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1、完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档1620分完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一两个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，有些许错误主要是因尝试使用较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。达到了预期的写作目的。第三档1115分基本完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。3错误要避免近几年低分作文中会出现很多错误，像审题错误、词汇错误、语法错误和中式英语等都是妨碍我们得高分

2、的绊脚石，应尽力避免。4词汇要高级高级词汇的选用不仅给人新颖的感觉，而且能彰显考生具有扎实语言功底的能力，从而使阅卷者给出高分。5句式要多样考生要想使所写的文章凸显文采，就必须写出几个漂亮的句子来，为文章增添色彩。6衔接要自然衔接过渡词可以使文章结构紧凑、前后连贯，能很好地起到穿针引线的作用，使逻辑更严密。二、外在美1分段要合理近两年江苏高考的作文范文及高分作文，绝大多数分为3个自然段。第一段：30词左右的摘要；第二段：根据阅读材料所描述的某一事件或现象发表个人看法或建议；第三段：总结全文内容。2书写要美观书写整洁漂亮能首先给阅卷老师一个良好的印象，先声夺人。为使书写美观，书写应符合英文书写习

3、惯，字母的大小和字母之间的距离要匀称，无涂改、增补现象。第一节读写任务全研透从近五年江苏高考分析，高考书面表达主要考查读写任务型作文。读写任务型作文的写作内容一般分为两部分：写作内容一为摘要写作，即概括短文大意；写作内容二，就某个主题发表个人看法。“读写任务”是“读”和“写”的有机结合，“读”的材料是为后面的“写”提供情景；同样，“写”也是对“读”的材料的思考和延伸。读写任务型作文主要以记叙文和议论文为主。从近五年江苏高考书面表达来看，都是议论性的读写任务型作文。本节将分七讲对读写任务型作文给予全景式的指导。第一讲如何运用“七步作文法”读写任务型作文从审题到成文可采用以下七个步骤。第一步：仔细

4、审题，明确题目要求通过审题明确文章主题、写作文体、写作内容、主要时态和主体人称等问题。其中主体人称，就是要确定主要以第几人称进行写作，需要考生特别注意。第二步：阅读短文，抓住内容要点记叙文的内容要点是：时间（when），地点（where），什么人（who），原因（why），做了什么事（what），过程怎么样（how），这是记叙文的六要素。议论文的内容要点是：论点、论据和论证。其关键是找出主题句或结论句。若文中有一分为二的观点，两种观点都要概括，不要漏掉其中一方的观点。第三步：概括大意，转述作者观点记叙文用自己的话将记叙文的六要素串联起来。但有时也不一定面面俱到，只需回答下列问题即可：谁做了什么

5、事（who did what）？结果怎样（what was the result）？文章揭示了什么（不一定有）?议论文用自己的话表达论点、论据和结论句。第四步：顺承过渡，引出个人观点写了摘要后，用过渡句引出自己的观点（赞成或反对）或引出类似的故事。第五步：详写例证，论证个人观点记叙文编写与阅读文章主题相同但情节不同的故事（亲身经历或虚构）。议论文在提出自己的观点后，再用具体的事例来论证自己的观点。第六步：得出结论，注意前后呼应举完事例论证之后，要进一步概括归纳自己的观点，升华主题，并注意首尾照应。第七步：修饰润色，使其锦上添花一查人称是否符合要求；二查语法方面的问题，包括用词、时态等方面的错误

6、等；三查逻辑关系，看前后观点是否一致；四查是否使用一些较为高级的词汇和句型，如非谓语动词结构、with复合结构、定语从句、倒装句型、恰当的连接词、短语动词等。（2017江苏高考）请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入（boxoffice income）的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。Saturday Afternoon. In a Shopping Centre.Li Jiang：Hi, Su Hua. Which movie shall we see?Su Hua：Whatever. Weve got so many choices, Kung Fu Yoga, J

7、ourney to the West . Each sounds great!Yeah! And some movie stars are fantastic.And the hightech！.Perfect! Lets get some food first. We only have 20 minutes left.No hurry. The cinema is on the same floor.One Day in 2016. At Home.Son：Mum, shall we go and see a film tonight?Mother：Why bother? We can s

8、tay at home and watch films online. Its convenient with our new and faster network.But it feels good in a cinema.And the price . We have to pay 50 yuan a ticket.Only 10 yuan more than last year.But still we cannot get the moneys worth. Some films are just boring .写作内容1用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容；2我国电影票房收入变化

9、的原因有哪些，简要谈谈你的看法（上述对话仅供参考，原因不少于两点）；3谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由。写作要求1写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3不必写标题。评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。1确定文体：本文要求“分析我国电影票房收入变化的原因，并谈谈你对票房收入走向的看法”，应为议论文。2确定主体时态：本文为议论文，主体时态应为一般现在时。阅读图示和对话内容，抓住要点根据写作内容和写作要求可以列出以下三个要点：1写出文章的摘要。2电影票房收入变化的原因及你的观点。3你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由。本文为分析

10、社会现象类的议论文，写作时要首先提炼出文章的主题。根据摘要写出过渡性用语，引出自己的观点。详写例证，分析20122015年票房收入增加的原因The fast economic development before 2016 was probably the most powerful engine driving the constant growth in the boxoffice income.The application of new technologies and the wide appeal of movie stars could also account for the

11、increase.分析2016年电影票房收入增长放缓的原因China saw a decline in its economic growth rate last year. And the Internet increased options for movie lovers. Consequently, some viewers began to turn away from cinemas, leading to a slower growth.谈自己对电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由Chinas economy is expected to grow at a medium sp

12、eed in the coming years, so an increase is possible in the investment in the movie industry and the number of quality movies.参考范文The boxoffice income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015. However, that increase slowed down in 2

13、016. The reasons behind this are various.On the one hand, the fast economic development before 2016 was probably the most powerful engine driving the constant growth in the boxoffice income. On the other hand, the application of new technologies and the wide appeal of movie stars could also account

14、for the increase. However, China saw a decline in its economic growth rate last year. And the Internet increased options for movie lovers. Consequently, some viewers began to turn away from cinemas, leading to a slower growth.s economy is expected to grow at a medium speed in the coming years, so an

15、 increase is possible in the investment in the movie industry and the number of quality movies. Therefore, its boxoffice income will probably enjoy a slight increase.镇江高三一模）国外老师上Social Studies 这类课的时候，常常用到“成功冰山（Success Iceberg）”的例子。请你根据下面的图和相关文字叙述，按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。Everyone is familiar with the phr

16、ase “Hard work is the key to success”. Some people think that luck is the only solution to success while many others believe that success includes compromise, persistence, dedication, and failures. To conclude, I consider that “Success is an iceberg”. We are all acquainted with the structure of the

17、iceberg which floats in the sea. Only a small portion of the iceberg is visible while the large portion is hidden under the water. Iceberg can be perfectly related to success. Achievement, which is seen by everyone, can be compared to the visible portion of the iceberg while the hard work behind suc

18、cess is the bottom of the iceberg.1用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；2结合上述信息，简要分析你对“成功冰山”的理解；3举例说明“成功冰山”对你的启示。运用“七步作文法”完成本文： 参考范文：As is vividly illustrated above, success is like an iceberg floating in the sea. Only a small part of it can be seen while most of it is invisible under the water.When talking about suc

19、cess, people often fix their mind on success itself, ignoring some hidden factors. I hold the belief that although dedication, hard work and discipline are key elements of success, failure and sacrifice are also significant. Those who are unwilling to be persistent will end in failure. On the whole,

20、 hard work is the leading factor.“Success Iceberg” teaches me how to view success properly. Take my story for example. When in Grade 7, I didnt do well in maths. After much hard work, I got the highest score in the final examination. My classmates thought I succeeded only because I had a higher IQ.

21、Actually, they failed to see the fact that my success resulted from many other factors, which played a more important role than IQ.第二讲如何写记叙文的摘要对记叙文进行概括时，要抓住原文的人物、事件、结果三大要素。有些记叙文的结尾有一个点题句，表达深刻内涵或故事带给人们的启示，在写摘要时也需把故事寓意表达出来。一、记叙文摘要的模板1没有寓意只单纯介绍事件的记叙文摘要模板（1）人物事件（2）人物事件结果2篇末有表示文章内涵的记叙文摘要模板人物事件结果启示二、记叙文摘要

22、的写法要素串联法1寻词摘句，确定要素记叙文通常包含时间（when）、地点（where）、人物（who）、事件（what）、起因（why）、经过（how）等六大要素。在阅读时要圈定这些要素。2整合信息，串联要素列出上述要素和关键词后，需要对其进行整合，把所圈定的要素按一定的逻辑顺序整合。在整合时要有所取舍，对于有助于揭示主题的主要信息，应该全部概括；而对于主题之外的内容要毫不吝啬地舍弃。3认真审题，注意表达表达时要注意以下三点：（1）确定人称：如果原文是第一人称，在转述时一般要改为第三人称。（2）确定时态：记叙文常以一般过去时为主。若记叙文中有作者从中得到的“启示”或“意义”等，一般用一般现在时

23、表达。（3）确定词数与句数：摘要要求是“以约30个单词概括”，从近两年高考阅卷的实际来看，满分作文概括的词数在2638个单词之间。受词数限制，概括部分一般用13句表达，以用2句最佳。句子过多，要么内容累赘，要么句式过于简单，均会影响表达效果。三、记叙文摘要的常用句式1The writer tells us his experience .2The author shares his experiences .3From the passage, we know that .4The passage tells us that .5In the passage .请阅读下面短文，然后以约30个单

24、词概括下文的主要内容。A_father came_home_from_work_late,_tired_and_exhausted. He worked day and night, hoping to earn more money for his only child. His_5yearold_daughter was waiting for him at the door.“Dad,_how_much_do_you_earn_an_hour？”asked the daughter.“Why do you ask that？”“I just want to know. Please te

25、ll me how much you earn an hour.”“If you really want to know . I earn $20 an hour.”“Oh，” the little girl replied with her head down. Looking up, she said, “Dad,_may_I_borrow_$10？The father became angry. “Go to bed right now! Think about how selfish you are. I work hard every day, but you just want t

26、o buy your silly toy！The little girl quietly went to her bedroom, feeling sad. After an hour or so, the father calmed down and started to feel sorry because she really didnt ask for money very often. So he went to his daughters room and gave her $10.The little girl jumped from the bed. “Oh, thank yo

27、u, Dad！” She was really happy indeed.Then she took out her own savings and said，“Dad, I have $20 now. Can_I_buy_an_hour_of_your_time? Please come home earlier tomorrow. I_would_like_to_have_dinner_with_you.” 点拨圈定本文的要素（见原文画线部分）whoa girl and her fatherwhenat the time when her father came home from wor

28、kwhereat homewhatThe girl borrowed $10 from her father and wanted to buy an hour from her father.整合这些要素，提取重要信息，舍去次要细节阅读全文之后，发现本文重要的信息是：人物和发生的事情。确定人称和时态人称：本文是讲述了一个小女孩和父亲的故事，应该用第三人称；时态：事情发生在过去，用一般过去时。串联要素，确定表达In this passage, the writer mainly tells us about a little girl, who wanted to buy some time

29、from her busy father so that he could accompany her.南京、盐城高三一模）请阅读下面短文，然后以约30个单词概括下文的主要内容。注意写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句。On Nov. 25, 2016, Luo Er in the city of Shenzhen published an article about his 5yearold daughters leukemia （白血病） to raise money for her treatment via WeChat, Chinas most popular messaging app. According to the WeChat account, Luo raised more than 2 million yuan.However, he was flooded with considerable criticism. On the one hand, he was revealed as th