浙江高考读后续写真题范文赏析之欧阳生创编文档格式.docx

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“Tom!

"

shecried."

Help!

"

Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.

Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling（滴落）somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow.Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.

Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?

Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.

注意:

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语：

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Paragraph2

ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.

2017.6

Onabright,warmJulyafternoon,MacHollan,aprimaryschoolteacher,wascyclingfromhishometoAlaskawithhisfriends.Oneofhisfriendshadstoppedtomakeabicyclerepair,buttheyhadencouragedMactocarryon,andtheywouldcatchupwithhimsoon.AsMacpedaled（骑行）alongalone,hethoughtfondlyofhiswifeandtwoyoungdaughtersathome.Hehopedtoshowthemthisbeautifulplacesomeday.

ThenMacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim.“Man,that'

sabigdog!

”hethought.Butwhenhelookedtotheside,hesawinstantlythatitwasn’tadogatall,butawolf,quicklycatchingupwithhim.

Mac’sheartjumped.Hefoundouthiscanofhearspray.Withonehandonthebars,hefiredthesprayatthewolf.Abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andtoMac'

srelief,itfellback,shakingitshead.Butaminutelater,itwasbyhissideagain.ThenitattackedthebackofMac'

sbike,tearingopenhistentbag.Hefiredatthewolfasecondtime,andagain,itfellbackonlytoquicklyrestartthechase（追赶）。

Macwaspedalinghardnow.Hewavedandyelledatpassingcarsbutwascarefulnottoshowdown.Hesawasteepuphillclimbbeforehim.Heknewthatoncehehitthehill,he’dbeeasycaughtupandthewolf’steethwouldbetearingintohisflesh.

Atthismoment,PaulandBeekyweredrivingtheircarontheirwaytoAlaska.Theydidn’tthinkmuchofitwhentheysawtwocyclistsrepairingtheirbikeonthesideoftheroad.Abitlater,theyspottedwhatthey,too,assumedwasadogrunningalongsideamanonabike.Astheygotcloser,theyrealizedthatthedogwasawolf.Macheardalargevehiclebehindhim.Hepulledinfrontofitasthewolfwascatchingupfast,justadozenyardsawaynow.

Thecarabrubtlystoppedinfrontofhim.

Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.

201711.浙江高考A 

vacationwithmymother

Ihadaninterestingchildhood:

Itwasfilledwithsurpriseandamusements,allbecauseofmymother-loving,sweet,andyet 

absent-minded 

and 

forgetful.Onestrangefamily 

trip 

wetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.

MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached, 

David,myeight-year-oldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriends.Whoknewifwe’deverseethemagain?

Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games, 

camping 

equipment,anda 

tent 

intothecarandbravelydroveoff.Webravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe’dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtraveler’schecks 

Mom 

hadforgotten.

DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdrivingwhile 

Dadslept:

”YoustandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileIgo,andI’llstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo.”Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind:

“Honey,wherearethekids?

”“What?

!

Oh,Gosh…Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet.”Wewereneveractuallyleftbehindinastrangecity,butweweren’tabouttotakeanychances.

Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehad 

trouble 

findingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainforsometime,Momsuddenlygotagreatidea:

Whydidn’twefindahousewithalikely-lookingbackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?

DavidandIbecamenervous.Toourgreatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea.Momnevercouldunderstandourobjections.Ifastrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdoorsteps,Momwouldhavebeendelighted.Shethinkseveryoneintheworldasas 

nice 

assheis.Wefinallyfoundavacancyinthenexttown. 

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.

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Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.

20186

Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.

WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.

HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast."

Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,"

hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens.whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze（吃草）.IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.

Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahoseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains."

Don’tbelateforsupper,"

UnclePaulcried,"

andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!

OK!

mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfamhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven（编织的）blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.

1.所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.

参考范文一：

Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Janehadtostayaloneintheforestforanothercoldnight.Atthatmoment（时间）,shefeltalittlesad,butshewasn’tsofrightened（情感）.Sheremindedherselfconstantly,（心理）“Tommusthavecalledforthosehelicopters.Maybe（情感）hewasinoneofthemandwillreturnsoon（动作）!

Ihavetoguidehimtomorrow.”Shefeltasleep（动作）anddreamedofseeingTom（动作）.

ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Sheatesomeberriesandthen（时间）walkedalongthestream,hoping（心理）tofindasuitableplacetoguidethehelicopter.Shewalkedandwalked,exhaustedbutfullofhope.Suddenly（时间）,shespotted（动作）ahugeflatrock.Shemanaged（动作）toclimbontoitandwaitedwithpatience.Themoment（时间）thehelicopterappeared（动作）again.Theneareritgot（动作）,themoreshewaved（动作）theyellowblouse.Tohergreatjoy,（情感）thehelicopterdidn’tmissJanethistimeanditlandednearthebigrockslowly.Tomjumpedoffthehelicopterandrushed（动作）towardsJane.Theyhuggedeachothertightly（情感）andburstintotears（情感）.

参考范文二：

Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Macjumpedoffhisbicycleanddashedforthebackdoorofthecar.Itwaslocked.Hethenranaroundtothepassengerdoor,butitwaslocked,aswell,sohebegantoclimbthroughtheopenwindow.Whenspottingthis,Paulquicklyunlockedthedoor,andthefrightenedmandivedin,slammingthedoorbehindhim.PaullookedoutthebackwindowandsawthewolfstandingoverMac’sbikeasifitwereakill.Shortlyafter,theanimalranoff.

Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.Macemergedfromthecarandhuggedhisfriends.“IthoughtIwasgoingtodie,”Maccriedtothem.Macretrieved（取回）hisbicycle,andthethreemenresumed（继续）theirroadtrip,agreeingtokeepinoneanother’ssightline.Afewmilesdowntheroad,Macpulledoverandburstintotears.“Therestofthetripwasamazing,butIhadtolettheformeremotionout.”

参考范文三：