英语作文(总结)何凯文点睛班.docx

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第一段：

第一句图画描述

1、Indicatedaboveisapicturedemonstratingtheimportanceoftheculturalheritage（图画主题），whichissymbolizedbyanoldman，ayoungmanandtraditionfestivals.（图中元素）

2、Asisshownabove，thepicturedepictsasceneinwhichare/isanolddevotedresearcher（图中元素）.Thedistinctivefeatureofthepictureisthedemonstrationofimportanceconcerningprofessional

ethics（道德-主题）.

3、Asisshownabove，thispicturepresents//depictsathought-provokingsceneinwhichis/areanintervieweeandinterviewerintheoffice.（图中元素）Thefeatureofthepicturethatimpressmemostistheimportanceofdetailandactionforone’ssuccess.（图画主题）

第一段第二句：

1、Thisdrawing，ifsharedbysocialmediausers，willdefinitelybethetrendingtopicandtriggeraheateddiscussionforitsrefreshingandsparkingimplication.

2、Thispicturewillstimulateaheateddiscussion,whenpostedonsocialmediasitessuchasWeibo,asthey/itstrikeadeepchordwithmanyInternetusers.

3、IfsharedonMomentsofWechat,apopularsocialmedia/networkthisdrawingwillcapturegreatattentionandabundantimaginationforitsprofoundsocial/personalimplication.

4、Thispicture,ifpostedonWeibo,aninfluentialsocialmedia,willattractmuchattentionforitsgreatbearingonsocial/personal

growth.

个人品质:

Thispicturedemonstrates//illustrates//showsusthattheabilitytotransformambitionintoreality（主题词）isandremainstobeanintegralpartofpersonalgrowthandbyextensionnationalprogress.Tobesure,theabsenceofthis（quality//trait//merit//virtue）（主题词）willeventuallyleadtoone’spoorperformanceandlowerachievementincareer,nottomentiondeepregretsinlife.Thedown-to-earthspirit,noonewoulddenythat,makesthoseoutstandingstandout.Accordingtoasurvey,thosewhoareequippedwiththistrait（主题词）aremorelikelytoachievetheirgoalsthanthosewhoarenot.各种人名,Huangdanian,apatriotandbrilliantscientist,servesasshiningandinspiring//fittingexamplehere.Itisthecouragetofacethechallenge（主题词）thathelpshimattaingloriouspersonalsuccessandcreategreatvalueforthesociety.

思路:

1.个人品质----个人成功//社会发展很重要

2.缺失很有害

3.确实重要

4.举例

5.没听到..接了个电话

第三段:

Obviously,thispictureinspiresustoexplorethedeepmeaningofdare-to-action/actspiritperseverance（主题词）.Fairlyspeaking,withtheguidanceofthisspirit,peoplewillsurelyattainfavorablepositionsandcommonsuccesses.Moresignificantly,however,itwillhelpusfindthewaytorealizeourfullpotentialandgaintherealhappiness,Ifirmlyargue.

思路:

确认重要---成功 确认重要

对于个人价值—幸福 应重视//培养

Frommypersonalperspective,thisquality（主题词）isthefundamentalattributeoftopperformers,whichboostsandfacilitatestheircareer.So,thegreatimportancetothecultivationofthistrait（主题词）shouldbeattachedbyindividuals,organizationsandeventhewholesociety.

无形社会:

Thepictureshowsusthatthetraditionalculture（主题词）playsanindispensableroleintherationalgrowthofsocietyandtheimprovementofcitizens’well-being.Tobesure,iftheinvaluableheritage（主题词）iseverneglectedinanypossiblemanner,wewillinevitablesuffergreatlossesandpossiblyfacedesperatesituation.Totakeitastepfurther//Beyondanydoubt,thetraditionalvalues（主题词）willmakeoursocialfabricstronger,familyhealthierandpeoplehappierwithitspositiveinfluence.思路:

后面有两种 1.重要性

2.忽视有害,缺失有害

3.确实重要

第一种:

4.认识不够 第二种:

4.必须重视

5.必须重视 5.所幸已经重视

6.好的开始

第一种:

Althoughwehavefullyacknowledgedtheimportanceofthismerit（主题词）,someofus（sometimes）tendtoallow（容忍）ourneglectonthisvaluabletreasure.（主题词）[Someofusstillfailtotranslateitintoourdailypractice.替换二者择其一alternative]Sodueattentionmustbepaidtocultivationandpromotionofthisquality//treasure（主题词）,especiallyinthischanginganddynamicnewerafullofpossibilities.

第二种:

Sodueattentionmustbepaidbyindividuals,organizationsandeventhegovernmentagencies.Fortunately,thistopiclistonsocialmediaandbeenhighonsomeprestigiousinstitutionsagenda.Thisisagoodstart.Frommypersonalperspective，thetraditionalculture（主题词）demandsmorethanourattentionbutactionaswell.Expertsandscholar，forexample，areexpectedtoworkoutproperandpromptproposalonhowtoenhancethispreciousheritage（主题词）.Admittedly，thereisstillalongwaytogobeforewefindthemostfittingproposal.Withapracticalattitudeandourjointefforts，Ifirmlybelieve，apromisingfuturecanbeanticipatedbyallofus.

思路：

1、****确实重要

2、必须行动

3、展望未来

社会有形话题：

主要涉及影响（中性-新鲜事物/负面-社会问题）

Thepicturedoesshowthatourcitizenslivelihoodandwell-being/youngsters’studyandgrowth（图中场景）aregreatlyinfluencedandeven

reshaped（中性话题）seriouslythreatenedandevenendangered（负面话题）

byartificialintelligence（中性主题词）//environmentalpollution（.负面主题词）.

Totakeitastepfurther,therapidprogressofournationinthepastthreedecadehasbroughtusmanydefinitebenefitsandgeneratedastringofnovelties（中性）/challenges（负面），amongwhichare

（1）

（2）andthelike.Obviously，AI/environmentaldamageisthemostevidentandprominentone.So，thegreatimportanceshouldbeattachedbyallofustotreatitrationally中//toguarditsadverseandevenevileffects.负Fortunately，thistopichascapturedwidemediaattentionhitthenewspaperheadlineandsparkedheatedthediscussiononInternet.

Thisisgood，butonlyastart

思路：

1、主题对于我们生活有影响

2、确实产生很多新东西//负面的东西

3、主题是最值得关注的

4、应该关注

5、已经关注

6、好的开始第三段：

Frommypersonalperspective，itisimperativeforustotakeinstantactionandmakejointeffortssoastoguidethisnewtrendinvirtuousdirection（中）//putthesituationonhold（负）Admittedly，thereisstillalongwaytogobeforewefindthemostfittingproposal.Withadvisableattitudeandsolideffort，apromisingfuturecanbeanticipatedbyallofus.思路：

1、个人认为必须行动//建议（专家政府）

2、未来很好

小作文:

1.看题干圈出三个词letter//notice//memoDear ,

IamandIamwritingthisletterto写信目的（题干中获得）.I相关内容,soIamwritingtopresentyouthisletter.Whatfollowsareafewaspectsconcerningmyletter（主题词）.

Foronething,相关内容.Foranother,相关内容.Itismysincerehopethatyoucould .

Thanksalotinadvanceforyourtimeandattentiontothisletter（主题词）.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply//respondingassoonaspossible.

YourssincerelyLiming

NOTICE:

加一句①Ifthereisanyquestionordetailsyouwanttoknow,don’thesitatetocontactusduringourworkinghours.②Youcomingcallorvisitwillbehighlyappreciated.

（MEMO换第二句:

②I willbeverypleasanttogiveyoumyhelp）

Bytheway,astheNewYearisquicklyapproaching,Itakethisopportunitytosendmygreetingsandbestwishestoyoufortheyearof

2018.Withbestwishes!

小作文主题词:

Share/make/expressAcknowledgement/complaint/thanks/sorry/regrets/resignation/application/congratulation/recommendation/advice/suggestion.