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六级作文全部讲解

六级作文精讲

四六级作文阅卷标准分五等：

2分——条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

5分——基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重语言错误。

8分——基本切题，表达思想比较清楚，文字尚连贯，但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。

11分——切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。

14分——切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本无语言错误。

高分作文三大要素

I结构清晰structure------bone

II句式多样sentences----flesh

III语言亮点vocabulary---soul

I结构清晰：

1、文章整体结构完整

2、段与段，句与句衔接要自然:

段落层次连接词+过度词（句、段逻辑关系）

3、每个段落必须要保持完整

4、各段祥略要得当

1、文章整体结构完整：

请审题并确定下面的文章写几段？

Example1SayNotoPiratedProducts

1）目前盗版现象比较严重

2）造成这种现象的原因

3）我们应该怎么做

Example2howtosucceedinajobinterview

1）面试在求职过程中的作用

2）取得面试成功的因素：

仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是......

Example3HowIfinancemycollegeeducation

1）上大学的费用（tuitionandfees）可以通过多种途径解决

2）哪种途径适合于我（说明理由）

Example4OnStress

1）有人害怕压力

2）有人认为压力并不是坏事

3）你的观点

关于文章整体结构总结：

最少不能少于两段

最多不能多于四段

2、段与段，句与句衔接要自然

Howtoquitthehabitofsmoking?

1）吸烟有害身体健康

2）戒烟很难

3）如何戒烟

1）Itisalmostknowntoallthatsmokingisharmfultopeople’shealth.2）Smokingcanleadtoheartdisease,cancerandotherproblems.3）TheWorldHealthOrganizationsaysdiseasescausedbysmokingkillatleasttwomillionandfivehundredthousandspersonseachyear.

1）However,stillmanypeoplefinditdifficulttostopsmoking,whichisduetothefollowingreasons.2）Foronething,itisbecausetheeffectofnicotinemakesithardforsmokerstoquitit.3）Foranotherthing,manyofthemhavenodeterminationtogiveupthebadhabit.4）Therefore,itishightimethatmoreattentionwaspaidtohowtogiveupsmokingsuccessfully.

1）Someeffectivemeasureshavebeentakentohelppeoplekeepawayfromtheharmofsmoking.2）Firstly,nowadays,smokingisforbiddeninpublicplacesandinadvertisementsofanykind.3）Inaddition,theworld“NoTobaccoDay”isobservedeveryyearasthebiggestcampaigntoraisepeople’sawareness.4）Ifwefollowthemeasuresmentionedabove,theimpactfromsmokingcouldbeminimizedgreatly.

Somescientists/doctors/researchers/

psychologists/professors…inchina/from

ChinaandUSA/aroundthewholeworldsay….millions….

Theresearch/statisticfigurefrom….showsthat…..

段与段，句与句衔接：

保证1）意义连贯2）形式连贯.

即要有1）逻辑性2）连接手段.

段落层次连接词：

1）first,second,third,last

2）firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally

3）thefirst,thesecond,thethird,thelast

4）inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace,inthethirdplace,lastly

5）tobeginwith,then,furthermore,finally

6）tostartwith,next,inaddition,finally

7）firstandforemost,besides,lastbutnotleast

8）mostimportantofall,moreover,finally

9）ontheonehand,ontheotherhand

10）foronething,foranotherthing

连接过度词（句、段逻辑关系）：

1.总括过渡词：

AsfarasIamconcerned,Asforme,Generallyspeaking,Onalargerscale,Practicallyspeaking,Totaketheideafurther

2.同类过渡词

Equallyimportant,Namely,Similarly,Thatis

3.对比过渡词

Conversely,Incontrast,Onthecontrary,Otherwise,Whereas,While

4.举例过渡词

Acaseinpointisthat,Forinstance,Forexample,Suchas,Asanillustration

4.列举过渡词

Firstofall,First,second,third,Inthefirstplace,Initially,Tostartwith,Firstandforemost

Furthermore,Inaddition,Moreover,What’smore,Finally,Lastbutnotleast

6.原因过渡词

Dueto,Considering,Asaresultof,Given,Inthat,Intheviewof,Onaccountof,Onthegroundsof,Owingto,Seeingthat

7.让步过渡词语

Although,Inspiteof,Eventhough,Admittedly,Certainly,Indeed,True

8.转折过渡词

Nevertheless,However,Onthecontrary,Ontheotherhand,Yet,Whereas,although,but,inspiteof,yet,otherwise,despite

9.强调过渡词

Anyway,Chiefly,Evenworse,Mostimportantofall,Needlesstosay,Nodoubt,Particularly

10.目的过渡词

Withtheaimof,Forthesakeof,Withtheviewto,Forthepurposeof

11.承接过渡词

Sotospeak,Asamatteroffact,Assoonas,Asitwere,Yearinandyearout

12.条件过渡词

Given,Aslongas,Providedthat

13.结论过渡词

Accordingly,Aninall,Asaresult,Consequently,Hence,Inbrief,Inconclusion,Ingeneral,Inshort,Onthewhole,Toconclude,Tosumupinaword,Insummary,finally,therefore,accordingly,inshort,thus,inconclusion,so,inbrief,inaword

3每个段落必须要保持完整

1stparageneraltopic

supportingidea/details

（1）

supportingidea/details

（2）

2ndparasub-topicsentence

supportingidea/details

（1）

supportingidea/details

（2）

supportingidea/details（3）

3rdparaconclusion

supportingidea/details

（1）

supportingidea/details

（2）

II句式多样:

1长短句错落有致

2.主动变被动

3.强调句和倒装句的适当运用

1长短句错落有致

eg.1Hisfatherisasalesman.Hisfatherbecameamillionaireovernight.

Hisfather,asasalesman,becameamillionaireovernight.

Eg.2Teenagersarepressuredbyschoolwork.Theyarealsoencouragedbytheirpeers.Undersuchcircumstances,theyresorttosmoking.Butsometimestheyfeelalittleguilty.

Pressuredbyschoolworkandencouragedbytheirpeers,teenagersresorttosmoking,thoughsometimestheyfeelalittleguilty.

eg.32）Smokingcanleadtoheartdisease,cancerandotherproblems.

Smoking,whichhasbeenadoptedbymanypeople,canleadtoheartdisease,cancerandotherproblems.

Smoking,asahabitadoptedbymanypeople,especiallyman,canleadtoheartdisease,cancerandotherproblems.

2.主动变被动

1）被动语态体现论证的客观性.（theyyouwe不要随便使用，切忌交错使用）

Weshouldpaymoreattentiontotheenvironment,whichisbeingdestroyedseriouslybyhuman.

Moreattentionshouldbepaidtotheenvironment,whichisbeingdestroyedseriouslybyhuman.

Somanymeasureshavebeentakenby…...

2）保持陈述对象的一致，以求行文通顺。

WhenthePrimeMinisterarrivedattheairport,hundredsofreporterssurroundedhimimmediately.

WhenthePrimeMinisterarrivedattheairport,hewassurroundedimmediatelybyhundredsofreporters.

3.强调句和倒装句的适当运用

Wecanbetterourenvironmentonlythroughallourefforts.

Onlythroughalloureffortscanwebetterourenvironment.

Itisthroughalloureffortsthatwecanbetterourenvironment.

Onlyinthiswaycanwe……

Undernocircumstancescanwegiveuptheconfidence……（innoway/innocase）

III语言亮点

1、副词的使用

2、积累并使用高档词汇与表达

3、积累常用句型

4、适当使用修辞以及名言警句

1.副词的使用

Theforestisbeingdestroyed.

Theforestisseriouslydestroyed.

Herunsfast.

Herunsincrediblyfast.

Heisanamazingprofessor.

Heisanabsolutelyamazingprofessor.

TheU.S.isdefinitelyatelephonecountry.

2.积累并使用高档词汇与表达

Consequently（so）,weworkhardatthetaskofsavingtime.（NHCE-2unit1Pg3）

However,peoplearemeetingincreasingly（moreandmore）ontelevisionscreens.（NHCE-2unit1Pg3）

WhenitcomestoLeiFeng’sspirit,differentpeoplewilloffer（give）differentopinions.

However,stillothersadvocate（support）thelatteropinionbecause……

40个高档词汇：

六级写作经典的替换词：

1failtodo替换Didn’t

2concerning/involving/approximately替换About

3dueto/thankstothefactthat替换Because

4accountfor替换Explain

5Cover替换Go

6present/extend/offer替换Give

7considerable/tremendous/substantial替换Great

8Agreatvarietyof替换Manykindsof

9Boom替换Rapidgrowth

10Beinvolvedin替换Takepartin

11.individuals,characters,folks替换（people,persons）

12:

positive,favorable,rosy（美好的），promising

（有希望的），perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,superior替换good

13:

dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse,ill（有害的）替换bad

如果bad做表语，可以有belessimpressive替换

eg.Anarmyofcollegestudentsindulgethemselvesinplayinggames,enjoyingromancewithgirls/boysorkillingtimepassivelyintheirdorms.Whenitapproachestograduation,asaresult,theyrecordsarelessimpressive.

14.（anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof,ahostof,many,ifnotmost）替换many.

注：

用many,ifnotmost一定要小心，many后一定要有词。

Eg.Manyindividuals,ifnotmost,harbortheideathat….同理用most,ifnotall,替换most.

15:

asliceof,quietafew,several替换some

16:

harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,

holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,

itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat）替think

（因为是书面语，所以要加that）

17:

affair,business,matter替换thing

18:

shared代common

19.reaphugefruits替换getmanybenefits）

20:

formypart,frommyownperspective替换inmyopinion

21:

Increasing（ly）,growing替换moreandmore（注意没有growingly这种形式。

所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.

Eg.sthhasgainedgrowingpopularity.

popularwiththeadvancementofsth.

22.littleifanything,或littleornothing替换hardly

23..beneficial,rewarding替换helpful,

24.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,替换customer

25.exceedingly,extremely,intensely替换very

26.hardlynecessary,hardlyinevitable...替换unnecessary,avoidable

27.sthappealstosb,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb替换sbtakeinterestin/sb.beinterestedin

28.captureone'sattention替换attractone'sattention.

29.facet,demension,sphere代aspect

30.beindicativeof,besuggestiveof,befearfulof代indicate,suggest,fear

31.giveriseto,leadto,resultin,trigger替换cause.

32.Thereareseveralreasonsbehindsth替换..reasonsforsth

33.desire替换want.

34.pourattentioninto替换payattentionto

35.bearinmindthat替换remember

36.enjoy,possess替换have（注意process是过程的意思）

37.interaction替换communication

38.frownonsth替换beagainst,disagreewithsth

39.tonameonlyafew,asanexample替换forexample,forinstance

40.nextto/virtuallyimpossible,替换nearly/almostimpossible

3.积累一些常用句型

Thisispartlyduetothefactthatthetelephoneissuperbhere.（NHCE-2UNIT1）

Thisattituderesultsinanationofpeopletoresearching,experimenting,andexploring.

Thegovernmenthaswagedamassivead.campaigntoencouragebirthcontrol.（unit2）

Thecountrymuststillconvertmillionsmoretotheideaofbirthcontrol.

分项精品句：

1．表示原因

1）Therearethreereasonsforthis．

2）Thereasonsforthisareasfollows．

3）Thereasonforthisisobvious．

4）Thereasonforthisisnotfartoseek．

5）Thereasonforthisisthat．．．

6）Wehavegoodreasontobelievethat．．．

2．表示好处

1）Ithasthefollowingadvantages．

2）Itdoesusalotofgood．

3）Itbenefitsusq