齐全的英语演讲比赛点评模板教学提纲.docx
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齐全的英语演讲比赛点评模板教学提纲
ThereareseveralaspectsoflanguageandspeakingthatIwouldliketofocusontodayforconsiderationstoallowyoutoimprovemovingforward.
First,theareaofpronunciationanddelivery.Someofyou,especiallywhenyouarenervous,shouldfocusmoreondictionandpronunciation.Specifically,trynottoswallowyourarticleslike"a"and"the"orlittleconnectorslike"of"Takeabreath,takeyourtime.andleteachwordbesounded.Similarly,makesureyousoundfinalconsonants,especiallythe"-ed"inyourpasttenses.ThisisoneofthethingsthatChinese,eventhegoodones,thereallygoodones,whenyoustartspeakingquicklyandpassionately,forget.So,payalotofattentionandbeconsciousthatthat'ssomethingthatyoumayknowthatthegrammars,grammaticalandstructuralrulesandnotsoundthatfinalconsonantoryoumaybealittlefuzzyonwhatthepasttenses,butthatsome-thingthatmakesabigdifferenceinacompetition,
Finally,intheareaofpronunciationforallyoustudents,notjustthecontestantsheretoday,please,theword"the",th-:
putyourtonguebetweenyourteeth.It'snot"da,"it's"the";it'snot"der."it's"their";it'snot"utter."it's"other."Youcandothis,youcandothis,Practiceonthewaytoclass,practiceintheshower,practicewhereverbutdon'tsay"da,"it's"the."
SecondcategoryoffeedbackisIwanttotalkverybrieflyaboutlexiconandvocabulary.AsImentioned,Ifeltthatyouruseoflexiconintoday'spresentationwasquitesophisticatedandshowedalotofpreparation.Mostofyoumayhavenoticedthatinthecontemporaneous,spontaneousremarksandquestions,thelevelofvocabularycamedownanotchortwo.That'sverynatural:
some-thingthatweallhavetoworkon.ButtherewereacoupleofIthink.there'sthreeexamplesthatI'dliketosharewithyoutotakehometoworkon.Numberone,sincethetopicwasecology,whenyoutalkaboutlivinginharmonywithdazaren,isit"thenature"or"nature'?
Nature!
I'snot"thenature"!
"Thenature"isshenrnashenmadongxidexingzhi,so,thatwaslikeoneofthoseerrorsthat.umm,cameupbecauseofthethemeofthespeech,butthat'ssomethingyoucanrememberrightnow,"Liveinharmonywith...nature."'Second,somesmallthingsthatInoted,someofyoumessedup"emphasized"with"emphasis"---it'sacommonmistake.Andoneofthecontestantswastalkingabouthowimportantitwastobeawareoftheenvironmentandthatweshouldgenerateawarenessofenvironmenttohelpusthinkofwaystoimproveit,andshe,Ithinkitwasshe,said"weshouldgetaconsensusoftheenvironment,"Ithinksheprobablymeant"sense.""getasenseoftheenvironment"asanawareness.So,littlethingslikethat.Becarefulsemantically.Ifyoureachtheupperlevelsoflanguage,it'sveryeasytochooseawrongwordandIguessmyadviceforyouwouldbe,"Whenindoubt,checkadictionaryfornuanceandproperusage."becausewhenyou'reinthelowerlevelsyou'renotusingthosefancywords.Butwhenyougetupintheupperlevels,liketoday,they'reveryimportant.
Finally,mylastcategoryoffeedbackforyouisintheareaofdiscourseandorganization.Thisisveryimportantinspeakingcontests,it'sveryimportantwhenyou'retranslatingattheupperlevels,andit'simportantinadultlifewhenyou'reworkingintheworldofworkwhereyou'renolongertalkingsimplyaboutyourselfandyourfamily,butotherthings,issues.Today'scontestantsdemonstratedawidevarietyofrhetoricalstylesintheirpreparedspeeches.Manyofthecandidatesshowedasophisticateduseoflinguisticregister,andregisteris,asyouknow.usinglanguagethatisappropriateforaspecificpurposeforaspecificsocialcontext.ThereasonlmentionregisteristhatforlearnersofEnglishasasecondlanguage,thehighertheregister,themoredifficultitistospeakaccurately,coherently,andpersuasively.Right?
So,today,oneofthecontestantsmadeaveryinsightfulremarkandsaid,Iquote,"ThehigherlevelofEnglishIspeak,themoremistakesImake."Rememberthat'?
Actually.WhatshemeantbythiswasthatshewashavingtroublecommunicatingsophisticatedideasandargumentsinEnglishwithoutmakingerrorsingrammarorusage.UniversitystudentslearningEnglishcanimprovetheirabilitytospeaknaturallyinhighregistersandhighlevelofdiscourseandcansustainahighlevelofdiscoursebydoingafewthingsandthesearethethreepiecesofadviceIwillleaveforyoubeforeIconcludemyremarks.So,thisisadviceteachersandstudentsforhowtobuildthatcompetencyandhighlevelofdiscourse.
Numberone:
Readtextsthatrepresentahighlevelofdiscourse.Soakupthatlanguage.But,rememberthatwrittentexthasadiscoursethatisseparatefromspokendiscourse.Someofyouwerespeakingtodayinvery.kindofwritten-proselanguage,andyoumaynotwanttodothatinthefuture.
Numbertwo,pieceofadvice:
Makeataperecordingofyourselftalkingaboutabstracttopicsorcomplextopicsandthengobackandlistentoitandlistentohowitsounds:
ifit'scohesiveandcoherent'?
Arethereerrors?
Thengoback,practiceagain,anddoitasecondtimelikeeditingawrittentextbut,infact,it'saspokentext.Youwillhearwhatyou'redoingthatcouldbeimproved,evenyou,andofcourseifyouhaveteachers,that'sevenbetter,butyou,yourselfwillhear.
Finally,mylastpieceofadviceforyouisthatyoushouldpracticebuilding.Iflanguage,ifspokenlanguage,waslikeahouseyoushouldpracticebuildingthehousebrickbybrick,storeybystorey,soyouallcandobasicsentencesnow,clearly.And,mostofyouareprettygoodatbuildingparagraphs,butsomeofyouarenotyetperfecthousebuildersintermsofdiscourseandorganization.Soyouwanttopracticewritingcompoundandcomplexsentences,andthenweavethosetogetherintoparagraphsandyou'llweavethoseparagraphsintothefullspokentext.Weavethemtogether,pushyourselftogoforthediscourseandwovennaturesothatnotonlythethoughtflows,butit'scoherent.And.Ithinkyou'llagreewithme,thatsomeofthemostcompellingspeechesthatweheardtodaydisplayedthistypecoherenceandsortofnaturalprogressionofideas,lfyoudothat,there'snodoubtinmymindthatyoucanprogressatthisarea.
Inconclusion,Iwouldliketoquoteoneofourquestionmasters,whosaidtodaythat,"Lifeisajourney,notthearrival."thatyoufocusonthejourneynotthearrival.Languagelearningislifelong.Lifelong.So,asyoumoveforward,languagelearningenjoythejourney.
评委总结发言(表达感谢时用):
Goodafternoon,ladiesandgentlemen,excellentcontestants,itsreallyagreathonorandpleasuretobehereasajudgeforthisEnglishfeastofspeechcompetition.Ithinkallcontestantsdidagreatjobtoday,andI’dliketoexpressmythankstoeveryonewhohasmadeagreatcontributiontoorganizingthecompetitionandhasmadeitafantasticsuccess.Solet’sgiveabigroundofapplausetoallofthem.Ihavebeenreallyenjoyingthiscontestthoroughly,especiallybecauseallthecontestantshaveapproachedthetopicfromdifferentperspectives.Allspeecheshavebeenwellresearched,withgoodthoughtsaswellasinterestingideas.Iamverypleasedtoseethatmostofyoudeliveredyourspeechwithgoodpronunciation,cleararticulation,withgoodeyecontactandapropermanner.FinallyIwouldliketotakethisopportunitytoofferyousomelittletipsaboutpublicEnglishspeechcompetition.
First,theareaofpronunciationanddelivery.Someofyou,especiallywhenyouarenervous,shouldfocusmoreondictionandpronunciation.Specifically,trynottoswallowyourarticleslike"a"and"the"orlittleconnectorslike"of"Takeabreath,takeyourtime.andleteachwordbesounded.Similarly,makesureyousoundfinalconsonants,especiallythe"-ed"inyourpasttenses.ThisisoneofthethingsthatChinese,eventhegoodones,thereallygoodones,whenyoustartspeakingquicklyandpassionately,forget.So,whatIherewanttosuggesttothosecontestants,whenyoupreparingyourspeech,whateverthepreparedspeechandtheimpromptuspeech,donotjustfocusonthewholepictureofyourwork,insteadpayaattentiontothesmalldetails,aswellastheintonation.
Ontopofthat,Iwouldliketospeakwiththosewhoalwaysgetsomewhatalittlebitnervousoncetheystandonthestagetodeliverapublicspeech.Speakingofthis,Iwouldliketosharewithyoualittlebitaboutmyself.WhenIwasatmyhighschoolandIoftenblushedonmyfacewhenIstandeveninthefrontourclass,letalonethecitycompetitionlateron.Andoneofmyforeignteachersgivemysometips.That’swhatIwanttosharewithyourightnow.whenyoufeelnervous,especiallybeforegetonthestage,takeadeepbreathandtellyourselfinyourheartthatIamthebestinthewholeuniverse.Then,bythetimeyouspeak,whatyoushouldbearinmindisthatdon’tevergetdirectcontactwithsamepartareaofaudienceallthetime.Rememberyouareheretoservethewholelistenerswithyourpointofview,sochangeyoureyesighttodifferentaudience.
Ialwaysliketosaythat”Life
isajourney”.Languagelearningisalifelongexperienceandweneverfinishlearning,
especiallyfortheEnglishlanguagewhichissoaliveandeverchanging.Soasyou
moveforwardwithyourlanguagelearningmakesureyouenjoyeverymomentof
yourjourney.
面对标新立异选手:
Youreallyhavebeenverycreativeintryingtoclearoutyour
point.Butthistime,itwasveryclearlystatedwhatwouldberequiredofyouinthe
speech.Therefore,itisveryimportanttounderstandwhatisrequiredofyouandwhat
isdemandedofyouinacompetition.
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