高中英语写作新题型短文续写专项练习16篇(含范文及解析)文档格式.doc

1、ll see that its going to bring both of us luck. And with that, Eliza kissed her grandmother and left for the interview.Leaving the interview, Eliza felt confident that she had got the job so she decided to celebrate by going to a restaurant. Sitting at her table, Eliza felt an elderly woman staring

2、at her for a long time.Im sorry. Do I know you? Eliza asked.m sorry, dear, but you remind me of my best friend, the old woman replied. She looked like you and used to wear a scarf just like yours. Eliza listened carefully, with her eyes and mouth wide open. She had heard stories of her grandmothers

3、best friend and knew the meaning of the scarf. Could this woman be Betty, her grandmothers childhood friend?注意：1. 所续写短文词数应为100左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已给出，不计入总词数；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Then the old woman introduced herself, “My name is _Paragraph 2:The old woman agre

4、ed. _答案及解析：Then the old woman introduced herself, “My name is Betty. Im originally from Poland, but left there when I was thirteen. And I have been living here in Washington DC in America ever since.” Eliza could not believe it, stories of her grandmothers best friend floating in her mind. She assum

5、ed that the old woman must be her grandmothers best friend. She said, “Betty, would you mind coming with me right now? I need to show you somebody.”The old woman agreed. Soon they left the restaurant after dinner. Arriving at Scouts home, the old woman eagerly rang the door bell. The moment Scout op

6、ened the door, she was amazed to see her childhood friend standing in front of her. How magical! The scarf indeed brought them good luck. Excited and moved, both of them were in tears. They hadnt seen each other for many years and had many things to share.【详解】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，Scout和Betty从小是好朋友

7、，但是因为战争原因，Scout必须举家搬去美国，因此他们请求父母给他们买一对围巾作为友谊的象征，自此以后他们不再见面，但是依然保存着围巾，直到一天Scout的孙女带着她的围巾在餐馆的时候，遇到了Betty.续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：然后，这个老夫人作了自我介绍。所以应该写：Betty讲述自己为什么也来到了美国，以及Eliza告诉她要带她去见一个人。第二段开头是：这个老夫人同意了。Betty跟着Eliza去了她的家，见到了童年时的朋友，两人非常激动，不敢相信。续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的

8、词数应为100左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。（二） “If mum finds out that Im going to the beach, Ill be in big trouble.” I said to myself softly in a low voice.I went downstairs slowly and tried to walk casually into the kitchen. As I was walking towards the back door, mum asked without looking up from

9、her “dish-washing”, “Where are you going?” I answered back without hesitation,“ I am going to the garden to play.” After I got out of the kitchen, I breathed a sign of relief. My plan had worked out fine so far. I climbed the fence and jumped onto the muddy field next to my house and started running

10、 towards the bus stop at top speed,After half an hour I was at the beach scanning the crowd for my friends, Jimmy and Bobby. Two young men were racing in the canoes （独木舟）. After a while, I saw them near a coconut tree. I ran towards them and got into my swimming trunk （游泳裤）. For about an hour, we pl

11、ayed volleyball happily.Suddenly, Bobby hit the ball too hard and the ball fell into the sea. Just as Bobby was going to pick up the ball, the tide came in and carried the ball further and further away from the shore. I wanted to show off my swimming skills so I declared to help get the ball for the

12、m.I dived into the water and started swimming at a steady pace. After swimming for about ten minutes, I became tired but when I saw that the ball was only a few feet away from me, I put inan extra burst of speed. However, just as I was going to get the ball, a very strong current swept the ball furt

13、her away from me. At that moment, a string of weed （海草）tangled （缠绕） up with my feet and I could not swim properly.I struggled to keep afloat but it was no use. “ If I had listened to my parents, this would never have happened,” I thought silently.Paragraph 1Finally, after struggling for a minute or

14、two, I still got pulled underwater._Paragraph 2When I woke up, I was in an empty room lying on a bed._Finally, after struggling For a minute or two, I still got putted underwater. I told myself I should never give up. Then I pulled the weed again with great efforts. The weed finally broke. I swam ba

15、ck to the surface to take a deep breath. I saw two young men in canoes, racing each other. I was exhausted and shouted for help. The two men saw me and raced towards me. By the time they reached me, I had been already unconscious.When I woke up, I was in an empty room lying on a bed. It was not unti

16、l a doctor came into the room that I realized that I was in a hospital. Jimmy and Bobby told me the two young men brought me to the shore and sent me to the hospital. After a few minutes, my parents with half angry and half worried faces walked in. My parents scolded me for running out of the house

17、secretly but were also glad that I was not seriously injured. I will never forget that terrifying experience. Neither will I ever want to show off again.【分析】前文提要：我挣扎着保持漂浮，但没有用。“如果我听了我父母的话，这是永远不会发生的，”我默默地想。【详解】（1）第一段所给首句：Finally, after struggling for a minute or two, I still got pulled underwater.这是一

18、句转折句，接下来应该是作者不放弃，勇敢地游出水面，求救，无论从何角度拓展，需注意与续写第二段首句呼应。（2）第二段首句：When I woke up, I was in an empty room lying on a bed.这一句应该是转折句，既然作者醒来，说明他已经被救，接下来应该是作者躺在医院里，一定是通知了他的家人，父母来后一定会生气的，父母会责备他偷偷地跑出了房子，但也很高兴他没有受到严重的伤害。作者永远不会忘记那可怕的经历。他也不想再炫耀了。（三）On a cold windy day, a poor boy tried to pay his way through school

19、 by selling goods door to door. Wandering on the street, he was not a successful seller. Whats worse, he found that he only had one dime（一角硬币） left. His empty stomach reminded him constantly that for days he hadnt eaten anything. He had no choice but to beg for a meal at the next house. Hesitantly h

20、e knocked at door, thinking about what to say when it opened. However, he lost his nerve when a lovely young woman opened the door. “What can I do for you?” asked the young woman. The boy paused for a while “Would you please give me some a drink of water?” the boy dare not to look directly into her

21、eyes. She looked at the bony boy and thought he might need something to give him energy so she brought him a glass of milk. His head rising and small hands taking the cup, he drank it up slowly, and then asked, “How much do I owe you?”“You dont owe me anything,” she replied with a warm smile on her

22、face. “My mother has taught me never to accept pay for a kindness.” Deeply moved, he said sincerely, “Then I shall thank you from the bottom of my heart.”As Howard Kelly left that house, he not only felt stronger physically, but it also increased his faith in God and the whole human race. As a matte

23、r of fact, he was about to give up and quit before that point.Years later the young woman became critically ill. However, the local doctors were unable to give the effective medical treatment. Finally they sent her to a hospital in the big city, where specialists can be called in to cure her rare di

24、sease. Among those famous specialists, Dr. Howard Kelly was called in for the consultation. When he heard the name of the town she came from, a strange light filled his eyes. Immediately, he rose and went down through the hospital hall into her room.1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两

25、段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Dressed in his doctors gown, he went in to see her._ _The bill was sent to her room._ _Dressed in his doctors gown, he went in to see her. He saw her lie on the bed and recognized her at once. Her lovely face looked pale. He went back to the consultation room and determined to do his best to save her life. Form that day on, he gave special attention to her case. Luckily, after a long struggle, the battle