雅思写作九分作文欣赏.docx

1、雅思写作九分作文欣赏雅思写作九分作文范文欣赏：There is no doubt that helping students find a job is one of the primary functions of university education， but universities do exist for other purposes such as improving students analytical skills and raising students moral standards.A university education can be seen as a pr

2、ocess of improving students analytical thinking. The variety of courses offered at university inspires students in various ways， therefore improving their analytical ability. For example， science courses such as math and biology help students develop a rational way of thinking whereas arts courses s

3、uch as literature 123ve to let students ponder over issues from a logical， multi- dimensional perspective; and courses in social sciences force students to recognize the ideas that have been traditionally assumed to be acceptable and unproblematic. With the development of these types of analytical t

4、hinking， graduates can face future challenges with more confidence and enthusiasm.Also， university education is expected to improve students moral standards. This is rooted in universities belief that students awar123ss of responsibility towards their community and their country is of high importanc

5、e. In this ever-deg123rating society and civilization， students are encouraged actively participate in improving the local community. A university that provides care and facilities for physically disadvantaged students may inspire the graduates to better handle situations in the future where they ma

6、y have to interact with the disabled community. A successful university education is supposed to produce morally sound graduates， therefore increasing their employability.In conclusion， university education not only helps students locate a decent job but will also develop other qualities such as enh

7、ancing their analytical skills and cultivating their hunger and spirit for life.Some people warn that the era of the silver screen is coming to an end and that people will eventually lose interest in going to the cinema.Do you agree or disagree with this view?(250 words)wilight 2: New Moon could bec

8、ome the most successful blockbuster in movie history. Despite the movie has made more than 2,000 million US dollars over the week, many still believe movie industry is for sure to fade out from peoples entertainment life. Personally, I found it hard to side with the pessimists.Undoubtedly, the magic

9、 of silver screen is no longer that fascinating as before. One major reason to draw people away from cinema is the evolution of home entertainment. Since technology can almost recreate similar audio-visual experience right in your living room, many have turned to their couch and popcorn. There could

10、 not be a better example than the booming of video stores worldwide. They sprung up everywhere around residential areas and had won many peoples favor.Though cinema might be facing crucial challenge by other forms of entertainment, it is too reckless to spell its end. The silver screen still attract

11、s people as a unique experience. Going to cinema is more a form of social activities, therefore, many people still prefer such opportunities, not only to see a brilliant movie, but have a good time with families or friends as well. Many major Cineplex have already launched diverse family coupons as

12、a marketing gesture. This can show how cinema can adopt and adapt in this changing environment.Cinemas also consolidate its status by always providing the latest movie. With most producing companies tend to release DVD a while after the movie, hence, for many movie fanatic, cinema is always their fi

13、rst choice. The Twilight 2 movie can make such a killing is just the perfect way to show the advantages of cinema over DVD.In conclusion, I agree cinemas are facing extreme competition in modern time. However, I do not think it would be bleached away in peoples life. Being aware of the challenge, ci

14、nemas can also surprise us with new elements.o what extent do you agree or disagree?Nowadays, there are lots of advertisements on television or on the streets. Som people think that the advertsing boosts the sales of goods and it encourages people to buy things unnecessarily. This arguments may be t

15、rue in my country, many advertising companies produce advertisements with famous and popular actors or singers. People, especially youngsters, buy goods that their favourite singer advertise, although they do not really need the products.Also, on the television screen, a product may look gorgeous an

16、d good quality. As a result of it, people often buy goods without enough consideration. Consumers may not actually need it but they buy goods impulsively soon after they watch the advertising. Furthermore, as many customers buy a particular product due to its advertising campaign, the other people m

17、ay be affected by the trend, even if the product is not of the real needs of the society.On the other hand, there are vairous aspects against these arguments. Moreover, it is peoples choice to make a decision to buy goods. Advertising may be not a cause of customers buying habits. Individuals have t

18、heir own spending habits. If they have got enough disposable income, then the right to make a decision is given to them. No one actually can judge whether the goods sold are the real needs of the society or not.In addition, as there should be a limited amount of disposable income consumers are able

19、to spend, people try to allocate their budgets. They cannot be simply swayed by those advertisements.In conclsuion, as customers have their own strong opinions and standad of good quality goods, it is better to leave them to make their own decision in buy goods. It is fairly difficult to say everyon

20、e is swayed by advertising and buy good impulsively. However, in sensitive area of businesses such as toy industries, it may be necessary to band advertising to those children as children have not got enough ability to control themselves or to know what they need.（332words）This is an answer written

21、by a candidate who achieved a Band score. Here is the examiners comment:The way in which the candidate has responded to the task is a strong point of this script. It is a well-developed answer that addresses the issues relevantly and at length. The writer introduces the topic, examines both sides of

22、 the argument and expresses a clear position. Points are well-argued and supported with examples.The answer is well-organised and the message is easy to follow with clear paragraphing and linking of ideas. There are too many erros in cohesion, however, and some linkers are not always fully appropria

23、te, so this limits the rating for this criterion.A wide range of vocabulary is used accurately and precisely, in spite of one or two awkward expressions and some rare errors. Similarly, a sophisticated range of structures is used but there are too many minor errors and omissions (such as in the use

24、of prepositions and basic subjedct/verb agreement) to reach Band 8. Nevertheless these mistakes do not reduce the clarity of the answer and overall a wide range of language is used with a high level of proficiency.A rise in the worlds population is having serious, negative effects on the environment

25、. Some scientists believe that the only way to solve the problem is to set up a colony on the Moon. Others argue that the cost would be far too great and other solutions should be sought.What is your opinion?The environment is, of course, under serious threat, but the extent to which population grow

26、th is responsible may not be as great as some people claim. In fact there are many other factors such as the growth in big cities, pollution from traffic and manufacturing, and the destruction of rainforest that probably play a bigger role. It is questionable, therefore, how far a colony on the Moon

27、 would help solve the problem.One of the most serious threats to the global ecosystem is the destruction of the rainforests with an area the size of Europe disappearing every year. And this is largely due to large companies in their pursuit of profit. Indeed, whilst international logging companies c

28、laim to use on average 10 percent of the species of trees that make up the rainforest, that 10 percent of species constitute about 90 percent of the volume.Naturally, if the worlds population was not as large, the demand for wood would be considerably reduced, which would support setting up a colony

29、 on the Moon. But even if the colony was set up how many people in reality, would relocate? Even if the number ran into tens of thousands the actual effect on the worlds population would be minimal. Indeed, we only need to consider how many people were killed during the two world wars, which ran int

30、o millions, to support this claim. Instead, the cost should be transferred into the development of sustainable economies.Take, for instance, the growth of big cities that consume land at an enormous rate, and that rely on transport and essential services that devastate the environment. If people wer

31、e to revert to living in small semi self-contained communities, many of the problems experienced by big cities could be avoided. It would even be beneficial for the economy because it would promote the development of small, family run businesses.At the end of the day, to claim that setting up a colo

32、ny on the Moon would help to solve the issue of environmental damage is to close our eyes to the causes of the damage. In short, it could potentially turn out to be a very costly exercise with few real benefits. (364 words)Step1: 首先确定本文的subject(主体，即topic讨论的对象)The practice of including international

33、news into the subjects of secondary schools.Step2: 构思所有能够想到的subject的pros and cons (优点和缺点)Pros: 让中学生上国际新闻这门课有什么好处呢？一般应该马上会想到通过观看国际新闻，聆听专家关于国际时事的看法可以开拓学生的眼界，并有利于提高他们透过现象认识事件本质的分析能力(即我上课讲的分论点四大黄金原则当中的“能力原则”)。关键词：widen ones horizon, analysing abilityCons: 这种做法可能会带来什么问题呢？首先马上想到分论点四大黄金原则当中的“因小失大”原则在这种青少年教育类的话题当中一定可以