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　　自己改正根据因果

　　Inthisargument,thearguerrecommendsthat…shouldadvise…to…Tojustifythisclaim,thearguerprovidestheevidencethat…Thus…shouldfollowthestudy’srecommendationand…inorderto…

　　自己尝试新方法根据预测和假想

　　Theconclusioninthisargumentisthat…canexpectto…bydoing…Insupportofthisprediction,thearguerclaimsthat…Moreover,thearguerassumesthatthisattempthas…benefits:

1）to;

2）to;

3）to;

Thisargumentisfraughtwithvague,oversimplified,andunwarrantedassumptions.

　　换一个供应商

　　Inthisargument,theargueradvocatesthat…should…Thisrecommendationisbasedontheobservationthat…Meanwhile,thearguerassumes…tobeabetterchoice…because…Thisargumentisproblematicfor…reasons.

　　自己应该干吗根据其他州的情况

　　Inthisanalysis,thearguerclaimsthat…should…Tosubstantiatetheconclusion,thearguercitestheexampleof…where…Inaddition,thearguerassumesthat…Thisargumentisunconvincingforseveralcriticalflaws.

　　正文：

　　Themajorproblemwiththisargumentisthat…

　　Anotherflawthatweakensthisargumentisthat.…

　　Inaddition,thearguerignoresseveralfactorsthatmightunderminetheargument.

　　…thearguerfailstoconsiderseveralotherrelevantfactorsthatmightinfluence…

　　Forinstance…since…what’smore…etc.

　　样本的问题：

　　Whensamplesareusedtomakegeneralclaimsaboutaparticulargroup,thesamplesshouldbecloseenoughintimetothegenerationtheyareusedtosupport,sothathistoricalchangeswillnotinvalidatethegeneralization

　　调查survey的问题：

　　Thesampleofthesurveyconductedbythe…isvague.

　　Butwearetoldnothingaboutthewaythepollwasconductedandhowwellitrepresentedthepublicopinions..（民意测验）

　　Howmanypeopleparticipated?

　　Thesampleofthesurveyisnotrepresentative.

　　数据的问题：

　　（平均值）Thestudyrevealed,onaverage,onlyasmallstatisticalcorrelationbetween

　　（实验的数据不可靠）thedataoftheresearchisunconvincing（样本太小）

　　thesampleistoosmallto...（光数字没比例）

　　theratiooffourtosix

　　thereisonlyfiguresbutnoproportionofthesurvey还是ratio?

　　InsufficientSample

　　Ifthe[respondents]onlystandforatinyproportionofthewhole[group],weshouldnotbesosureabouttheconclusionthat[thewholegroup…]

　　Thearguercommitsafallacyofhastygeneralization.

　　ItwasonlycarriedoutinSunCity,butthearguerappliesitsresulttoallthecompany’smarketswhiledoesn’tshowuswhetherSunCityisarepresentativemarketofthewholemarkets.

　　实验组的人：

性别，年龄，生理特征

　　副作用有的病人会对抗生素过敏

　　错误的类比：

　　Buttheproblemisthatthetwosituationsarenotsimilarenoughtojustifytheanalogicaldeduction.

　　错误的比较：

　　Thecomparisoninthisargumentisincompleteandselective.Thearguerdiscoversthat…

　　However,thearguerfailstoprovideanyinformationregarding…respectively…

　　别的因素：

　　Furthermorethearguerignoresthepossibilitythat…may…Unlesstheargueralsotakesthisfactorintoconsideration,thecomparisonisunconvincing.

　　Itisverylikelythat…andhence…variessignificantly.

　　没有因果：

　　Confusingcausalrelationwithcorrelation

　　thearguercommitsafallacyofhastygeneralization.EvenifthemaintenanceoftheairlinehasbeenimprovedasaresultofsendingitsmechanicstotheSeminar,whichis,ofcourse,anunwarrantedassumption,itdoesnotfollowthat就算怎样，也不怎样

　　Finally,thearguerhintsthat…buthefailstoanalyzethecauses.Isitbecause…orbecause…?

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　　其他：

　　Thefactthat…doesnotnecessarilyimplythat…

　　Firstofall,theargumentisbasedonahastygeneralization.Accordingtothecitedstudies…whichisunderstandable.

　　分析常用：

　　theactualamountoftimefordoing…respectively…

　　Thesurveyisbasedontwoisolatedexamples.Thearguershouldsurveymorehospitalsofbothtypes.

　　Howlargewasthesample

　　Whatextentdothisparticipatorsimprovetheir…speed?

　　ThearguerfailstoindicatetheattitudeoftheresidentstotheABCsperformance.

　　循环假设

　　Thearguercommitsafallacyofbeggingthequestioninassumingthat…

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　　结尾：

　　Tosumup,theconclusionlackscredibilitybecausetheevidencecitedintheanalysisdoesnotlendstrongsupporttowhatthearguermaintains.Tostrengthentheargument,thearguerwouldhavetoprovidemoreevidenceconcerningthepercentageoftheaffectedfamiliesandtheirgeographicaldistribution.

　　Insummary,theconclusionreachedinthisargumentisinvalidandmisleading.

　　Inconclusion,thearguerfailstoestablishacausalrelationshipbetween…Tostrengthentheargument,thearguerwouldhavetoprovideevidencethat…Tobetterevaluatetheargument,wewouldneedmoreinformationabout…

　　Asitstands,theargumentisnotwellreasoned.Tomakeitlogicallyacceptable,thearguerwouldhavetodemonstratethat…istheonlyconditionthat…Additionally,thearguermustprovideevidencetoruleoutotherpossiblecausesofthe…

　　Toconclude,thisargumentisnotpersuasiveasitstands.

　　新GRE写作Argument范文

　　Discusshowwellreasonedyoufindthisargument.

　　ThefollowingappearedinaletterfromadepartmentchairpersontothepresidentofPierceUniversity.

　　"

SomestudiesconductedbyBronstonCollege,whichisalsolocatedinasmalltown,revealthatbothmaleandfemaleprofessorsarehappierlivinginsmalltownswhentheirspousesarealsoemployedinthesamegeographicarea.Therefore,intheinterestofattractingthemostgiftedteachersandresearcherstoourfacultyandimprovingthemoraleofourentirestaff,weatPierceUniversityshouldofferemploymenttothespouseofeachnewfacultymemberwehire.Althoughwecannotexpectallofferstobeacceptedortobeviewedasanidealjoboffer,themoneyinvestedinthiseffortwillclearlybewellspentbecause,iftheirspouseshaveachanceofemployment,newprofessorswillbemorelikelytoacceptouroffers."

　　Forthepastfiveyears,consumersinCaliforniahavebeenwillingtopaytwiceasmuchforoystersfromthenortheasternAtlanticCoastasforGulfCoastoysters.ThistrendbeganshortlyafterharmfulbacteriawerefoundinafewrawGulfCoastoysters.Butscientistshavenowdevisedaprocessforkillingthebacteria.OnceconsumersaremadeawareoftheincreasedsafetyofGulfCoastoysters,theyarelikelytobewillingtopayasmuchforGulfCoastasfornortheasternAtlanticCoastoysters,andgreaterprofitsforGulfCoastoysterproducerswillfollow.

　　Thefollowingappearedinamemofromthemarketingdirectorof"

BargainBrand"

Cereals.

　　Oneyearagoweintroducedourfirstproduct,"

breakfastcereal.Ourverylowpricesquicklydrewmanycustomersawayfromthetop-sellingcerealcompanies.Althoughthecompaniesproducingthetopbrandshavesincetriedtocompetewithusbyloweringtheirprices,andalthoughseveralplantointroducetheirownbudgetbrands,notoncehaveweneededtoraiseourpricestocontinuemakingaprofit.Givenoursuccesssellingcereal,BargainBrandshouldnowexpanditsbusinessandbeginmarketingotherlow-pricedfoodproductsasquicklyaspossible.

　　TheMozartSchoolofMusicshouldobviouslybethefirstchoiceofanymusicstudentawareofitsreputation.Firstofall,theMozartSchoolstressesintensivepracticeandtraining,sothatstudentstypicallybegintheirtrainingataveryyoungage.Second,theschoolhasamplefacilitiesandup-to-dateprofessionalequipment,anditsfacultyincludessomeofthemostdistinguishedmusicteachersintheworld.Finally,manyMozartgraduateshavegoneontobethebestknownandmosthighlypaidmusiciansinthenation.

　　ThefollowingisaletterthatrecentlyappearedintheOakCityGazette,alocalnewspaper.

MembershipinOakCity‘sCivicClub-aclubwhoseprimaryobjectiveistodiscusslocalissues-shouldcontinuetoberestrictedtopeoplewholiveinOakCity.Peoplewhowork-inOakCitybutwholiveelsewherecannottrulyunderstandthebusinessandpoliticsofthecity.Itisimportanttorestrictmembershiptocityresidentsbecauseonlyresidentspaycitytaxesandthereforeonlyresidentsunderstandhowthemoneycouldbestbeusedtoimprovethecity.Atanyrate,restrictingmembershipinthiswayisunlikelytodisappointmanyofthenonresidentsemployedinOakCity,sinceneighboringElmCity‘sCivicClubhasalwayshadanopenmembershippolicy,andonlytwenty-fivenonresidentshavejoinedElmCity‘sClubinthelasttenyears."

　　ThefollowingappearedintheannualreportfromthepresidentoftheNationalBrushCompany.

Inordertosavemoney,weattheNationalBrushCompanyhavedecidedtopayouremployeesforeachbrushtheyproduceinsteadofforthetimetheyspendproducingbrushes.Webelievethatthispolicywillleadtotheproductionofmoreandbetterbrushes,willallowustoreduceourstaffsize,andwillenablethecompanyfactoriestooperateforfewerhours-resultinginsavingsonelectricityandsecuritycosts.Thesechangeswillensurethatthebestworkerskeeptheirjobsandthatthecompanywillearnaprofitinthecomingyear."

　　Thefollowingisamemorandumwrittenbythedirectorofpersonneltothepres