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英语写作模式3

英语写作模式3                                  

Pattern21

WhatAttitudeShouldWeTaketoSth.

1.社会上对某事物的错误观念

2.分析批驳其错误所在

3.给出如何看待该事物的建议

 WritingPattern：

（批驳分析类）

1）Withthearrival/birthof…,sth.isbecomingmoreandmore…inourlife.2）Hit/Affectedwiththistrend,some/manypeoplecometobelieve/contendthat...（错误观念）3）Buttheirviewpoint/beliefcouldnotarouseanyechoinmymind.（作者的立场）

4）Itistruethatsth.isakeyingredientinone’s…（让步法分析）5）Onanyscaleof…,infact,thereisalmostnothingheavierthansth..6）Ifweseesth.initstruecolors,however,itis

nothingbut…（批驳分析I）7）...（进一步阐述）8）Andmoreover,layinganyunduestressonsth.mayleadoneto…,ascanbeeasilyseeninthecasesof…（批驳分析II）

9）Therefore,itisnecessarytotakeacorrectattitudetowardssth.10）Ontheonehand,…（正确看法I）11）Ontheother,...（正确看法II）12）Insum,sth.means…butnot…toourlife.（结论句）

ReferenceWriting:

  WhatAttitudeShouldWeTaketoMoney

1.社会上对金钱的错误观念。

2．分析批驳其错误所在。

3．给出如何正确看待金钱的建议。

   WhatAttitudeShouldWeTaketoMoney

1）Withthearrivalofmarket-basedeconomy,moneyisbecomingmoreandmoreimportantinourlife.2）Hitwiththistrend,manypeoplecometobelievethatmoneyisaboveeverythingelseintheirlife.3）Buttheirbeliefcouldnotarouseanyechoinmymind.

4）Itistruethatmoneyisakeyingredientinone’sstruggletowardshappiness,withoutwhich,forexample,therewouldbenowaytogotocollegeorformafamily.5）Onanyscaleofone’sdailyworry,infact,thereisalmostnothingheavierthanmoney.6）Ifweseeitinitstruecolors,however,moneyisnothingbutameanstoanend.7）Moneycanbuyusfood,butnotappetite;medicine,butnothealth;diplomas,butnotknowledge;anddaysofjoy,butnotthewholelifeofhappiness. 8）Andmoreover,layinganyunduestressonmoneymayleadonetostopatnothinginmakingit,ascanbeeasilyseeninthecasesofmostcorruptofficials.

9）Therefore,itisnecessarytotakeacorrectattitudetowardsmoney. 10）Ontheonehand,moneyisvitaltoourdailylife,inwhichcase,itiswiseofyoutospendnotwhereyoumaysave.11）Ontheother,moneyissomethingtobeplowedintosomethingmoreimportant,soitisbettertosparenotwhereyoumustspend.12）Insum,moneymeanssomethingbutnoteverythingtoourlife.

                                 Pattern22

EffectsofSth.OnSb./Sth.Else

1．分析某事物的正面效应

2．分析某事物的负面效应

3．给出怎样对待该事物的建议

      WritingPattern：

（分析建议类）

1）Asisknowntoall,sth.doesbringalotofbenefitstosb./sth.else.2）First,itcangreatlystrengthen…,therebychanging…forthebetter.（正面分析I）3）Besides,itcanmake/rendersb./sth.elsebetterableto…（正面分析II）4）Andbestofall,itcanhelpsb.…（正面分析III）

5）Butalltheabovedoesnotmean/followthatwecanturnablindeyetothenegativeeffectssth.bringsabout.6）If…,asasuccessionofscientificstudiesreveals/implies/suggests, therearemorechancesthat…（负面分析I）7）Inaddition,themore...,theworse...（负面分析II）8）Andworstofall, …（负面分析III）

9）Therefore,ascientificapproachmustbeadoptedtotheproblemofsth.10）Ontheonehand,…（建议I）11）Ontheother,...（建议II）12）Insum,sth.candosb./sth.elsegoodorharm,alldependingon…（结论句）

ReferenceWriting：

TheEffectsofExerciseonOurHealth

1．分析体育锻炼给我们带来的益处

2．分析体育锻炼给我们带来的坏处

3．给出如何参加体育锻炼的建议

        TheEffectsofExerciseonOurHealth

1）Asisknowntoall,exercisedoesbringalotofbenefitstoourhealth.2）First,itcangreatlystrengthenourhearts,lungs,bonesandmuscles,therebychangingourwholehealthforthebetter.3）Besides,itcanmakeourbrainsbetterabletoreacttowhatisgoingonaroundus.4）Andbestofall,itcanhelpusbreedoptimismaboutourtoughlife.

5）Butalltheabovedoesnotmeanthatwecanturnablindeyetothenegativeeffectsexercisebringsabout.6）Ifyouarenormallyinactiveandthen,contrarytoyourusualhabit,startaprogramofundueexercise,asasuccessionofscientificstudiesreveals,therearemorechancesthatyouhaveyourselfinjured.7）Inaddition,themoreexercisethoseonafat-reducingdiettake,themorelossofirontheywillsufferandtheworsetheirhealthwillget. 8）Andworstofall,continualaswellasexcessiveexercisecanresultinsuddendeath.

9）Therefore,ascientificapproachmustbeadoptedtotheproblemofexercise. 10）Ontheonehand,ourphysicalexercisemustbebasedonbothprogressivenessandregularity.11）Ontheother,wemustgoinforphysicalexerciseaccordingtolocalaswellashealthconditionsofourown.12）Insum,exercisecandousgoodorharm,alldependingonhowwemakeuseofit.

      Pattern23

ALettertotheCollegePresident

1.就学校的某些变化给校长写封信

2.分析变化主要表现在哪些方面

3.提出（进一步）改进的意见

      WritingPattern:

（分析建议）

1）Iamdelighted（distressed）tofindtherehavebeenfavorable（unfavorable）changesin…（议论的主题）sinceIcamehere.2）Frommyangleofview,thesechangesindicatethatwhatyouhavedoneisin（outof）linewith...（作者的态度）3）Inthelongrun,theywillproducemorepositive（negative）effecton...4）Suchdesirable（undesirable）changescanbefoundintheaspectsasfollows. 5）First,…分析I）6）Second,...（分析II）7）Andbest（worst）ofall,…（分析III）8）...（进一步阐述）

9）Butalltheforegoingdoesnotmeanthatthereislittleroomforfurtherimprovementin…（thatthereislittleyoucandoabout…）10）Instead,toenrich（reverse）…,arichervariety（abetterhealth）canbeaddedto…（建议I）11）Andmeanwhile,...（建议II）12）Itshouldbeborninmindthat…（结论句）

ReferenceWriting:

ALettertotheCollegePresident

1．就校园生活的可喜变化给校长写封信。

2．分析该变化表现在哪些方面。

3．提出进一步改进的建议。

      ALettertotheCollegePresident

1）IamdelightedtofindtherehavebeenfavorablechangesinourcampuslifesinceIcamehere.2）Frommyangleofview,thesechangesindicatewhatyouhavedoneisinlinewiththeinterestsofundergraduates.3）Inthelongrun,theywillproducemorepositiveeffectonourgrowth.4）Suchdesirablechangescanbefoundintheaspectsasfollows.

5）First,ourdiningconditionshaveturnedforthebetter,thusendingoureverydayworryaboutwheretosatisfyourhunger.6）Second,yourfacultieshavepaidasmuchattentiontoouremotionalworldastoourintellectualgrowth,whichinturnlendsmuchwarmthoffamilytoourlife.7）Andbestofall,wefindthecampusamorepleasantplacetoliveon. 8）Asaresultofyourefforts,wenowhavemoreplacestogotoforrecreation,suchascafes,netbars,fitnesscentersandreadingrooms.

9）Butalltheforegoingdoesnotmeanthatthereislittleroomforfurtherimprovementinourcollegelife. 10）Instead,toenrichourlifeheretothefullest,arichervarietyshouldbeaddedtooursparetimeaswellasourcurriculums.11）Andmeanwhile,weshouldbeallowedmoreaccesstoscientificresearch,socialpracticeandthefrontierofourownfields.12）Itshouldbeborninmindthatthepurposeofourcollegelifeistoprepareusforthedifferentneedsoftomorrow’ssociety.

                             Pattern24

HowtoDoSomething

1．某一事物的现状

2．分析该事物的重要性（或危害性／社会意义等）

3．怎样对待该事物

      WritingPattern:

：

（分析建议类）

1）Muchtoourdistress/delight/surprise,theseyearshaveseenthepopularity/worsening/muchimprovement/awidespreadneglectofsth.（议论的主题）insociety.2）Accordingtoarecent/officialreport/survey/opinionpoll,...（佐证陈述）3）Ifthiscurrentisallowedtorunitscourse,thingsareboundtoturnforthebetter/worse. （Para.1）   

4）Theimportance/harmfulness/significanceofsth.tosb./sth.else,（however）,canbeseenfromtheperspectivesasfollows.5）Inthefirstplace,…（分析I）6）Inthesecond,...（分析II）7）Andaboveall,…（分析III）8）Tosumup,...（归纳总结） （Para.2） 

9）Sothemostpressingforus/basicproblemnowishowto…10）Inmyopinion,thefirststepshouldbefocusedupon…（建议I）11）Then,greatereffortsmustbemadeto...（建议II）12）Inoneword,wherethereis…,thereis…（结论句）（Para.3）

ReferenceWriting:

HowtoConductPatrioticEducationAmongtheYouthofToday

1．我国爱国主义教育的现状。

2．分析爱国主义教育的重要意义

3．如何在青少年中开展爱国主义教育

      HowtoConductPatrioticEducationAmongtheYouthofToday

1）Muchtoourdistress,theseyearshaveseenawidespreadneglectofpatrioticeducationinoursociety.2）Accordingtosome officialreports,manypatrioticeducationcentershavebeencloseddownorkeptopentothepublicforothermoreprofitablepurposeswhilemanyofournationalheroeshavegivenwaytotoday’spopstarsinyouths’minds.3）Ifthiscurrentisallowedtorunitscourse,Iamafraid,thingsareboundtoturnfortheworse,withlessandlesssenseofpatriotismleftintheyouth.

4）Thesignificanceofpatrioticeducationtooursociety,however,canbeseenfromtheperspectivesasfollows.5）Inthefirstplace,thepatrioticeducationcanmakeyouthmoreawareoftheglorioushistoryandcultureofournation,thusbuildinguptheirsenseofprideasChinese.6）Inthesecond,thepatrioticeducationhelpsyouthvaluetoday’shard-earnedlifesoastoholddearertheirgoldenchancesofenrichingthemselveswithknowledgeinpeace.7）Andaboveall,thepatrioticeducationcanpushyouthtodrawuponmoreoftheircapabilitiesinordertomaketomorrow’slifebetterthantoday’sandleavebehindthemselvesmorehighlightsforthenation’sculture.8）Tosumup,patrioticeducationisakeyingredientintheall-rounddevelopmentofyouth. 

9）Sothemostpressingforusnowishowtoeffectivelyinculcatepatriotismintheyouthoftoday.10）Inmyopinion,thefirststepshouldbefocusedupongivingfullerplaytothepotentialsofpatrioticeducationcentersinsteadofrunningthemforthepurposeofmakingmoney.11）