高中英语写作新题型短文续写专项练习16篇(含范文及解析)文档格式.doc

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llseethatit’sgoingtobringbothofusluck."

Andwiththat,Elizakissedhergrandmotherandleftfortheinterview.

Leavingtheinterview,Elizafeltconfidentthatshehadgotthejobsoshedecidedtocelebratebygoingtoarestaurant.Sittingathertable,Elizafeltanelderlywomanstaringatherforalongtime.

"

I'

msorry.DoIknowyou?

Elizaasked.

msorry,dear,butyouremindmeofmybestfriend,"

theoldwomanreplied."

Shelookedlikeyouandusedtowearascarfjustlikeyours."

Elizalistenedcarefully,withhereyesandmouthwideopen.Shehadheardstoriesofhergrandmother'

sbestfriendandknewthemeaningofthescarf.CouldthiswomanbeBetty,hergrandmother'

schildhoodfriend?

注意：

1.所续写短文词数应为100左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已给出，不计入总词数；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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Thentheoldwomanintroducedherself,“Mynameis_______________________________

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Theoldwomanagreed._______________________________________________________

答案及解析：

Thentheoldwomanintroducedherself,“MynameisBetty.I’moriginallyfromPoland,butlefttherewhenIwasthirteen.AndIhavebeenlivinghereinWashingtonDCinAmericaeversince.”Elizacouldnotbelieveit,storiesofhergrandmother’sbestfriendfloatinginhermind.Sheassumedthattheoldwomanmustbehergrandmother’sbestfriend.Shesaid,“Betty,wouldyoumindcomingwithmerightnow?

Ineedtoshowyousomebody.”

Theoldwomanagreed.Soontheylefttherestaurantafterdinner.ArrivingatScout’shome,theoldwomaneagerlyrangthedoorbell.ThemomentScoutopenedthedoor,shewasamazedtoseeherchildhoodfriendstandinginfrontofher.Howmagical!

Thescarfindeedbroughtthemgoodluck.Excitedandmoved,bothofthemwereintears.Theyhadn’tseeneachotherformanyyearsandhadmanythingstoshare.

【详解】本篇书面表达是读后续写。

通过阅读所给文章可知，Scout和Betty从小是好朋友，但是因为战争原因，Scout必须举家搬去美国，因此他们请求父母给他们买一对围巾作为友谊的象征，自此以后他们不再见面，但是依然保存着围巾，直到一天Scout的孙女带着她的围巾在餐馆的时候，遇到了Betty.

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：

然后，这个老夫人作了自我介绍。

所以应该写：

Betty讲述自己为什么也来到了美国，以及Eliza告诉她要带她去见一个人。

第二段开头是：

这个老夫人同意了。

Betty跟着Eliza去了她的家，见到了童年时的朋友，两人非常激动，不敢相信。

续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。

最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为100左右；

续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

按要求完成写作任务。

（二）

“IfmumfindsoutthatI'

mgoingtothebeach,I'

llbeinbigtrouble.”Isaidtomyselfsoftlyinalowvoice.

Iwentdownstairsslowlyandtriedtowalkcasuallyintothekitchen.AsIwaswalkingtowardsthebackdoor,mumaskedwithoutlookingupfromher“dish-washing”,“Whereareyougoing?

”Iansweredbackwithouthesitation,“Iamgoingtothegardentoplay.”AfterIgotoutofthekitchen,Ibreathedasignofrelief.Myplanhadworkedoutfinesofar.Iclimbedthefenceandjumpedontothemuddyfieldnexttomyhouseandstartedrunningtowardsthebusstopattopspeed,

AfterhalfanhourIwasatthebeachscanningthecrowdformyfriends,JimmyandBobby.Twoyoungmenwereracinginthecanoes（独木舟）.Afterawhile,Isawthemnearacoconuttree.Irantowardsthemandgotintomyswimmingtrunk（游泳裤）.Foraboutanhour,weplayedvolleyballhappily.

Suddenly,Bobbyhittheballtoohardandtheballfellintothesea.JustasBobbywasgoingtopickuptheball,thetidecameinandcarriedtheballfurtherandfurtherawayfromtheshore.IwantedtoshowoffmyswimmingskillssoIdeclaredtohelpgettheballforthem.

Idivedintothewaterandstartedswimmingatasteadypace.Afterswimmingforabouttenminutes,IbecametiredbutwhenIsawthattheballwasonlyafewfeetawayfromme,Iputin

anextraburstofspeed.However,justasIwasgoingtogettheball,averystrongcurrentswepttheballfurtherawayfromme.Atthatmoment,astringofweed（海草）tangled（缠绕）upwithmyfeetandIcouldnotswimproperly.

Istruggledtokeepafloatbutitwasnouse.“IfIhadlistenedtomyparents,thiswouldneverhavehappened,”Ithoughtsilently.

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Finally,afterstrugglingforaminuteortwo,Istillgotpulledunderwater.

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WhenIwokeup,Iwasinanemptyroomlyingonabed.________________________________

Finally,afterstrugglingForaminuteortwo,Istillgotputtedunderwater.ItoldmyselfIshouldnevergiveup.ThenIpulledtheweedagainwithgreatefforts.Theweedfinallybroke.Iswambacktothesurfacetotakeadeepbreath.Isawtwoyoungmenincanoes,racingeachother.Iwasexhaustedandshoutedforhelp.Thetwomensawmeandracedtowardsme.Bythetimetheyreachedme,Ihadbeenalreadyunconscious.

WhenIwokeup,Iwasinanemptyroomlyingonabed.ItwasnotuntiladoctorcameintotheroomthatIrealizedthatIwasinahospital.JimmyandBobbytoldmethetwoyoungmenbroughtmetotheshoreandsentmetothehospital.Afterafewminutes,myparentswithhalfangryandhalfworriedfaceswalkedin.MyparentsscoldedmeforrunningoutofthehousesecretlybutwerealsogladthatIwasnotseriouslyinjured.Iwillneverforgetthatterrifyingexperience.NeitherwillIeverwanttoshowoffagain.

【分析】

前文提要：

我挣扎着保持漂浮，但没有用。

“如果我听了我父母的话，这是永远不会发生的，”我默默地想。

【详解】

（1）第一段所给首句：

Finally,afterstrugglingforaminuteortwo,Istillgotpulledunderwater.这是一句转折句，接下来应该是作者不放弃，勇敢地游出水面，求救，无论从何角度拓展，需注意与续写第二段首句呼应。

（2）第二段首句：

WhenIwokeup,Iwasinanemptyroomlyingonabed.这一句应该是转折句，既然作者醒来，说明他已经被救，接下来应该是作者躺在医院里，一定是通知了他的家人，父母来后一定会生气的，父母会责备他偷偷地跑出了房子，但也很高兴他没有受到严重的伤害。

作者永远不会忘记那可怕的经历。

他也不想再炫耀了。

（三）

Onacoldwindyday,apoorboytriedtopayhiswaythroughschoolbysellinggoodsdoortodoor.Wanderingonthestreet,hewasnotasuccessfulseller.What’sworse,hefoundthatheonlyhadonedime（一角硬币）left.Hisemptystomachremindedhimconstantlythatfordayshehadn’teatenanything.Hehadnochoicebuttobegforamealatthenexthouse.Hesitantlyheknockedatdoor,thinkingaboutwhattosaywhenitopened.However,helosthisnervewhenalovelyyoungwomanopenedthedoor.“WhatcanIdoforyou?

”askedtheyoungwoman.Theboypausedforawhile“Wouldyoupleasegivemesome…adrinkofwater?

”theboydarenottolookdirectlyintohereyes.Shelookedatthebonyboyandthoughthemightneedsomethingtogivehimenergysoshebroughthimaglassofmilk.Hisheadrisingandsmallhandstakingthecup,hedrankitupslowly,andthenasked,“HowmuchdoIoweyou?

”“Youdon’towemeanything,”sherepliedwithawarmsmileonherface.“Mymotherhastaughtmenevertoacceptpayforakindness.”Deeplymoved,hesaidsincerely,“ThenIshallthankyoufromthebottomofmyheart.”AsHowardKellyleftthathouse,henotonlyfeltstrongerphysically,butitalsoincreasedhisfaithinGodandthewholehumanrace.Asamatteroffact,hewasabouttogiveupandquitbeforethatpoint.

Yearslatertheyoungwomanbecamecriticallyill.However,thelocaldoctorswereunabletogivetheeffectivemedicaltreatment.Finallytheysenthertoahospitalinthebigcity,wherespecialistscanbecalledintocureherraredisease.Amongthosefamousspecialists,Dr.HowardKellywascalledinfortheconsultation.Whenheheardthenameofthetownshecamefrom,astrangelightfilledhiseyes.Immediately,heroseandwentdownthroughthehospitalhallintoherroom.

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Dressedinhisdoctor’sgown,hewentintoseeher.__________________________

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Thebillwassenttoherroom.___________________________________

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Dressedinhisdoctor’sgown,hewentintoseeher.Hesawherlieonthebedandrecognizedheratonce.Herlovelyfacelookedpale.Hewentbacktotheconsultationroomanddeterminedtodohisbesttosaveherlife.Formthatdayon,hegavespecialattentiontohercase.Luckily,afteralongstruggle,thebattle