高三英语作文写作模拟训练20题含例文解析.docx

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高三英语作文写作模拟训练20题含例文解析

高三英语作文模拟训练20题（含例文解析）

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一、读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

IlwasacoldwinternightinNewYork.IwasalittlescaredbecauseIhadjustmovedintoanewhouse;Ihadseenamouse.Tmscaredofmice.However,thereallybadthingaboutshiftingwasthatIdidn'thaveevenonefriend.Therewassomethinggood,though.Intheformerhouse,1hadtoshareabathroomwithotherpeople,whichIdidn'tlike.Inthishouse,Ihavemyownbathroom.

Todaywasmyfirstdayofschool,andthestreetstoschoolwereverynice;（heywerelikeiccrinks（溜冰场）coveredwithsnow.WhenIreachedschool,IfeltnervousasIwasenteringmiddleschoolwithoutafriend.AlfirsttherewasahistoryclassinwhichIknewagirlnamedAlice.Alicehadyellowhair,skinwhichwasaswhiteasmilk,andeyesasblueasthesky.ShelookedatmeandaskedmeifIwouldliketobeherfriend.Shelookedsweetandfriendly,soIsaid"yes".Iwasenthusiastic,butwhenwcleftfbrbreak,IsawsomethingthatIdidnotlike—someguyswerethreateningandbullying（欺负）Alice.

Onseeingthis,Itoldtheguys,“Don'tsaythattoher."

"Whoareyoutotellmewhattosay?

"oneoftheguyssaid.

Alicefeltextremelybadandwentrunningandcrying.Whensheranaway,Itriedtofollowher,butIcouldnotcatchupandlosther.Shedisappearedintooneofthemanyrooms.Afterawhileofsearching,Ithoughttolookinthecafeteriaandsawhersittingandcrying.Justwhen1wasgoingtotrytocalmher,thebellrang,andshehurriedaway.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

ThenextdaywhenIarrivedatschool,Ididn'tfindAlice.

Whenthepolicearrived,theguyswhowerebullingAlicewerecaught.Ilseemed（hatMomhadknownlongago（hatIwouldneedthesefabric.Mom,inherownway,hadfinallysaidthosethreebeautifulwordsI'dlongedtohear.

【解析】【分析】

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的妈妈因为癌症去世了，去世前为作者缝制了最后一床被子。

母亲去世几个月后，作者决定自己尝试缝制被子，在翻找材料时发现妈妈早为作者准备好了材料。

【详解】段落续写：

1由第-•段首句内容“几个月后，我想起了妈妈给我做的被子，决定自己试-•试。

"可知，第•段可描写作者缝制被子的经过以及感受。

2由第二段首句内容“但妈妈的帮助从来没有出现，然后爸爸给了我妈妈的桁缝袋，装满了多余的布料。

”可知，第二段可描写作者发现妈妈提前给自己准备好的东西，以及感受。

1.续写线索：

决定尝试做被子一购买材料——想起妈妈一发现母亲准备好的材料——作者感悟

2.词汇激活行为类

1决定：

decideto/determineto完成：

complete/finish

2提供：

offer/provide情绪类

1困难的：

hard/difficult美妙：

beautiful/wonderful

【点睛】[高分句型1]IthoughtaboutMomalotwhileIworked.（运用了while引导时间状语从句）

[高分句型2]Ihadn'thadachancetogothroughMom'squiltingbagyet,butmaybetherewassomethingthat1coulduse.（运用了that引导定语从句）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

AMealwithaSmile

Atelevenyearsold,mymainconcernwasmoney.WherecouldIgetit?

WhatwouldIspendi（on?

HowmuchdidIneedtobuythenewmust-havethingmyclassmateseitherhadorwantedjustasbadlyasIdid?

Iwenttomymom."Mom』needmoremoney,MIsaid,leaningagainstthekitchencounterwhileshecookeddinner,"Whatelsecankidsdofbrajobaroundhere?

''

“Youthinkyouneedajob?

"Momaskedwithasmile."Youcouldjustenjoythesummerliketheotherkids,youknow?

""I'llstillhavetimefbrthat,butIwanttowork."Ishrugged."Okay,letmeaskaround.^,Momfinallyagreed.

Thenextday,shehadananswer."Yourgrandmotherwillpayyoutohelpherdeliverluncheachdaytotheelderly/'Icouldn'twaittostartmynewjobonMondayafterschooldismissedforthesummer.

Whenmygrandmotherpickedmeup,Ithankedherforthejobwithquestions."It'ssimple.Wepickupalargecontainerfullofhotmealsinanearbytownandthenwegoonourdeliveryroute."Thatwaseasy.

Afterourloadwasarrangedinthebackseat,mygrandmotherdroveustoourfirststop:

asmallhouse.InearlyjumpedwhenIglancedover（oseealinyoldwomaninthecornerlookingatme.WhenIdrewneartoher,shesmiledatme,revealingnoteeth.Thehousesmelledterribleandoldliketheantiquestoresmymomlikedtovisit.Iheldmybreathuntilwcwentbackoutontotheporch.Wasthisreallyhowsomepeoplelived?

Icouldn'twrapmyheadaroundit.

Thenextstopwasmuchthesameandthenext.Thehousesvariedinsizeandshape,somewerenicerthanothers,butthesamewrinklypeopleeagerlywaitedfortheirmeals.EachpersonsmiledatmeandthankedagainandagainasIhurriedtogetoutofthere.Iwassweatyandtired.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Onourwaybackhome,Isatatthebackseatsilentlywiththeideaofgivingup.

HerwordstouchedmedeeplyandIdecidedtocontinuethejob.

【答案】Onourwaybackhome,Isatalthebackseatsilentlywiththeideaofgivingup.ItwasobviousthatIwasn'tverycomfortableaboutthejob."Youdon'thavetohelpme"mygrandmothersaid,“Iunderstandifthejobisn'twhatyouwanttodo."Iswallowedhard,thinkingofmoney.DidIwanttobecomfortableordidIwantthemoney?

"No,grandma,it'sokay.Iwillgetusedtoit."Though,Iwasnotsureofmywords."Ifyouaresure,dear."Amomentofsilencesettledoverthecarbeforeshespokeagain."Foralotofthepeoplewedelivertothisistheironlymealoftheday.Forsomeofthem,wearetheonlypersontheysee.Manyofthemarcalonc.,,

HerwordstouchedmedeeplyandIdecidedtocontinuethejob.Whenwewerebackatthehouse,MygrandmotherhandedmethemoneyIhadearned.Itdidn'tseemquiteasexcitinganylonger.I'dliketosaythatIdidsomesomethingincrediblewiththemoneyIearned.Idon'tevenrememberwhatIboughtfortheelderlythenextday.Whatmattersarethosepeoplewithsmilessinkingin（heirwrinkledfacesbroughtunexpectedjoytomylifewhileIbroughtthemonlyasimplegift.

【解析】【分析】

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者开始很想要钱，妈妈告诉她需要自己去赚钱,同时也告诉她嫌钱的方法，那就是和祖母一起去为那些来年人送食物.起先作者感觉不好，但是老年人看到她总是面带微笑，似乎非常开心。

祖母告诉她老人很孤独，得到食物是他们一天最快乐的事情。

作者顿悟：

自己的快乐不是赚点钱，而是给老人带去快乐。

【详解】段落续写：

1由第一段首句内容''在回家的路上，我坐在后面座位上沉默不语，想放弃"可知，第一段可描写作者对这个工作不满意，祖母教导她的经过。

2由第二段首句内容“她的话打动我，我决定继续做下去''可知，第二段可描写作者通过祖母的教导，思想转变过来。

1.续写线索：

不满意一解释一疑问一再解释一回报一感悟词汇激活

行为类帮助：

hclp/aid/assist

1习惯：

getusedto/bcaccustomedto确信:

besureof/beconvincedof

情绪类兴奋的：

bewildwithjoy/beexciting

1意外的：

unexpecled/accidental

【点睛】[高分句型1].ItwasobviousthatIwasn'tverycomfortableaboutthejob.（It作形式主语）[高分句型2].

Whatmattersare（hosepeoplewithsmilessinkingintheirwrinkledfacesbroughtunexpectedjoytomylifewhileIbroughtthemonlyasimplegift.（What引导的主语从句以及while引导的时间状语从句）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成•个完整的故事。

Tayloropenedhersleepyeyesandlookedoutthewindowatthefoggyfieldbelow."NO!

"shecried,nowfullyawake.Buttermilk,thecow,wasinMania'sdaisy（雏菊）field.

Imusthaveforgottentofastenthegatelastnight,Taylorthoughtasshepulledasweatshirtoverherhead.Mamawasplanningtoselldaisybouquetsatthefairnextweek.ButButtermilkwaseatingtheflowers.

Taylorhurriedoutsideandgrabbedtheleadropehangingontheporch."Whycan'tyoustayinthef^eld?

,sheshoutedatButtermilkassheheadedacrosstheyardtothedaisyfield.

Buttermilkstoodnipping（啃咬）tenderflowersoff（heirstems.Taylorleapedtoherfeetandrushedtothecow.Angryandanxious,shethoughttoherself:

"WhenIgrowup.I'llbeanartistandpaintpicturesallday.rilneverownacow.Toomuchtrouble."

JustasTaylorwasabouttosnaptheleadropeontoButtermilk'scollar,thefamilydog,Red,roundedthecomerofthehouse.Thecowcouldn'tstandRed.

Buttermilktookoff,tearingthroughthedaisiesandacrosstheyard.Shefinallyranthroughtheopengateandintothefield.

“Thankgoodness!

"Taylorsaidassheclosedthegateandsecuredthelatch（门栓）.

Sheturnedtolookattheflowergarden.Mostofthedaisieswereeithereatenorcrushed.

Mamacameoutofthehouse."What'sgoingon?

"sheasked.Shelookedsadlyathergarden.

44Iforgottolatchthegate,"Taylorsaid."I'msosorry."

Tknowyouare.''MamasighedandgaveTaylorahug."Youlearnedanimportantlessontoday.,,

Taylor'sheartwasheavyasshewentbackintothehouse.Shehadtothinkofawaytomakeituptohermother.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

ApaintingonthewallcaughtTaylor'seye."That'sit,"shewhispered.

Onthemorningofthefair,Taylorsaid,“Mama,Ihaveasurprisefbryouupstairs.,,【答案】ParagraphI:

ApaintingonthewallcaughtTaylor'seye."That'sit,"shewhispered.Taylorracedupstairs.

Shegrabbedherartsupplies,satdownatherdeskandlookedoutofthewindowattheremainingdaisiesbelow.Asherbrushmovedsmoothlyacrossthepaper,daisiescamealive.Totallylostinpainting,Taylormadeonepaintingafteranother.Tokeepitasecret,everydayTaylorlockedherselfinherroom,committedtopaintingmore,whichButtermilkcouldn'teatanymore.Ofcourse,neverhadsheforgottentolockthegatesincethen.Bytheendoftheweek,shehadcompletedtwodozenpaintings.Appreciatinghergreatmasterpieces,shecouldn'tcontainherexcitement,jumpingandclapping,"Imadeit."Paragraph2:

Onthemorningofthefair,Taylorsaid,"Mama,1haveasurprisefbryouupstairs?

'OuthurriedTaylor,whoexclaimedatthetopofherlungexcitedly.Mamamanagedaweaksmile."Really?

Let'sseeit".InstantlytheyreachedTaylor'sbedroom,Tayloropened（hedoor.Whatgreetedthemweredaisypaintingseverywhere,brightandcheerfulinthemorninglight."Wow,"saidMama,unabletouttermorewords."Doyouthinkanyonewillbuythem,Mama?

M'Oh,yes,sweetie.I'msuretheywill.AndyouhaveabetterlessonthanIexpected."Mamasmiled.

【解析】【分析】

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了泰勒从小就下决心R大了不会养奶牛，而是要当一名艺术家，整天画画。

【详解】1•段落续写：

1由第一段首句内容“墙上的一幅画引起了泰勒的注意。

"就是它，"她低声说。

"可知，第一段可描写她抓起美术用品，坐在书桌前，望着窗外剩下的雏菊，就开始画起来。

2由第二段首句内容"在集市的那天早上，泰勒说：

"妈妈，我在楼上给你准备了一个惊喜。

可知，第二段可描写对泰勒画的维菊的评价。

2.续写线索：

画画——完成——欣赏——笑词汇激活

行为类画画：

paint/draw

1完成：

complete/finish欣赏：

appreciate/admire

2笑：

smile/laugh情绪类

①兴奋：

excitemcnt/excitation【点睛】

［高分句型IJTokeepitase