高三英语作文写作模拟训练20题含例文解析.docx

1、高三英语作文写作模拟训练20题含例文解析高三英语作文模拟训练20题（含例文解析）学校:姓名： 班级： 考号： 一、读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短 文。Il was a cold winter night in New York. I was a little scared because I had just moved into a new house; I had seen a mouse. Tm scared of mice. However, the really bad thing about shifting was that I d

2、idnt have even one friend. There was something good, though. In the former house, 1 had to share a bathroom with other people, which I didnt like. In this house, I have my own bathroom.Today was my first day of school, and the streets to school were very nice; （hey were like icc rinks（溜冰场）covered wi

3、th snow. When I reached school, I felt nervous as I was entering middle school without a friend. Al first there was a history class in which I knew a girl named Alice. Alice had yellow hair, skin which was as white as milk, and eyes as blue as the sky. She looked at me and asked me if I would like t

4、o be her friend. She looked sweet and friendly, so I said yes. I was enthusiastic, but when wc left fbr break, I saw something that I did not likesome guys were threatening and bullying（欺负）Alice.On seeing this, I told the guys, “Dont say that to her.Who are you to tell me what to say? one of the guy

5、s said.Alice felt extremely bad and went running and crying. When she ran away, I tried to follow her, but I could not catch up and lost her. She disappeared into one of the many rooms. After a while of searching, I thought to look in the cafeteria and saw her sitting and crying. Just when 1 was goi

6、ng to try to calm her, the bell rang, and she hurried away.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。The next day when I arrived at school, I didnt find Alice.When the police arrived, the guys who were bulling Alice were caught. Il seemed （hat Mom had known long ago （hat I would need these fabric. Mom, in

7、her own way, had finally said those three beautiful words Id longed to hear.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的妈妈因为癌症去世了，去世前为作者缝制了最 后一床被子。母亲去世几个月后，作者决定自己尝试缝制被子，在翻找材料时发现妈 妈早为作者准备好了材料。【详解】段落续写：1由第-段首句内容“几个月后，我想起了妈妈给我做的被子，决定自己试-试。可 知，第段可描写作者缝制被子的经过以及感受。2由第二段首句内容“但妈妈的帮助从来没有出现，然后爸爸给了我妈妈的桁缝袋，装 满了多余的布料。”可知，第二段可描写作者发

8、现妈妈提前给自己准备好的东西，以及 感受。1.续写线索：决定尝试做被子一购买材料想起妈妈一发现母亲准备好的材料作者感悟2.词汇激活行为类1决定：decide to/ determine to完成：complete/ finish2提供：offer/provide情绪类1困难的：hard/ difficult美妙：beautiful / wonderful【点睛】高分句型 1 I thought about Mom a lot while I worked.（运用 了 while 引导时间状语从句）高分句型 2 I hadnt had a chance to go through Moms qu

9、ilting bag yet, but maybe there was something that 1 could use.（运用 了 that 引导定语从句）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短 文。A Meal with a SmileAt eleven years old,my main concern was money. Where could I get it? What would I spend i( on?How much did I need to buy the new must-have thing my classmates eit

10、her had or wanted just as badly as I did?I went to my mom. Momneed more money,M I said,leaning against the kitchen counter while she cooked dinner, What else can kids do fbr a job around here?“You think you need a job? Mom asked with a smile. You could just enjoy the summer like the other kids,you k

11、now? Ill still have time fbr that,but I want to work. I shrugged. Okay, let me ask around., Mom finally agreed.The next day,she had an answer. Your grandmother will pay you to help her deliver lunch each day to the elderly/ I couldnt wait to start my new job on Monday after school dismissed for the

12、summer.When my grandmother picked me up, I thanked her for the job with questions. Its simple. We pick up a large container full of hot meals in a nearby town and then we go on our delivery route. That was easy.After our load was arranged in the backseat, my grandmother drove us to our first stop: a

13、 small house. I nearly jumped when I glanced over (o see a liny old woman in the corner looking at me. When I drew near to her,she smiled at me, revealing no teeth. The house smelled terrible and old like the antique stores my mom liked to visit. I held my breath until wc went back out onto the porc

14、h. Was this really how some people lived? I couldnt wrap my head around it.The next stop was much the same and the next. The houses varied in size and shape,some were nicer than others, but the same wrinkly people eagerly waited for their meals. Each person smiled at me and thanked again and again a

15、s I hurried to get out of there. I was sweaty and tired.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。On our way back home, I sat at the backseat silently with the idea of giving up.Her words touched me deeply and I decided to continue the job.【答案】On our way back home, I sat al the backseat silently with the i

16、dea of giving up. It was obvious that I wasnt very comfortable about the job. You dont have to help me my grandmother said, “I understand if the job isnt what you want to do. I swallowed hard , thinking of money. Did I want to be comfortable or did I want the money? No, grandma, its okay. I will get

17、 used to it. Though , I was not sure of my words. If you are sure, dear.A moment of silence settled over the car before she spoke again. For a lot of the people we deliver to this is their only meal of the day. For some of them, we are the only person they see. Many of them arc alonc.,Her words touc

18、hed me deeply and I decided to continue the job. When we were back at the house, My grandmother handed me the money I had earned. It didnt seem quite as exciting any longer. Id like to say that I did some something incredible with the money I earned. I dont even remember what I bought for the elderl

19、y the next day. What matters are those people with smiles sinking in (heir wrinkled faces brought unexpected joy to my life while I brought them only a simple gift.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者开始很想要钱，妈妈告诉她需要自己去赚钱,同时也 告诉她嫌钱的方法，那就是和祖母一起去为那些来年人送食物.起先作者感觉不好，但 是老年人看到她总是面带微笑，似乎非常开心。祖母告诉她老人很孤独，得到食物是 他们一天最快乐的事情。

20、作者顿悟：自己的快乐不是赚点钱，而是给老人带去快乐。【详解】段落续写：1由第一段首句内容在回家的路上，我坐在后面座位上沉默不语，想放弃可知，第 一段可描写作者对这个工作不满意，祖母教导她的经过。2由第二段首句内容“她的话打动我，我决定继续做下去可知，第二段可描写作者通 过祖母的教导，思想转变过来。1.续写线索：不满意一解释一疑问一再解释一回报一感悟词汇激活行为类帮助：hclp/aid/assist1习惯：get used to/bc accustomed to确信:be sure of/be convinced of情绪类兴奋的：be wild with joy/be exciting1意外的

21、：unexpecled/accidental【点睛】高分句型 1. It was obvious that I wasnt very comfortable about the job. （It 作形式主语） 高分句型2.What matters are （hose people with smiles sinking in their wrinkled faces brought unexpected joy to my life while I brought them only a simple gift. （What 引导的主语从句以及 while 引导的时间状语从句）阅读下面短文，根

22、据所给情节进行续写，使之构成个完整的故事。Taylor opened her sleepy eyes and looked out the window at the foggy field below. NO! she cried, now fully awake. Buttermilk, the cow, was in Manias daisy（雏菊）field.I must have forgotten to fasten the gate last night, Taylor thought as she pulled a sweatshirt over her head. Mama

23、was planning to sell daisy bouquets at the fair next week. But Buttermilk was eating the flowers.Taylor hurried outside and grabbed the lead rope hanging on the porch. Why cant you stay in the feld?, she shouted at Buttermilk as she headed across the yard to the daisy field.Buttermilk stood nipping

24、（啃咬）tender flowers off （heir stems. Taylor leaped to her feet and rushed to the cow. Angry and anxious, she thought to herself: When I grow up. Ill be an artist and paint pictures all day. ril never own a cow. Too much trouble.Just as Taylor was about to snap the lead rope onto Buttermilks collar, t

25、he family dog,Red, rounded the comer of the house. The cow couldnt stand Red.Buttermilk took off, tearing through the daisies and across the yard. She finally ran through the open gate and into the field.“Thank goodness! Taylor said as she closed the gate and secured the latch （门栓）.She turned to loo

26、k at the flower garden. Most of the daisies were either eaten or crushed.Mama came out of the house. Whats going on? she asked. She looked sadly at her garden.44I forgot to latch the gate, Taylor said. Im so sorry.T know you are. Mama sighed and gave Taylor a hug. You learned an important lesson tod

27、ay.,Taylors heart was heavy as she went back into the house. She had to think of a way to make it up to her mother.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。A painting on the wall caught Taylors eye. Thats it, she whispered.On the morning of the fair, Taylor said, “Mama, I have a surprise fbr you upstair

28、s.,【答案】Paragraph I:A painting on the wall caught Taylors eye. Thats it, she whispered. Taylor raced upstairs.She grabbed her art supplies, sat down at her desk and looked out of the window at the remaining daisies below. As her brush moved smoothly across the paper, daisies came alive. Totally lost

29、in painting, Taylor made one painting after another. To keep it a secret, every day Taylor locked herself in her room, committed to painting more, which Buttermilk couldnt eat any more. Of course, never had she forgotten to lock the gate since then. By the end of the week, she had completed two doze

30、n paintings. Appreciating her great masterpieces, she couldnt contain her excitement, jumping and clapping, I made it.Paragraph 2:On the morning of the fair, Taylor said, Mama, 1 have a surprise fbr you upstairs? Out hurried Taylor, who exclaimed at the top of her lung excitedly. Mama managed a weak

31、 smile. Really? Lets see it. Instantly they reached Taylors bedroom, Taylor opened (he door. What greeted them were daisy paintings everywhere, bright and cheerful in the morning light. Wow, said Mama, unable to utter more words. Do you think anyone will buy them, Mama?,MOh, yes, sweetie. Im sure th

32、ey will. And you have a better lesson than I expected.Mama smiled.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了泰勒从小就下决心R大了不会养奶牛，而是要当一名 艺术家，整天画画。【详解】1段落续写：1由第一段首句内容“墙上的一幅画引起了泰勒的注意。就是它，她低声说。可 知，第一段可描写她抓起美术用品，坐在书桌前，望着窗外剩下的雏菊，就开始画起 来。2由第二段首句内容在集市的那天早上，泰勒说：妈妈，我在楼上给你准备了一个 惊喜。可知，第二段可描写对泰勒画的维菊的评价。2.续写线索：画画完成欣赏笑词汇激活行为类画画：paint/draw1完成：complete/finish欣赏：appreciate/admire2笑：smile/laugh情绪类兴奋：excitemcnt/excitation【点睛】高分句型 I JTo keep it a se