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例证,正反论证,因果分析,权威数据,名言哲理……
1.大众观点质疑例证结论(分析)
2.哲理名言根据本文主旨进行解释论证结论
3.灵活提出论点;
灵活运用修辞。
【第三段】
针对上文,有效评论
建议(个人,社会);
态度
1.个人建议
他人帮助:
他人鼓励、帮助、建议
自身改变:
自我训练(真确认识困难,正确认识自我)
Howtostepoutoftheshadow?
Thevastmajorityholdthatthebestpolicyistoconsulttoanexpertorseniorwhenoneisconfusedorbewildered.Thatisaway,butadvicesfromothersarenotalwaysapplicableorsuitabletotheconfusedguy.Evenworse,suggestionsfromothersarenotalwaysavailableanytime.Actually,afeasibleapproachisasfollows:
toweighthenegativesandpositives,tomakesurewhatisthesolepurpose,tomakeadecisionconformingtotheneeds,andtobepreparedfortheside-effect.
Toweighthedifficultiesconfrontus,toassessourabilityreasonably,andtomaximizethevalueofwhatwecando!
Thisisarightwaytowardsuccess,andawaytoeliminateoffeelingofinadequacy.
2002
贵阳
800黄
Poe坡
TheroadI’dnottaken
2.社会建议
外控:
passive
Correspondinglawsandregulationsshouldbelaidout…..
Finesandotherpunishment(penalties)shouldbeputintopractice….
Governmentalinterventionshouldbeactivatedtodirectthisphenomenonintoapositivesituation.
Mediasupervisionshouldbecastonthismattertohaveacontroloverit.
内控:
theinnermostcontrol
Theawarenessof…shouldbecultivatedamong….
Thevalueof…shouldbebroughthometo…..
Theabilityofself-disciplineover…shouldbenurturedamong….
【庸俗版本】
Asaconsequence,itisimperativeforustoworkoutconcretesolutionstothisproblemofeco-destruction.Thereareatleasttwopossiblewaystodealwithit.Thefirstwaytotackleitistoappealtodepartmentconcernedtocastinterventiononthistrend.Anotherpolicythatisworthadoptingistolayoutlawsandregulationstocontrolthismisconduct.Inaggregate,theearthisourhomeandwehavethedutytotakecareofit,……
Inviewoftheseriousnessoftheproblem,effectivemeasuresshouldbeadoptedbeforethinggetworse,ofwhichthemosturgentoneistomakepeopleawareofharmofthisbehavior.Aslongaseveryofusrealizesthevalueof….,wecandefinitelyovercomethisdifficulty.
【启蒙版本】
Howtoputthisproblemofeco-destructionundercontrol?
Itoccurstomanythattheeffectivepolicyittobanitbylegalmean,governmentalintervention,orheavypunishment.Thatisaway,butthismechanismisonlyapassiveway,isatimeconsumingprocess,andonlyworksonextremecases.Actuallyanapplicableapproach,whichmayfundamentallysolvethisproblem,istocultivatethegeneralpublictheawareness,bymass-media,byschooleducationorbyfamilycultivation,thattheplanetearthisouronlyhome,soitisourdutytotakecareofit.Thisawarenesswillsparkthefireofanti-environment-destructioncampaign.amongpeople.
【主动版本】
Thisproblemcanbeputundercontrolwiththecombinationofinterventionfromdepartmentconcerned,legalmeans,and,morethananything,self-discipline.Currently,properpenaltiesandcorrespondinglawsandregulationshavebeenputintopractice,withfruitfulreward.However,iftherewerealsothegeneralawarenessthattheplanetearthisoutonlyhomeandtheresourcesonitisactuallyindeedlimited,whichrequiresourself-disciplineonover-miningorover-exploring,thisdelinquencywouldbeputtoanend.
【高尚版本】
Astocountermeasurestothisproblem,itoccurstothevastmajoritythatgovernmentalinterventionandlegalrestrictioncanbecountedasapackagedeal.Butisthatcomprehensiveenoughtoputanendtothisdelinquency?
Actually,thatismerelyapassiveway!
Whatwereallyneedissomeinnermostchanges,self-disciplineforone.Weretheregeneralawarenessthatresourcesonearthisindeedlimited,andweshouldrestrictourdesiretooverexploitthem,thisdelinquencywouldbeputtoanend.
3.风尚态度
大众支持态度个人长远、深远看法
Begoodtothesociety
Bebeneficialto….
Neitherelevatingnorpoisonous.
Astoattitudetothisphenomenon,themajorityofusclingtotheideathatmutualassistancewilldefinitelybeelevatingtooursociety.Actually,thisescalatingeffectwillnotlastformerelyseveralyears.Asthisvirtueisavaluableassetofournation,wearewillingtohanditovertoourdescendants,whiletheywilldeliveritfromoneindividualtoanother,fromonedecadetoanother,andfromonegenerationtoanother.
YoushouldwriteneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.(20points)
学生的对联
Emergingfromthecartoonisanironicscesethatcoupletpastedbystudentsmirrorstheirattitudetowardcollegeexaminations.Thefirstlinereads“therewouldbenoupgradewithoutcheatinginexamination”,whilethesecondlinebears“theypreferpassingtheteststogainingdignity”.Absurdly,thehorizontalhangingscrollsummarizestheiridea:
regardlessofthevirtueofhonesty,theyaredeterminedtopassexaminationsbyanymeans.
大众观点质疑例证结论(分析)
“Noothergroupscanbefoundtobemorehonestthancollegestudents”,whichisholdbythevastmajority.Butisthatthecaseanymore?
Actually,someacuteproblemshavearisen.Thispictureprovidesuswithanopportunitytohaveabetterinsightintothemisconductsamongstudents.Tonameonlyafew,itisnotsurprisingtoseesomecandidatesdeliveringnotesormakinggesturesduringexaminations.Equally,itisnotuncommontofindsomeofthemtakingadvantageofmobilephonestotransmitkeys.Evidently,studentsinmountingnumbersnolongercherishthevirtueofhonesty,eitherforfirececompetitionorforlazinessinthemselves,seekingsoundscoresbyanymeans.
Exercise3
2)explainitsintendedmeaning,andthen
ThedreamofaBird
Abirdishidinginthebush,isholdingagun,andislookingatthesky.
Thebirdwanttoshootpeople(healsowantstobeahunter)
Peopleareflyinginthesky
Depictedbythiscartoonisanalarmingscenariothatabird,holdingagunandhidingoutinthebush,isstaringattheskywherehumanbeingsaresoaring.Obviously,heislongingforadaywhenbecomesahuntershootingpeopleforfun.Undoubtedly,whatheimaginesiswhathewasexposedto.
【版本一】
“Nootherageslaymoreamphasisonenvronmentprotectionthantoday”,whichisholdbythevastmajority.Butareweofferingasatisfyinganswertothepublicconerningecologicalbalancecurrently?
Actually,someacuteproblemsareprevailing.Thispictureprovidesuswithanopportunitytohaveabetterinsightintothemisconductsamongthegeneralpublic.Tonameonlyafew,itisnotsurprisingtoseesomefolksshootingwildlifeforfun,cookingthemforfood,andevensellingthemforprofit.Equally,itisnotuncommontofindthatsomewealthyguysviewitanhonortotreattheirfriendstoawilddishbanquet.Evidently,peopleinmountingnumbersnolongercherishtheawarenessofenvironmentalprotection,seekinginstantsatisfactionatthecostoflong-termbenefitofhuman.
【版本二】
Theimplicationofthiscartooncanbesummarizedasamottoinourdailylife:
whatwedowiththenatureistobeansweredfor.Simplyputit,totakecareofnaturalresourcesistotakecareofourselvesandourdescendants.Thereisnodenyingthatwewillconsumesomeresourceforsurvival,forfun,andfordevelopment.Unfortunately,someofushavegonetoanextreme,regardlessofthesustainabilityoftheseresources.Theyaresogreedythatmaysacrificelong-termprofitforcurrentcontent.
【版本三】
Ignore
Neglect
Discard
Shrugoff
Waveaside
Conceivedinthisscenarioisamotto:
itisourdutytogetonwellwiththenature.However,someofushaveshruggeditoff!
Arethereanyothercasesmoreconvincingthanthefollowingonestoexemplifythistrend?
Haven’tyoueverseenanyoneover-huntingforhugeprofitregardlessoftheeco-balance?
Haven’tyouevernoticedsomeofusover-miningwithgeographicdisastersrecurring?
Wherehastheirsenseofresponsibilitygone?
Wherehasthereinsightoffuturegone?
Wherehastheoutlookofsustainabledevelopmentgone?
Theyhavebeenswallowedbyourgreediness.
Wherehavealltheflowersgone?
DogVille《狗镇》
Thefollowingcasesarefamiliarandconvincing.
Toillustrate,……
Casestoprovethispointarewithineasyreach.
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Exercise4
Amaniswalkingbackandforth.
→=choices,options,dirctions
Wonder/beperplexed/bewildered
反问引入主题图片信息总结
Haveyoueverbeentrappedindilemmaordelicatesituation?
Ifso,youmayfeelthesorrowasthemandepictedinthiscartoon:
facingseveraldirections,perplexedlyandnervously,theguyiswalkingbackandforth,wonderingwheretogo.Meanwhile,thecaptionisremindinghim,aswellasallofus,thatforthosewhoareindecisive,whattheysufferfromislessadversitythanchoice.
哲理名言根据本文主旨进行解释论证结论
Theimplicationofthiscartooncanbesummarizedasaphilosophictopicinourdailylife:
bettertryingthancrying.Simplyputit,infaceofseeminglydelicatechoices,weshouldbettermarchforwarddecisivelythanhesitate.Thereisnodenyingthatwewillinevitablyrunupagainstdilemma,whichrequirespondering.However