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2.议论过多，描写不足。
大多数情况下，我们把议论当成的作文的重点，所以常常会跑题。
应当多描述提示的内容或加以想像，不能只翻译了事。
3.总是使用同一个主语写句子，重复太多。
尽量使用不同的主语来表达，比如：
ImustlearnEnglishwell.就可以换成：
ItisimportantformetolearnEnglishwell.
4.结构散漫，想哪儿写哪儿，乱七八糟。
应该使用总分或总分总的结构。
5.都是简单句，缺少复合句。
多用状语从句，宾语从句，定语从句及一些重要的句型，也人教版新目标初二下英语同步辅导
（一）初中二年级下un...初中二年级下Un...可以用用被动语态。
6.连词的使用较少，句子之间的连接很生硬。
可以加入一些：
比如:
tomysurprise（让我惊讶的是）,what’smore（而且，还有）等，让上文与下文衔接更紧密。
意思也能更流畅地表达。
四、中考写作高频使用词组、句法
1.作文开头的有用句
Asweallknow
Asitisknowntoall
It’sknowntoallthat…
It’scommonknowledgethat…
It’scommonlyacceptedthat…
Thereisnodenyingthat…
Howtimeflies!
Inablinkofaneye
Timeflieslikeaspeedingarrow
Timegoesliketheflowingwater.
2.中间分层部分的有用结构:
分正反两面论述:
Ononehand
Ontheotherhand
分两点：
Foronething
Foranother
分三点：
Firstly
Secondly
Lastbutnotleast
3.结尾部分
Allinall
Inaword
Inconclusion
Inbrief
Inshort
Toputeverythinginashell,概括的说，简单的说
Lastbutnotleast
组织语言发表观点的
Inmyopinion
Frommypointofview
Inmyeyes
AsfarasIamconcerned
Believeitornot
表示递进的
Inaddition
Furthermore
Moreimportantly
What’smore
Moreover
4.其他与“我”有关的写作材料
（1）重点句型
It`s+a.forsb.todosth.
So+a./ad.
that
sucha+a.+n.
that
too…todo
Not….until
That’swhy+句子
那是。
。
的原因
It’ssaidthat+句子
There’snodoubtthat+句子
毫无疑问••
Itgoeswithoutsayingthat+句子
毫无疑问•
There’snoneedtodo
没必要做••
There’snopointindoing
做某事毫无意义
（2）提建议
Hadbetterdo/notdo
How/whataboutdoing
Whynotdo/whydon`t+句子
Ithinkyoushoulddo
Isuggestthatyoushoulddo
IfIwereyou,Iwoulddo我要是你的话，我会做```
It’sbesttodo
（3）表示喜欢，感兴趣
Like/love/enjoydoing
Befondof/bekeenonsth.
PrefertodoAratherthandoB
Beinterestedindoing=show/takegreatinterestin
（4）努力做
Trytodo/strivetodo
Makeeffortstodo=makeeveryefforttodo
Tryone’sbest/doone’sbesttodo
（5）打算做/计划做
Intendtodo/plantodo
BegoingtodoDecidetodo
Determinetodo=bedeterminetodo
Makeupone’smindtodo
（6）表示想/希望
Wanttodo=wouldliketodo
Hopetodo
Expecttodo
Wishtodo
Considerdoing
（7）其他有用的短语
Fromnowon/soonerorlater/inthenearfuture
Havepositiveattitudetowards/enrichmyknowledge/learn…byheart/
Meetwithvariouskindsofdifficulties/facedifficultiesbravely/overcomethedifficulties
Playanimportantrole/partin….
（8）其他有用的句式
Forthereasonabove,Afterall/Asforme,Franklyspeaking/Generallyspeaking,Believeitornot,AsaGradeNinestudent,Thereasonsareasfollows,People’sviewon…varyfrompersontoperson
5.增添亮点，使用复合句和谚语
谚语举例
Ifirmlybelievethat“Aforeignlanguageisaweaponinthestruggleoflife”.
Asafamoussayinggoes,“Amanbecomeslearnedbyaskingquestions.”
It’scommonknowledgethattheroadtosuccessisnotalwaysfullofroses.
Anoldsayinggoes,“Nothingisimpossibletoawillingheart.”
五．2002-2016上海中考英语作文题目集锦
2002
Myfavoritething（s）
我的心爱之物
2003
TobealovelyShanghainese
做一个可爱的上海人
2004
LeaveSchool
毕业时分
2005
Growingpainsandgains
成长的烦恼
2006
Ihaveadream
我有一个梦
2007
AStoryaboutMyParent（s）
一个关于我父/母的故事
2008
LoveAroundMe
爱在我身边
2009
Iwanttodosomethingformyschool
我想为我的学校做点什么
2010
I'
mproudofmyself
我为我自己感到自豪
2011
MyFavouriteThing（s）
2012
IfyouareJoe.yourfriendBettyisupsetbecauseshecarestoomuchabouttheresult.
写给一个考试焦虑考生的一封信，并给予建议。
2013
Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Howtoprotectmyself”．
（以“如何保护自己”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文）
2014
This
time
next
year
明年此时
2015
Iwanttoinvent_____
、
想要发明……
2016
I’mready
我准备好了
六．近7年上海中考英语真题范文分享
2009命题作文
Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”.（以“我想为学校做件事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
）
（注意：
短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
Usethefollowingpointsasareference.（以下内容仅供参考）
l.Whatdoyouwanttodoforyourschool?
2.Whydoyouwanttodoit?
3.Howareyougoingtodoit?
例文1：
Iwanttomakeschoolclean.Youmaythinkitisverysimple.ButIdon'
tthinkso.Ourteachersaid,"
Schoolisyourhome,youshouldkeepitclean."
ButIhaveneverdoneanythingtomakeschoolclean.Forexample,Ihavenevertoldmyclassmatetopickuprubbishafterhethrewitontheground.Ialsothrewtherubbishontheground.SoIwanttomakeschoolcleansothateveryonecanforgiveme.Duringthissummerholiday,Iwillgotoschooltomakeschoolclean.Ofcourse,Iwilldoitwithmyclassmates.Wewillmakeschoolcleaneveryweekendsnexttermaswell.Now,doyouthinkitissimple?
2
Iwanttodosomethingformyschool
mleavingmyschool.Iwanttoplantatreeinmyschoolgarden.Ihavefoundtherearetoomanybuildingsandfewtreesinourschoolyard,soIwanttomakemyschoolmuchgreenerandmorebeautiful.IfIplantatreethere,maybemoreandmorestudentswilldoasme.Intheirsparetime,thestudentscanreadunderthetrees.
2010命题作文
上海中考英语作文题:
mproudofmyself
1、Whatkindofpersonareyou?
2、Whatmakesyouproudofyourself（Giveanexample/examples）
3、Whyareyouproudofyourself?
要求：
至少60字
范文：
1
Iamaboyoflessconfidence.Ialwayshaterunning.Butasweallknow,thestudentsofGradeninehavetotakepartinthesportsexam.Atthatmoment,Ijustwantedtogiveup.Butmyparentsencouragedme:
"
impossibleisnothing,"
"
youcouldchallengeyourself!
sowiththeencouragementofthem,Itriedmybesttorunandinsistedonrunning.WhenIgottothefinishingline,Ifeltproudofmyself,thoughIdidn'
tgetthegoodmark,Iknew,Iwon.IcreatedamiracleformyselfandIwassoproudofmyself!
2.Iamproudofmyself
Thewheeloflifehasrolledfastthroughthepastfifteenyears.Bylookingbackwards,I’msoproudofmyselfbecauseI’vegrownintoastrong-mindedperson.Itwasthefirsttimeformetoclimbahighmountainalone.Atfirst,Ifeltmybodywasfilledwithenergy.Astimewentby,tirednessmademystepslowdown.Formanytimes,theideaofgivingupthejourneyappearedinmymind.Butthesaying“Accumulatedwaterbecomesariver.”enabledmetomoveon.Thoughthepowerofonestepseemedsoweak,Iinsistedonclimbingtothetop.WhenIsucceeded,IfeltIhadreachedanewheightinmylife.HowproudI’mofbeingastrong-mindedperson.
2011话题补全式作文
Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“I’mamemberof“
（以“我是……的一员”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格子”
提示：
你可以作为任意兴趣小组或者社团的一员，或者作为家庭，班级，社区额的一员，写出你的经历，感受等。
Usethefollowingpointsasareference
Areyougladtobeamemberof……？
Whatdoyoudoinit?
Howdoyoufeelassuchamember?
例文：
1、I’maMemberoftheSingingandDancingClubHello,everyone!
I’mverygladtobeamemberoftheSingingandDancingClub.Ihavebeeninthisclubfor2years.I’manactorintheclub.Ilikesinginganddancingverymuch.Isinganddancewithmyclassmatesonweekends.ThoughIamverytired,Iliketosinganddanceeveryday.Itmakesmefeelveryhappy.
2、Inthisworld,everyfamilyhasamother,afather,adaughterorason.Forplentyofpeople,familiesareveryimportant.whenyouareverysaid,youcanfoundoneortwopersonstomakeyoufeelhappiness,thisisyoufamily.
Iamverygoldtobecomemyfamilymember,becauseIhaveaprettygoodparentandafairlyyoungerbrother.WhenIcomeback,Ialwaysfeelfreedomandrelaxed.Mymotherisakindcook;
shehaslotsofexperienceincooking,somybrotherandIarehealthy.
Asadaughter，Ishouldn'
tmakemyparentsworry.Asasister,lshouldlookaftermybrother.lwanttobeagreatmemberofmyfamily,lwouldtrymybesttodowhatlshoulddointhefamily
2012书信类作文
Writealetterinatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation（根据所给情景写一封不少于60词的信）
SupposeyouareJoe.YourfriendBettyisupsetaboutacomingexamforshecarestoomuchabouttheresult.Whatdoyouthink?
Trytoofferhersomeadvice.（假设你是Joe，你的好朋友Betty因为过于在意考试结果而感到焦虑。
请给他写一封信，谈谈你的看法，并给她一些建议。
1、Knowingthatyoucaretoomuchabouttheresult,Iamquiteworried.Actually,itisnousebeingupsetdespitetheimportanceoftheresult.Therearesomeeffectivewaystocalmdown.Aboveall,keepingremindingyourselftostayinpeaceisthemosthelpful.Besides,itwillhelpyoutorelaxifyousparesometimeforrecreationalactivitieslikesports.Finally,talktoyourparentsandfriends,whoarealwaysreadytocomfortyou.AsissaidbySteveJobs,“thejourneyisthereward.”Iamsureyouwillgetthroughthissituation.
2.DearBetty,
Howtimeflies!
Theexamisfinallynearathand.Importantasitistoyou,youreallyshouldn'
tcaretoomuchabouttheresultandgetyourselfoverlyupset.Rememberallthehardworkyouhaveputin!
Aslongasyougowithacalmmindandapositiveattitude,I'
msuretherewillbenothingdifficultforyouandtheexamwillbesmoothsailing.Isuggestyoutalkmoretoparentsandteachersaboutyouranxietyandtakebettercareofyourhealthsuchasgettingenoughsleepanddoingmoreexercise.Aboveall,nomatterwhattheresult,allyouneedtodoistoactmoreandthinklessbecauseactionisworry'
sworstenemy.Keepfait
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