六级作文全部讲解.docx

1、六级作文全部讲解六级作文精讲四六级作文阅卷标准分五等：2分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重语言错误。8分基本切题，表达思想比较清楚，文字尚连贯，但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。11分切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本无语言错误。高分作文三大要素I 结构清晰 structure-boneII 句式多样 sentences-fleshIII 语言亮点 vocabulary-soulI 结构清晰：1、文章整体结构完整 2、段与段，句与句

2、衔接要自然:段落层次连接词+过度词（句、段逻辑关系）3、每个段落必须要保持完整 4、各段祥略要得当1、文章整体结构完整： 请审题并确定下面的文章写几段？Example 1 Say No to Pirated Products1）目前盗版现象比较严重2）造成这种现象的原因3）我们应该怎么做Example 2 how to succeed in a job interview1）面试在求职过程中的作用2）取得面试成功的因素：仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是.Example 3 How I finance my college education1) 上大学的费用（tuition an

3、d fees）可以通过多种途径解决 2) 哪种途径适合于我（说明理由）Example 4 On Stress 1）有人害怕压力2）有人认为压力并不是坏事3）你的观点关于文章整体结构总结：最少不能少于两段最多不能多于四段2、段与段，句与句衔接要自然How to quit the habit of smoking?1）吸烟有害身体健康2）戒烟很难3）如何戒烟1)It is almost known to all that smoking is harmful to peoples health. 2)Smoking can lead to heart disease, cancer and oth

4、er problems. 3)The World Health Organization says diseases caused by smoking kill at least two million and five hundred thousands persons each year.1)However, still many people find it difficult to stop smoking, which is due to the following reasons. 2)For one thing, it is because the effect of nico

5、tine makes it hard for smokers to quit it. 3)For another thing, many of them have no determination to give up the bad habit. 4)Therefore, it is high time that more attention was paid to how to give up smoking successfully.1)Some effective measures have been taken to help people keep away from the ha

6、rm of smoking. 2)Firstly, nowadays, smoking is forbidden in public places and in advertisements of any kind. 3)In addition, the world “No Tobacco Day” is observed every year as the biggest campaign to raise peoples awareness. 4)If we follow the measures mentioned above, the impact from smoking could

7、 be minimized greatly.Some scientists/doctors/researchers/psychologists/professorsin china/fromChina and USA/ around the whole world say.millions.The research/statistic figure from .shows that.段与段，句与句衔接：保证 1)意义连贯2)形式连贯. 即要有1)逻辑性 2)连接手段.段落层次连接词：1）first, second, third, last2）firstly, secondly, thirdly

8、, finally3）the first, the second, the third, the last4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally6）to start with, next, in addition, finally7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least8）most important of all, moreover, finally9

9、）on the one hand, on the other hand10）for one thing, for another thing连接过度词（句、段逻辑关系）：1. 总括过渡词：As far as I am concerned ,As for me, Generally speaking, On a larger scale, Practically speaking, To take the idea further2 . 同类过渡词Equally important, Namely, Similarly, That is 3. 对比过渡词Conversely, In contra

10、st, On the contrary, Otherwise, Whereas, While4. 举例过渡词A case in point is that, For instance, For example, Such as, As an illustration 4.列举过渡词First of all, First, second, third, In the first place, Initially, To start with, First and foremostFurthermore, In addition, Moreover, Whats more, Finally, La

11、st but not least6.原因过渡词Due to , Considering, As a result of, Given, In that, In the view of, On account of, On the grounds of, Owing to, Seeing that7.让步过渡词语Although, In spite of, Even though, Admittedly, Certainly, Indeed, True8.转折过渡词Nevertheless, However, On the contrary, On the other hand, Yet, Wh

12、ereas, although, but, in spite of, yet, otherwise, despite9. 强调过渡词Anyway, Chiefly, Even worse, Most important of all, Needless to say, No doubt, Particularly10.目的过渡词With the aim of, For the sake of, With the view to, For the purpose of11. 承接过渡词So to speak, As a matter of fact, As soon as, As it were

13、, Year in and year out12.条件过渡词Given , As long as, Provided that13.结论过渡词Accordingly, An in all, As a result, Consequently, Hence, In brief, In conclusion, In general, In short, On the whole, To conclude, To sum up in a word, In summary, finally, therefore, accordingly, in short, thus, in conclusion,

14、so, in brief, in a word 3 每个段落必须要保持完整1st para general topic supporting idea/details(1) supporting idea/details(2)2nd para sub-topic sentence supporting idea/details(1) supporting idea/details(2) supporting idea/details(3)3rd para conclusion supporting idea/details(1) supporting idea/details(2)II 句式多

15、样:1 长短句错落有致2. 主动变被动3. 强调句和倒装句的适当运用1 长短句错落有致eg.1 His father is a salesman. His father became a millionaire overnight.His father, as a salesman, became a millionaire overnight.Eg.2 Teenagers are pressured by schoolwork. They are also encouraged by their peers. Under such circumstances, they resort to

16、smoking. But sometimes they feel a little guilty.Pressured by schoolwork and encouraged by their peers, teenagers resort to smoking, though sometimes they feel a little guilty.eg.3 2)Smoking can lead to heart disease, cancer and other problems.Smoking, which has been adopted by many people, can lead

17、 to heart disease, cancer and other problems. Smoking, as a habit adopted by many people, especially man, can lead to heart disease, cancer and other problems.2. 主动变被动1)被动语态体现论证的客观性.(they you we 不要随便使用，切忌交错使用)We should pay more attention to the environment, which is being destroyed seriously by huma

18、n.More attention should be paid to the environment, which is being destroyed seriously by human.So many measures have been taken by .2) 保持陈述对象的一致，以求行文通顺。When the Prime Minister arrived at the airport, hundreds of reporters surrounded him immediately.When the Prime Minister arrived at the airport, he

19、 was surrounded immediately by hundreds of reporters.3. 强调句和倒装句的适当运用We can better our environment only through all our efforts.Only through all our efforts can we better our environment.It is through all our efforts that we can better our environment.Only in this way can weUnder no circumstances can

20、 we give up the confidence(in no way/in no case)III 语言亮点1、副词的使用 2、积累并使用高档词汇与表达3、积累常用句型 4、适当使用修辞以及名言警句1. 副词的使用The forest is being destroyed.The forest is seriously destroyed.He runs fast.He runs incredibly fast.He is an amazing professor.He is an absolutely amazing professor.The U.S. is definitely a

21、telephone country.2.积累并使用高档词汇与表达Consequently (so), we work hard at the task of saving time. (NHCE-2 unit 1 Pg3)However, people are meeting increasingly (more and more) on television screens. (NHCE-2 unit 1 Pg3)When it comes to Lei Fengs spirit, different people will offer (give) different opinions.H

22、owever, still others advocate (support) the latter opinion because40个高档词汇：六级写作经典的替换词：1 fail to do替换Didnt2 concerning/involving/approximately替换About3 due to/ thanks to the fact that替换Because4 account for替换Explain5 Cover替换Go6 present/extend/offer替换Give7 considerable/tremendous/substantial替换Great8 A gr

23、eat variety of替换 Many kinds of9 Boom替换Rapid growth10 Be involved in替换Take part in11.individuals,characters, folks替换(people ,persons)12: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good13:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换ba

24、d如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替换eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they records are less impressive.14.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a mul

25、titude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换many.注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有词。Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that.同理 用most, if not all ,替换most.15: a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some16:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,hold the view that, it is widely shared

26、 that,it is universally acknowledged that)替think (因为是书面语，所以要加that)17:affair ,business ,matter 替换thing18: shared 代 common19.reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits )20:for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion21:Increasing(ly),growing 替换more and more( 注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/gr

27、owing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.popular with the advancement of sth.22.little if anything, 或little or nothing替换hardly23.beneficial, rewarding替换helpful,24.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer25.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替换very 26.hardly necessary, hard

28、ly inevitable . 替换 unnecessary, avoidable27.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb. be interested in28.capture ones attention替换attract ones attention.29.facet,demension,sphere代aspect30.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, sugge

29、st ,fear31.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause.32. There are several reasons behind sth 替换.reasons for sth33.desire 替换want.34.pour attention into 替换pay attention to35.bear in mind that 替换remember36. enjoy, possess 替换have(注意process是过程的意思)37. interaction替换communication38.frown on sth替换 b

30、e against , disagree with sth39.to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance40. next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossible3. 积累一些常用句型This is partly due to the fact that the telephone is superb here.(NHCE-2 UNIT 1)This attitude results in a nation of people to resear

31、ching, experimenting, and exploring.The government has waged a massive ad. campaign to encourage birth control.(unit2)The country must still convert millions more to the idea of birth control.分项精品句：1表示原因 1）There are three reasons for this 2）The reasons for this are as follows 3）The reason for this is obvious 4）The reason for this is not far to seek 5）The reason for this is that 6）We have good reason to believe that 2表示好处 1）It has the following advantages 2）It does us a lot of good 3）It benefits us q