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16年改革后英语专四考试新题型材料作文模拟练习及范文分析精品范本
专四新题型写作
自2016年起,专四考试写作部分改革,要求根据所给的题目、图表或阅读材料等,写一篇200词左右的作文。
出现的新题型命题+材料作文对考生的阅读理解及归纳能力提出了更高的要求。
考生可以采取“简短概述材料—评论—总结”的写作模式。
值得注意的是,在写作过程中,概述材料和进行评论缺一不可,否则将可能被扣分.
例题1
PARTVIWRITING
Read carefully thefollowingexcerpt andthen writeyour responseinNOLESSTHAN 200 WORDS,in which youshould:
1)Summarizethemainmessageoftheexcerpt, andthen
2)Commentonwhetherstudentslearnmorefromclasses thanfrom other resources
You cansupport yourselfwithinformation fromtheexcerpt。
Marks willbeawarded for contentrelevance,content sufficiency,organization and languagequality.Failuretofollowthe aboveinstructionsmayresultinaloss ofmarks。
Dostudentslearnmore fromclassesthan from otherresources?
Withtheadventofthe Internetandothertelecommunicationstechnologies,thereisavastlygrowingwealth ofresourcesavailablefromanimmense rangeofmediaoutlets。
Studentshavetheabilitytoabsorb informationinaquickerandmore efficientwaywhen researchingontheirown throughreadingpublications orbrowsingwebpagesonline.Asaresult,somepeoplearguethatstudentsnow learnmorefromotherresourcesthanfromclasses.
Conductingresearchwith onlinematerialsis anactive process, whichallows youngsters tofocusingreaterdetail ratherthan passively listeningto alectureinalarge classroom。
TheInternetandTV arealsoeasilyaccessibleplatforms forstudents intheremoteplaces whereteachingresourcesarenotas abundantas thoseinmore developedregions。
However, teachershavethe capabilityofexplaining theknowledgeinadeeperway andnot onlyprovidetheoreticalexplanationbutalsopractical experienceabout life. Theyhaveaccumulatedalarge bodyofintelligencethatis profoundlymoreprecisethanothersources.Teachersnotonlyfunctionasinitiatorswhoimpartknowledge butalsoserveassupervisors orguardians。
Theconventionalroleofinstructors,inthisdayand age,has evolved tobecomeevaluatorsandfacilitators, guidingstudents intheir academic andpersonal efforts。
范文1
In theinformation age,thetraditionalstudent—teacher relationshiphasbeenaffected deeplyandpeoplebegin todoubtwhetherstudentscanlearn morefromclasses thanfrom otherresources。
(介绍背景)According totheconventionalview,teachers are stillthe primarysourcefrom whichstudents obtainprofessionalknowledge, timely classinteraction,andeffective supervisionfromteachers.(总结第一种观点)On the contrary,nowadays, manypeoplebelievethatstudents can learn more fromother resourcessuch as Internetand TV sincethey aremore accessible andengage studentsmoreactively in research.(总结第二种观点)
Forme,Iam infavorofthe firstview。
(表明立场)Teachersplayanirreplaceablerole in education, whetherit'sinthepast oratpresent, sincetheynotonlyimpartknowledge, butalso educatepeople.(总论据)Foronething,whatstudentslearnfrom theirclassesismoreprecisethanfromotherresourceswhichprovideanenormous amountofdataneededtobesiftedthrough todeterminewhichinformation isaccurate。
(理由一)For another,teachers inschoolputtheshapingofpersonality inaplaceasimportantastheteachingof knowledge, whichishard forstudentstoobtain fromotherresource。
(理由二)
Inconclusion, thedevelopment of cutting-edgetechnologyexertsabigimpacton modern education。
However,itcan never eliminatetheneedforhigh—qualityprofessionalsin classroom。
(重申论点)(213words)
例题2
PARTVIWRITING
Readcarefullythe followingexcerpt andthenwrite yourresponseinNOLESS THAN200WORDS,inwhichyoushould:
1)Summarizethe mainmessage of theexcerpt,andthen
2)Comment onwhetherpeopleshouldchoosetobecomeindoorsy
Youcansupportyourselfwithinformationfromtheexcerpt。
Marks willbeawarded for contentrelevance,contentsufficiency,organization andlanguage quality。
Failuretofollow theabove instructionsmay resultinalossof marks。
Should peoplechoose tobecomeindoorsyinmodernworld?
InmoderntimeswhenwecanbuyeverythingweneedontheInternet,and communicateandevenworkthroughtheInternet, becoming indoorsymenorwomenis simplyachoiceofdifferentlifestyle. Inthepast,ifyouwanttobuysomething, youneedtogoout ofyourhouse,goto thestore,and spendanhourortwochoosing the productyouwant to buy.Butnow youcan justsitin front ofacomputerandclickyourmouse,andthe productcanbedeliveredtoyou。
Beingindoorsy cansavepeoplealotoftime。
Beingindoorsy canallowpeopletothinkand workina peacefulenvironment。
Forexample,writerscanbequitecreativewhen they arealoneat homewithout beinginterrupted。
Somesociologistswarn that theindoorsylifestylewillmakepeoplebecomeself-centeredand naive.Ifpeoplestayathomeforalong time,theywill havelittleinterpersonalcontactwithothers. Theydonot know howtohaveface-to-facecommunicationwithothers,andthey may becomeshy, uncomfortable,or self-centeredwhentheyareinvolvedinreal—lifecommunication.Thisindoorsy lifestylewillhaveabadeffectontheirnormalinterpersonalrelationship and theirnormalwork。
Indoorsymen orwomenspend mostof theirtime sittinginfrontofacomputer, and they seldomattendoutdooractivities. Watchingthecomputerscreenfor alongtimewilldogreatharmto theireyes. Also, many indoorsy peopledonotliketoattendsports activities,andinthelong run,theirhealthwill getworse.
范文2
审题思路
本题讨论“宅"生活是否可取。
在具体行文方面,考生应首先简要概述正方观点:
“宅”是现代的一种新型生活方式。
然后概述反方观点:
“宅”有种种弊端.接下来给出自己的观点:
现代科技是把双刃剑,我们要把握好,适当利用可以使我们的生活更便利,但过度依赖则会对身体有害。
最后总结全文,重申观点。
Should WeEmbrace IndoorsyLifestyle?
Withtheglobalizationofmodern technology,especiallytheworld—wide accesstoInternetservice,people’s lifestylehasbeen greatlyinfluenced.(介绍背景) Someenjoyindoorsy lifestyle.They holdthatindoorsylifestyleistime—savingandpeaceful.Incontrast,thoseagainsttheideaclaimthatkeepan indoorsylifestyle willdoharm topeopleboth psychologicallyandphysically.(总结材料)
As farasIamconcerned,moderntechnology isadouble-edgedsword.(点明观点)Ifweconsideritasa usefultooltoimproveourlife,itwill certainlybringunprecedentedconveniencetous.With theassistanceoftheInternet, one cansave his timethrough working,shopping,orcommunicatingwithothersat home。
(正方理由一)Also,solitudeisn’talways equalto loneliness。
Freefromoutsideinterruption,onecanbecreative and keephismind sharp。
(正方理由二)Onthe otherhand,toomuch relianceonor indulgence intheInternetwillcertainlyhavean impactonournormallife andwork。
Forinstance, indulging insocialnetwork online maycorrodepeoples’socialskills。
To bespecific,theymayfeellostwhentalkingwithpeopleface-to—face, whichmay affecttheirnormalrelationshipwithfamilymembersandfriends.(反方理由一)What's worse, sittingin frontofacomputer alldaylongmeanslittle outdooractivities,which maydamage one'shealth.(反方理由二)
Inconclusion, whileenjoying allthebenefitsthevirtual worldhasbroughttous, indoorsy peopleshouldalso stepoutoftheir homeandengage themselvesin therealworld。
(总结上一段)(234words)