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【典例】（2015全国卷Ⅱ）假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursinghome）陪老人们过重阳节（theDoubleNinthFestival）。
请给外教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：
1.出发及返回时间;
2.活动：
包饺子、表演节目等。
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3.结语已为你写好。
Lookingforwardtoyourreply.
Yours，
LiHua
【审题步骤】
第一步:
体裁：
anemailofinvitation
主题：
aplantovisitthenursinghome
第二步:
写作要点：
Point1：
toinviteLucytojoinusforavisittothenearbynursinghome
Point2：
tohelptheelderlythere
Point3：
thetimetosetoff—at9inthemorning;
thetimetocome
back：
around4oclockintheafternoon
Point4：
activities—makingdumplingsandcakes，dancingandplaying
Games
人称：
采用第一、二人称
时态：
以一般将来时为主
Para.1：
介绍重阳节，概述活动计划
Para.2：
具体活动安排
Para.3：
发出邀请及提醒
【参考范文】
DearLucy，
TheDoubleNinthFestival，whichisthedaysetasidefortheelderlyinourculture，isdrawingnear.OurclassplanistovisitthenursinghomethisSundayinordertohelptheelderlythereandenrichourafterclasslifeatthesametime.Herearesomedetailedarrangementsduringourstaythere.Wellmakedumplingsandcakeswiththeelderlypeople.Wellalsospendsomefuntimetogethersinging，dancingandplayinggames，whichwillmakethemhappy.Weshouldbebackaround4oclockintheafternoonasplanned.Imconvincedthattheactivitywillbeenjoyableandmeaningful.Ifyoudliketojoinus，pleaseletusknowandwellwaitforyouattheschoolgateat9inthemorning.
遣好词造妙句，秒变“高大上”
在高考书面表达阅卷中，最忌讳的就是大众化的词汇和平庸的表达,要想得高分，就得多用高级词汇，注意遣词造句。
1.三大原则教你正确使用"
高级词汇"
原则一：
"
弃旧取新"
原则
阅卷老师偏爱"
学得晚"
的单词，因为使用学得比较晚的单词，可以体现学生"
学以致用"
的意识。
例如，表示"
美丽的"
形容词，同学们首先想到的是初中词汇beautiful，用高中词汇appealing，ttractive，charming和fascinating等来替换beautiful，可以为书面表达提分不少。
原则二：
"
短语优先"
高考书面表达中，多使用词组和习语来代替一些单词可以起到增加文采的作用。
例如，first可用tobegin/startwith替换;
besides可以用inaddition和whatismore替换;
consider可以用takesth.intoconsideration/account替换;
remember可以用keepinmind替换。
原则三：
避免重复"
同学们要想写出一篇好的书面表达，就要尽量避免重复多次使用同一个简单的单词。
例如，反复使用should，这时考生应该充分发散思维，灵活地运用短语besupposedto和hadbetter等进行替换。
2.常用词的高级"
变身"
1.devote替换spend
Hespendsallhissparetimeinreading.→
Hedevotesallhissparetimetoreading.
2.average替换ordinary
I’manaverage（ordinary）student.
3.but替换very
Thefilmwesawlastnightwasveryinteresting.→
Thefilmwesawlastnightwasnothingbutinteresting.
4.seat替换sit
Onhiswaytoschool,hefoundanoldladyseated（sitting）bytheroad,lookingworried.
5.suppose替换should
Heissupposedto（should）havedrivenmoreslowly.
6.appreciate替换thank
Thankyouverymuchforyourhelp.→
Weappreciateyourhelpverymuch.
7.thecase替换true
Idon’tthinkitisthecase（true）.
8.on替换assoonas
Assoonashearrived,hebeganhisresearch.→
Onhisarrival,hebeganhisresearch.
9.dueto替换becauseof
Hearrivedlatedueto（becauseof）thestorm.
10.cover替换walk/read
Aftercovering（walking）10miles,weallfelttired.
11.contributeto替换behelpful/useful
PlentyofmemoryworkisundoubtedlyhelpfultoEnglishstudy.→
PlentyofmemoryworkwillundoubtedlycontributetoEnglishstudy.
12.roundthecorner替换comingsoon/nearby
①Thesummervacationisroundthecorner（comingsoon）.Doyouhaveanyplans?
②LiMingstudiesinaschoolroundthecorner（nearby）.
13.cometolight替换discover
Thefamilyweresopleasedwhentheydiscoveredthelostjewels.→
Thefamilyweresopleasedwhenthelostjewelscametolight.
14.haveaball替换haveagoodtime/enjoyoneself
Aftervisitingtheworkshop,wewentbacktoschool.Everyoneofushadaball（hadagoodtime）.
15.comeupwith替换thinkof
Jackisveryclever.Heoftencomesupwith（thinksof）newideas.
16.setaside替换save
Somestudentsthinkthattheyshouldsetasidesomeoftheirpocketmoneyforbooks.
17.beof+n.替换adj.
Theproductsareofhighquality（verygood）andaresoldeverywhereinChina.
18.referto替换talkabout/of，mention
Theprofessoryoureferredto（talkedabout）isveryfamous.
19.lest替换sothat/inorderthat
IwrotedownhistelephonenumbersothatIwouldnotforgetit.→
IwrotedownhistelephonenumberlestIforgetit.
20.becaughtupin/becrazyabout/beabsorbedin/beaddictedto替换beinterestedin
Heiscaughtupin（interestedin）collectingstamps.
21.morethan替换very
I’mverygladtolearnthatyouarecominginSeptember.→
I’mmorethangladtolearnthatyouarecominginSeptember.
22.perfect（ly）替换good/verywell
Hespeaksperfect（good）English./HespeaksEnglishperfectly（verywell）.
23.dosb.afavor替换help
Wouldyoupleasedomeafavor（helpme）toturndowntheradio?
24.inthecourseof替换during
Inthecourseof（During）themountain-climbing,pleasehelpeachotherandpayspecialattentiontoyoursafety.
25.themajorityof替换most
Themajorityof（Mostof）theintervieweespreferwatchingTVathometogoingtothecinema.
26.consistof替换bemadeupof
Ourclassconsistsof（ismadeupof）50students.
27.bewornout替换betired/broken
①Afterfivehours’non-stopwork,wewereallwornout（tired）.
②Myshoesarewornout（broken）.Pleasebuymeanewpair.
28.attendto替换lookafter
29.onconditionthat替换aslongas
30.nevertheless替换however
3.高级句型结构
◆It句型
①Itwillbe+sometime+before…
Itwon’tbelongbeforehumansvisittheMars.
②Itis+adj./n.+forsbtodosth.
Itisveryimportantforustolearncomputerwell,becauseithaschangedourlifesomuch.
③Itis+被强调部分+that…
ItiswhatYangLiweihasdonethatencouragesusalot.
Thosewholikereadingextensivelysayitisthroughreadingthatwegetourknowledge.
◆more…thananyother表示最高级
Indianproducesmorefilmsthananyothercountryintheworld.
◆名词从句
①Itwouldmeanagreatdealtometolistentothetapeandlearnwhatiscoveredinthetalk.
②Myhometownisnolongerwhatitusedtobe.
◆（非限制性）定语从句
①TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStreet.ItisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.
改为：
TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStreet,whichisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.
②Itwasquiteanexperienceforusboth.I’llneverforgetitfortherestofmylife.
Itwasquiteanexperienceforusboth,whichI’llneverforgetfortherestofmylife.
◆分词结构
①Idon’tknowaboutothers,butIusedtohavetoworkevenatweekendsdoingendlesshomeworkandattendingclassesaswell.
②We’llmostlystayathomeintheeveningwatchingTV,playinggames,andmeetingpeople.
③Hearingthis,afewpeoplebegantorunafterhim.
④BorninAmerica,ThomasEdisonwasagreatscientistandinventor.
◆with结构
①Aterribleaccidenthappenedyesterday,withninepeoplekilledandalmosteightyinjured.
②Hewascarryingalargebagonhisshoulder,withalargesuitcaseinhislefthand.
◆倒装句
①Thelibraryistotheeastoftheteachingbuilding.
Eastoftheteachingbuildingisthelibrary.
②Althoughwearetired,wearehappy.
Tiredasweare,wearehappy.
③Hecangrowtobeausefulmanonlyinthisway.
Onlyinthiswaycanhegrowtobeausefulman.
◆被动语态
①Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.
②Allclassesaretaughtbyteacherswithrichexperienceinteachingforeignstudents.
③Newfactories,housesandroadshavebeenbuilt.
◆巧妙的改写
①Only等于noonebut
OnlyTompassedtheexamlastweek.
NoonebutTompassedtheexam.
②assoonas…可用Nosooner…than…/Hardly…when…代替
Assoonaswehadarrivedatthecinema,thefilmstarted
Nosoonerhadwearrivedatthecinemathanthefilmstarted.
③havesb/sth/done
Thegirlwasknockedoffherbicycleandhadherlegbroken
Thegirlwasknockedoffherbicycleandhadherlegwasbroken
④变换插入语的位置
However,theysuggestfeesshouldbechargedlow.
Theysuggest,however,feesshouldbechargedlow.
Ithinkthisisagoodchanceforyoutoshowyoursingingtalent,andhowwellyou’velearnedChinese.
Thisisagoodchanceforyou,Ithink,toshowyoursingingtalent,andhowwellyou’velearnedChinese.
⑤用同位语代替非限制性定语从句
Meimei,whoissevenyearsold,hasbeenlearningtorideabicycleforseveraldays.
Meimei,agirlofseven,hasbeenlearningtorideabicycleforseveraldays.
◆其他
1.注重句子的开头
①用with复合结构开头
Withthesunsettinginthewest,wehadtowavegoodbyetotheworkers.
Withhishelp,we’velearnedhowtoanalyzeandsettleproblems.
②用非谓语动词形式开头
InordertoimproveourEnglish,ourschoolheldanEnglishcontest.
Walkingtowardsthecinema,hemetaforeigner.
2.长短句交错使用（注意：
应突出主题句;
长句子并非越长越好）
◆◆相关过渡语
1.表示时间顺序:
first，then，afterwards，meanwhile，later，firstofall，finally，atlast等
2.表示空间顺序:
near，nextto，farfrom，infrontof，ontheleft，ononeside等
3.表示比较、对照:
like，unlike，suchas，but，however，ontheotherhand，onthecontrary，nevertheless，otherwise等
4.表示因果关系:
because，for，asaresult，therefore，thus等
5.表示递进关系:
besides，what’smore，whatwasworse，moreover，furthermore，inaddition等
6.表示并列关系:
and，aswellas，also等
7.表示总结性:
ingeneral，inaword，inshort，onthewhole，tosumup，inbrief，toconclude等
书面表达热点话题必备词汇
热点话题的基本词汇是你顺利完成写作的保证，而其亮点词汇是你得高分的催化剂，两者都掌握才能既有内容又有质量。
话题一：
中学生的爱好与兴趣
基本词汇：
favorite（最喜欢的）;
taste（爱好，志趣）;
readnovels（读小说）;
surftheInternet（上网）;
chatonline（在线聊天）;
collectstamps（集邮）;
makee|friends（交网友）;
climbmountains（爬山）;
enjoypopmusic（喜欢流行音乐）
亮点词汇：
developaninterestin（在……方面培养兴趣）;
befondof（喜欢）;
bekeenon（对……着迷）;
haveatastein（喜爱）
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