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写作技巧

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xiaobaixiaoqing

TOEFL:

speakingsection

writing

BBC:

planetearth词动词形容词名词语法

MovieTEDSong:

memorize句子

Speech:

structure

words:

speaking,writing,presentation

computersimprovespeople'slives;however,computershavecreatednumerousproblems?

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Atthefirstsignoftrouble,thepeopleofcoloralwaysstayedintheirprisonofsurrenderwithbarsmadeofhopelessness.Alltheygotwerethreesquaremealsadayofshameanddespairfordessert.However,MartinLutherKing,withanunstoppablemindandlongingforfreedom,actuallyrescuedtheAfricanAmericanfromthebondsofinjustice,provingforthosewhoarehungryforequality,dignityandhonorthatmenwerecreatedequally,theywereendowedbytheircreatorswithcertainunalienablerights,andamongtheserightsarelife,libertyandpursuitofhappiness.

SAT:

Writing:

internet:

TED:

2mincoretopicinternet

connectdifferentperiods

HaveyouevertriedtheYoungMeNowme,afashionableentertainmentmodeontheInternet?

Suchafashion,throughkeepingandcomparingpicturesofpeopleatdifferentperiods,hashelpedtheuserstoretracetheirmemoryandhappiness.Basedonthistinybutrepresentativecase,IfirmlybelievethatInternetdoesbenefitthemodernmajorityfarbeyondimagination.

connectingpeople,especiallyconnectingthedifferentperiodsofthesamepeople.

[Youngme,Nowme],fashionableentertainmentmode:

internetkeepsthepicturesofpeopleatdifferentperiods

retracetheirmemory

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slipintoawatergrave负面结果关系

relyon依靠关系

providing伴随状语！

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延伸关系

outofreach难度关系ensure因果关系

suchspecialistscreatedjungletheremarkablediversity.

so.....thatalmostanimalstheretendtobesmall,butthereareexceptions.程度关系+转折关系

BZyieldstotheHun,imprisoninghimselfintothegraveofhumiliation.

名词形容词动词

asinglegrainofricecantipthescale;onemanwillbethedifferencebetweenvictoryanddefeat.

Inthefirstsignofhardshipandmisfortune,humansalwaysbelievethesuccessisoutoftheirreachandslipintothegraveofdefeatsandhumiliation.Nevertheless,throughoutourlivesarecountlessexceptions:

sometimes,mankindcanrelyonthedifficultiestosharpentheirsoulsandspirits,ensuringtheirbrilliantdestinyinthelifejourney.Moreover,thedonationfromhardshipandmisfortunecanevenliberateusfromthejailofsurrenderwiththebarsmadeofhopelessness.

honorglory

名词、动词、形容词

的：

Sheisagracefulgirl.倒

Sheisagirlofbeautyandgrace.

Sheisthegirl,whoenjoystheshinningbeautyandroyalgrace.

句子：

老百姓语法：

itis。

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that/who

Idolikeyou.

词汇≈短语：

的句子：

正是的确介词

I，uponbirthday，finallyreceivethatpartofmemoryworthofbeingforgotten.

You，inthe3-yearhighschoollife，willexperiencethecountlessfailureanddesperation，which,inthefuture,willstrengthenmysoulandspirit，shapingyouintothewinnersoflifeinfrontofthedifficultiesthatcanpushhumansintothegraveofdespair.

trees,surelyamongthemostmagnificentspecies.

定义关系

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stunstheimagination.装X关系

Lovefrommother,surelyamongthemostpreciousgiftswecanharvestfromourlifejourney,doesdonateusthepowerandstrengththatstuntheimagination.Moreover,itistherelianceonthislovethatliberatesusfromtheprisonofsufferingsandpainswithbarsofhopelessness,preventingusfromslippingintothegraveofdefeatsanddangers.Inshort,suchaloveisthepower,thestrength,thebeauty,andeventhebestfortuneweshouldcherishwithourhearts.

slipintothewatergrave

prisonofdesperationwithbarsmadeofhopelessness

Humanactivities，incenturiesafterbirthofscience，basicallyfollowsucharule:

manufacture,technologyandscience,whichmeansthatduringthelong-termproduction,weabstractthetechniqueswhencarryingoutthemanufacturethroughexperience,andgeneratethescienceintheprocessoftechnologyenhancement.

这是一个凭经验办事的过程，所以走了不少的弯路和错路。

Insidemydeepheartalwayshidesthatpartofsincereandpurelovetoyou,whichwillneverfadeawayorslipintothegraveofdegenerationwiththetimepassingby.

BetweenAandBalwaysexistsaninfinitesimalbutrealemotion,whichpushesbothofthemintothedungeonofmemory,nostalgiaandmelancholy.

MeiLiisashipofmiracle,whichdefeatedover200battleshipsandsurvivesinthegrandline.

eat,swallow,fill,irrigate,enrich,chew

givecausemakeletbabywords

construct,build,establish,sculpt,shape,mold,carve

nurture,cultivate,breed,foster,nourish

plough,sow,seed,irrigate,fertilize,harvest,enjoy

encourage,strengthen,promote,stimulate,boost,push,catalyze,inspire,illuminate,enlighten,

murmurwhispersilentexchangetinyverbalcommunication

honorable,glorious,remarkable,shinning,incredible,

splendidbrilliantextraordinary,fantastic,fancy,marvelous,magnificent,significant,shinning,miraculous,excellent,outstanding,legendary,superb,

....dropsintothedeeperanddarkerwater.负面关系

only8%vsthevastmajorityofmarinelife

creativity

Thosewhowithcreativemindmayonlyconstituteaninfinitesimalpartofallthescholarstoscience,butwhattheycontributebecomethevastmajorityofthehumancultures.Morespecifically,relyingontheinnovation,wecanberescuedfromtheprisonofignorance,breakingourbondswiththosefoolishness.Inotherwords,wecanevenchangethosedreamsfarbeyondreachintotherealitywiththatweaponnamedoriginality.Shortly,creativemindpreventsusfromdroppingintothedeeperanddarkerworldoffailuresanddesperation.

Humanity,innature,constitutesonlyaninfinitesimalpartofthemotherland;however,theyhavecreatedthemiraclesfarbeyondthereachofotherlifespecies.Searchingforthereasonbehind,westoponasimplebutclearreply:

creativemind.Tobefurther,justasasinglegrainofricewilltipthescale,soacreativemindwillbethedifferencebetweentheordinaryandthelegend,theweaknessandstrength,theplatitudeandthefresh,anddefeatandvictory.Inshort,creativitydoesenableustoreachthepeakbarelytouchedbyourearlygeneration.

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dodoesdid...........

介词：

民工：

construct,build,establish,shape,sculpt,carve,mold

nurture,cultivate,breed,foster,nourish

plough,sow,seed,fertilize,irrigate,harvest,enjoy

boost,encourage,inspire,motivate,promote,stimulate,catalyze,illuminate,push

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mulan

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ted:

youngmenowme

Humanbeingsventureintothehighestpartofourplanetattheirperil.Somethinkbyclimbingonthesemountainstheyhavesomehowconqueredthem.Butwecanonlybevisitorshere.