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创新英语大赛作文题

创新英语大赛作文题

第九届创新英语大赛初赛作文题

Topic:

NaturalDisasters

Directions:

Readthefollowingparagraphandwriteacompositionasstatedinabout300words.Yourcompositionwillbegradedaccordingtoclarity,accuracyandmeaningfulness.

Anaturaldisasteristheeffectofanaturalhazard（e.g.flood,drought,tornado,volcanoeruption,earthquake,typhoon,tsunami,orlandslide）thataffectstheenvironment,andleadstofinancial,environmentaland/orhumanlosses.Recently,wecanseemanynaturaldisastersoccurredhomeandabroadandhugedamagehavebeenmadeeithertotheenvironmentortoourhumanlives.Thosenaturaldisastersurgeustoreconsiderourbeliefsandactionstowardourmothernaturewhenweseekforclothes,food,andshelteringetc.

Therefore,whatisyourattitudetowardthenaturaldisasters?

Whatshallwedotopreventusfrombeingsimplydestroyed?

Whatkindofroledidweplayinthecausesofthosedreadfuldisasters?

Yourwritingoughttocontainthreeparts,yourviewpoint,thesupportingideas,andtheconclusion.

第九届创新英语大赛复赛作文试题

Topic:

ShouldWeFollowFashions?

Directions:

Somepeoplesaythatfashionisjustforsellingclothes,soweshouldnotfollowitandweshoulddresswhatwelikeandfeelcomfortableinit.Howfardoyouagreewiththem?

Writeanessayonthefollowingtopic:

shouldwefollowfashions?

Requirements:

Illustrateyourviewonthetopicwithnolessthan250wordsandwritedownyouropinionsandreasonssolongastheyarereasonable.

评分细则:

1.对作文题目有独到见解，并有很强的创新能力;

2.思路清晰，观点明确，论证充分;第一档99—90

3.语言流畅，词汇丰富，句式多样;

4.有效地使用语句、段落间的连接成分，内容连贯，结构紧

凑;

5.词汇和语法使用恰当，错误较少。

1.对作文题目有恰当理解，并有较强的创新能力;

2.思路较清晰，观点较明确，论证较充分;第二档89—80

3.语言通顺，词汇和句式有变换;

4.能使用语句间的连接成分;内容较连贯;

5.词汇和语法使用较恰当，错误较少。

1.对作文题目有一定理解，创新能力一般;

2.有自己的观点，并加以论证;第三档79—70

3.词汇和句式基本满足需要;

4.语句较通顺;

5.有常见词汇和语法使用错误。

1.对作文题目理解尚可，创新能力比较一般;

2.内容不太连贯;

第四档69—60

3.句式词汇有限;

4.词汇和语法错误较多。

1.对作文题目理解不当;

2.字数不够，内容不连贯;

第五档59以下

3.语言混乱，思路不清晰;

4.词汇和语法错误很多。

第八届

题目:

Directions:

Readthefollowingparagraphandwriteacompositionasstatedatabout300wordsin60minutes.Yourcompositionwillbegradedaccordingtoclarity,accuracy

andmeaningfulness.

InaccordancewithCRInews,thespiritofChinesevolunteers,fromresponding

totheMay12earthquaketothe2008BeijingOlympicGames,notonlytouchedthe

Chinesepeople,butalsogeneratedworldwideattention.Officialstatisticsshow

thatchinahasaccumulatedabout8billionhoursofvolunteerworkfrom380million

volunteerssince1993andisgoingtohavemoreandmorevolunteers,especiallythe

youth.

Howdoyouunderstandvolunteerwork?

Inwhatway（s）isitimportanttopromote

thewell-beingofindividuals,families,communitiesandtheworldatlarge?

Your

writingoughttocontainthreeparts,yourviewpoint,thesupportingideas,andthe

conclusion.

Comeandjoinusinvolunteerworkrightnow!

Tobeavolunteer，Bringarayofsunshine

陈天悦

山东省济南市山东省齐钢高级中学高三4班

DearTom:

Itisagreatpleasureformetohavethewonderfulchancetoputpentopaperandsendmygreetingstoyou.Yousaidthatyouwantedtobeavolunteeranddidn'tknowwhetheryoushouldornot.Iwanttohelpyouanalyzeit.

Inmyopinion.Ithinkitisnotonlyagoodchancetohelpothersbutalsoagoodopportunitytomakeself-improvement.You'dbetterparticipateinthevolunteerwork.Ifwecompareyouthtoflowers,asisoftenthecase,thentheyoungvolunteersarethemostbeautifulflowers.Byjoininginthevolunteerwork,youwilllearnhowtohelpothersandhowtoloveothers.What'smoreyoucanalsofinditoutthattherearemanypeoplesufferingfromdisasterandthenyouwillvalueyourcomfortablelife.Althoughyoumayfeelverytiredasavolunteeranditmaycost

youmuchtimetohelpothers,Istillinsistthatyoushouldbeavolunteerbecausetheadvantagesbrightaboutbyvolunteerworkoverweighthedisadvantages.

Itallthepeoplerefusedtobevolunteers,thepeoplesufferedfromthemay12earthquakecouldloseheartandmostofthemwouldn'thavethechancetosurvivefromthatdisaster.Ifnoneofthepeoplewantedtobeavolunteer,theBeijingOlympicGameswouldbeafailure.Ifeverypeopledidn'tfeellikebeingavolunteer,therewouldbenopeoplecleaningtheenvironmentandprotectingthebeautifulsceneryautomatically.Itwasterrible!

Fromallmentionedabove,volunteersplayaveryimportantpartinourdailylife.TobeavolunteerwillgaingloryforChina.Asisbrowtoall,Chinesechildrenarealwayslaughedatforlackofpractice.Sotobeavolunteerisagoodchancetocanpensateforit.

Frommypointofview,it'shightimethatyoubecameavolunteerandlearnedtohelpothers.Ifeveryonemakesacontributiontohelpingothers,theworldwillbemuchmorebeautiful!

Atlast,wishyouallthebest!

Yourssincerely.

Lily.

专家建议:

一篇文章的结构是评判该文章优劣的重要参考标准，但结构显然不够简洁清晰，所以建议作者能在

平时多阅读英文报纸上的文章，有意识地观察规范的英语文章是怎样设计结构的。

专家点评:

文章二三段的结构很混乱，建议这样的文章段落都应写成总、分、总的形式更能突出文章的逻辑性，

并在“分”的部分也一条一条分开写，而不是都堆在一段内，让人分不清哪句是观点哪句是论证，很混乱。

另外注意同义词的替换已是文章表达更丰富，比如文章中多次出现的帮助他人就都是使用:

helpothers

就显得过于单一了~

Theimportanceofvolunteerwork

崔静远

辽宁省鞍山市鞍山市第一中学高三18班

Inmyopinion,volunteerworkisquiteanimportantpartofthemodernsociety.Thereasonsareasfollows.

Inthemoderntime,thankstothedevelopmentofeconomyandtechnolodge,materialenjoyment13earnedbothinhigherqualityandlargerquantity.Atapriceofthis,individualsaretakingtheriskoflosingtheirownvaluesandevensparingnoefforttomaketheirfortuneevenatthepriceoftheinterestofthesociety.Sothevolunteerworkhasbeenplayinganimportantpart

asaspiritualcomfortnotonlytothereceiversbutalsotothevolunteers,promotingthewell-beingofthelove-givers,makingextravalueforothersandkeepingaperfectbalanceofthewholesociety.

Infamilies,volunteerworkwillhelptoemphasizetheimportanceofmorality,meetemotionalneedsandevenbecomeavivideducationallesson.Parents,whoarewidelyregardedasthefirstandmostimportantteachersoftheirchildren,areteachingtheirchildrenthroughtheactivitieswhichmusttrulytouchthedeepestpartoftheyoungsouls,insteadofserious,traditionalcriticalwords.Also,duringtheprocess,inwhicheverymembershowsustruelove,othermembersareabletorecognizehimfromadifferencepointofview.Thiskindofawarenessispromisedtopromotethecommunicationofthefamilyinthefuture.Inthewholeworld,thevolunteerworkcanbeconsideredtobeanappropriatepartoftheglobalization,duringwhichtheworldisbecomingaGlobalvillage.Andthenaturalandeconomiccharactersaredrivingpeoplefromdifferentculturalbackgroundstostandtogetheronthesameside,emphasizingtheinterestofthewholeworld,whichmustnotbedefendedwithoutanycountry'sparticipation.Anditisthevolunteerworkthatcanbegrantedtheroleofofferinghelpinitshourofmaximumneed.

Allinall,volunteerworkistrulyanirreplaceablepartofthesocietyanditisourresponsibilitytogiveourhandstomaketheworldabetterplace.

专家建议:

建议该生平时利用好学校里使用的中学英语教科书，因为教科书的权威性不容置疑，选材也适合中

学生，是精读甚至背诵的最好选择。

之所以推荐给作者教科书，是因为该考生在写作长句子时出现较多错

误，说明该生的语法基础不够夯实，那么中学英语课本就恰好能弥补这个弱点。

专家点评:

文章结构清晰明了，简洁明了的开头和结尾紧扣主题，精干又有力，很方便读者对文章主旨的把握。

中间部分的逻辑性强，思路也很清晰。

唯一不足的是在一些长难句的表达上出现了一些错误，有些句子让

人很难理解。

在以后的写作中可以多关注长句子的练习。

VolunteerLife

代昱丞

辽宁省本溪市高级中学高二15班

Asweknow,“volunteer”isakindof“work”thatyouoffertodoit,andalso,itisforfree.

Fromschoolstoshops,fromOlympicstoworldwars,volunteersareeverywhere.AndtoChinesepeople,lastyearisanimpressiveyearbecauseofvolunteers.InMay12earthquakeandthe2008BeijingOlympicGames,volunteersplayedareallyimportantrole.TheytouchedeveryChinese'sheart,includingme.

Idon'tusuallyhavechancestodovolunteer'swork,butIhavesomecreativeideasaboutit.Inmyopinion,helpingothersisakindofvolunteeranditisimportanttoourlives.Wecan'tbecomeavolunteerinpoorruralarea,butwecanhelpclassmatessolveamathproblem;wecan'tjointheOlympics,butwecantakepartinasportsmeetinginschoolanddevelopthespiritof“higher,faster,stronger”inotherways;wecan'tgotoWenchuan,butwecansendour“gifts”there.Infact,wearevolunteeringeverydayandeverywhere,butweignoreitsometimes.

Volunteerisnotasimplematteraboutyourself;italsohasgreatinfluencetoyourlife,yourfamily,eventheworld.Iftherearenotvolunteersanymore,everyoneisselfishandvain,theworldwillbealonelyplace.Volunteercanbringpeoplewarmandkindfeelingsandhelpimproveyourpersonality.Whenyouarevolunteering,you'llfindthebeautyoftheworldandlifeandyoureallyfeelandtouchsomehardexperience,itisabletoleadyoutotreatyourfamily,yourlife,yourfriendsmorepreviously.Mydadoncetoldmeastory:

atthetimeofBeijingOlympicGamesoneyear'sflashback,somevolunteerssaidthattimewasreallyahardbutvaluablememory.Sometimes,theyhadtostand,itwasnotpermittedtoarguewithtourists;sometimes,theyevenwantedtocry,butsmileshadtobeontheirsfacesallthetime.Volunteerwasnotaneasyjob,buttheysaidthattheydidn'tregretatall——theyrespondedtoChina,theywonreputation

forournation!

So,volunteerisworthjoiningandvaluing,thoughitishard,youhavegainedthebestaward——akindheart.

Startyourvolunteerlifenow!

专家建议:

在不跑题前提下，内容虽然重要，但关键是语言的包装，建议多看些优秀范文，和英文原著，增加

语感，这样文章会更传神。

专家点评:

文章思路清晰，叙述条理清楚，但句子之间的衔接做得不够，要多用连接词。

此外，应多掌握一些

词语的同义词，这样避免重复。

在句式变换方便也要多下些功夫。

Volunteerwork:

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刁文卿

辽宁省大连市大连市第十二中学高二9班

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