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四级作文模版

Myviewon…

Model1

Para1

Differentpeoplehavedifferentviewson…Itisheldthat…Butitisalsoheldthat…

believed

thought

felt

recognized

acknowledged

.

Thosewhoholdthefirstopinionfeel…Incontrast,thosewhoholdthesecondviewbelieve

suggesthowever

argueonthecontrary

believe

think

that…

Para2

Astome,Iagreewiththelatteropinion.Admittedly…

Inmyopinion,amfor

Frommystandpoint/viewpoint,aminfavorof

Frommypointofview,amsupportiveof

AsfarasIamconcerned

butthisisnottosaythat…What’smore…

Moreover

Furthermore

Para3

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Insum

Inbrief

InshortIt’snecessarytotakeacorrectattitudeto….Only…,canwe…

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Tosumup

Asismentionedabove,

Takingalltheaboveintoconsideration,

Model2

Withthearrival/birth/…,sthisbecomingmoreandmore…inourlife/society.Hit/Affectedbythistrend,

Believeitornot/Likeitornot,theseyearshavewitnessedaboom/growth/spread/popularitydecline/worseningofsthinourlife.

Whenaskedaboutatheme,differentpeoplewillofferdifferentopinions…benoexception.

Somepeopletakeitforgrantedthat…However,othersholdthat…

AsfarasI’mconcerned,Iaminfavorofthesecondview.Thereasonsareasfollows.

First,…thereisanelementoftruththat…,butitdoesn’tfollowthat…Acaseinpointisthat…

FirstlyForexample

Tobeginwith,Forinstance

Foronething,Hereareafewexamplestoillustrate…

Ontheonehand,

Inthefirstplace,

Second,Last

SecondlyLastly,finally

Next/Besides/Inaddition…Lastbutnottheleast/Worstofall

Foranother,

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Inthesecondplace,

Inconclusion,…

AdvantagesandDisadvantagesof…

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…

Buteverycoinhastwosides.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent/clear.

Butalltheabovedoesn’tmeanthatwecanturnablindeyetothenegativeeffectsitbringsabout.

Tobeginwith,…tomakemattersworse,…Worstofall…

Throughaboveanalysis,Ibelievethatthepositiveaspectsoutweighthenegativeaspects,

AsfarasIamconcerned,whetheritdoesgoodorharmtohumansocietydependsonhowwe…

Therefore,…

Howto…

Muchtoourdelight/distress,thepastdecades/theseyearshaveseen/witnessedthe…ofsth.Ifthiscurrentisallowedtotakeitscourse,thingsareboundtoturnforbetter/worse.Therefore,peopleareshowinggrowingconcernonhowto…

Manywayscancontributetosolvingthisseriousproblem.Butthefollowingonesmaybemosteffective.

Firstofall,…besides,…finally,…/Inmyopinion,thefirststepshouldbefocusedon…;Thengreatereffortsshouldbemadeto…,

Thesearenotthebestandtheonlythreemeasureswecantake.Butitshouldbenotedthatweshouldtakestrongactionsto…Ingeneral,wherethereis…,thereis….

AorB…

Wheneverwe…itisinevitableforustomeetthechoicebetween…

comeacrosstheproblemofwhetherweshould…or.

Anditisnaturalfordifferentopinionstoarise.

Somepeoplethinkweshould….

givepriorityto…

Theysaythat….Furthermore…Therefore,weshould…Butotherpeoplethinkotherwise.Theyarguethatinanagewhen…weshouldnotonly…butalso…

Inmyopinion,weshould…Tobeginwith…Besides…Onlyinthisway,canwe…

Why…

Para.1:

Believeitornot/Likeitornot,theseyearshavewitnessedaboomin…/apopularity（/worsening/crisis/decline/growth/revival/spread）of…inoursociety/ontheChinesecampus.Accordingto…,people,especiallycollegestudents,areshowingmoreandmoreinterestin…

Togetabettersenseofit,itisnecessaryforustofindoutitscauses/reasons.

Thereasons,inmymind,canbesummedupinthreeaspects:

Threemainfactors/reasonsarewellworthourconcern/shouldcallformoreofourconcern.

Threemainfactorsinmymind,canaccountfor…

contributeto…

leadto…

resultin…

beresponsiblefor…

Inthefirstplace,itistheproductof…,Inthesecond,itisseen,among…,asanidealwayof…Andaboveall,itisaninevitableresultof…

Theeffectsofthischangeonoursocial/collegelifearepositive/negative/amixedone.Ontheonehand,...Ontheother,...Withmoreandmore…added/attachedtothetrend,Iamfullyconvinced/Iamdeeplyworried,itwillcertainly/isboundto…inthetimetocome.

VI.图表作文

Ascanbeseenfromthegraph/table/diagram,therehavebeendramatic/considerable/unfavorablechangesinthepastperiodfrom__to__.Tobeconcrete…only…in__（year）while/whereastheratio（s）wentupto…in__（year）.Thesechangesaremostdisturbing,soitisnecessaryforustogointothewhysandwhereforesofthemfirst.

Somechanges,suchas…,resultfrom…,butmanyothershavemuchtodowith…Inthefirstplace…Inthesecond,inorderto…,manhasto…,whichinturnhasaccelerated…Inthethird…

Thelistofcausescouldgoon,buttheyarealreadyenoughtoindicatethatthesechangesareproducingmoreandmorenegativeeffectsontheworld.Thesechangesnotonly…,butalso…12）Ifitisallowedtorunitscourse,Ibelieve/Iamafraid,thistrendwillcertainlybringmoreharm/threatstooursociety/life

VII.谚语类作文

…isawell-knownproverbwhichallofusarefamiliarwith.Ittellsus

Thewell-knownproverb…haslongbeenacceptedbyallofus.

that…Ifullyagreewithitanditsimplications/meanings,inmymind,canbejustifiedinthreeaspects.

Inmymind,however,Idonotagreewithittosomeextent,generallyforthreereasons.

Firstly,…Secondly,…thirdly,…Acaseinpointis…

Wecanlearnalotfromthisproverb（andputitintopractice）.Ontheonehand,…weshould…Ontheotherhand,wearesupposedto….Onlyinthisway,canwe…

1．观点类

MyViewonOpportunity

1.有的人认为机会是极少的，另一些人认为人人都回又某种机会

2.你的看法如何？

3.你的结论

Differentpeoplehavedifferentviewsonopportunity.Somepeoplethinkthattherearefewopportunitiesintheworld,whileotherpeoplearguethateverybodywillhavesomekindofopportunityalonghisliferoute.

AsfarasI’mconcerned,Iagreewiththelatteropinion.Foronething,Ifirmlybelieveopportunitiesareeverywherearoundus.Nopersonwillbeunluckyenoughtohavenoopportunitiesallthetime,because“everydoghashisday”.Foranother,sinceopportunitiesaretransient,wehavetomakegoodpreparationsandimproveourselves.JustthinkofNewton,whodiscoveredtheLawofGravitywhenmanypeoplehadwatchedanapplefallingaheadofhim.

Takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration,wemaysafelycometotheconclusionthattherearequiteafewopportunitiesinoursociety.Onlyifwegetpreparedcanweseizetheopportunitiesinsteadoflettingthemslipby,justasthesayinggoes:

“Opportunitiesareonlyforthepreparedminds.”

MyViewonJob-hopping

1．有的人喜欢始终从事一种工作，因为------

2．有的人喜欢经常更换工作，因为------

3．我的看法

People’sopinionsarealwaysdiferentoncetheytalkaboutjob-hopping.Thosewhoneverchangetheirjobthroughouttheirlifemaintainthattheyhaveaccumulatedenoughexperiencetoworksmoothlyandefficiently,sowhat’sthepointofchangingtoanotherjob?

Theyalsofirmlybelievethatanyonewhowantstoexcelinhisspecialtyhastoworkhardonthesamepostforyearstoacquiretherequiredskillandknowledge.

Manypeoplethinkotherwise.Ontheonehand,ifthepresentjobcanofferneithersatisfactoryworkingconditionsnorfutureopportunities,theywillnothesitatetoleave.Ontheotherhand,theyholdthatlifeisbutonceandjob-hoppingcanproviderichandexcitingexperiences.

Myownopinionisthatjob-hopping,inthisfast-developinginformationera,hasbecomemorethancommonandacceptable.Ifwewanttokeepupwiththetimes,wehavetochangeforthefaster,thehigherandthestronger.Iflifeisajourney,wehavenothingtoregretsolongasweputmeaningintoit.Sowhynotmakeachange?

MyViewonUniversities’MovingtoSuburbs

1．近年来许多大学迁往郊区

2．我对这一现象的看法。

Thepastdecadewitnessedtheprocessofmanyuniversities’movingoutofthedowntownareaandintothesuburbs.Onthewhole,thispracticeisbeneficialinmanyaspects.

Firstandforemost,themovingperiodisthecriticalperiodofdevelopmentandexpansion.Withthesupportofthegovernment,theuniversitycanbuildmorebuildings,enrollmoreteachersandbuymoreequipmenttokeeppacewiththetimesandmeettheneedsofenrollmentexpansion.Inthesecondplace,bothteachersandstudentswillbeinabettermoodtolearnlessonsanddoresearchestogetherwhentheyarefarfromthenoisesandthetemptationofthecity.Lastbutnottheleast,asforthehistoricuniversitybuildings,wecancontinuetoprotectthemandmakegooduseofthem.Infact,manyuniversitiescankeeptheiroriginalareaunchangedasbranches.

Therefore,wecanseethatmovingintothesuburbsisbeneficialtoauniversity’sdevelopment.Itisalsogoodtobothteachersandstudentswhowanttomakegraterprogressintheirspecializedfields.

MilitaryTraining

　　ThereisnodenyingthefactthatithasbeenahotlydebatedtopicwhetherstudentsshouldattendmilitarytraininginChinainthepastyears.Opinionsonthisissuediffersharply.Someholdthepositiveview.Theysaythatthetrainingcannotonlybuildupstudents’bodiesbutalsotempertheirwillpower.Besides,throughthetraining,studentscandeveloptheirteam-spiritandsenseofdiscipline.

　　Others,however,holdtheoppositeview.