最新16年改革后英语专四考试新题型材料作文模拟练习及范文分析.docx

最新16年改革后英语专四考试新题型材料作文模拟练习及范文分析.docx

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最新16年改革后英语专四考试新题型材料作文模拟练习及范文分析

专四新题型写作

自2016年起，专四考试写作部分改革，要求根据所给的题目、图表或阅读材料等，写一篇200词左右的作文。

出现的新题型命题+材料作文对考生的阅读理解及归纳能力提出了更高的要求。

考生可以采取“简短概述材料—评论—总结”的写作模式。

值得注意的是，在写作过程中，概述材料和进行评论缺一不可，否则将可能被扣分。

例题1

PARTVIWRITING

ReadcarefullythefollowingexcerptandthenwriteyourresponseinNOLESSTHAN200WORDS,inwhichyoushould:

1）Summarizethemainmessageoftheexcerpt,andthen

2）Commentonwhetherstudentslearnmorefromclassesthanfromotherresources

Youcansupportyourselfwithinformationfromtheexcerpt.

Markswillbeawardedforcontentrelevance,contentsufficiency,organizationandlanguagequality.Failuretofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.

Dostudentslearnmorefromclassesthanfromotherresources?

WiththeadventoftheInternetandothertelecommunicationstechnologies,thereisavastlygrowingwealthofresourcesavailablefromanimmenserangeofmediaoutlets.Studentshavetheabilitytoabsorbinformationinaquickerandmoreefficientwaywhenresearchingontheirownthroughreadingpublicationsorbrowsingwebpagesonline.Asaresult,somepeoplearguethatstudentsnowlearnmorefromotherresourcesthanfromclasses.

Conductingresearchwithonlinematerialsisanactiveprocess,whichallowsyoungsterstofocusingreaterdetailratherthanpassivelylisteningtoalectureinalargeclassroom.

TheInternetandTVarealsoeasilyaccessibleplatformsforstudentsintheremoteplaceswhereteachingresourcesarenotasabundantasthoseinmoredevelopedregions.

However,teachershavethecapabilityofexplainingtheknowledgeinadeeperwayandnotonlyprovidetheoreticalexplanationbutalsopracticalexperienceaboutlife.Theyhaveaccumulatedalargebodyofintelligencethatisprofoundlymoreprecisethanothersources.Teachersnotonlyfunctionasinitiatorswhoimpartknowledgebutalsoserveassupervisorsorguardians.Theconventionalroleofinstructors,inthisdayandage,hasevolvedtobecomeevaluatorsandfacilitators,guidingstudentsintheiracademicandpersonalefforts.

范文1

Intheinformationage,thetraditionalstudent-teacherrelationshiphasbeenaffecteddeeplyandpeoplebegintodoubtwhetherstudentscanlearnmorefromclassesthanfromotherresources.（介绍背景）Accordingtotheconventionalview,teachersarestilltheprimarysourcefromwhichstudentsobtainprofessionalknowledge,timelyclassinteraction,andeffectivesupervisionfromteachers.（总结第一种观点）Onthecontrary,nowadays,manypeoplebelievethatstudentscanlearnmorefromotherresourcessuchasInternetandTVsincetheyaremoreaccessibleandengagestudentsmoreactivelyinresearch.（总结第二种观点）

Forme,Iaminfavorofthefirstview.（表明立场）Teachersplayanirreplaceableroleineducation,whetherit’sinthepastoratpresent,sincetheynotonlyimpartknowledge,butalsoeducatepeople.（总论据）Foronething,whatstudentslearnfromtheirclassesismoreprecisethanfromotherresourceswhichprovideanenormousamountofdataneededtobesiftedthroughtodeterminewhichinformationisaccurate.（理由一）Foranother,teachersinschoolputtheshapingofpersonalityinaplaceasimportantastheteachingofknowledge,whichishardforstudentstoobtainfromotherresource.（理由二）

Inconclusion,thedevelopmentofcutting-edgetechnologyexertsabigimpactonmoderneducation.However,itcannevereliminatetheneedforhigh-qualityprofessionalsinclassroom.（重申论点）（213words）

例题2

PARTVIWRITING

ReadcarefullythefollowingexcerptandthenwriteyourresponseinNOLESSTHAN200WORDS,inwhichyoushould:

1）Summarizethemainmessageoftheexcerpt,andthen

2）Commentonwhetherpeopleshouldchoosetobecomeindoorsy

Youcansupportyourselfwithinformationfromtheexcerpt.

Markswillbeawardedforcontentrelevance,contentsufficiency,organizationandlanguagequality.Failuretofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.

Shouldpeoplechoosetobecomeindoorsyinmodernworld?

InmoderntimeswhenwecanbuyeverythingweneedontheInternet,andcommunicateandevenworkthroughtheInternet,becomingindoorsymenorwomenissimplyachoiceofdifferentlifestyle.Inthepast,ifyouwanttobuysomething,youneedtogooutofyourhouse,gotothestore,andspendanhourortwochoosingtheproductyouwanttobuy.Butnowyoucanjustsitinfrontofacomputerandclickyourmouse,andtheproductcanbedeliveredtoyou.Beingindoorsycansavepeoplealotoftime.

Beingindoorsycanallowpeopletothinkandworkinapeacefulenvironment.Forexample,writerscanbequitecreativewhentheyarealoneathomewithoutbeinginterrupted.

Somesociologistswarnthattheindoorsylifestylewillmakepeoplebecomeself-centeredandnaive.Ifpeoplestayathomeforalongtime,theywillhavelittleinterpersonalcontactwithothers.Theydonotknowhowtohaveface-to-facecommunicationwithothers,andtheymaybecomeshy,uncomfortable,orself-centeredwhentheyareinvolvedinreal-lifecommunication.Thisindoorsylifestylewillhaveabadeffectontheirnormalinterpersonalrelationshipandtheirnormalwork.

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大学生政策2004年3月23日

Indoorsymenorwomenspendmostoftheirtimesittinginfrontofacomputer,andtheyseldomattendoutdooractivities.Watchingthecomputerscreenforalongtimewilldogreatharmtotheireyes.Also,manyindoorsypeopledonotliketoattendsportsactivities,andinthelongrun,theirhealthwillgetworse.

上述所示的上海经济发展的数据说明：

人们收入水平的增加，生活水平的提高，给上海的饰品业带来前所未有的发展空间，为造就了一个消费额巨大的饰品时尚市场提供了经济基础。

使大学生对DIY手工艺品的时尚性消费，新潮性消费，体验性消费成为可能。

据统计，上海国民经济持续快速增长。

03全年就实现国内生产总值（GDP）6250.81亿元，按可比价格计算，比上年增长11.8%。

第三产业的增速受非典影响而有所减缓，全年实现增加值3027.11亿元，增长8%，增幅比上年下降2个百分点。

（二）创业弱势分析

成功秘诀：

好市口＋个性经营范文2

7、你喜欢哪一类型的DIY手工艺制品？

审题思路

“碧芝”隶属于加拿大的ｂｅａｄｗｏｒｋｓ公司。

这家公司原先从事首饰加工业，自助首饰的风行也自西方，随着人工饰品的欣欣向荣，自制饰品越来越受到了人们的认同。

１９９６年'碧芝自制饰品店'在迪美购物中心开张，这里地理位置十分优越，交通四八达，由于是市中心，汇集了来自各地的游客和时尚人群，不用担心客流量问题。

迪美有３００多家商铺，不包括柜台，现在这个商铺的位置还是比较合适的，位于中心地带，左边出口的自动扶梯直接通向地面，从正对着的旋转式楼拾阶而上就是人民广场中央，周边４、５条地下通道都交汇于此，从自家店铺门口经过的９０％的顾客会因为好奇而进看一下。

本题讨论“宅”生活是否可取。

在具体行文方面，考生应首先简要概述正方观点：

“宅”是现代的一种新型生活方式。

然后概述反方观点：

“宅”有种种弊端。

接下来给出自己的观点：

现代科技是把双刃剑，我们要把握好，适当利用可以使我们的生活更便利，但过度依赖则会对身体有害。

最后总结全文，重申观点。

Ｂｅａｄｗｒｋｓ公司还组织各国的“芝自制饰品店”定期进行作品交流，体现东方女性聪慧的作品曾在其他国家大受欢迎；同样，自各国作品也曾无数次启发过中国姑娘们的灵感，这里更是创作的源泉。

ShouldWeEmbraceIndoorsyLifestyle?

Withtheglobalizationofmoderntechnology,especiallytheworld-wideaccesstoInternetservice,people’slifestylehasbeengreatlyinfluenced.（介绍背景）Someenjoyindoorsylifestyle.Theyholdthatindoorsylifestyleistime-savingandpeaceful.Incontrast,thoseagainsttheideaclaimthatkeepanindoorsylifestylewilldoharmtopeoplebothpsychologicallyandphysically.（总结材料）

现在是个飞速发展的时代，与时俱进的大学生当然也不会闲着，在装扮上也不俱一格，那么对作为必备道具的饰品多样性的要求也就可想而知了。

AsfarasIamconcerned,moderntechnologyisadouble-edgedsword.（点明观点）Ifweconsideritasausefultooltoimproveourlife,itwillcertainlybringunprecedentedconveniencetous.WiththeassistanceoftheInternet,onecansavehistimethroughworking,shopping,orcommunicatingwithothersathome.（正方理由一）Also,solitudeisn’talwaysequaltoloneliness.Freefromoutsideinterruption,onecanbecreativeandkeephismindsharp.（正方理由二）Ontheotherhand,toomuchrelianceonorindulgenceintheInternetwillcertainlyhaveanimpactonournormallifeandwork.Forinstance,indulginginsocialnetworkonlinemaycorrodepeoples’socialskills.Tobespecific,theymayfeellostwhentalkingwithpeopleface-to-face,whichmayaffecttheirnormalrelationshipwithfamilymembersandfriends.（反方理由一）What’sworse,sittinginfrontofacomputeralldaylongmeanslittleoutdooractivities,whichmaydamageone’shealth.（反方理由二）

Inconclusion,whileenjoyingallthebenefitsthevirtualworldhasbroughttous,indoorsypeopleshouldalsostepoutoftheirhomeandengagethemselvesintherealworld.（总结上一段）（234words）

二、大学生DIY手工艺制品消费分析