托福作文中的良性建议模块模板Word格式.docx

托福作文中的良性建议模块模板Word格式.docx

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--whatisnationalgovernment

--whatisleader

--whatistradition

　--whatiseducation

得出复杂

※因为…很复杂（大）--complicated

--tough

--sophisticated

因此有理

所以这样做有一定道理—strategy

--channel渠道

--solution

--awayout

*Modeforheading—Proposal

因为艰难所以有所需

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asisknowtoall…

Inrecentyears,…istough/difficult/serioustoapointwherepeoplecannottackleitwithease,whichmakes…beproposedasasolution.

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Inweighingupboththeprospectivebenefitsandpotentialrisks,however,Ireckonthat题目中的解决方案,asmanyothersimplesolutionstosomemostcomplicatedproblems,wouldbeawkwardinservingasakey.

*Modesforbody

#再反对—质疑解决方案的可行性良性建议，首先可行性

--isthatfeasible?

※thefeasibilityof…isopentoquestion

※the…/inheritednatureofsuchasolution/proposal/suggestionposessomeproblemsthathinder…theblueprintof…frombeingconvertedintoreality

※the…/inheritednatureofsuchasolution/proposal/suggestionposessomeproblemsthatmakesuchaproposalrestontheblueprint

+可能出现的矛盾

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理论对实践最常见的不可行原因

Theoreticallysoundedas…/itis,inpracticetheimpedimentsthatareexpectedtoencounter,suchasA,B,CandD（可能出现的阻碍）,arefatalelementsthatmakethefeasibilityofthissuggestedsolutionvulnerabletoanypossiblechallengeorquestion.

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短期vs长远：

Atpresent/Inshortterm,…mightbeeffective,whileinthelongrun,itwouldturnouttobedisastrous.

单一vs多样：

1.Itwouldbeabigheadache/Itwouldbealmostamissionimpossiblefor....withdiversified....toachieve/sustain/followcertaincommon.../asingle...

2．Itwouldbeagreatmisleadingtotrytodefine....whichfeaturesinmanyformsandispossibletoalterundermanyrealitieswithmerelyone....

简单vs复杂

Themostcomplicated…whichinvolves/requires/demandsacombinationofalleffortsislargelydegraded/simplifiedto...

不变vs万变

Insomecases,/oncertainoccasions,...mightbeeffective/beneficial,whileundermanyothercircumstances,...runstheriskofmessingup..../driving...toadeadend

理论vs实践

Theoretically,...isacceptable,/issounded,whileinpractice,/inreality,itwouldbeawkwardinservingasakey/itwouldmakethingsworseoffratherthanbringingbenefits.

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/单一对多样

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Eg.引出例子…,forexample,…

#thecaseof…/thepersonalexperienceof…canserveasanexample/evidencethatcansubstantiate/solidify/bolster/supportmyclaim（that…）

“半分离”式的例子，下面在简单说一下上面“简单”提到的例子

#…lendcrediblesupporttotheclaimthat（thefeasibility/viabilityisopentoquestion）.

+（optional）

再举一个例子

Thecaseof…/thepersonalexperienceof…canberaised（及物）asanotherexamplethatcanstrengthentheviewpoint（anditisthemostevidentin…/underthecircumstanceof…）

#再反对—质疑解决方案的唯一性（大道至简）

※切断解决方案与目标之联系

Inaddition,thereisnopointtoclaimthat（北美最常用）…unexceptionallyservesasthe*exclusiveprerequisite（无一例外的可以作为）for…

--冲击定义和解决方案间的联系

otherfactors

※significantsolution

strategy

approach

channel

though…is,itcanneverovershadow/omittheeffectivenessofmanyotheraccess

--冲淡定义和解决方案间的联系

※Otherwaysout/solutions/possibilities/approaches/strategiessuchasA,B,CandDaresignificantfactorsthatshouldnotbeoverlooked.

※SomesolutionssuchasA,B,CandDarealsoindispensableelementsthatplaydecisiverolesinachieving/accomplishing/making…

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Inthiscase/Inthissense,thereexistsnodirectcausalrelationbetweentheformerandthelatter

#继续反对—质疑解决方案的效用

--再次强调问题/主题的复杂性，艰巨性

※Themostcomplicatedtaskof…whichinvolvesamixtureofsolutions

※Themostcomplicatedproblemof…,whosesolutionrequires/demandsacombinationofefforts

※Themostcomplicatedartof…,whichconcernsaseriesofindispensableepisodes,

islargely/unfortunatelydegraded/simplifiedtoapointwhere…serveasamostapprovedchoice.

Theeffectivenessandefficiencyofsuchproposalwouldbetherebyminimizedwhilerisksmaximized.

--进一步反对—如果gotoofar,后果严重

※If/oncetoomuchemphasisisplacedon..,..willruntheriskofbeingmessedup.

※once…goesoutofcontrol/…goestoofar,Pandora’sboxwouldhenceopen.

--赔了媳妇儿又折兵

※Itwillmakethingsworseoff,ratherthanbringingbenefits.

※Thepossiblesolutionsandopportunitiesbroughtaboutbythisproposalarefaroutweighedbythepotentialuncertaintiesandrisks.

※Thepredicablemisleadingandconfusionincurredbythisdefinition/conclusioncanlargelyruleoutanypossibleguidanceandreferenceitoffers.

※Itwillmessup…

※itwillinevitablymislead…

※it/,whichwillinevitablyruntheriskofmakingthingworseoffratherthanbringingbenefits.

※it/,whichwillnotbeimmunetotheriskofmessingup.

--如果不这样，可能会好些

--这样做，会忽略X,但是X很重要

※Thelastthingwearestrivingforisunfortunatelythemostnecessary/significantto…

※tradeAforB

☆Wearetradingeverythingfornothing.

☆Wearetradingouruniquefeaturesforsomethingincommon.

☆Wearetradingthepossibilityofsustainabledevelopmentfortherealityofpresent/short-termbenefits.

#人的因素（op）

tendency

Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionstowardsdifferentthings.

Peoplevaryinginpersonalitiesaswellasbackgroundshavediversifiedtendenciesinturningtosolutions/accesstothesameproblem.

#良性建议

Toguaranteeahealthy…./sustainabledevelopment….,itisessentialfor….to….

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AisB

*AisB（B=n.—function）

=AservesasB

Classservesasmedia.

Booksserveasreference.

*AisB（B=n./adj.）

=Aisaccepted/proved/acknowledgedasB

=Aisaccepted/proved/acknowledgedtobeB

*Modeforending

Tosumup,

thepredictableuncertaintiesandtroublesbroughtaboutby…faroutweightheopportunitiesandpossiblesolutionsitmightoffer.

Whatismore,it'

sessentialforuniversities…

偏倚话题

A>

B模块组Aismore…　thanB话题

B（偏倚）表述

emphasizevsemphasis

analyzeanalysis

adviseadvice

*placemoreemphasisonA,ratherthanB

*moreemphasisshouldbeplacedonA,ratherthanB

*AovershadowsB

*AoutweighsB=BisoutweighedbyA

*AshouldbegivenmoreprecedenceoverB/WeshouldgiveAmoreprecedenceoverB

Heading

豪华加强版1@凸显主题，体现侧重@深思熟虑@我的立场

@凸显主题，体现侧重

Inrecentyears,/Atpresent,

#Onceconcerning…

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Asfaras…isconcerned,…

#Insenseof….

#Asisoftenthecase,…　

#Underthecontextof…,*AismuchemphasizedtoapointwhereBisovershadowed.

@深思熟虑

*Intakingvariousfactorsintoconsideration,

*Intakingvariousfactorsintoaccount,

*Inweighingupboththeprospectivebenefitsandpotentialrisks,

@我的立场

Tolargeextent,however,IsideontheoppositeoftheclaimthatAoutweighsB.

replaces/takestheplaceofB

+--why?

+--Option1—厚此薄彼

*intertwine相辅相成

*playrespectiveindispensablerolesin各得其所

Asamatteroffact,*theformerandthelatterareintertwinedelementsthatareplayingrespectiveindispensablerolesin….

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--Option2—你死我活

AvsB

A—exist+B—exist=co-exist

*共存原则

harmony—harmonious

#AandBcanco-existinaharmoniousway/manner

#AandBarenot2mutuallyexclusivematters.

#AandBarecompatible

AandBarenot2mutuallyexclusivematters.Asamatteroffact,theformerandthelattercanco-existinaharmoniousway.

豪华加强版2

Y+O+N

Yes让步

Incaseof…,

Insenseof…,

Underthecontextof…,

Infacing…,

Onceconcerning…,

#wealwayshaveastrongertendencyindoing/turningtoA

#wealwaystendtodoA

Although….,

adj.+thoughn./itis,…

adj.+as+n./itis,…

*IndispensablethoughA/itisinservingas

solution

strategytobeachieved,

a/anapproachthroughwhich…isexpectedtobeaccomplished,

referencetobeenhanced,

evidence

record

+Other不可忽视--*overshadow

itcannever*overshadowthesignificanceoftheother…

Thereisnopointtoovershadow/overlookthesignificanceof…

No这种倾斜有害

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Whatismore,theclaim/solutioninwhich…isoveremphasizedwithlittleconsiderationoveranyaltersinsituationorenvironmentwillinevitablyruntheriskofmessingup…

driving…toadeadend.

经济简化版

1.

IsAin…moreimportantthanB?

Insomecases,itsoundsreasonable.

outweighs

Inmyview,however,thisclaimsuffersfrommanycriticalflawsthatmakeitunconvincingasitstands.

2.

…Intakingvariousfactorsintoaccount/consideration,Isideontheoppositeoftheclaimthat…andreckonthatbothAandBserveasindispensable…in….ing….

Body

Strategy:

#优先且重点关照B（A>

B）

#证明B重要

　－为B存在－AforB

　－B是标准－BguideA

－B可以带来什么？

Steps

1先让步，关照A—indispensable

2挽救被轻视的B—B重要

3再冲击联系，othersshouldnotbeovershadowed

4如此侧重，效果不好,危害巨大：

找漏洞—

单一vs多样

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