英语作文写作模板.docx

英语作文写作模板.docx

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英语作文写作模板

写作1

基本表达

人们认为：

itisgenerally/widelybelieved/held/agreedthat

越来越：

beincreasingly+adj.,beontherise,thegrowingnumberof

万能理由（Omnipotence）

1.方便：

convenient/convenience

2.效率：

efficient/efficiently/efficiency

3.节省和浪费：

savetime/money/space;economical,thrift

wastetime/money/space;costly,lavish

4.人的心理健康：

independent,cooperative,competitive,

considerate,confident,creative,sociable,

perseverance;selfish,isolated,conserative

5.人的身体健康：

health,disease,strong,strength,energetic

6.娱乐：

colorful,pleasure,joy,recreation,entertainmentm,relax

tired,boring,lonely

7.环境：

environment,pollute,poisonous,dirty

8.安全和危险：

safe,danger,risk

9.经验：

experience,socialexperience,enterthesociety

10.人际：

humane,fair,unfair,help,assist,freedom,freely

写完之后修改注意：

（内容方面尽量不要修改）

1、字母大小写

2、怪符号

3、单词拼写

4、主谓一致

5、动词时态

6、名词单复数

四级作文的要求、评分标准及评卷实例

一、四级考试对作文的要求

《大学英语考试大纲》明确规定：

四级大学英语写作考试时间为30分钟。

要求应试者写出一篇不少于120个词的短文；写作命题源于日常生活和有关科技、社会文化等方面的一般常识，不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。

其命题方式有：

给出题目、或规定情景、或给出段首句续写、或给出关键词写短文、或看图作文。

要求内容切题，文理通顺，表达正确，语义连贯，无重大语言错误。

二、评分原则

四级考试作文采用总体评分（GLOBALSCORING）的方法，即把内容和语言作为一个统一体进行综合评判。

主要是看内容是否切题，表达是否充分，所用语言是否能清楚而明确地表达思想。

评卷人员根据思想内容和语言表达的总体印象给出奖励分（REWARDSCORES），并不是按语言点错误的多少扣分。

三、评分标准

作文题满分为15分。

阅卷标准共分为五等：

2分，5分，8分，11分及14分。

2分――条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

5分――基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重错误。

8分――基本切题，表达思想比较清楚，文字尚连贯，但语言错误较多。

11分――切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。

14分――切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯较好，基本上无语言错误。

0分――白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想。

阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数档次（如8分）相似，即定为（8分）；若认为稍优或劣于该档次，则可加一分（9分）或减一分（7分），但不得加减半分。

字数不足应酌情扣分：

81――89词：

扣1分；71――80词：

扣2分；61――70词：

扣3分；51――60词：

扣4分；50以下词：

扣5分。

经原国家教委批准，四、六级考试已从1997年6月份起采用“作文最低分”制计算成绩，其中足见国家对提高大学英语写作能力的重视程度。

按规定，考生作文若为0分，无论其总分是否高于60分，均作不及格处理；若其作文分高于0分，低于6分，报导成绩时，需从总分中减去6分，再加上实得作文分。

也就是说，要从总分中减去实得作文分与6分之间的差额部分。

实例一

题目：

Bicycles――AnImportantMeansofTransportinChina

提纲：

（1）为什么自行车在中国这样普及

（2）和汽车的比较

（3）自行车在中国的前途

Score:

BicycleisanimportantmeansoftransportinChina.TheimportantreasonofitistheeconomyofChinese.TheuseofbicycleinChinaiswidelybecausepeopleinChinahavenothighwage.Theycanonlyaffordabicycle,andtheyhavenomoneytobuyacarwhichistooexpensive.SoChineseusuallybuyabicycle,anduseittogotowork,orgototravelandsoon.TheotherreasonisthelargepopulationofChina.Allthesemadethebicyclebecometheimportantmeansoftransport.

Thebicycle,comparedtothecar,isnottooexpensiveanditiseasytolearnandtouseanditcansavethesurfaceofputtingit.Itdoesn’tasktobuildthegaragelikecar.ThispointisveryimportanttoChina,becauseofthelackofland.Itisn’ttooexpensive,soChinesecanaffordit.Itdoesn’tneedanyoil,anditcan’tcausethepolusion.Allofthesearethegoodneedscomparedtothecar.

Inthefuture,bicyclewillbewidelyused.Anditwillbeingooddemand.Peoplewillproducemuchmoremodernbicycles.

Score:

BicyclesareverypopularinChina.Almosteveryfamilyinthecityhastwoorthreebicycles.Duringtherushhour,youcanseethatthousandsofpeople--manandwoman,oldandyoung--ridetheirbicyclestoworkandstudy.ThatiswhyChinaiscalled“thekingdomofbicycles”.

注：

1.第一句总写，第二句和第三句分写，最后总写。

2.Duringtherushhour分词结构开头。

3.破折号内容为同位语,句式多变化。

Comparedwithcars,bicyclesaresuperiorinmanyways.First,theyarecheap,convenientandeasytoride.Second,ridingbicycleisgoodforhealth.Third,theybringnonoisenorairpollution.Thoughcarsarefasterandmorecomfortable,theyaretooexpensive.Theyconsumeplentyofoilandtheypollutetheair.Sometimes,itisdifficultforadrivertoparkhiscar.Moreovertheyoftencausetrafficjamsandaccidents.

注：

1.Comparedwithcars分词结构开头。

2.besuperiorto/beinferiorto优于/低于

3.thirst,second,third英语语言有层次感，信号词

4.cheap便宜，最好用inexpensive

5.begoodforhealth对健康有好处（万能理由）

6.Moreover表示递进

Inmyopinion,thefutureofbicycleisverypromising.SinceChinaisadevelopingcountryandhasalargepopulation,Ithink,ridingbicycleisappropriatetoChinesepresentconditions.Itwillbeanimportantmeansoftransportationforquitealongtime.

注：

promising有前途的apromisingyoungman

Score:

Theremillionsofbicyclesintoday’sChina.Bicyclesareveryimportantmeansoftransportinpeople’sdailylives.Becausetorideabicycleisverysimple,tobuyabicyclewillnotcostsomuchmoney,toparkabicycleneedsjustasmallroomandtorideabicycledoesnotneedoilbuttherider’sstrength,bicyclesarepopularallovertheworld,especiallyinChina.

注：

第一句应该用therebe结构

Comparedwithacar,abicycleismuchcheaper.ItismoresuitableforChinaasadevelopingcountry.Andabicyclehasalmostcausednopollutionbutacarhas.Onthecontrary,abicycleistooslow,itcostsmoretimesthanacar.

IthinkthepopulationofChina’sbicyclewillbekeptforthelongrun.Becauseitwillbereplacedbyacar,abusandsooninsomedevelopedareasinChina,anditwillbemadeawideuseinthedevelopingareasinChina,thenumberofbicyclesinChinawillbethesameastodaybutIbelievethatit’squalitywillbeimproved.

I、对比观点选择题：

1.有人认为……；

2.另外一些人认为……；

3.谈谈你的观点和看法。

（最好写成4段）

实例二99年6月真题

ReadingSelectivelyOrExtensively?

Outline:

1.有人认为读书要有选择

2.有人认为应当博览群书

3.我的想法

①

Whenitcomestoreading,somepeoplethinkthatreadingselectivelyisagoodway,butsomeotherpeopledonotagreewiththem,theythinkthatreadingextensivelyisbetter.

Thosepeople,whothinkthatreadingselectivelyisbetter,believethatgoodbooksareasmanyasbadbooks.Thosegoodbookscangiveuspleasureandknowledge,whilethosebadbookscanonlyleadustothewrongway.So,theysuggestthatweshouldonlychoosethegoodbookstoreadandnevertouchthebadbooks.

But,theotherpeople,whoholdthatreadingextensivelyisbetter,thinkthatonekindofbookscanonlygiveusoneaspectofknowledge.Eventhebestbookonlycontainsonefieldofinformation.So,theycaneasilycometotheconclusionthat“toknowmore,toreadmore”.Sotheybelievethatreadingextensivelyisbetter.

Tomypoint,weshouldchoosegoodbookstoreadandreadgoodbooksasmanyaspossible.Bythisway,wecanincreasethequalityandquantityofreading.

②

Ithinkreadingnotonlyselectivelybutalsoextensively.Becausethetwosidesarenotcontradict.Ourtimeislimited.Sowecannotreadeverybookintheworld.However,wewillnotbeinterestedineverybook.Weshouldreadthosebooksmaybeusefultoours,readthosebookswhichwelike.Butthosebookswhichwechoosemustbeextensivelysoitcangiveoursallkindsofknowledge,newsandsoon,italsomakeoursbecomeawiseman.Ontheonehandreadingselectivelyletoursnotwasteourtimewhichitislimited.Moreoveritcanemphasisamongallbooksthatwecanread.Ontheotherhandreadingextensivelycandealwithallkindsofneedinourlife.Theyareallusefultoours.

③

Mostpeoplethoughtthatreadbooksshouldhavebeenselective.Butothersbelievedreadingextensivelywascorrection.

Selectivebooksorreadingextensively?

Sure,youcanchoiceonefrompreviousideas,

ononehand,Therearetoobooktoreadforus.Weshouldchoosethosewhichweinterested,anditwouldbehelpfulforus.

onanotherhand.Someone’sinterestingwaswide.Eachbookcouldbringyouspecificcontainwecouldn’treadingatonlyonelevel.

Iconfirmedalloftheseideasweregoodbutweren’twise.

Asareader,themaintaskistodiscovermoreandmorebooksthesecondtaskistoheldsomewhichwonderfulandhelpfulforus.Don’ttreatthesebookswithrecklessabandon.

Thebesttechnologyofreadingisconnect.

④

Howshouldweread?

Shouldwereadselectivelyorextensively?

Everyonehashisownview.

Somepeoplethinkweshouldreadselectively.Theyarguethatwiththedevelopmentofmodernscienceandtechnology,moreandmorebooksarepublished.Itisimpossibleforustoreadallthebooks.What’smore,therearemanybadbooksthatarepoisonoustoourmind,andweshouldn’treadthem.Sincewecan’treadallthebooksandweshouldn’treadbadbooks,wemustreadselectively.

Butothersmaynotagree,theyemphasizethattoday'ssocietyisnotwhatitwas.Ifonemanhasmanykindsofknowledge,hewillhavemorechancestosucceed.Ifamanknowsmuchinonefieldbutknowsnothinginotherfields,hemaybeuseless.Sincewemusthavemanykindsofknowledge,wemustreadextensively.

Who’sright?

Ithinkbothofthemhavesomethingright.ButIthinkweshouldreadextensivelyfirst.Weshouldreadbooksinmanyfields,andreadselectivelyinonefield.

⑤

Somepeoplethinkreadingshallbechosen.Becausesomebooksaregoodtohumanbeingsandsomebooksareharmfultopeople.

Somepeoplethinkthatmenshouldreadbookswidely.Becausewidereadingcanhelpmangetmuchknowledge.Andmancanuseittochangetheworld.

Itismypointthatreadingmustbeselectively.Becausereadingisimportanttoman.Somebookscanhelpmanbutsomebookscanleadsomepeopletocrime.ItcanbeseeninthenewspapersandwatchedonTV.Wecanmakefulluseofsomegoodbooksandgainmoreusefulknowledge.Itcanmakeourlifemorebeautiful.Wemustgiveupthoseunhelpfulbooks.Theyarenotgoodtous.Readingthemiswastingtimeandmoney.Soreadingselectivelyisanimportantpartinreading.

Score:

Mostpeoplethoughtthatreadbooksshouldhavebeenselective.Butothersbelievedreadingextensivelywascorrection.

Selectivebooksorreadingextensively?

Sure,youcanchoiceonefrompreviousideas,

ononehand,Therearetoobooktoreadforus.Weshouldchoosethosewhichweinterested,anditwouldbehelpfulforus.

onanotherhand.Someone’sinterestin