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1.必须使用所给的4个关键词；
2.次数不少于120词；
3.不能使用真实姓名和学校。
2013年湖南高考英语作文评分细则
评分角度
主题
评分要点
比赛（match）
1、有输赢结果的活动
2、可具体，可抽象
评分标准及细则
1、空白（含仅写几个词或短语）计0分
2、跑题（与主题完全无关，这通常是整篇抄袭试卷原文的结果）计0分
3、完全不用英语（如用中文或汉语拼音）作答，计0分
4、切题的，依照“内容”和“形式”定档计分
内容
15’
1、有经历描写
2、有情感抒发
注意:
1、切题指紧扣主题，描了自己或他人的一次比赛（match）活动，有感受抒发，直接使用了4个关键词，使用了所给关键词的同义说近义词的不算跑题
2、对于内容切题而语言表达特别差的，按内容给分，最高记15分
3、对于内容不太顺但语言表达很好的文章，按形式给分，最高计10分
4、异常卷（如雷同，卷面无法辨认）转交学科组处理
形式
10’
1、词汇
2、语法
3、衔接及连贯
其他
1、词数
2、书写
3、卷面
1、词数不达标（明显少于12行，即剩余四行）扣1分
2、书写特别工整，卷面特别整洁加1分
3、书写一般，但基本能辨认，不要降档给分
4、书写漂亮，不可随意凭印象提高档次给分
分数档
五档:
完全达到交际目的（perfectcommunication）21-25’
1.充分具体涵盖所有的内容要点
2.语法结构使用广泛，准确而灵活，用词丰富而地道，句际及段际衔接自然，紧密，语义连贯
3.极少出现小错误，如标点，单复数，大小写等。
四档：
有效达到交际目的（propercommunication）16-20’
1.完全而具体地涵盖所有要点
2.语法结构使用丰富，正确而自然，词汇使用多样而流畅，信息和观点安
排有序，分段充分，适当
3.有少数小错误
三档：
基本达标（passablecommunication）11-15’
1.涵盖所有内容要点
2.多数词句语法结构正确，使用交际词汇量，信息和观点有一定组织性，
但缺少整体延续性
3.语法，拼写，衔接及标点错误多，导致难以理解。
二档：
微略达标（partialcommunication）6-10’
1.涵盖某一要点
2.仅有极少数语法正确，使用的词汇和表达非常有限；
信息和观点缺乏组
织性
3.语法，拼写，衔接及标点错误非常多，严重影响信息传递
一档：
略微达标（problematiccommunication）1-5’
1.仅涉及某个要点的部分内容
2.除背诵和抄写的词外，无法写出正确而完整的句子；
词汇使用极其有限，基本没有掌握构词法和拼写规则
ExcellentsentencesadaptedbyGail
1.“Youwillneverbealoserunlessyouquittrying.”whenIfailedanimportantexam,myEnglishteachertoldmethat,whichIcan’tagreewithmore.
2.Memoriescamefloodingwhenlookingatthe4words.
3.Inmyopinion,thereisnodefinitionofwinnerandloser.Ifwehavetriedourbestwhenweareintrouble,wearestillwinners.
4.Onlywhenastudentbeginstostudycanheknowthepowerofknowledge;
Onlywhenachildhelpshermotherdohouseworkcanheknowthehardshipoflife;
Onlywhenapersontakespartinamatchcanheunderstandthemostimportantthinginamatchisnotthewinnerorloser,butthefriendship.
5.Lifeislikeamatchwherethereisawinner,thereisaloser.
6.Don’tletanyfailuresdiscourageyou,foryoucannevertellhowclosewemaybetovictory.
7.Thegrowingpainstousarelikethestrugglesoutofcocoons（蚕茧）forbeautifulbutterflies.
8.Whereveryouare,friendshipisveryimportantforeveryone.Loveyourfriendastheyloveyou,andyouwillfindyourworldismorecolorfulbecauseoffriendship.
9.Whetheryouareawinnerorloser,pleaserememberitthattheresultofamatchisnotimportantatall.Themostimportantisthefriendship,whichcanprovideuswithrealhappiness.
10.Itisnottheresultbuttheprocessofthematterthatreallycounts.ThatiswhatIlearnedfromabasketballmatch.
满分作文No.1
Itisinevitablethatwemayfacematchduringourlife.ButfromwhereIstand,nomatterwhattheresultwillbe,themostimportantthingistoenjoytheprocess.
IoncetookpartinamatchheldbyaTVshow.Inordertowinaprize,Ipracticedmysingingskillseverydayandmyparentsbothsparednoeffortstohelpme.UponhearingthenewsthatIdidn’twinanyprizeafterthematch.Iburstintotears,thinkingIwasatotalfool.Tomysurprise,myMomtoldmethatshewassoproudofmethatIdaredtoperformonastagealone.Whatshedidimpressmealot:
youarethewinneryourself.
AsfarasIamconcerned,maybesometimeswecanbealoserwhencomparedtoothers,butaslongasweputourheartintothetask,wearesurethatwearethewinner.Itistheprocessofthematch,nottheresultthatshapesusintostrongerpeople.
满分作文No.2
AstheCollegeEntranceExaminationwasaroundthecorner,ourteachersputforwardtheadvicethatstudentssparesometimetohaveabasketballmatchtoreleasestress.
Withteachersandstudentscheeringaroundthecourt,theplayerswere,somehow,intension.Upongettingtheball,theplayerswerechasingeachothertoscoreforthemselves.Allofasudden,oneplayerofourclasstrippedoverandfelldown,breakinghisknee.Itwassuchagreatpainastomakehimhardtogetup.However,anotherplayercameandgavehimahand,encouraginghim.Finallytheexcitingmatchendedupwithatie,aboutwhichallofusfeltpleased.Nobodyisthewinner.
Personally,Iholdtheviewthatweshouldnotthinkthewinningpositionsoimportantthatwegetitbyhookorcrook（不择手段）,orwewillfallintoabyssofchasingwinner.Therefore,theresultconcerningwhoisthewinnerorloserdoesn’tmatter.Itwasthetouchinghelpreceivedfromeachotherthatisreallyofgreatimportance.
满分作文No.3
Generally,thosewhogetabadresultinamatch,inpeople’sopinion,arethelosers.However,asforme,wecanbewinnersevenifwelosethematchinthattherearesomethingmoresignificantthantheresult.
Lastyear,mybestfriendalongwithmeparticipatedinarunninggame.Webelievedthatwewouldn’tbebeatenbyanyoneasbothofusaregoodatrunning.Soeagerwerewetobecomethenumberonethatwewerenotascloseasbefore.IdecidedtobeathimandIwassureIwouldmakeit.Unfortunately,Ididn’tfeelwellonthatdayandwastoosicktorun.Therefore,Ifelldownduringthematchandcouldn’tstandmyself.Uponseeingmyterriblesituation,mybestfriendranbacktosupportmeandsentmetothehospital.Bothofuslostthegame.
ButIdon’tthinkwearelosersbecausewefoundourfriendshipismoreimportantthantheresult.Wearewinnersofourfriendship.Fromthisexperience,Iknowwhatpeopleshouldpayattentiontoisnottheresultbutwhattheyhavelearnt.
满分作文No.4
Enjoytheprocess
Oncethereisawinner,therewillbealoser-suchistheresultofalmosteverymatch.Toooften,wecan’tdecidetheresult,butitistheprocessthatweparticipantscanenjoyexactly.
Ioncetookpartinaspeechcontest,whichIviewedveryimportant.Devotedtothepreparation,Iwatchedvariousfamousvideosandspokeinfrontofthewholeclassseveraltimes.However,Ifinallydidn’tbecomethewinner.ButIneverthoughtofmyselfasaloser,forIdidputmyheartintoitandtheresultwassortoflessimportant.Instead,theprocesswaswhatIreallyenjoyed.
Lifeislikeamatch,ifwepaytoomuchattentiontotheresult,weshallneverenjoythebeautyoftheprocess.Sowhynotenjoytheprocess.Onlyinthiswaycanweenjoythereallife.
满分作文No.5
Thetruewinner
Lastweek,ourschoolheldabasketballmatchagainstanotherschool.Neartheendofthematch,theyonlyhadanedgeoverus.Whenourcaptaingottheball,oneofthempretendedtobeknockedintobyourcaptain.Ourcaptaintriedtohelphimupandthematchwasover.Theywon.Althoughwelostthegame,wewereallhappyinthatwewentallout.
FromthismatchIcometotheconclusionthatbeingawinnerdoesn’tmeangainingwhilealoserdoesn’tmeanlosingeverything.Whatreallycountsisthespirit,nottheresult.Aslongaswetryourbest,thereisnoneedinregretting.Inreality,atrueloseisevenmorepreciousthanafalsewinner.Haditnotbeenforthatmatch,Icouldn’thavelearnttheimportanceofspirit.
Tosumup,atruewinneristoamatchwhatwatertofish.Itisnottheresultbuttheprocessthatmatters.Lifewithoutspiritislikesailingwithoutcompasses,sobeatruewinnerandyouwillfinditsimportance.
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