学校作文之英语作文对学校规则提出意见.docx

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学校作文之英语作文对学校规则提出意见

英语作文对学校规则提出意见

【篇一：

英语作文_校园食堂建议信】

thecanteenserviceoncampusmay20,2003

（校园食堂建议信）

dearpresident,

iamliming,asecondyearstudentintheeducationdepartmentofoufuniversity.

imwritingtoinformyouofthetrueconditionsofourcanteenservice.

idontknowhowtobeginmyaccountbecausetheserviceisreallybad.please

readmyletterpatientlyanddosomethingaboutit.wewouldbegratefulforwhatever

youdoforusstudents.

firstly,thequalityofthefoodisbad.forinstance,thericeistoohard.whats

more,somedishesarenotfreshsometimes.asamatteroffact,thepoorfoodhas

alreadycausedsomestomachproblemsamongthestudents.

secondly,theserviceisnotgoodenough.somestaffmembersgiveusshortmeasure

whentheyareinabadmood.nowandthentheybehavelikerobbers,robbingyouof

yourappetite.worstofalittheyneversmile.

thirdly,thepriceistoohigh.asmallcakemadefromriceanddatescostas

muchas0.6yuan!

itwillcostusagood6yuantofillourstomachwithsuchcakes.

afterallwearepoorstudents.

iwishmyopinionwouldcallyourattentiontothecanteenserviceoncampus.

wearebadlyinneedofyourhelp.

lookingforwardtoanearlyreply.

respectfullyyours,

食堂的服务在校园2003年5月20日（校园食堂建议信）

亲爱的先生，

我是李明，第二年学生在教育署的ouf大学。

我写信通知你的真实情况，我们食堂的服

务。

我不知道如何开始我的帐户，因为这种服务，实在是坏。

请阅读我的信中耐心做一些工

作。

我们将不胜感激，无论你为我们做学生。

首先，食物的品质是不好的。

举例来说，稻米是太辛苦。

何况，有些菜不新鲜，有时。

作为一个的问题，事实上，穷人的食品，已引起一些胃的问题的学生当中。

其次，服务还不够好。

一些工作人员给我们的短期措施，当他们在心情不好。

现在，然

后他们的表现一样，劫匪，抢你的你的食欲。

最坏的alit他们从来没有笑容。

第三，价格实在太高。

一个小蛋糕，从水稻和日期的成本高达0.6元！

这将花费我们一

个很好的6元，以填补我们的胃，例如蛋糕。

毕竟我们是贫困学生。

我希望我的意见，会请你注意食堂的服务在校园内。

我们迫切需要您的帮助。

期待着早日答复。

尊敬你，

【篇二：

高中英语作文--建议信】

建议信

（1）-----阐释原因；提出建议类

请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信，反映一下你校食堂的几点问题，以引起学校重视，并针对问题提出两条合理建议。

问题包括：

1.菜价昂贵，菜市单一；2.排队时间长，浪费午休时间；3.味道不佳，浪费现象严重。

注意：

1.词数不少于120；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇:

食堂canteendearprincipal,

recently,manystudentsarediscussingtheproblemsofthecanteen.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.thankyou!

yours,lihua

作文范文：

dearprincipal,

somestudentsthinkthepricesofthedishesaretoohighandthatthechoicesaretoolimited.anotherconcernisthatthetimespentinwaitingissolongthatwehavelesstimetohavearest.meanwhile,somestudentsthinkthatthetasteofthefoodisawful,whichleadstoalotofwaste.thepricesbemorereasonableandthechoicesofdishesbemorevarious.需注意的词汇、表达：

1.deliciouswaitingtaste（n.味道）tasty（adj.可口的）cook（n.厨师）cooker（n.炊具）

price价格

2.lower/bringdowntheprice降低价格3.atalower/reasonableprice以较低的价格4.varietiesofdishes种类多样的菜品5.foronething,…….foranother,……

6.makesb（not）dosth

7.wait/standinline/inaqueueforalongtime8.thekindsoffoodare.表达食堂出现的问题：

9.thepricesofdishesaresohighthatmanyofuscan’taffordthem.

10.therearesofewdishestochoosefrom,whichisfarfromsatisfactory./whichcan’tsatisfyour

needs.

11.ittakesussomuchtimetostandinline,whichdecreasesourtimeofrestatnoon.12.thefoodinthecanteendoesn’ttaste.

thetasteoffoodinthecanteenisn’t

13.thefoodinthecanteentastessobadthatalotoffoodisleftandwasted14.it’sawasteoftimetostandinlineforalongtime.

15.thefoodinthecanteentastessobad,whichleadstoaseverephenomenonofwastingfood.16.inthelongrun,it’sbadforourhealthandstudy.

17.itgoeswithoutsayingthatitwillinfluenceoursleepintheafternoon.表达提出的建议：

18.improvingthetasteofthefoodisalsoagoodsolutiontotheproblems.19.ithinkit’snecessarytoprovidemorekindsoffood.20.it’shightimethatwetookmeasurestosolvetheproblems.

soit’shightimeforustotakemeasures

21.tosolvetheproblems,ithinkthecanteenshouldsetupanewfigure（形象）andimprovethe

presentconditiontosatisfythestudents’needs.

22.wehopethecanteencanprovideuswithdishesofahighqualityatareasonableprice.23.thecanteenshouldopenmorewindowssothatweneedn’twaitsolong.

24.asfarasi’mconcerned,thecanteenshouldattachimportancetothequality.what’smore,

25.measuresaresupposedtobetakentoimprovetheconditionsofthecanteen.

建议模板：

dear….,

i’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto…….（引出话题）.hereareafewsuggestions.firstofall,itisimportanttodosth.then,italsohelpstodosth.besides,itshouldbeagoodideatodosth.

建议句型积累：

1.manywayscancontributetosolvingtheproblem,butithinkthefollowingmaybethemost

effectiveones.

2.i’dliketomakesomesuggestionson…….3.it’sofgreatimportanceforsbtodosth.

it’snecessaryforsbtodosth

4.itwouldbeagoodideaforsbtodosth./itwouldbeabetterideaif…….5.itcontributes/helpsalotif………6.isuggestthat…../mysuggestionisthat…

it’ssuggested/advised/recommendedthat……7.you’dbetterdosth./we’dbetterdosth

it’sbettertodosth

8.measuresaresupposedtobetakentodosth

wearesupposedtotakeeffectivemeasurestodosth9.it’shightimethatsbsth./it’shightimeforsbtodosth

建议信

（2）-----阐释原因；提出建议类

假定你是中学生李华。

在一位名叫sadmother的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。

请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，用英语给这位家长回复。

i’mthemotherofafourteen-year-old.recentlyihavefoundthatmydaughtertoldliestome.theotherdayshetoldmethatshedidwellinthefinalexam.howeverifoundoutshefailedinmathandenglish.whatshouldido?

写作要点：

1.表明了解她的问题；2.帮她分析孩子撒谎的原因；3.提出至少两条建议要求：

1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。

2.短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。

3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。

4.书写需清晰、工整。

hi，sadmother，

ihavelearnedthat_____________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

作文范文：

hi,sadmother,

sheisafraidyouwillpunishherifshetellsyouthetruth.besides,nowadays,parentsputtoomuchpressureontheirkids.inordernottoletyoudown,shelie.

–hearttalkwithher,makingherknowbeinghonestismoreimportantthanscores.inaddition,don’tbetoostrict.微小的）mistakes.

需要注意积累的词汇、短语、和句子：

daughter女儿expectation期望beworried/concernedabout担心calmdown冷静下来ataloss迷惑不解keepintouchwith保持联系bestrictwithsbinsth在某方面对某人要求严格heart-to-heart推心置腹的

idea注意想法test测试text文本cheat欺骗wantsbtodosth想让某人做某事

1.itwasbecauseshedidn’twanttoletyoudownthatshepretendedtoachievehighscores.2.sheisn’tawarethatthelieshavehurtbothyouandherself.

3.beingateenager,sheneedstobeencouraged.andit’syouwhocandothis.4.itisprobablyyourhighexpectationstoherthatmakesherdecidetolie.

5.youshouldfigureoutthereasonwhysheliedtoyoubeforesolvingtheproblem.6.itgoeswithoutsayingthatlyingisbadbehavior.

7.thereasonwhyshedidn’ttellyouthetruthmaybethatshedidn’twanttoletyoudown.

8.itissuggestedthatyoushouldhaveaface-to-facetalkwithhersothatshemightopenherhearttoyou.

9.toavoidthelies,youshouldencourageherratherthanblameherwhenshefailsinexams10.thereasonthatleadstotheproblemmaybevarious.

11.confrontedwith（面对）theseproblems,youshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestohelpyoudaughter.

12.asfarasi’mconcerned,it’sbettertocommunicatewithherinafriendlywaytoletherknowit’swrongtotelllies.

13.it’ssuggestedthatyoushouldattachmoreimportancetophysicalandmentalhealth.moreover,it’sbettertoencouragehertodowhatshewants.改错：

1.therearesomeadvice.

2.don’tsad.

3.youshouldgivehermoreencourage.

4.shemayafraidthatifshefailsintheexam,youwillpunishher.

5.ifshehasdifficultyinlearning,youshouldinspiresheandhelpsheout.6.shedoesn’twantyouangry.7.pleasenottobesoworried.

8.oneofthereasonisthatsheisn’tdaretotellyouthetruth.9.becausesheafraidparents.

10.soshedon’twanttomentionit.11.youshouldapologytoher.

12.you’dbettertoencouragehertobeahonestpeople.13.you’dbetterbecareaboutherhealthandstudy.14.i’mveryunderstandyourcondition.15.shemaydoesn’twantyoutobeangry.

建议信（3）

为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“heart-to-heart”专栏。

假设你是该栏目的编辑jamie，收到一封署名为worried的求助信。

信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：

近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。

请用英文给该同学写一封回信。

内容要点如下：

1．表示理解并给予安慰；2．提出建议并说明理由。

注意：

1．词数120左右；

2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：

tempern.脾气，情绪hiworried，

i’msorrytoknowthatyou’rehavingsuchahadtimeatthemoment.

yours,jamiehiworried,

imsorrytoknowthatyourehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.thetruthisthateveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong,iquiteunderstandhowyouarefeelingnowandthereisnoneedtoworryaboutitsomuch.theimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtempersothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyou’llregret.herearethreeusefultips.

firstofall,talktosomeoneyoutrustaboutthetroubleyou’refacedwith,whichisagoodwayoflet