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DearEditorsandReviewers:

Thankyouforyourletterandforthereviewers’commentsconcerningourmanuscriptentitled“PaperTitle”（ID:

文章稿號）.Thosecommentsareallvaluableandveryhelpfulforrevisingandimprovingourpaper,aswellastheimportantguidingsignificancetoourresearches.Wehavestudiedcommentscarefullyandhavemadecorrectionwhichwehopemeetwithapproval.Revisedportionaremarkedinredinthepaper.Themaincorrectionsinthepaperandtherespondstothereviewer’scommentsareasflowing:

Respondstothereviewer’scomments:

Reviewer#1:

1.Responsetocomment:

（……簡要列出意見……）

Response:

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2.Responsetocomment:

（……簡要列出意見……）

Response:

××××××

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逐條意見回答，切忌一定不能有遺漏

針對不同の問題有下列幾個禮貌術語可適當用用：

Weareverysorryforournegligenceof……...

Weareverysorryforourincorrectwriting……...

ItisreallytrueasReviewersuggestedthat……

WehavemadecorrectionaccordingtotheReviewer’scomments.

Wehavere-writtenthispartaccordingtotheReviewer’ssuggestion

AsReviewersuggestedthat……

ConsideringtheReviewer’ssuggestion,wehave……

最後特意感謝一下這個審稿人の意見：

Specialthankstoyouforyourgoodcomments.

Reviewer#2:

同上述

Reviewer#3:

××××××

Otherchanges:

1.Line60-61,thestatementsof“……”werecorrectedas“…………”

2.Line107,“……”wasadded

3.Line129,“……”wasdeleted

××××××

Wetriedourbesttoimprovethemanuscriptandmadesomechangesinthemanuscript.Thesechangeswillnotinfluencethecontentandframeworkofthepaper.Andherewedidnotlistthechangesbutmarkedinredinrevisedpaper.

WeappreciateforEditors/Reviewers’warmworkearnestly,andhopethatthecorrectionwillmeetwithapproval.

Onceagain,thankyouverymuchforyourcommentsandsuggestions

以下是審稿人意見和本人の回複。

與大家分享。

從中可以看出，這位審稿人認真讀了文章，提出很多寶貴の意見。

這些意見

分布在文章の各個地方。

我很詫異有人真正讀了我の文章。

看到這些意見，

我覺得很感激，不是因為接收文章の原因，而是這些意見能真正有助於提高

文章の質量。

從中還看出，回答審稿人問題の“技巧”。

對於回答問題，有の人就是一味反駁，卻不加改進。

記得ACSStyleGuide裏面說，當審稿人問到問題の，哪怕是他理解錯誤，這

也說明作者這麼寫，其他讀者也會理解錯誤，引起歧義。

因此，作者就是要

修改句子，使表達不引起歧義。

因此：

有時間一味反駁，還不如指出具體改進在第幾頁、第幾段。

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Reviewers'comments:

Reviewer#3:

Whilerevisingthescript,itistobesuggestedthatauthorshouldclearlyindicatetheaim&scopeofthestudyandwhilemakingconclusion,itistobementionedhowthestudyisusefulforthepracticalpurposes.Inadditionthefollowingarethefewsuggestions/comments,whichmaybeincludedwhilerevision.

1.Introductionpartfirstparalastline,authormustavoidtowriteambiguousstatementi.e.,muchworkisstillahead,mayindicateproperly.

2.Authorcouldnotdemonstratethereasonwhy,toselecttheorganiccompoundsuchasethylpyruvateforthisstudy?

3.Experimentalpart:

Itisdifficulttounderstandthein-situRAIRSexperimentswithhomemadeliquid-solidRAIRScell.Moredetailedinformationmaybeusefulfortheothersthosewhoareworkinginthearea.Photographoftheassembledcellmaybeincluded.

4.Thedescriptiongivenfortheexperimentalsetup（page4）canbepresentedbyflowdiagraminstead,asaneasetounderstandthesetup.

5.ReslutsPart（Page6）:

"COadlayerswithidenticalmonolayercoverages",themonolayercoverage,isitbeenperformedwithsomeadsorptionmodel?

Further,itwassuggestedthatCO-saturatedPtsurface,butnotmentionedaboutthesaturationexperiments.Isitobtainedafter60minofCObubbling?

6.Page12,2ndpara:

ThedisplacementofEtPybyCCl4flushing,isitconfirmedbytheEtPypeaks?

Ifso,ithastobementionedclearlyinthepara.Alsointhesamepara,authorreferredforFig.7aand7bbutinthefigures,itdidn'tappear,onlyfigure7appeared.Ifeelitrefersforfigure7,portionAandB,tobecorrected.Similarly,inthetextreferredthefig2a,2b.etcbutonthefiguresheetitismentionedas2A,2B.etc.tobecorrected.

7.Page14,1stpara:

'contaminationofthePtsurfacebycorrosionofo-ringsinhighconcentrationEtPy',butthestatementhasnotbeensupportedbyotherevidence/literature.

8.Pages14through17:

theobservedreactivityofvarioussolventsforadsorbedCOonthePtsurface（figs3&4）hastobediscussedmoreprecisely.Thisreviewerisunabletofollowthereasonwhytheyshoweddifferentreactivity,isitprincipallyduetotheorganicmoieties,orduetotheimpuritiesofcommerciallyavailablechemicalsoramixedeffect.Ithastobeclearlydemonstrated,however,theonlyexperimentperformedwithCO/water?

CCl4woulddifficulttodescribeitindetail.

9.Theauthortrytorestrainwithrepeatedargumentsinthetexte.g.,page3para1:

Itwasgeneralizedthat.........,alsoappearedonpage21firstpara.

10.Captionsofthefiguresaretoolong,thedetaileddescriptionalreadygiveninthetext,hencewouldnotbeincludedhere.Captionsshouldbeshortandcrispy.

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DearEditor,

Iquiteappreciateyourfavoriteconsiderationandthereviewer’sinsightfulcomments.NowIhaverevisedtheJCIS-06-247exactlyaccordingtothereviewer’scomments,andfoundthesecommentsareveryhelpful.Ihopethisrevisioncanmakemypapermoreacceptable.Therevisionswereaddressedpointbypointbelow.

[general]TheobjectiveofthisresearchwasaddedatthebeginningofthethirdparagraphofIntroduction.HowthestudyisusefulforpracticalpurposeswasaddedattheendofConclusionasoneparagraph.

[1]Ambiguousstatementi.e.,“muchworkisstillahead”wasdeleted.

[2]Ethylpyruvatewasusedhereasatypicalcompound（containingtwocarbonylgroups）todemonstratethefeasibilityofusingourdiagnosingtooltodetectlow-coverageCO（comingfromdecarbonylationofEtPy）attheliquid-solidinterface.EtPyisareactantusedinliquid-phasechiralcatalysis,andslightdecompositionofEtPytoadsorbedCOwasreportedtoinfluencethecatalyticperformance.Inaddition,bystudyingthat,wecandirectlycompareourresultswithpreviousstudies.MoredetailsinthefirstparagraphofSection3.2.

[3]TheIRcellwasdesignedaccordingtotheIRcellsusedbymanyelectrochemicalworkers.Referenceswereadded.AphotowasgivenintheSupportingInformation.

[4]AflowdiagramoftheexperimentalsetupwasgiveninthenewFig.1.

[5]TheCOadsorptionexperimentswereperformedinthesameadsorptionmode,bybubblingCOthroughacleanPtsurfaceindifferentdaystoachievethesamesaturationcoverageofCO.InitialexperimentsindicatedthatgiventheCObubblingratewas0.85cm3/min,COcansaturateonPtafter30-45min.WebubbleCOfor60mintoguaranteethesameCOcoverage.IfwebubbleCOformoretime,orifweincreasetheCOflowingrateseveraltimes,theCOsaturationcoveragedoesn’tchange,indicating60minisalreadyenough.AfigureshowingtheCOuptakeasafunctionofbubblingtimewasgivenintheSupportingInformation.

[6]ThedisplacementofEtPybyCCl4wasconfirmedbytheremovingofEtPypeaks.ThementionofFig.7aand7betc.throughoutthetextwereallcorrected.

[7]ItisknownthatsomesolventssuchasacetonecancorrodetheVitono-ring.Wesawthedamageofo-ringafterusinghigh-concentrationEtPy.AreferencetotheVitono-ringinformationwasgiven.

[8]Theobservedreactivitytrendisduetoacombinationofbotheffects,withtheaccumulationoforganicmoietiesonPtsurfaceduringnumerousflushingcyclesthemoreimportantreason.Afewpropersentenceswereaddedtoclaritythispoint.

[9]TherepeatedargumentsinthefirstparagraphinSection4.3weredeleted.

[10]Thetoo-longcaptionsweresignificantlyshortened.

Inall,Ifoundthereviewer’scommentsarequitehelpful,andIrevisedmypaperpoint-by-point.Thankyouandthereviewagainforyourhelp!

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結果：

http:

//dx.doi.org/10.1016/j.jcis.2006.09.005

歡迎瀏覽：

OrganicChemistryonSolidSurfaces（Review）

Z.Ma,F.Zaera*,SurfaceScenceReports61（2006）229-281.

ScienceDirectTOP25HottestArticlesinChemistry

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//dx.doi.org/10.1016/j.surfrep.2006.03.001

CI修改稿回答審稿人意見範文模板

修改稿回答審稿人の意見（最重要の部分）

ListofResponses

DearEditorsandReviewers:

Thankyouforyourletterandforthereviewers’commentsconcerningourmanuscriptentitled“PaperTitle”（ID:

文章稿號）.Thosecommentsareallvaluableandveryhelpfulforrevisingandimprovingourpaper,aswellastheimportantguidingsignificancetoourresearches.Wehavestudiedcommentscarefullyandhavemadecorrectionwhichwehopemeetwithapproval.Revisedportionaremarkedinredinthepaper.Themaincorrectionsinthepaperandtherespondstothereviewer’scommentsareasflowing:

Respondstothereviewer’scomments:

Reviewer#1:

1.Responsetocomment:

（……簡要列出意見……）

Response:

××××××

2.Responsetocomment:

（……簡要列出意見……）

Response:

××××××

。

。

。

。

。

。

逐條意見回答，切忌一定不能有遺漏

針對不同の問題有下列幾個禮貌術語可適當用用：

Weareverysorryforournegligenceof……...

Weareverysorryforourincorrectwriting……...

ItisreallytrueasReviewersuggestedthat……

WehavemadecorrectionaccordingtotheReviewer’scomments.

Wehavere-writtenthispartaccordingtotheReviewer’ssuggestion

AsReviewersuggestedthat……

ConsideringtheReviewer’ssuggestion,wehave……

最後特意感謝一下這個審稿人の意見：

Specialthankstoyouforyourgoodcomments.

Reviewer#2:

同上述

Reviewer#3:

××××××

Otherchanges:

1.Line60-61,thestatementsof“……”werecorrectedas“…………”

2.Line107,“……”wasadded

3.Line129,“……”wasdeleted

××××××

Wetriedourbesttoimprovethemanuscriptandmadesomechangesinthemanuscript.Thesechangeswillnotinfluencethecontentandframeworkofthepaper.Andherewedidnotlistthechangesbutmarkedinredinrevisedpaper.

WeappreciateforEditor