IELTS写作笔记.docx

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IELTS写作笔记

写作

大作文Task2

●例子：

1）goodstudent=giftedstudent=excellentstudent=talentedstudent=outstandingstudent

=studentswithhighability

=studentsatthetopoftheclass

=high-scoringstudents

=Astudents

2）students=boysandgirlsatschool=schoolmembers

=participantsineducation

3）不屈不挠

anunyieldingspirit

=anuncompromisingcharacter

=aneversurrenderattitude

=anunrelentingdrivetosucced

●第一种类型：

AGREEORDISAGREE

例子：

Somepeoplethinkthat…Towhatextenddoyouagreeordisagreewiththispointofview?

1、introductoryparagraph（55words,个人观点长于背景）

1）generalstatements（交代背景，用题目的语言，但是要改写）

2）thesisstatement（主题思想）

●表达个人观点disagreeoragree

●衔接indication

●

例子：

….forthefollowing3reasons不用

……%*&￥&%*&%*（&（*&……（*……&（*……

●例子：

Somepeoplethinkthat…

改写成：

thoughsome/many或aconsiderablenumberofpeople

think改成whothinkthisstandpointthatremendous=enormous=infinite=incomputable

2、bodylanguage（写3段，每段75字；写2段，每段110字）

1）topicsentence（分支观点句）

transitionalsignal

●第一段：

Thefirstreasontosupportmyopinionisthat…

themianreasonliesinthefactthat…

Initially,oneissuewhichmakesmesupport/opposethisisthat…

Isalwaystopofthelistofmyarguments

Itisalwaystopofthelistofmyargumentsthat…

●第二段

Moreover

…constituteanotherreasonformyopinion

Itconstitutesanotherreasonformyopinionthat…

tobackupmyopinion,itcouldberelevanttoincludeanothercausethat…

Anadditionalfactorinvolves…

….alsoprovideadequatejustificationformypointofview

●第三段

anequallyessentialfactorwhichdeservespeople’sattentionisthat…..

tofurtherclarifythis,wecouldaddthat…

注：

第1、3主语段用以上的内容，第2段用简单的连词，如secondly、moreover；第2段和第3段的语言可以互换。

topicword

controllingidea（段落大意）

2）supportingsentence（发展句，写4句）

●题目：

1、somepeoplethinkthatteenagersshouldnothavejobwhentheyarestillstudents.

DISGREEORAGREE?

观点：

Highschoolstudentsshouldnottakepart-timejobs

理由：

claimthatinfluencestudy

2、part-timejobsbenefit

A版本：

（6到7分）

●theworkexperience

●thesenseofindependence

●thesocialsupportingsystem

B版本：

●work

●social

●independence

副词：

（介词结构可以被副词取代）

Hopefully，apparently，obviously，definitely，evidently，undoubtedly，fortunately，presumably，successfully，reasonably合情合理，justifiably，intelligently，intellectually，mistakenly，wrongly，erroneously，foolishly，imaginably，optimistically，academically，practically，economically，financially，mentally，spiritually，culthraly，historically，socially，psychologically，uncharacteristically，regrettably，predictably，tentatively，provisionally，understandably，pessimistically，miraculously，coincidentally，offically，materially，theoretically，pragmatically，idealy，

●例子：

Somepeoplethinkthatface-to-facecommunication,isbetterthanothertypesofcommunication,suchasletters,telephonescallsoremail.

AGREEORDISAGREE?

Whilemany,maintainingthisviewthatmodernformsofcommunicationoutweightface-to-facecommunication，claimthattheformerbringsmoreconveniencethanthelatter,Iamconvincethatnothingcanbeatspeakingtoanotherpersonface-to-face,whichistheultimateformofhumancontacts,becauseitallowsabroaderrangeofpossibilitiesforcommunicationintheintricaciesofthetoneofvoice,thelanguageofbodyandtheintimacyoftouch.

最高级的表达方式：

1、nothingisasefficientas…

2、nothingismoreefficientthan…

3、nothingcanbecomparedwith…intermsofefficiency

●题目：

Somepeoplethinkthatfamousathleteshavehadtoohighpay.

AGREEORDISAGREE?

我的观点：

disagree

1、individual

2、social

3、international

●第一点individual展开：

Themainreasonliesinthefactthatathletesinordertobecomeprize-winners,havetosweatandsacrificemorethanaveragepeople.

physicallyspeaking…fromthepsychologicalperspective…

●第二点social展开

Moreover,thedevelopmentofeconomybenefitsfromtheadvancesofprofessionalsportsimprovedbyfamousathletes.

Advance:

theemploymentrate

thepurchasingpower

thedistributionofproductiveresources

●第三点international展开

Tofurtherclarifythis，wecouldaddthatfamousathleteshaveplayedkeyrolesintheinternationalaffairsasgood-willambassadors.

Education的作用

1、improvethequalityofeducation

=thequalityofeducationasawholewouldbegreatlyraised.

2、academicknowledge:

●keeppacewiththelatestdevelopmentsintheacademicfields

=keepintouchwiththebestfruitsofscholarshipintheworld

●theacquisitionofpracticalskills=acquirepracticalskills

3、gaininvaluableexperience

●equipstudentswithancestor’sexperience将前人经验装备给学生

4、academic和实用

●reachabalancebetweenacademicandpracticalactivities

5、providewide-rangingsubjects

=studentsreceiveawell-roundededucation

6、增长知识：

enlargeknowledge=expandtherangeofknowledge=expandthescopeofknowledge

7、提升思维能力：

●stimulagethepowertothink

●activatethepowertofurtherthink

●encouragestudentstohaveoriginalideas

8、学习方法：

●adoptanefficientmethod

●switchtoamoresuitablemethod

●sticktoalearingmethod

9、氛围环境

●theintenselyacademicatmosphere

●thecozyandliberalenvironmentinclass

10、培养独立

●cultivatethesenseofindependce

●fostertheircapacitytoleadindependencelivesasindividuals

●comeupwiththeirownsolutionstoproblems

●facelifechallengesalone

●trainthemtoadapttoanewenvironment

●beabetterpilotofone’slife驾驭生活

11、心理：

●shapeahealthyinnerworld塑造健康心理状态

●behelpfulfortheshapingofasoundpsychologyattachmoreimportancetothesoundprogressofstudents’psychologicalabilitydevelophealthyvaluesandpointsofviewtowardsotherpeopleandtowardstheworld

●beneficialfortheshapingofasoundpsychologyattachmoreimportancetothesoundprogressofstudents’psychologicalabilitydevelophealthyvaluesandpointsofviewtowardsotherpeopleandtowardstheworld

●contributorytotheshapingofasoundpsychologyattachmoreimportancetothesoundprogressofstudents’psychologicalabilitydevelophealthyvaluesandpointsofviewtowardsotherpeopleandtowardstheworld

12、情感上的压力

unloadtheemotionalbaggage=managethepressure

●SCIENCEANDTECHNOLOGY=>influences

1、thedevelopmentsoftechnologyinthelastcentury/thetwentieth-centurytechnologicalinnovation

2、好处

●helpreducehumansufferings

●enhancethestandardofliving

●thequalityoflife

3、钢铁时代theadventofsteelproductionandassembly-linemanufacturing

●createcountlessjobs

●stimulatetheeconomicgrowth

●supplyaplethoraofinnovativeconvenience

4、信息技术时代

●freeupourtimebyperformingrepetitivetasks

●aidinthedesignofsaferandmoreattractivebuildings,bridges,andvehicles

●makeuniversalaccesstoinformationpossible

5、医学技术medicineandmedicaltechnology

●fromvaccinesandlaserstoprosthesesandorgantransplants

●bethebeneficiaryof受益的人

6、科技发展的坏处

●theenvironmentalpollution:

oneharmfulbyproductofindustrialprogress

●theozonedepletion臭氧损耗

●waterandsoilerosion水土流失

●theacidrain酸雨

●forestation植树造林deforestation乱砍滥伐

●themarinecontamination海洋污染

7、核武器nuclearweapon=biochemicalweapons

●weaponsofmassdestruction大规模杀伤性武器

●好处：

peace-keepers

●humanslaughter人类屠杀

●amountto=beequaltonetlossforhumanity完全丧失人性

8、网络坏处theInternet

●overloadtheinformation

●stealourtimeawayfromfamilies,friendsandcoworkers

●retreatfromtheworldofrealityintotheworldofvirtualreality

●replacerealhumancontactswithcyberinteractions

●feelasthoughwehavebecomeonepartwithourmachines,justanothersuperlinkontheInternet

●takedatainandspitthembackout返回到相应的网络中

●makedifficultcomingbackoutofthecave

●thelackofself-discipline/self-restrain自律

●anunavoidableconsequence=aninescapableconsequence不可逃避的

●theshortageofsleep

●thedisorderofeating

●tendtocrawlfrombedtocomputer

●theshortageofemotionalcuesgivenbytypeddialogue

9、克隆thecloningtechnology

坏处：

themoraluncertaintyandchaos

●MassMedia

providebothinformationandenjoyment

1、信息：

haveaccesstoaccurateinformation

converymessagetoaudience

havenorivalinthespeedofinformationcommunication

offereffectiveandefficientinteractivewayofmessagecommunication

2、娱乐

amajorsourceofrecreation=>bringpeoplejoy,laughterandrelaxation

refreshpeople’smind

inspiretheintelligenceandimagination

3、坏处

impaireweakenfail/eyesight

feelnoneedtospeaktoothers

reluctantlythrowoneortwowordsbacktothem

asignofindifference

violence/cruelty,brutalityarousethesadisticimpulseandtheanti-socialbehavior

stimulatethefearofbecomingvictimsofviolence

discouragethesensitivitytoviolenceandvictimsofviolence

corrodethefoundationofcivilized

Topicsentence-general

Supportingsentences相关细节

Historyalsohelpusunderstandchallengesandhowthesocietyweliveincametobe.

︽Anytimewewanttoknowwhysomethinghappened,wehavetolookforfactorswhichtookshapeearlier.

●举例的方法：

1、短语罗列式举例

●….somethingsuchas

●namely….,….,and…

●andsoforth=andthelike=tomentionbutafew=justlike

注：

三个段落开头不能使用不定代词如，something，anything

例：

政府用钱问题：

Authoritiesconcernedshouldalsoattachmoreimportancetotheinfrastructureconstruction.

1）povery,theinfrastructureconstruction,medicine,education,environment

urgentsocialproblems

Ifthegovernmentdistributesthelimitedfundtotheseprojectsjustlikehousing,transportation,waterandelectricitysupply,andpublicsecurityfacility.Ifso,（不用这种表达）thegovernmentcanservethebasicinterestsandrealneedsofthemajorityofcitizens

2、句子罗列给出例子

●forinstance=toillustrate=forexample=foranotherinstance…

●anothercas