热点07 书面表达热点话题类一解析版.docx

1、热点07 书面表达热点话题类一解析版热点07 书面表达热点话题类（一）【命题趋势】高考书面表达题贴近学生实际生活，紧密联系热点话题，写作话题真实从而让考生有话可写。书面表达情景实用性程度高，各地试题都符合同学们的认知水平和日常生活经历，题目设计关注学生成长，注意培养其良好的道德品质和健全的人格：另外，所涉及话题关注社会，富有时代特色，能唤起同学们强烈的主人翁意识和责任感。 这种贴近生活、立足基础、发扬个性的命题理念仍将是今后高考书面表达的基本思路。【满分技巧】1. 认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。2. 构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲

2、和主题确定相关写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。3. 初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。4. 修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。【热点话题】 话题：垃圾分类；校园欺凌；共享单车；学生安全；科技创新【限时检测】（建议用时

3、：30分钟）A(2020年浙江省杭州二中高考模拟英语试题)话题：汉语水平考试难度：建议用时：6分钟46假定你是李华。你的英国朋友David来信说，他即将参加汉语水平考试 (Chinese Proficiency Test)，对此他感到非常紧张。请你给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：1. 表示安慰；2. 备考建议；3. 你的祝愿。注意：1. 词数100左右2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear David,I have known from your letter that you will take Chinese Proficiency Test, which makes yo

4、u very nervous. Thats quite normal and you are not alone, so dont worry too much about it.What you should do is to make full preparations for the test. Firstly, get familiar with the issues related to CPT, including the test targets, test procedures, test content and rules of testing centers etc. Wh

5、ats more, practice makes perfect. If you practice continuously every day, your language ability will improve steadily.Good luck. Work hard and I really hope you will get a good score in the text.Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。【详解】题目要求假定你是李华。你的英国朋友David来信说，他即将参加汉语水平考试 (Chinese Proficiency Test)，对此他感到

6、非常紧张。请你给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：1. 表示安慰；2. 备考建议；3. 你的祝愿。写作情境设置真实，任务要求符合学生能力水平，并且这个话题是学生生活中很熟悉的话题。该写作贴近学生生活，学生有话可说。考生成文时应注意：1. 结构采用三段成文：第一段说明自己知道了朋友David目前遇到的问题；第二段表示安慰，并且提出实用的备考建议；第三段表达自己的祝愿。2. 时态：一般现在时为主。3. 人称：第一人、二和三人称。4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级词汇和句型以提高作文档次。【点睛】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的复合句

7、。例如：使用了定语从句I have known from your letter that you will take Chinese Proficiency Test, which makes you very nervous.和宾语从句Work hard and I really hope you will get a good score in the text.B(安徽省淮北市第一中学2020届高三)话题：介绍手工艺品难度：建议用时：6分钟52假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack在美国开了一家网店，你想请他代卖你家乡手工艺人制作的工艺品（工艺品自定），因此你给他写了一封信。信的要点如下：

8、1.描述工艺品外形材料、特点等；2.告知工艺品的价格，并希望他能帮你代卖；注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；_ _ _ 【答案】【参考范文】Dear Jack,How is your online business? Could you do me a favor?There are many well-known craftsmen in my city. They are experts at making traditional Chinese clay figures like Guan Yu, Jiang Ziya, Nezha. Each figure

9、is made of clay, 2 inches in size, which is painted in different colors.With various facial expressions, the clay figures are life-like, each enjoying an interesting story. For example, Chinese people like Guan Yu, believing he can drive out evil spirits and keep people safe. Here is a picture of ea

10、ch figure. I will write an introduction to each figure and pack it in a beautiful gift box.By the way, I can supply them at $1 each, and you can sell them at a proper price. Hoping it will benefit both of us. Thanks!Best wishes!Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达是提纲类作文。要求给美国朋友Jack写信。【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用

11、正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。根据写作提要，给你的美国朋友Jack在美国开了一家网店，你想请他代卖你家乡手工艺人制作的工艺品（工艺品自定），因此你给他写了一封信。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有：do me a favor；be made of；in different colors；drive out等。可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/Fir

12、st, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, as well as, not onlybut (also) 。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句和固定句型：They are experts at

13、making traditional Chinese clay figures like Guan Yu, Jiang Ziya, Nezha. Each figure is made of clay, 2 inches in size, which is painted in different colors.这句话运用了定语从句。With various facial expressions, the clay figures are life-like, each enjoying an interesting story. 是用来独立主格。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英

14、语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。C(福建省漳州市2020届高三高中毕业班质量检测)话题：科技创新难度：建议用时：6分52假设你是李华，你校暑假将和斯洛伐克孔子学院共同举办“武术国学夏令营”，届时请你代表学校在开幕式上发言。内容包括：1.表示欢迎；2.夏令营活动安排(交流、武术表演等)；3.希望与期待。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头句与结尾句已写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇: 武术 martial artsGood morning, everyone!_Thats all. Thank you!【答案】 Good mor

15、ning, everyone!We are honored to have you here on the opening ceremony. To express our warmest welcome, we have arranged a series of activities on Chinese Martial arts.I will introduce the schedule of the summer camp. First, we will meet at the lecture hall, sharing ideas about martial arts with eac

16、h other. After that, there will be excellent martial performances by us students. I think it will be a valuable growth experience and a rewarding journey for you. Besides, you will appreciate unique skills by great masters,which will be a feast for eyes.Finally, I hope the activity will be a great s

17、uccess and everyone can learn much from it.Thats all, thank you【分析】这是一篇发言稿。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是李华，你校暑假将和斯洛伐克孔子学院共同举办“武术国学夏令营”，届时请你代表学校在开幕式上发言。内容包括：1.表示欢迎；2.夏令营活动安排(交流、武术表演等)；3.希望与期待。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：martial arts (武术)；the opening ceremony(开幕式)；express our warmest welcome(表示最热烈的欢迎)；a series of(一系列的)

18、；schedule(日程表)；summer camp(夏令营)；each other(互相)；martial performances(武术表演)；valuable(宝贵的)；rewarding(有益的)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时和一般现在时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如To express our warmest welcome, we have

19、arranged a series of activities on Chinese Martial arts.非谓语动词的运用；Besides, you will appreciate unique skills by great masters, which will be a feast for eyes.运用非限制性定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。D(河北省衡水市第二中学2020届高三下学期二模英语试题)话题：垃圾分类难度：建议用时：6分52假定你是李华，你校学生会将举办垃圾分类中英文海报设计

20、大赛，你是负责人。请在你校英文网站写一则通知，内容包括：1. 大赛目的；2. 作品要求；3. 作品展出方式及颁奖时间。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；NoticeGarbage Classification Poster Design Competition_Student Council【答案】One possible version:NoticeGarbage Classification Poster Design CompetitionTo raise awareness of garbage classification and help studen

21、ts form a good habit, we will hold a competition to design a poster about garbage classification.The competition is open to anyone. The designs, using both Chinese and English, can be hand-drawn or digitally produced. Submissions can be made as an individual or as a team. Please hand in your work be

22、fore July 22nd to Mr. Li in Room 102. The designs will be displayed from July 23rd to September 10th in the school hall and on our school website. The award ceremony will be held on September 15th and the awards for winners will be amazing.We are looking forward to lots of creative designs.Student C

23、ouncil【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求考生写一则通知，介绍你校学生会将要举办的垃圾分类中英文海报设计大赛。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：三段式：第一段介绍大赛目的，引出主题；第二段介绍作品要求、作品展出方式及颁奖时间；第三段表示期待大家的参与。要求：1. 介绍大赛目的2. 介绍作品要求3. 介绍作品展出方式及颁奖时间第二步:列提纲 （重点单词及词组）raise awareness of (提高的认识); form a good habit (养成好习惯); garbage classification (垃圾分类); com

24、petition (比赛); digitally (数码地); individual (个人); hand in (上交); display (展出); award ceremony (颁奖典礼); look forward to (期待，盼望)第三步：连词成句1. We will hold a competition to design a poster about garbage classification. 2. The competition is open to anyone.3. The designs, using both Chinese and English, can b

25、e hand-drawn or digitally produced.4. Submissions can be made as an individual or as a team.5. Please hand in your work before July 22nd to Mr. Li in Room 102.6. The designs will be displayed from July 23rd to September 10th in the school hall and on our school website.7. The award ceremony will be held on September 15th and the awards for winners will be amazing.8. We are looking forward to lots of creative designs.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.