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Givingahelpinghandtothosewhoareinneedinthelocalcommunityseemsreasonable.Itisbecauseevenintherichestcountries,therearestillalotofpeople,suchasdisabledpeopleandorphanages,sufferingfromfamineandextremepoverty.Forthisreason,itiseasyandconvenientforustohelpourfellowcitizens,suchasdonatingfoodorclothingtothem,sothatwecanseetheresultofouractionsimmediately.Bycontrast,itisratherdifficulttotrackexpenditureofinternationalaids,whichmightresultincorruptioninsomecases.

Thosewhodonatemoneytodomesticandinternationalcharitiesbelievethatthecollectionofmoneyhasatremendouseffectonthepoorcountriescomparedwithotherformsofhelp.Thisisbecausefewpeopleareabletodonatealargeamountofmoneytoconstructschools,hospitalsandroadsinpoorareas.Instead,governmentsandcharitiescanachievethis.Internationalaidscanalsopurchasevaccineswhichareavailableindevelopedcountriesbyusingthemoneyraisedworldwideandsavemillionschildren’slife.

Inmyview,minorproportionofdonatedmoneyandothersortsofhelpshouldbeappreciatedequallyaslongasthemoneyreachestothosewhoneeditdesperately.Thegovernmentcouldruncampaignandencouragedoor-todoorhelp.Atthesametime,charitableorganizationsshouldmakeeverypennycountfordonors.（wordcount：

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2015年6月6日雅思写作

Developingcountriesrequirehelpofferedbyinternationalorganizationstoensurehealthyandsustainabledevelopment.Somepeoplethinkthatfinancialaidisimportant.Othersbelievethatpracticalaidandadviceismoreimportant.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.

有人认为经济援助之重要的，有人认为实际的帮助和建议重要，你的观点是什么?

解析题目：

2015年6月6日雅思考题中向有需要的国家提供帮助指的是一些国家在遭遇自然灾害，经济危机的时候，应该给他们提供直接的援助，例如医疗队，救援组织或者志愿者。

对立方观点经济援助指的是直接的捐助。

本题为旧题重新，考察的是国家援助的方式。

作家立场：

发达国家应该承担对于发展中国家援助的责任。

对比经济援助，直接的帮助更加可取可行。

首段;

背景介绍+争议焦点+作家立场

二段：

反方观点的展开：

三段：

正方观点的展开：

Itisnotraretoseethatsomewell-to-docountriesliketogivefinancialaidorotherformsofassistancetopoorones.Conflictingideasclashinwhetherornoteconomicdonationisthebesteffectivemeansofassistance.Speakingformyself,thosedevelopedcountriesshouldassumetheresponsibilityofhelpingthosecountries,whicharestillsufferingfromtheagoniesofpopulardisease,pooreducationandundevelopedtrade.However,financialaidshavebothitsmeritsanddemerits，othersuitablewaysofassistanceshouldbeconsidered.

Indeed,someargumentscouldbeexploredtojustifythatthosewell-offcountriesoughttogiveafinancialaidtothepoverty-strickennations’charities.Forastart,itisoutofthereasonofhumanismandcouldbenefitthestraitenednationsdirectly.Moreprecisely,financialbeneficencefromthedevelopedcountriescouldhelptoacceleratetheconstructionofinfrastructureandestablishingmorehouses.Also,whensomerichcountriesdonatelargesumsofmoneytothoseneedycountries,morejobopportunitiescouldbecreatedandthuslivingstandardsofthepoorcountriescouldbeenhanced.

Nonetheless,weshouldbealerttothepossiblerisksofeconomicassistance.Foronething,itmightmakeneedycountriesbecomeover-dependentonthedonors.Foranother,internationalaidmightbrightaboutpossiblepoliticalinterferenceandeconomicexploitation.Apartfromfinancialaids,therearestillmanyotheroptionsavailabletoassisttheundevelopednations.Onewayisbyopeninguptradebarriers,whichenablesthepoorcountriestoselltheirgoods.Anotherwayistoforgiveeconomicdebtssothattheself-supportingabilityofthepoornationscouldbepromoted.Eventually,theteamsofvolunteerteachersanddoctorsfromrichcountriescouldbedispatchedtotheimpoverishedcountriestotaketheresponsibilitiesofeducationalandmedicalassistance.

解析：

Itisnotraretoseethat……这一点很常见

Conflictingideasclashinwhetherornot关于是否应该……，人们持有不同意见

Financialaidshavebothitsmeritsanddemerits经济援助有利有弊

Indeed,someargumentscouldbeexploredtojustifythat的确，为证明……是合理的，我们是可以找到一些理由的

……couldbenefitthestraitenednationsdirectlyv可以使贫困国家直接受益

Livingstandardsofthepoorcountriescouldbeenhanced贫困国家的生活水平可以被提高

Itmightmakeneedycountriesbecomeover-dependentonthedonors.经济援助也许会使贫困国家对于援助国更加依赖

Internationalaidmightbrightaboutpossiblepoliticalinterferenceandeconomicexploitation.国际援助也许会带来政治干预和经济掠夺

openuptradebarriersv开发贸易壁垒

forgiveeconomicdebtsv免除经济债务

Theteamsofvolunteerteachersanddoctorsfromrichcountriescouldbedispatchedtotheimpoverishedcountries可以向贫困国家派驻教师和医生。

2015年5月30日雅思写作

（二）

全球化，旅行

Report

Insomecountries,peoplebelievethatinternationaltourismisabadthingfortheircountry.Whatarethereasonsforthis?

Howtochangetheirviews.

范文主体思路分析：

原因一：

外来游客的行为会激怒当地人，因为他们不遵守当地的习俗

对策一：

政府可以在当地做引导，设置文化小贴士

原因二：

外来游客的旅行本身也会带来他们的国家文化特征，对于种族意识的强烈的国家是一种伤害

对策二：

政府可以引导当地人改变想法，对这种行为持宽容态度。

旅行更多的只是文化交流

Travellingabroadhasbecomeanewlifestylenowadays.However,complaintsaboutthepotentialnegativeeffectsofinternationaltravelhavebeensparkedamongthepublicinrecentyears.Thisessaywilloutlinetwomainreasonsforthesecomplaintsandprovidecertainmeasurestochangetheopinion.

Firstofall,itisawidespreadphenomenonthatforeigntravellersmightrepelthelocalcommunitybecauseoftheirinappropriatelanguagesandbehaviourinsomeresorts.Duetotheculturaldifferences,visitors’behaviormaybreaktraditionalrulesintraveldestinationssometimes.Forexample,avisitorwillannoyanIndianwhenhepassesfoodbyhislefthand.Forthisreason,thelocalgovernmentcantakeactionstoprovidemorespecifictravellingtipsinpopularscenespotsforforeigntravellers.

Inaddition,moreandmoretransnationaltravelswillcausedamagetotheuniquenatureofaculture.Foreignvisitorswillbringnotonlytangiblematterslikefoodandclothesbutalsosomethingintangible,suchastheirfestivalsorcustoms.Inotherwords,thesevisitorsareassimilatingtheircountry’sculturewhiletheyaretravellingabroad,whichwillbeboundtocauseantipathyinracistsociety.Germanyisacaseinpoint.Forthisreason,thegovernmentcanencouragelocalstoholdatolerantattitudetowardforeignarrivalsastheyhavenocommonknowledgeoflocalconventionsinmosttimes.Travellingisforculturalcommunicationinsteadofinvasion.

Inconclusion,breakingconventionsandculturaluniquenessarethetwomainfactorsleadingtothebiasregardinginternationaltourism.Bothgovernmentsandindividualsshouldmakeanefforttochangethisphenomenon.

2015年5月30日雅思写作

Somepeoplebelievethatinternationaltourismhaveharmfuleffects.Whydotheythinkso?

Howtochangetheirviews?

有人认为，国际游的影响是有害的，他们为何持有这种观点，如何改变他们的的观点?

点评：

题目指令为分析原因和解决问题。

本文为旧题改写，需要完成的任务是分析国家发展旅游业带来的弊端以及提出解决策略，帮助人们改变对于旅游业的消极态度。

全文布局图：

　　首段：

背景介绍+作家立场

　　二段：

原因的展开：

谈及为何一些人对于旅游业持有消极的的态度

　　三段：

策略的展开：

谈及国际旅游业的利好去说服一些人对于旅游业的消极态度

　　尾段：

支持旅游业，总结旅游业对于游客和相关国家的利好。

首段：

背景介绍+写作目的

Internationaltourismhasbeenencouragedinmanynationsaroundtheglobebecauseitproducespositiveeffectsoneconomicgrowthandlocalgovernment.However，someprobleminevitablyensue，whichaccountsforwhysomepeopleholdnegativeattitudestowardinternationaltourism.Thisessayaimstoexplorethereasonswhysomepeoplearenotsupportiveoftourismandthenpresentsomerecommendations.

原因的展开：

（游客为何对于旅游业持有消极的态度）　

Thereasonswhysomepeopleholdindifferentattitudestowardinternationaltourismaremanifold.Here,someofthemwillbeexplored.First,alargeflowingpopulationmanycauseseriousdestructionofthenaturalenvironmentinthoseareasowingrichtourismresources.Further,somevisitorsunconsciousbehaviorsmightbeconsideredasdisrespectableandunfriendlyduetotheculturaldifferences.Forinstance，questionsaboutreligiousbeliefs，marriage，personalincomeareconsideredastabooforsomewesterners.Eventually,eventhoughsightseersmightmakethelocals’purseheavy,they,atthesametime,interferewiththepeacefulcurrentlifeinsomeareas

1.Itproducespositiveeffectsoneconomicgrowthandlocalgovernment国际旅游对经济发展和地方政府有积极作用

2.However，someprobleminevitablyensue，whichaccountsforwhysomepeopleholdnegativeattitudetowardsinternationaltourism.然而，一些问题不可避免地随着发生，这就解释了为何一些人对于国际旅游业持有消极的态度。

3.Thisessayaimstoexplorethereasonswhysomepeoplearenotsupportiveof……andthenpresentsomerecommendations.本文的写作目的是探究下为何一些人不支持……，再提出相关的建议。

4.Alargeflowingpopulationmanycauseseriousdestructionofthenaturalenvironmentinthoseareasowingrichtourismresources.大批游客的涌入会对那些拥有旅游资源地区的自然环境造成严重的破坏

5.Somevisitorsunconsciousbehaviorsmightbeconsideredasdisrespectableandunfriendlyduetotheculturaldifferences.由于文化的差异，一些游客的行为也许会认作是不值得尊敬的，不够友善的。

6.Forinstance，questionsaboutreligiousbeliefs，marriage，personalincomeareconsideredastabooforsomewesterners.例如，有些西方人很忌讳别人打听他们的宗教信仰，婚姻状况，个人收入。

7.Eventhoughsightseersmightmakethelocals’pur