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专题06+哲理故事直击高考英语+专项突破读后续写
专题06直击2022高考英语专项突破“读后续写”—哲理故事
小故事,大道理……
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阅读下面短文,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
NoMore,NoLess
Manyyearsago,inthesmallPolishtownofPińczów,therelivedatradernamedLeib.Heworkedhard,buttimeswerebad.Hecouldn’taffordtobuyanypresentsforhisfamily.Sometimeshecouldn’tevenbuyfood.
Oneday,LeibmadeanimportantdecisiontoleavehomeforthebigcityofKraków.Maybehecouldearnmoremoneythere.InKraków,Leibpouredallofhisenergyintohiswork.Aftertwelvemonths,heearnedsixhundredzlotys.Buthemissedhisfamilysomuchthathedecidedtogohome.
Onhiswayhome,LeibstoppedinthetownofRozka.Fearingrobbers,hedecidedtoburyhismoneybeforegoingtothehoteltorest.Nearaseeminglydesertedhouse,hedugaholeandburiedhismoney.Butthehousewasnotdeserted.Theoldmanowningitwaswatchingthroughhiswindow.WhenLeibleft,hedugupthemoney.
Nextmorning,whenLeibfoundhismoneygone,hecriedbitterly.Lookingaround,henoticedthenearbyhouse.“Whoeverlivesinthathousemusthaveseenmeburythemoney,”Leibthought.“ButifIaccusehimofstealingit,hewillcallmealiar.”Thinkingforawhile,Leibknockedonthedoor.Hesaidtotheoldman,“I’mastrangerhereandneedadvice.Iheardyou’rethewisestmanhere.Willyouhelpme?
”Theoldmanwasoverjoyed,saying“TellmewhatIcandoforyou”.
“Fearingrobbers,Iburiedmymoney—sixhundredzlotys—inasecretplacelastnight,”Leibsaid.“NowIhavereceivedonethousandzlotys.ShouldIburyitinthesameplaceorinanotherforthegreatestsafety?
”
Theoldmansmiled,“Sinceyouareastrangerhere,Iadviseyouhaveallyourmoneyinthesameplace.”“Thankyouforyouradvice,”saidLeib.“Iwilldoasyousuggest.”
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph1
AssoonasLeibwasoutofsight,theoldmantookoutthemoneyhehadstolen.
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Paragraph2
Whendarknessfell,Leibwenttothehidingplaceandfoundallhisstolenmoney.
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【答案】Paragraph1:
AssoonasLeibwasoutofsight,theoldmantookoutthemoneyhehadstolen.“Ifthefoolishmandoesn'tfindhismoneywherehehidit,he'llnotburyhisonethousandzlotysthere,”thegreedymanthought.However,ifhefindshismoneywhereheleftit,hewillthinkitsafetoburythemoneyinthesameplace,andIwillgetallhismoney.Extremelysatisfiedwithhistrick,hehurriedtowherehe'ddugupthemoney,putthemoneyawayandcoveredtheholejustasitwas,dreamingtoreapwithoutsowing.
Paragraph2:
Whendarknessfell,Leibwenttothehidingplaceandfoundallhisstolenmoney.“Theoldmanthoughthewouldgetmore,andnowhehasnothing,”Leibflashedabigsmileandthencontinuedhisjourneyhome.Onhisway,heboughtpresentsforhisfamily.Inafewhours'time,hewassittingcozilyathome.Hischildrenplayedwithnewtoyshappilyandhiswifelookedlovelierinhernewdress.Leibleanedbackinhischairandclosedhiseyes,withacontentedsmile.Thatisexactlywhathedeservednomore,noless.
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了一个叫Leib的商人赚了一笔钱,由于害怕强盗,他决定先把钱埋起来,然后再去旅馆休息,结果被一个老人挖走了。
于是Leib想了一个聪明的办法,最终找回了自己所有的钱。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“Leib一离开视线,老人就拿出偷来的钱。
”可知,第一段可描写老人内心的想法以及老人埋钱。
②由第二段首句内容“天黑的时候,Leib来到藏钱的地方,找到了他所有被偷的钱。
”可知,第二段可描写Leib拿到钱后回家的事情。
2.续写线索:
老人拿出偷来的钱——老人把钱埋起来——Leib找到了他所有被偷的钱——Leib回家——Leib满足
3.词汇激活
行为类
看不见:
beoutofsight/disappear
赶往:
hurryto/rushto
购买:
buy/purchase
情绪类
愚蠢:
foolish/stupid
积极:
positiveattitude/actpositively
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Ifthefoolishmandoesn'tfindhismoneywherehehidit,he'llnotburyhisonethousandzlotysthere(运用了if引导条件状语从句)
[高分句型2]Thatisexactlywhathedeservednomore,noless.(运用了what引导表语从句)
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WhatItMeanstoServe
Ididn’tcontinuecollegeaftergraduation.Imovedoutofmyfamily.Withlittleworkexperience,Iservedasawaitress.Butduringthefiveyears’labor,Ifoundmyselfburningcaloriesrunningaboutonlyforatip.
IhadhadenoughsoImovedtoasmallertownhopingtopursueacollegedegree.IpromisedIwouldneverservepeopleagain-atleastnotinsuchway.Itwastimetoservemyself.Luckily,Ireceivedapositionasanafterschoolprogramtutoratalocalmiddleschool,withtheaddedbenefitofcompletingEnglisheducationdegree.Ihadtheopportunitytogobig!
Thekidwouldneedme-arolemodelandatrustworthyfriend,Ibelieved.
Butmyfirstdaywaswelcomedbythestudents’indifference(冷漠).Thedesksweremessyandthewholeroomsmelledofdirtygymsocks.Myexcitementbegantodiedown.Idoubtedwhetherthenewjobwasamistake.Theplaygroundactivitywasdeafeningwhilehomeworktimewasnotmuchbetter.Aftermyrepeatedpersistence,theyfinallyturnedofftheplaygroundmode.ButjustafewminutespassedwhenInoticedtwokidsquarrelinginthecorner.
IsupposeditwasanotherlittleincidentbutonekidnamedJeremybotheredme.Heshoutedatmeforcomingathim.AndwhenIaskedthemtoreturntotheirseats,heslammed(用力摔)hisbackpackandgrewmadasItriedtourgehimtotaketherightattitude.“Idon’tlikeyou,homeworkandthisafterschoolprogram!
Allyouguysdoisyellatme.I’mnevercomingback.”hewalkedoutoftheclassroom,slammingthedoor.
Naturally,Iwassofrustrated(挫败的).IwonderedwhyIamhere.Mostkidsdisrespectedme!
Ipausedtotakeadeepbreath.ThensuddenlyIthoughttomyself,“Yousaidyouwouldneverservepeopleagain,butyoudon’tunderstandwhatthesekidsreallyneed.”Atthatmoment,Irememberedmymiddle-schoollife.Ialwayshadapoorattitude,neverdidmyschoolwork,repeatedlygotintofights,anddisrespectedmyelders.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
RealizingIwasnotdifferent,IwalkedoutintothehallandcaughtupwithJeremy.
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Atthatmoment,myheartbrokeforthisboyandhisfamilylife.
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【答案】RealizingIwasnotdifferent,IwalkedoutintothehallandcaughtupwithJeremy.“I’msorry,Jeremy.CouldIhaveatalkwithyou?
”Isaid,tryingtobecalmandsincere.Heturnedaround,lookedatmeforamomentandnodded,“OK”.“Jeremy,couldyoutellmewhathavehappenedtoyou?
”Iasked.Hesitantly,Jeremybegantosharewithmeabouthisstory.Fromwhathesaid,Iknewhismotherwaskilledinacaraccidentthreemonthsbefore.Worsestill,hisfather,whowasindeepsorrow,losthisjobatthesametime.Afterthat,hisfatherbecamebad-temperedandoftenshoutedathim,ignoringallhisrequests.Ashetoldmewhatwashappening,hebegantocry.
Atthatmoment,myheartbrokeforthisboyandhisfamilylife.Igentlyhuggedhimandpattedhimontheback.ThenIwalkedhimhomeandencouragedhimtofacelifeinapositiveway.Afterthat,IoftenchattedwithJeremyandhelpedhimdealwithhistroubles.Ievenpaidavisittohisfatherseveraltimes.Astimewentby,Jeremybehavedbetterandbetterandsmilesoftenappearedonhisface.Attheendoftheprogram,Jeremyhuggedmetightlyandthankedmeagainandagain.Atthatmoment,Isuddenlyrealizedwhatitmeanttoserve---Gettoknowapersonfromthebottomofyourheartandgivewhatheneeds.
【解析】
本文以作者的经历为线索展开。
作者高中毕业后,去做了一名服务员。
五年之后,作者去一所中学担当了一个课外活动的老师。
在第一堂课上,作者遇见了一个非常暴躁的学生—Jeremy。
作者和Jeremy了解他的情况,了解了他悲惨的家庭生活。
之后作者一直帮助Jeremy,并取得了成功。
通过自己的经历,作者明白了为他人服务的真谛。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“意识到我没有什么不一样,我走出去进入大厅,赶上了Jeremy。
”可知,第一段可描写作者和Jeremy聊天,了解他的情况的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“在那一刻,我为这个男孩和他的家庭生活心碎了。
”可知,第二段可描写作者帮助Jeremy,鼓励他,并且最终获得成功的故事。
2.续写线索:
询问情况——Jeremy讲述家庭情况——了解情况——鼓励帮助——Jeremy转变——感悟
3.词汇激活:
行为类①一谈话:
talkwithsb./chatwithsb./haveaconversation ②同意:
nod/agree
情绪类①感谢:
showinghisappreciation/showhisgratitude/begrateful ②积极:
positiveattitude/actpositively
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Isaid,tryingtobecalmandsincere.(现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]Worsestill,hisfather,whowasindeepsorrow,losthisjobatthesametime.(由关系代词who引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3]Isuddenlyrealizedwhatitmeanttoserve.(what引导的宾语从句)
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Whenwearehavingquarrelswithothers,itiseasytosayordohurtfulthingsinanger.Theverbalwoundcanbeasbadasaphysicalone.Andnomatterhowmanytimesyousayyouaresorry,orhowmanyyearspass,thescarofthosewoundswillstillbethere.Ifwearewise,wewillspendourtimebuildingbridgesratherthanbarriersinourrelationships.
Onceuponatimetherewasalittleboywhowastalented,creative,handsome,andextremelybright.Anaturalleader.Thekindofpersoneveryonewouldnormallyhavewantedontheirteamorproject.Buthewasalsoself-centeredandhadaverybadtemper.Whenhegotangry,heusuallysaid,andoftendid,someveryhurtfulthings.Infact,heseemedtohavelittleregardforthosearoundhim,evenfriends.So,naturally,hehadfew.“But,“hetoldhimself,“thatjustshowshowstupidmostpeopleare!
“
Onedayatschool,whenhavingacraftclass,hispartneraccidentallycrushedasmallpartoftheirhandiwork.Theboyimmediatelygotextremelyangry,startingtocriticizeandteaseher.“Youdisgustme!
“Afterhearingthosehurtfulwords,shestartedtocryuncontrolla