

1．Borninasmallvillageoverfortyyearsago,hebecameascientistlater

Heisborninasmallvillageoverfortyyearsago,andlaterhebecameascientist.

2.Theboyistooyoung.

Theboyistooyoungtotakecareofhimself.

3.Althoughtiredandexhausted,theworkwasfinishedontime.

Althoughtiredandexhausted,hefinishedtheworkontime.

4.中途改变主语：

Birdshaveaspecialprotectivedevice,theapproachofcoldweathercanbesensed,theyflysouth,andweknowthatwinterisnear.

Birdshaveaspecialprotectivedevice,theycansensetheapproachofcoldweather,sowhentheyflysouth,weknowthatwinterisnear.

5.修饰成分紧挨被修饰词

TheTowerofLondonisnowatouristattraction,inwhichsomanypeoplelosttheirlives

TheTowerofLondoninwhichsomanypeoplelosttheirlivesisnowatouristattraction

二．语言的简洁

1．Theschoolisverybiginsize.

Theschoolisverybig.

2.Therewasamanwhostoodtherewatchingallthis.

Amanstoodtherewatchingallthis

3.Sheisagirlwhois18yearsold.

Sheisan18-year-oldgirl.

3.Inmyopinion,Ithinkitiscertainthatyouwillberecognized.

Ithinkyouwillcertainlyberecognized.

三．主谓一致

1．Myuncleisoneofthosewhodonotbelievethataknowledgeofpoliticsisusefulinabusinessoffice.

2.Janeaswellastheresthasagreedtocome（with,aswellas,except,inadditionto,not）

3.Everymanandwomanistreatedinthesameway.（every,each…and）

4.Thechairmanandgeneralsecretarywasselected.

5.EitherIoryouarewrong.Notonlythestudentsbutalsotheteacherhasdoubts.

6.Tenminutesisalongtimeforustowait

7.Myfamilyareallvegetarians/Myfamilyneverintendstohasanythingtodowithbusiness.

四．中式英语。

1．Althoughhewasseriously,buthecametothemeeting.

2.Hesaidhemarriedin1993inshanghai.

3.Hehascomebackfortwoweeks.ButIhavenotimetopayavisit.

4.WiththeTVcomingintoourfamily,audiencearemoreandmore.

5.IwanttoraisethelevelofmyEnglish.

6.Mybodyishealthy

7.Ithinkyouarenotright.

8.Weshouldnottalkloveforthesakeofstudy

9.Teenagersmokersarebecomingmoreandmore.