高考英语书面表达:建议信写作(新)PPT格式课件下载.ppt
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可提供的建议通常是多个,因此要注意各条建议之间的衔接。
d.熟悉建议信的常用句型。
写作攻略3:
建议信常用句式,A建议信开头常用句式(照应材料,表明意图)1.AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat2.Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto3.Iknowyouhavetroubleinafterreadingyourletter.4.Iamwritingtoyouinreplyto.5.YouhaveaskedmeformyadviceonhowtoandIlltrytomakesomesuggestions.6.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewson/concerning7.Itsmypleasuretoofferyousomeadviceon.,B.建议信正文常用句式(详述建议,合情入理)1.Haveyouconsidereddoing./Sowhynotdo.?
2.Dontyouthinkitmorebeneficialifyoucould3.Iwouldliketosuggestthatyou(should)4.IfIwereyou,Iwould5.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.6.Whenitcomestosuchasituation,Iwouldliketomakeasuggestionthatyou(should)7.Youdbetterdo./Itis/seemsbetterforyoutodo.8.Thebestwaytodosthistodo/Thereisnobetterwaytodosththantodosth.9.How/Whataboutdoing.?
10.Whatif.?
11.Itwouldbeagoodideaif.,C.建议信结尾常用句式(归纳总结,提出希望),1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoconsideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful/helpful.3.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard(在这一点上).4.Idohopethatmyideaswillwork.5.Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindtheseideasuseful.6.Iwouldbereadytofurtherdiscussthismatter/discussthismatterwithyouinfurtherdetail.7.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.8.Letskeepintouch.Ihopetoheargoodnewsfromyou.9.Ihopewhatsmentionedabovemightbehelpful.,10.Iwillappreciateyourconsiderationofmyadvice/suggestions/tips.11.Pleasetakegoodconsiderationofmyadvice.Thankyou.12.ThesearemysuggestionsandIhopetheycouldmeansomethingforabetterfutureof.,写作攻略4:
建议信常用常用关联词,1.表示总结/归纳的过渡词或短语:
ina/oneword,altogether,allinall,onthewhole,tosumup/conclude/summarize,inconclusion/summary/sum,inshort2.表示递进/增补的过渡词或短语moreover;
whatsmore;
besides;
inaddition;
also;
whatsworse;
worsestill;
evenworse;
tomakematters/itworse;
even;
again;
aswell(as);
apartfrom;
too/either;
furthermore;
notonlybutalso;
and;
neithernor;
bothand,3.表示转折/让步的过渡词或短语:
but;
however;
yet;
although;
evenif/though;
evenso/not;
whatever.;
however.;
.as.;
despite;
inspiteof;
regardlessof;
while.;
ontheonehand,butontheotherhand,;
afterall;
some,butothers;
otherwise;
foronething.,butforanother(thing).4.表示原因的过渡词或短语:
because,since,as,for,nowthat,becauseof,thanksto,dueto(由于),owingto,inviewof,onaccountof,asaresult/consequenceof,5.表示结果的过渡词或短语:
so,thus,therefore,consequently,accordingly,asaresult/consequence,inconsequence,sothat,forthisreason,thereasonfor/why.isthat.6.表示条件的过渡词或短语:
if,unless,aslongas,onconditionthat.,once.7.表示时间的过渡词或短语:
(and)then,afterthat,next,finally,eventually,later,intheend,recently,atthesametime,(inthe)meanwhile,atfirst,atlast,fromnowon,until/till,afterwards,on/upondoing,shortly/soonafter,beforelong,atthebeginningof8.表示论述顺序关系的过渡词或短语:
first,firstly,second,secondly,third,thirdly,aboveall,firstofall,tobegain/startwith,lastbutnotleast,lastly,9.表示解释说明的过渡词或短语:
inotherwords;
thatis(tosay);
namely;
.,whichmeans10.表示进行举例说明的过渡词或短语:
forinstance,forexample,suchas,like,examplesinclude.,.andsoon,and/orthelike,take.forexample11.表示比较对比的过渡词或短语:
instead;
insteadof;
meanwhile;
onthecontrary;
unlike;
differentfrom.;
as.as.;
ontheonehand,andontheotherhand,;
some,and/whileothers;
.while.;
foronething.,andforanother(thing).;
similarly;
equally;
similarto.;
inthesameway/manner,12.表示强调事实的过渡词或短语:
infact/reality/truth/practice,totellyouthetruth,tobehonest/frank/sure,asamatteroffact,honestlyspeaking,actually,aboveall,afterall,anyway,anyhow,certainly/surely,indeed,really,especially,inparticular,truly,importantly,mostimportant,obviously,only/just/simply/merely,withoutdoubt/outofquestion13.表示选择的过渡词或短语:
either.or.,or,orelse,otherwise14.表示表目的的过渡词或短语:
forthispurpose,sothat,inorderto,soasto,withthepurposeof,假设你是某报社编辑,最近收到读者李华的一封来信。
信中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难,这让他很苦恼。
请根据以上提示,写一篇回给李华的建议信,帮他解决困难,促进学习。
建议内容:
1.不要灰心,保持良好心态;
2.掌握学习方法;
3.培养对英语的兴趣爱好。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
建议信写作范例,第一步:
审题养成重视审题的习惯。
高考书面表达是半封闭性的写作,审题十分重要。
现以样题为例,谈谈如何审题:
第一人称,书信,对英语学习给出建议,说理的逻辑性,一般现在时,第二步:
构思-建议信结构及内容要点,三段式:
第一段:
点明主题:
表明写作意图,(有时要简单介绍自己)。
第二段:
陈述事实,提出建议,给出理由(是什么,为什么,怎么样)第三段:
总结全文,表明希望,草稿,修改,誊写,审题,建议信重点,第二段:
说明建议的内容;
(是什么)提出具体建议的原因;
(为什么)指出采纳建议的益处。
(怎么样)注意事项:
语言要委婉、礼貌,顾及对方感受。
适当运用模板,DearLiHua,Ivereceivedyourletter,saying+你碰到的问题.Imsorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Firstly,_,because_.Secondly,youdbetter_,because_.Thirdly,youdbetter_.Onlyinthiswaycanyou_.Whatsmore,_.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.Bestwishes.Yours,xxx,DearLiHua,Ivereceivedyourletter,sayingyouhavesomedifficultiesinlearningEnglish.Imsorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Firstly,youshouldlistentotheteacherscarefullyintheclass.Secondly,thebestwaytolearnEnglishisreadingitwellandknowingthemeaningsofit.Thirdly,youcanspeakEnglishwithyourclassmatesandteachers,whichcanimproveyourlisteningandspeakingabilities.Whatsmore,themostimportantadviceisreadingEnglishbooksbeforetheclassandaftertheclass.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.Bestwishes.Yours,xxx,范文,其他模板,Dear_,Imgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto_./Iknowthat_from_.Backgroundsandproblems,
(1),Hereareafewsuggestions/Hereissomeadvicethat/on_.First,itisimportantto_.Then/Second/Also,_.Besides/Inaddition/Furthermore,itshouldbeagoodideato_.Iamsurethat/Ihopethat_.Suggestions,thanksandhope,Thanksforyourconsideration.Imlookingforwardto/Lookingforwardto_.Yours,_,Signature,Dear_,Imgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto(引出主题).Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportantto.Then,italsohelpsto.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato.Youcanalso.(此三句不同的句式提出建议)Asto,Isuggest(有时根据需要具体到某一反面).Inaddition,(其他建议).Imsure(预测可能的结果,给对方以行动的信心和决心).Imlookingforwardto(表达愿望).Yourssincerely,LiHua,
(2),Dear_,Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceonhowto.,andIlltrytomakesomesuggestionshere.Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:
First,.Ifyoudothis,.Second,.Thisway,.Andlast,.Bydoingthis,.IhopeyoullfindtheseideasusefulandIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyou.Yours,XXX,(3),写作训练1假设你是的李华,下面是你校英语报第一期第二版的主要内容。
请你给编辑写一封信,对该版内容发表评论并提出改进建议。
版面主要内容:
体育新闻、学习方法、疑难问答等。
注意:
词数100左右;
信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Deareditor,IwasgladtoreadourEnglishnewspaper,especiallySectionBeditedbyyou.AsfarasIknow,mostofthestudentsarefondofthissectionbecauseitprovidesuswithalotofnewsbothfromtheschoolandaroundtheworld.Whatsmore,itgivesussportsnews,aswellastipsonhowtostudy.Myfavoritepart,though,isAskandAnswer,sinceourquestionscanbeansweredbyteachersintime.Italsohelpsuscommunicatewithourteachersandschoolmates,whichisofgreathelptoourgrowth.,范文,Despitethegoodithasdonetous,Iwouldstillliketomakesomesuggestions.Thesectionwouldattractmorereadersifyouweretoaddmoreentertainmentcontents,suchashunorousstoriesorjokeswhichwouldmakeitmorelovelyandinteresting.ImlookingforwardtoreadingmoreinterestingstoriesinourEnglishnewspapers.Yours,LiHua,写作训练2假设你是的李华,最近你发现学校里的浪费现象非常严重。
请给英语读写园地(EnglishReadingandWritingSpace)的编辑投稿反映该现象,并提出自己的建议。
词数100左右;
参考词汇:
美德virtue;
提倡advocate,Deareditors,IamLiHua,astudentinclassOne,GradeOne._Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,Lihua,Deareditors,IamLiHua,astudentinClassOne,GradeOne.Recently,Ihavefoundthatthewasteonourcampusisgettingserious,suchasthewasteofwater,foodandelectricalenergy.,范文,Facedwiththesephenomena(现象),Ireallyfeelworried.SohereissomeadviceIhopewillhelp.EnglishReadingandWritingSpaceisagoodmediumtoadvocate(倡议)thatsavingisatraditionalvirtue.,Sowouldyoupublishmoreinstructivearticlesonthistopicfirst?
Then,someactivitiessuchasholdingdebatesorseeingmoviesaboutthephenomenonwillhelpstudentsgetawareoftheharmofwastingandrealizetheimportanceofsaving.Doyouagreewithme?
Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua,假设你是学生李华,你的英国朋友Tom目前正在努力学习汉语,但在学习中遇到了一些困难,因此他在几天前给你发电子邮件求助,询问怎样才能学好汉语。
请根据以下要点给他回复一封邮件:
1感谢他之前对你英语学习的建议和帮助;
2介绍汉语语言的特点以及学习汉语的方法;
3邀请他暑假期间来中国,交流语言学习经验。
1词数:
100左右;
2可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
写作训练3,DearTom,Imsogladtoreceiveyourlastletter.IcantthankyouenoughforyouradviceandhelpinmyEnglishstudy,duetowhichIvemadegreatprogressinlearningEnglish.,Asforyourlanguagestudy,ImconcernedtoknowthatyouarefacingsomedifficultieswhenstudyingChinese.Imwillingtoofferyousomehelp.Asyouknow,Chineseissoflexiblethatyouneedtopayattentiontothedifferentmeaningsofawordorphraseindifferentsituations.Besides,itisdifficultforforeignerstowriteChinesecharacters,especiallyforthebeginners.SoIadviseyoutolearnsomeoralChinesefirst.ThenyoumaybegintotrywritingsomesimpleChinesecharacters.Finally,thereisonepointforyoutoremember:
practicemakesperfect.,AnothersuggestionisthatyoushouldexperiencethenativeChineselanguageenvironmentinperson.HowaboutcomingtoChinaduringthesummerholiday?
Wecantalkaboutourexperienceinlanguagelearningwitheachother.Bestwishes!
Yourssincerely,LiHua,精华点评,建议信的写作关键