学校作文之英语作文对学校规则提出意见.docx

1、学校作文之英语作文对学校规则提出意见英语作文对学校规则提出意见【篇一：英语作文_校园食堂建议信】 the canteen service on campus may 20, 2003 （校园食堂建议信） dear president, i am li ming, a second year student in the education department of ouf university. im writing to inform you of the true conditions of our canteen service. i dont know how to begin my

2、 account because the service is really bad. please read my letter patiently and do something about it. we would be grateful for whatever you do for us students. firstly, the quality of the food is bad. for instance, the rice is too hard. whats more, some dishes are not fresh sometimes. as a matter o

3、f fact, the poor food has already caused some stomach problems among the students. secondly, the service is not good enough. some staff members give us short measure when they are in a bad mood. now and then they behave like robbers, robbing you of your appetite. worst of alit they never smile. thir

4、dly, the price is too high. a small cake made from rice and dates cost as much as 0.6 yuan! it will cost us a good 6 yuan to fill our stomach with such cakes. after all we are poor students. i wish my opinion would call your attention to the canteen service on campus. we are badly in need of your he

5、lp. looking forward to an early reply. respectfully yours, 食堂的服务在校园2003年5月20日（校园食堂建议信） 亲爱的先生， 我是李明，第二年学生在教育署的ouf大学。我写信通知你的真实情况，我们食堂的服 务。 我不知道如何开始我的帐户，因为这种服务，实在是坏。请阅读我的信中耐心做一些工 作。我们将不胜感激，无论你为我们做学生。 首先，食物的品质是不好的。举例来说，稻米是太辛苦。何况，有些菜不新鲜，有时。 作为一个的问题，事实上，穷人的食品，已引起一些胃的问题的学生当中。 其次，服务还不够好。一些工作人员给我们的短期措施，当他们在心

6、情不好。现在，然 后他们的表现一样，劫匪，抢你的你的食欲。最坏的alit他们从来没有笑容。 第三，价格实在太高。一个小蛋糕，从水稻和日期的成本高达0.6元！这将花费我们一 个很好的6元，以填补我们的胃，例如蛋糕。毕竟我们是贫困学生。 我希望我的意见，会请你注意食堂的服务在校园内。我们迫切需要您的帮助。 期待着早日答复。 尊敬你，【篇二：高中英语作文-建议信】 建议信(1)-阐释原因；提出建议类 请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信，反映一下你校食堂的几点问题，以引起学校重视，并针对问题提出两条合理建议。问题包括： 1. 菜价昂贵，菜市单一；2. 排队时间长，浪费午休时间；3. 味道不佳，浪费现象严重

7、。 注意：1. 词数不少于120； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇: 食堂 canteen dear principal, recently, many students are discussing the problems of the canteen. _i sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions. thank you! yours, li hua 作文范文： dear principal, some students think the prices of the dishes are

8、 too high and that the choices are too limited. another concern is that the time spent in waiting is so long that we have less time to have a rest. meanwhile, some students think that the taste of the food is awful, which leads to a lot of waste. the prices be more reasonable and the choices of dish

9、es be more various.需注意的词汇、表达： 1. delicious waiting taste(n.味道) tasty (adj.可口的) cook (n.厨师) cooker (n.炊具) price 价格 2. lower /bring down the price 降低价格 3. at a lower/reasonable price 以较低的价格 4. varieties of dishes 种类多样的菜品 5. for one thing,. for another, 6. make sb (not)do sth 7. wait /stand in line / i

10、n a queue for a long time 8. the kinds of food are . 表达食堂出现的问题： 9. the prices of dishes are so high that many of us cant afford them. 10. there are so few dishes to choose from, which is far from satisfactory. / which cant satisfy our needs. 11. it takes us so much time to stand in line, which decre

11、ases our time of rest at noon. 12. the food in the canteen doesnt taste . the taste of food in the canteen isnt 13. the food in the canteen tastes so bad that a lot of food is left and wasted 14. its a waste of time to stand in line for a long time. 15. the food in the canteen tastes so bad, which l

12、eads to a severe phenomenon of wasting food. 16. in the long run, its bad for our health and study. 17. it goes without saying that it will influence our sleep in the afternoon. 表达提出的建议： 18. improving the taste of the food is also a good solution to the problems. 19. i think its necessary to provide

13、 more kinds of food. 20. its high time that we took measures to solve the problems. so its high time for us to take measures 21. to solve the problems, i think the canteen should set up a new figure(形象) and improve the present condition to satisfy the students needs. 22. we hope the canteen can prov

14、ide us with dishes of a high quality at a reasonable price. 23. the canteen should open more windows so that we neednt wait so long. 24. as far as im concerned, the canteen should attach importance to the quality. whats more, 25. measures are supposed to be taken to improve the conditions of the can

15、teen. 建议模板： dear ., im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to.(引出话题). here are a few suggestions. first of all, it is important to do sth. then, it also helps to do sth. besides, it should be a good idea to do sth. 建议句型积累：1. many ways can contribute to solving the problem, but i

16、think the following may be the most effective ones. 2. id like to make some suggestions on . 3. its of great importance for sb to do sth. its necessary for sb to do sth 4. it would be a good idea for sb to do sth. / it would be a better idea if. 5. it contributes /helps a lot if 6. i suggest that ./

17、 my suggestion is that its suggested / advised / recommended that 7. youd better do sth./ wed better do sth its better to do sth 8. measures are supposed to be taken to do sth we are supposed to take effective measures to do sth 9. its high time that sb sth. / its high time for sb to do sth 建议信(2)-阐

18、释原因；提出建议类 假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫sad mother的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，用英语给这位家长回复。 im the mother of a fourteen-year-old. recently i have found that my daughter told lies to me. the other day she told me that she did well in the final exam. however i found out she failed in math and english. what shou

19、ld i do? 写作要点： 1.表明了解她的问题； 2.帮她分析孩子撒谎的原因； 3.提出至少两条建议 要求： 1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。 2.短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。 3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。 4.书写需清晰、工整。 hi，sad mother， i have learned that_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 作文范文： hi,sad mother, she is afraid you will punish her if she tells you the truth. besides, nowadays, parents put too

20、much pressure on their kids. in order not to let you down, she lie . heart talk with her, making her know being honest is more important than scores. in addition, dont be too strict.微小的) mistakes. 需要注意积累的词汇、短语、和句子： daughter女儿expectation 期望 be worried / concerned about 担心 calm down 冷静下来 at a loss 迷惑不

21、解 keep in touch with 保持联系 be strict with sb in sth 在某方面对某人要求严格 heart-to-heart 推心置腹的 idea 注意想法 test 测试 text 文本 cheat 欺骗 want sb to do sth 想让某人做某事 1. it was because she didnt want to let you down that she pretended to achieve high scores. 2. she isnt aware that the lies have hurt both you and herself.

22、 3. being a teenager, she needs to be encouraged. and its you who can do this. 4. it is probably your high expectations to her that makes her decide to lie. 5. you should figure out the reason why she lied to you before solving the problem. 6. it goes without saying that lying is bad behavior. 7. th

23、e reason why she didnt tell you the truth may be that she didnt want to let you down. 8. it is suggested that you should have a face-to-face talk with her so that she might open her heart to you. 9. to avoid the lies, you should encourage her rather than blame her when she fails in exams 10. the rea

24、son that leads to the problem may be various. 11. confronted with (面对) these problems, you should take a series of effective measures to help you daughter. 12. as far as im concerned, its better to communicate with her in a friendly way to let her know its wrong to tell lies. 13. its suggested that

25、you should attach more importance to physical and mental health. moreover, its better to encourage her to do what she wants. 改错： 1. there are some advice. 2. dont sad. 3. you should give her more encourage. 4. she may afraid that if she fails in the exam, you will punish her. 5. if she has difficult

26、y in learning, you should inspire she and help she out. 6. she doesnt want you angry. 7. please not to be so worried. 8. one of the reason is that she isnt dare to tell you the truth. 9. because she afraid parents. 10. so she dont want to mention it. 11. you should apology to her. 12. youd better to

27、 encourage her to be a honest people. 13. youd better be care about her health and study. 14. im very understand your condition. 15. she may doesnt want you to be angry. 建议信(3) 为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“heart-to-heart”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑jamie，收到一封署名为worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写

28、一封回信。 内容要点如下： 1表示理解并给予安慰； 2提出建议并说明理由。 注意： 1词数120左右； 2信中不能出现与本人相关的信息； 3信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪 hi worried， im sorry to know that youre having such a had time at the moment. yours, jamie hi worried, im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment. the truth is that e

29、veryone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, i quite understand how you are feeling now and there is no need to worry about it so much. the important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything youll regret. here are three useful tips. first of all, talk to someone you trust about the trouble youre faced with, which is a good way of let