1、自己改正 根据因果In this argument, the arguer recommends that should advise to To justify this claim, the arguer provides the evidence that Thus should follow the studys recommendation and in order to 自己尝试新方法 根据预测 和 假想The conclusion in this argument is that can expect to by doing In support of this predicti
2、on, the arguer claims that Moreover, the arguer assumes that this attempt has benefits:1) to; 2)to; 3)to; This argument is fraught with vague, oversimplified, and unwarranted assumptions.换一个供应商In this argument, the arguer advocates that should This recommendation is based on the observation that Mea
3、nwhile, the arguer assumes to be a better choice because This argument is problematic for reasons.自己应该干吗 根据其他州的情况In this analysis, the arguer claims that should To substantiate the conclusion, the arguer cites the example of where In addition, the arguer assumes that This argument is unconvincing fo
4、r several critical flaws.正文:The major problem with this argument is that Another flaw that weakens this argument is that. In addition, the arguer ignores several factors that might undermine the argument. the arguer fails to consider several other relevant factors that might influence For instance s
5、ince whats more etc.样本的问题:When samples are used to make general claims about a particular group, the samples should be close enough in time to the generation they are used to support, so that historical changes will not invalidate the generalization调查survey 的问题:The sample of the survey conducted by
6、the is vague.But we are told nothing about the way the poll was conducted and how well it represented the public opinions.(民意测验)How many people participated?The sample of the survey is not representative.数据的问题:(平均值)The study revealed, on average, only a small statistical correlation between(实验的数据不可靠
7、) the data of the research is unconvincing (样本太小)the sample is too small to. (光数字没比例)the ratio of four to sixthere is only figures but no proportion of the survey 还是ratio?Insufficient SampleIf the respondents only stand for a tiny proportion of the whole group, we should not be so sure about the con
8、clusion that the whole groupThe arguer commits afallacy of hasty generalization.It was only carried out in Sun City, but the arguer applies its result to all the companys markets while doesnt show us whether Sun City is a representative market of the whole markets.实验组的人:性别,年龄,生理特征副作用 有的病人会对抗生素过敏错误的类
9、比:But the problem is that the two situations are not similar enough to justify the analogical deduction.错误的比较:The comparison in this argument is incomplete and selective. The arguer discovers that However, the arguer fails to provide any information regarding respectively 别的因素:Furthermore the arguer
10、 ignores the possibility that may Unless the arguer also takes this factor into consideration, the comparison is unconvincing.It is very likely that and hence varies significantly.没有因果:Confusing causal relation with correlationthe arguer commits a fallacy of hasty generalization. Even if the mainten
11、ance of the airline has been improved as a result of sending its mechanics to the Seminar, which is, of course, an unwarranted assumption, it does not follow that 就算怎样,也不怎样Finally, the arguer hints that but he fails to analyze the causes. Is it because or because ?-其他:The fact that does not necessar
12、ily imply that First of all, the argument is based on a hasty generalization. According to the cited studies which is understandable.分析常用:the actual amount of time for doing respectively The survey is based on two isolated examples. The arguer should survey more hospitals of both types.How large was
13、 the sampleWhat extent do this participators improve their speed?The arguer fails to indicate the attitude of the residents to the ABCs performance.循环假设The arguer commits a fallacy of begging the question in assuming that -结尾:To sum up, the conclusion lacks credibility because the evidence cited in
14、the analysis does not lend strong support to what the arguer maintains. To strengthen the argument, the arguer would have to provide more evidence concerning the percentage of the affected families and their geographical distribution.In summary, the conclusion reached in this argument is invalid and
15、 misleading.In conclusion, the arguer fails to establish a causal relationship between To strengthen the argument, the arguer would have to provide evidence that To better evaluate the argument, we would need more information about As it stands, the argument is not well reasoned. To make it logicall
16、y acceptable, the arguer would have to demonstrate that is the only condition that Additionally, the arguer must provide evidence to rule out other possible causes of the To conclude, this argument is not persuasive as it stands.新GRE写作Argument范文Discuss how well reasoned you find this argument.The fo
17、llowing appeared in a letter from a department chairperson to the president of Pierce University.Some studies conducted by Bronston College, which is also located in a small town, reveal that both male and female professors are happier living in small towns when their spouses are also employed in th
18、e same geographic area. Therefore, in the interest of attracting the most gifted teachers and researchers to our faculty and improving the morale of our entire staff, we at Pierce University should offer employment to the spouse of each new faculty member we hire. Although we cannot expect all offer
19、s to be accepted or to be viewed as an ideal job offer, the money invested in this effort will clearly be well spent because, if their spouses have a chance of employment, new professors will be more likely to accept our offers.For the past five years, consumers in California have been willing to pa
20、y twice as much for oysters from the northeastern Atlantic Coast as for Gulf Coast oysters. This trend began shortly after harmful bacteria were found in a few raw Gulf Coast oysters. But scientists have now devised a process for killing the bacteria. Once consumers are made aware of the increased s
21、afety of Gulf Coast oysters, they are likely to be willing to pay as much for Gulf Coast as for northeastern Atlantic Coast oysters, and greater profits for Gulf Coast oyster producers will follow.The following appeared in a memo from the marketing director of Bargain Brand Cereals.One year ago we i
22、ntroduced our first product, breakfast cereal. Our very low prices quickly drew many customers away from the top-selling cereal companies. Although the companies producing the top brands have since tried to compete with us by lowering their prices, and although several plan to introduce their own bu
23、dget brands, not once have we needed to raise our prices to continue making a profit. Given our success selling cereal, Bargain Brand should now expand its business and begin marketing other low-priced food products as quickly as possible.The Mozart School of Music should obviously be the first choi
24、ce of any music student aware of its reputation. First of all, the Mozart School stresses intensive practice and training, so that students typically begin their training at a very young age. Second, the school has ample facilities and up-to-date professional equipment, and its faculty includes some
25、 of the most distinguished music teachers in the world. Finally, many Mozart graduates have gone on to be the best known and most highly paid musicians in the nation.The following is a letter that recently appeared in the Oak City Gazette, a local newspaper.Membership in Oak Citys Civic Club-a club
26、whose primary objective is to discuss local issues-should continue to be restricted to people who live in Oak City. People who work-in Oak City but who live elsewhere cannot truly understand the business and politics of the city. It is important to restrict membership to city residents because only
27、residents pay city taxes and therefore only residents understand how the money could best be used to improve the city. At any rate, restricting membership in this way is unlikely to disappoint many of the nonresidents employed in Oak City, since neighboring Elm Citys Civic Club has always had an ope
28、n membership policy, and only twenty-five nonresidents have joined Elm Citys Club in the last ten years.The following appeared in the annual report from the president of the National Brush Company.In order to save money, we at the National Brush Company have decided to pay our employees for each bru
29、sh they produce instead of for the time they spend producing brushes. We believe that this policy will lead to the production of more and better brushes, will allow us to reduce our staff size, and will enable the company factories to operate for fewer hours-resulting in savings on electricity and security costs. These changes will ensure that the best workers keep their jobs and that the company will earn a profit in the coming year.The following is a memorandum written by the director of personnel to the pres
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