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如何写一封关于索取信息的信?
普通培训类TASK1部分和学术类的TASK1部分的评分标准基本一致,对字数要求也相同。
所不同的是普通培训类TASK1部分要求考生写一封信。
考生在写作过程中要分清信的类型,如抱怨信,感谢信,道歉信,求职信等。
要注意信的格式和结构,要开门见山,直截了当,又要注意文字规范和礼貌。
时态要准确,避免用词重复,要展示出写复杂句子的能力,这是高分的前提。
至于如何索取信息信的基本格式,请参阅我曾写过的一篇例文如下:
题目:
Youareinterestedinhistoryandintendtomajorinit,butyouaretoldcomputersciencewillmakeiteasierforyoutofindajob.Writetothecollege,askingfortheirrecommendation.
正文:
DearSir,
IamwritingtoseekyouradviceregardingwhichsubjectIshouldchooseasmymajor,historyorcomputerscience.
Iamstudyinginthelastyearinhighschoolnow.Nextyear,IhopethatIwillbeabletoenrollinyourcollege.IbegantotakeaspecialinterestinhistorywhenIwasaprimaryschoolstudent.Icanstillrememberthehistoricalstoriesmyteacherstoldinclass,soIwaswonderingifIshouldcontinuetostudyhistoryinyourcollege.However,severaldaysago,oneofmyfriendstoldmethatcomputerscienceismorepopularnowadays.Asamatteroffact,manyjobsneedITskills.Iwasadvisedthatitismoreimportanttofindajobthanmerelytosatisfypersonalinterest.Therefore,itisnowveryhardformetodecidewhichsubjectIshouldchoose.MustIgiveupmyfavoritesubjectandtakeemploymentneedasapriority?
Iwouldbemorethangratefultoyouifyoucouldtellmeyouradviceaboutthis.Yourearlyreplywouldbehighlyappreciated.
Yoursfaithfully,
WangRutao
雅思普通培训类TASK1的抱怨信应如何构思并举例说明。
写抱怨信要首先要注意信的格式和结构,一般是提出问题→说明问题→提出解决问题的建议和想法。
考生在写作过程中要根据题目的要求提供足够的信息,要注意时态准确,句型多样化,避免用词重复,要展示出写复杂句子的能力,还要注意礼貌,这是取得6分或以上的关键。
下面请看一封抱怨信的例文:
题目:
Thegovernmentwillbuildanewairportnearwhereyoulive.Writealettertothenewspaperexplainingwhereyouliveandwhyyoudonotwantthisdevelopment.
DearEditor,
Iamwritingtocomplainabouttheconstructionofanairportinthevicinityofmyhome,whichisgoingtocommenceinafewmonths.
IliveinthewesternsuburbofacitycalledWestHaven.Thisareaisthemostsuitablelivingareabecausemostlocalindustriesarelocatedontheothersideofthecity.However,tomysurprise,thegovernmenthaddecidedtobuildanairporthere.
Iwouldstronglyprotestthisinconsiderateactionofthelocalgovernment.Foronething,thenoiseofaircraftwouldinevitablybreakthetranquilityofthisareaandpeacefullifestyleofthepeoplearoundhere.Foranother,becausethereareoftenlotsofbirdsflyingaboutinthesky,thismaycauseaviationsafetyproblems.Obviously,itwouldbeafoolishandevendangerousdecisiontobuildanairporthere.
Therefore,forthesakeofourlovelycity,Ihopethepresscandosomethingtohelptoavoidtheshort-sighteddevelopmentoftheairport.Itwouldbehighlyappreciatedifyoucouldforwardthismessagetotheauthoritiesconcerned.
Yoursfaithfully
AdamLi
为便于大家理解,现附上中译文如下:
尊敬的编辑:
据悉数月后在我居住的附近地区将修建一座机场,现特致函提出不同意见。
我现住西黑文市西郊,该地区是最合适的生活区,因为当地许多工业都位于城市的另一边。
然而,令我惊奇的是政府竟然将在这里修建机场。
对当地政府这种贸然做法,我表示强烈抗议。
因为一方面飞机发出的噪音不可避免地打破了这一地区的宁静和人们平静的生活方式,另一方面,因为这里空中经常有鸟飞过,这会给飞行安全带来隐患。
显然,在这里建机场是一个愚蠢,甚至危险的决策。
因此,为了我们这座可爱的城市,我希望报界能做些事情来设法避免这种缺乏远见的做法。
并请将此函转交给有关当局为盼。
您忠实的,
亚当李
YouhaveboughtaWalkmanatanairport.Onreachinghome,youdiscoverafaultwithit.Writealettertotheairportauthorityexplainingthesituation,andaskthattheproblembeputright.
DearSir,
IwishtomakeacomplaintaboutaWalkmanwhichIboughtthreedaysagointheDutyFreesectionofyourairport.Asismyhabit,Imadeapointoftryingitoutonthespot.Itworkedperfectlywell,andsoIwentaheadandpurchasedit.
However,whenIgothomeandtrieditagain,itseemedthatthevolumeknobhadceasedtowork.Removingthebackofthecase,IfoundthattheinternalcomponentsoftheWalkmanwereallrusted.Notonlythatbutsomeofthewireswerebroken.
Iamsurethatyouwillagreethatthisisamostunsatisfactorysituation.Therefore,IrequestyoutoarrangetoreplacethisWalkmanwithanotherone,whichshouldbeinperfectcondition.Failingthat,IwillhavetoinsistonafullrefundofthepricewhichIpaidforit.
Yourssincerely,
JohnJones
雅思普通培训类写作Task1的求职信写作方法:
求职信属于正规信函,因此,应采用正规文体和用词。
在开头的称谓上,既应使用DearSirorMadam,DearManager,等。
此外,在信中要写出你对应聘的工作感兴趣,自己的优势和特长及人品,性格等,最好在信中表明自信心,认为自己是合适人选。
信的结尾要注意礼貌。
请参考下面的例文:
DearSirorMadam,
Ihavejustseenyouradvertisementinthe“SundayTimes”of12thAprilforaguidetoaccompanypartiesofBritishtouristsinthesouthofFranceduringthesummermonths.Iamthereforeenclosingacurriculumvitae,togetherwithreferencesfromtwocompaniesIhaveworkedfor.
Asyoucansee,IwasbornandbroughtupinNiceandthereforeknowtheFrenchRivierawell.IstudiedmodernlanguagesatschoolandafterwardswenttoEngland,whereIobtainedtheCambridgeLowerCertificatetwoyearsago.SincethenIhaveworkedasafree-lancetranslatorandinterpreter.IhaveoftenbeenaskedtoactasaguidetogroupsofEnglish-speakingbusinessmenattendingconferencesindifferenttownsontheRivieraandamconfidentthatIwouldbesuitableforthekindofworkyouareadvertising.
Ifyouwouldlikeanyfurtherinformation,Iwouldbeverypleasedtosupplyit.
ThankyouforyourconsiderationandIamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.
Yoursfaithfully
JosianeDuval
为便于大家理解,现附上中译文如下:
尊敬的先生/女士:
我刚在4月12日的《星期日时报》上看到贵公司招聘导游的广告,该导游将陪同夏季来法国南部旅行的英国旅游团。
兹附上本人简历以及过去工作过的两家公司提供的推荐信。
您从我的简历中可以得知我在尼斯长大,因此对法国的Riviera地区较为熟悉。
我上学的时候曾学过现代语言,后又去了英国,并在两年前在那里获得“剑桥初级证书”。
此后,我一直是从事翻译工作的自由职业者。
我还经常给来Riviera河两岸不同城镇参加会议的讲英语的商务团组担当导游。
因此,我相信我适合贵公司广告上招聘的职位。
如果您需要了解更多情况,我将非常愿意提供给您。
谢谢您的考虑。
盼复。
您忠实的,
乔安杜瓦尔
如何完成普通培训类TASK1部分感谢信:
题目:
Youweretakengoodcareofbyyourfriendswhileyouwerereceivingmedicaltreatmentinhospitalafteratrafficaccident.Writealettertoexpressyourgratitudeforthem.
感谢信一般可在信的开始即写出表示感谢的话,然后说明感谢的原因以及事情大致的来龙去脉,在结尾部分还可以再次表示感谢。
感谢信可分为正式和非正式两类,你所提供的题目显然是要求写一封非正式的信函。
以下是我写的范文,仅供参考。
DearFriends,
ThankyouforyourkindnessandgoodcarewhileIwashospitalizedseveraldaysago.
Asyouknow,justacoupleofweeksago,Iwashitbyacarandmylegsgotbroken.NowIhavetotallyrecoveredfromtheinjurycausedbythetrafficaccident,whichstillhauntsmymindlikeanightmare.Thesurgicaloperationonmybrokenlegswasagreatsuccess.IfeelmorethangratefultoyouforyourfrequentvisitsandkindefforttoconsolemewhileIwasreceivingmedicaltreatmentthere.Someofyouhadevencometohelpmepracticewalking.Nodoubtyourwordsofconsolationhavenotonlyhelpedtoalleviatemypost-surgerypains,butreaffirmedmyfaithinlifeaswell.Inaddition,whatyouhavedoneformeshowsthatfriendshipisapricelesstreasureforeveryoneofus.
Thankyouagainforyourlovingkindness,andIamlookingforwardtoseeingyousoon.
Allmybest,
York
为便于大家理解,现附上中译文如下:
各位朋友好:
谢谢你们在我住院期间对我的关照。
大家都知道,就在两三周前,我被汽车撞伤,双腿骨折。
现在,我已经从交通事故给我造成的伤害中完全康复了,但那次事故仍然噩梦般地萦绕在我的脑际。
我的手术非常成功。
我在接受治疗期间,你们经常来看我,设法安慰我,对此我深表感谢。
你们有些人甚至来帮我练习走路。
毫无疑问,你们安慰的话语不仅有助于减轻我手术后的疼痛,也使我重新确立对生活的信心。
此外,你们为我所做的一切表明友谊对我们每个人都是无价之宝。
对你们的关爱再次表示感谢,并期待不久和大家见面。
祝
好!
约克
提供信息信:
Youareanoverseasstudentinacollegewheretherearenosportsfacilities.Youintendtotakepartinasportsclubnearthecollege.Writealettertotheclubmanagerforinformationabouttheclub,suchascost,openingtime,andactivities,etc.
DearManager,
Iamwritingtorequestsomeinformationaboutyoursportsclub.
IamaninternationalstudentatDartmouthCollege.Astherearenosportsfacilitiesavailableinthecollege,Iintendtojoinyourclub,whichismerelywithinwalkingdistancefromthecampus.NowIwouldliketoknowsomedetailsregardingthefollowing:
Howmuchistheadmissionfee?
Isthereanydiscountforastudent?
Ifadiscountisgiventothemembersoftheclubonly,Iwillapplyformembership.
Whendoesitopenonweekdaysandholidays?
Doesithavea24-houraccess?
Iamasportsfan.Ifpossible,Iwouldevenspendmostofmysummervacationinyoursportsclub.
Whatfacilitiesareavailableintheclub?
Ienjoyswimminginallseasons.Isthereanindoorswimmingpool?
Tabletennisismyfavoritesport.Isitavailablethere?
Iwouldbemorethangratefultoyouifyoucouldkindlysendtherelevantinformationbyposttotheaboveaddress,orviaE-mailtoinfoseek@
Againwithmanythanks,
Yoursfaithfully,
WangRutao
Youhaveapenpalabroadwhoiscomingtoseeyouforthefirsttimenextmonth.Youweresupposedtomeethim/herattheairport.Butlateryoufoundoutyoucouldnotmeethim/herontimethatday.
Writealettertohim/herexplainingwhyyouwillbelateandtellinghim/herwheretofindyouandhowtorecognizeyou.
HiJohn:
I’msogladyoucancometoChinaandseeme.It’sverynicetoputanametoafaceaftertwoyears’writing.
Iconfirmedwiththeairportthatyourplanewillarriveat4:
45pmonNov.26.ButI’mafraidIcan’tmeetyouattheairportontime.IhavetoattendanIELTSexamonthemorningofNov.26andanoralexamintheafternoonaswell.Theoralexamwillfinishat4:
00pm.Ittakesmeoneandahalfhourstogettotheairport.IamafraidyouwillhavetowaitabouthalfanhourafteryougetthroughCustoms.
Anotherthing,howcanyourecognizeme?
IwillbewearingatraditionalblacksilkChinesejacket,whichisabitweirdbutdistinctfromfaraway.Iwillstandatthecentralexitdooroftheairportlobbysoyoucan’tmissme.
Lookingforwardtoseeingyousoon.
Yours
Alan.
YouarestudyingEnglishinanEnglish-speakingcountry.Youhaveafriendinyourhometownwhoiscomingtostudyatyourcollegeandwantstoknowaboutpossibleaccommodation.Writetoyourfriend