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1、【典例】 （ 2015全国卷）假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人们过重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。请给外教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：1.出发及返回时间;2.活动：包饺子、表演节目等。注意：1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3.结语已为你写好。Looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua【审题步骤】第一步:体裁：an email of invitation主题：a plan to visit the nursing home第二步:写作要点：Point 1：t

2、o invite Lucy to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing homePoint 2：to help the elderly therePoint 3：the time to set off at 9 in the morning; the time to comeback：around 4 oclock in the afternoonPoint 4：activities making dumplings and cakes， dancing and playingGames人称：采用第一、二人称时态：以一般将来时为主Para. 1：介

3、绍重阳节，概述活动计划Para. 2：具体活动安排Para. 3：发出邀请及提醒【参考范文】Dear Lucy，The Double Ninth Festival，which is the day set aside for the elderly in our culture，is drawing near. Our class plan is to visit the nursing home this Sunday in order to help the elderly there and enrich our afterclass life at the same time.Here

4、 are some detailed arrangements during our stay there. Well make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people. Well also spend some fun time together singing，dancing and playing games，which will make them happy. We should be back around 4 oclock in the afternoon as planned. Im convinced that the acti

5、vity will be enjoyable and meaningful. If youd like to join us，please let us know and well wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning. 遣好词造妙句，秒变“高大上”在高考书面表达阅卷中，最忌讳的就是大众化的词汇和平庸的表达,要想得高分，就得多用高级词汇，注意遣词造句。1.三大原则教你正确使用高级词汇原则一：弃旧取新原则阅卷老师偏爱学得晚的单词，因为使用学得比较晚的单词，可以体现学生学以致用的意识。例如，表示美丽的形容词，同学们首先想到的是初中词

6、汇beautiful，用高中词汇appealing，ttractive，charming和fascinating等来替换beautiful，可以为书面表达提分不少。原则二： 短语优先高考书面表达中，多使用词组和习语来代替一些单词可以起到增加文采的作用。例如，first可用to begin / start with 替换;besides可以用in addition和what is more替换;consider可以用take sth.into consideration/account替换;remember可以用 keep in mind替换。原则三：避免重复同学们要想写出一篇好的书面表达，就要

7、尽量避免重复多次使用同一个简单的单词。例如，反复使用should，这时考生应该充分发散思维，灵活地运用短语be supposed to 和had better等进行替换。2.常用词的高级变身1. devote替换spendHe spends all his spare time in reading. He devotes all his spare time to reading.2. average替换ordinaryIm an average（ordinary） student.3. but替换veryThe film we saw last night was very interes

8、ting. The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting.4. seat 替换sitOn his way to school, he found an old lady seated（sitting） by the road, looking worried.5. suppose 替换shouldHe is supposed to（should） have driven more slowly.6. appreciate替换thankThank you very much for your help. We appreciate

9、your help very much.7. the case替换trueI dont think it is the case（true）.8. on替换as soon asAs soon as he arrived, he began his research. On his arrival, he began his research.9. due to替换because ofHe arrived late due to（because of） the storm.10. cover替换walk/readAfter covering （walking） 10 miles, we all

10、felt tired.11. contribute to替换 be helpful/usefulPlenty of memory work is undoubtedly helpful to English study. Plenty of memory work will undoubtedly contribute to English study.12. round the corner替换coming soon/ nearby The summer vacation is round the corner（coming soon）. Do you have any plans? Li

11、Ming studies in a school round the corner（nearby）.13. come to light替换discoverThe family were so pleased when they discovered the lost jewels. The family were so pleased when the lost jewels came to light.14. have a ball替换have a good time/ enjoy oneselfAfter visiting the workshop, we went back to sch

12、ool. Every one of us had a ball（had a good time）.15. come up with替换think ofJack is very clever. He often comes up with （thinks of） new ideas.16. set aside替换saveSome students think that they should set aside some of their pocket money for books.17. be of + n. 替换adj.The products are of high quality （v

13、ery good） and are sold everywhere in China.18. refer to替换talk about/of，mentionThe professor you referred to（talked about ） is very famous.19. lest替换so that /in order thatI wrote down his telephone number so that I would not forget it. I wrote down his telephone number lest I forget it.20. be caught

14、up in/be crazy about/be absorbed in/be addicted to替换be interested inHe is caught up in （interested in） collecting stamps.21. more than替换veryIm very glad to learn that you are coming in September. Im more than glad to learn that you are coming in September.22. perfect（ly） 替换good/ very wellHe speaks p

15、erfect（good） English./ He speaks English perfectly（very well）.23. do sb. a favor替换helpWould you please do me a favor（help me） to turn down the radio?24. in the course of替换duringIn the course of（During） the mountain-climbing, please help each other and pay special attention to your safety.25. the maj

16、ority of替换mostThe majority of（Most of） the interviewees prefer watching TV at home to going to the cinema.26. consist of替换be made up ofOur class consists of （is made up of） 50 students.27. be worn out替换 be tired / broken After five hours non-stop work, we were all worn out（tired）. My shoes are worn

17、out（broken）. Please buy me a new pair.28. attend to替换look after29. on condition that替换as long as30. nevertheless替换however3.高级句型结构 It句型 It will be + some time + beforeIt wont be long before humans visit the Mars. It is + adj./ n.+ for sb to do sth.It is very important for us to learn computer well, b

18、ecause it has changed our life so much. It is + 被强调部分 + thatIt is what Yang Liwei has done that encourages us a lot.Those who like reading extensively say it is through reading that we get our knowledge. more than any other 表示最高级Indian produces more films than any other country in the world. 名词从句 It

19、 would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk. My hometown is no longer what it used to be.（非限制性）定语从句 The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street. It is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.改为：The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is not far f

20、rom Jianxin Chinese School. It was quite an experience for us both. Ill never forget it for the rest of my life.It was quite an experience for us both, which Ill never forget for the rest of my life. 分词结构 I dont know about others, but I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework an

21、d attending classes as well. Well mostly stay at home in the evening watching TV, playing games, and meeting people. Hearing this, a few people began to run after him. Born in America, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor. with结构 A terrible accident happened yesterday, with nine people k

22、illed and almost eighty injured. He was carrying a large bag on his shoulder, with a large suitcase in his left hand. 倒装句 The library is to the east of the teaching building.East of the teaching building is the library. Although we are tired, we are happy.Tired as we are, we are happy. He can grow t

23、o be a useful man only in this way.Only in this way can he grow to be a useful man. 被动语态 Opinions are divided on the question. All classes are taught by teachers with rich experience in teaching foreign students. New factories, houses and roads have been built. 巧妙的改写 Only等于no one butOnly Tom passed

24、the exam last week.No one but Tom passed the exam. as soon as 可用No soonerthan / Hardlywhen代替As soon as we had arrived at the cinema, the film startedNo sooner had we arrived at the cinema than the film started. have sb /sth / doneThe girl was knocked off her bicycle and had her leg brokenThe girl wa

25、s knocked off her bicycle and had her leg was broken 变换插入语的位置However, they suggest fees should be charged low.They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well youve learned Chinese.This is a good chance for you, I think

26、, to show your singing talent, and how well youve learned Chinese. 用同位语代替非限制性定语从句Meimei, who is seven years old, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several days.Meimei, a girl of seven, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several days. 其他1. 注重句子的开头 用with复合结构开头With the sun setting in the wes

27、t, we had to wave goodbye to the workers.With his help, weve learned how to analyze and settle problems. 用非谓语动词形式开头In order to improve our English, our school held an English contest.Walking towards the cinema, he met a foreigner.2. 长短句交错使用（注意：应突出主题句;长句子并非越长越好） 相关过渡语1. 表示时间顺序: first，then，afterwards，

28、meanwhile，later，first of all，finally，at last等2. 表示空间顺序: near，next to，far from，in front of，on the left，on one side等3. 表示比较、对照: like，unlike，such as，but，however，on the other hand，on the contrary，nevertheless，otherwise等4. 表示因果关系: because，for，as a result，therefore，thus等5. 表示递进关系: besides，whats more，what

29、was worse，moreover，furthermore，in addition等6. 表示并列关系: and，as well as，also等7. 表示总结性: in general，in a word，in short，on the whole，to sum up，in brief，to conclude等书面表达热点话题必备词汇热点话题的基本词汇是你顺利完成写作的保证，而其亮点词汇是你得高分的催化剂，两者都掌握才能既有内容又有质量。话题一：中学生的爱好与兴趣基本词汇：favorite（最喜欢的）;taste（爱好，志趣）; read novels（读小说）;surf the Internet（上网）; chat online（在线聊天）;collect stamps（集邮）; make e|friends（交网友）; climb mountains（爬山）;enjoy pop music（喜欢流行音乐）亮点词汇：develop an interest in（在方面培养兴趣）; be fond of（喜欢）;be keen on（对着迷）; have a taste in（喜爱）