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英语作文2记叙文
英语作文2--记叙文
二、记叙文
1.记人
A.写作结构指导
记叙你所喜欢、感激或难忘的人物,可在开篇点题之后,抓住人物的性格特征展开记叙,通过具体事例说明其性格特征,也可从该人物的优秀品质对你的影响这个角度来写。
文章可用强调句型构成排比句式增强描述性,以突出人物特征。
B.常用句型
•Whenaskedwhoimpressesme/Ilove/respectmost,Iwillrespondwithoutanyhesitation...
如果被问及给我印象最深/我最热爱/最尊敬的人是谁,我会毫不犹豫地回答......
•Iadmirehimforhispositiveoutlooktowardslife.我敬佩他对人生的积极态度。
•Itseemsthatnothingisimpossibleforhim.对他来说,似乎没什么是不能做到的。
•Asamanofenthusiasm,hehasapowertofanthesparksofwisdominus.
他热情四射,并有一种能够激发我们智慧火花的力量。
•Hereallyhasagreatinfluenceonme.他的确对我有很大的影响。
•Ilove...because...我爱......因为......
•Hehassetagoodexampleforus.他给我们树立了—个良好的榜样。
•WheneverImeetwithdifficulties,hegivesmecourageanddeterminationtoovercomethem.
每当我碰到困难,他总是给我战胜困难的勇气和决心。
•Hepractiseswhathepreaches.他总是身体力行。
•Hisdeedsinspiremetomakecontinuouseffortstofulfillmydream.
他的事迹激励我不断努力去实现梦想。
•ThereasonwhyIadmirehimisthat...我之所以敬佩他是因为......
•Heisreallyamanworthyofourrespect.他的确是一个值得我们尊敬的人。
•Heisheldinhighesteembecause...他受人尊敬是因为......
•Heisahardworkingpersonwhohasbeendevotedto...heartandsoul.
他工作勤奋,全心全意地投入到......
•Itisyouwhoenlightenmymind;itisyouwhotapmypotentialin...;anditisyouwholead
meto...
是你启迪了我的智慧,是你发掘了我......方面的潜力,是你指引我走向......
C.全国高考学生习作点评
(2008年湖南卷)
请从下列人物中选择你最喜欢的一位,用英语写一篇120词左右的短文。
要求根据所给信息作适当发挥,且需包括以下三部分内容:
(1)对该人物的简单介绍;
(2)喜欢该人物的理由;(3)从该人物身上得到的启示。
ThomasEdison
HelenKeller
WilliamShakespeare
inventor;
creative;diligent;
fullofwisdom
ordinarybutgreatwoman;
disabled;optimistic;
eagertolearn
writer;
talented;imaginative;
manofallages
“Geniusisonepercentinspirationandninety-ninepercentperspiration.”
“…ifIhadthepowerofsightforthreedays.”
“Lifeisastage…”
范文
MyfavouritepersonamongthethreeisHelenKeller,anordinarybutgreatwoman.Shelosthersightwhenshewasthreeinanaccident.Butsheovercamealotofunimaginabledifficultiestolearnlanguages,andeventuallyshemastered8differentlanguagesandfinishedherbookThreeDaystoSee.IlikeHelenKellerforheroptimismandperseverance.Disabledasshewas,shedidn'tlosehopeforlife.Instead,shewaseagertolearn.Despiteallthedifficulties,shedidn'tgiveuphalfway.Thebookshewroteisthebestproofofherunrelentingefforts.ThestoryofHelenKellerhasagreatinfluenceonme.WheneverIwanttoquitbecauseofthefailureorfrustration,theimageofHelenKellerwillflashintomymind.Iseemtohearhersaying,"Alittlemoreeffort,andyouwillachieveyourgoal."InspiredbyHelenKeller,Icometorealizethemeaningofthesaying"Nothingisimpossibleforapersonwithperseverance".
D.实战演练以“PeopleILoveMost”为题,写一篇不少于120字的记叙文。
IfaskedwhoIlovemost,Iwilltellyouwithoutamoment'sdelaythatmyparentsaredearesttome.
Ilovemyparentsmost,foritismyparentswhocreateasweethomeforme.Itisnotasmagnificentasapalace,butitisbright,cleanandtidy.Motherandfatherthinkmoreofothersthanthemselves.Inourhome,notasinglecomplaintcanyouhear.Itisfulloflove,warmthandharmony,whichisthesourceofallmyconfidence,wisdomandstrength.
Ilovemyparents,foritismyparentswhoteachmetotakethefirststep.Withtheirhelp,Ilearnttowalkandspeakandsteppedintothegateofknowledge.Withtheirenlightenment,Ilookattheworldwithgreatcuriosityanddevelopmyinterestinhistory,musicandsports.Theysticktotheprinciplethatexampleisbetterthanpreceptandtheypractisewhattheypreach.Theytellmethatweareimportantwhenwearelendingourhelpinghands.Undertheirinfluence,Iknowwhatmakesanall-roundpersonandIknowtheimportanceofhonesty,generosity,enthusiasmandperseverance.
Ilovemyparents,fortheyencouragemetosteermyshipwithhope,leavingfearsbehind.WhenImakeprogress,theygivemewarmpraise;whenImeetwithdifficulties,theyoffermecourageanddetermination?
Withouttheirloveandencouragement,howcanIgrowhealthily?
Iamveryluckytohavemyparents.IoweallmysuccesstothemandIwanttotellthemhowmuchIlovethemandhowmuchIamgratefultothem.
语言亮点
Usefulphrases:
•anall-roundperson全面发展的人•steermyshipwithhope怀揣希望,乘风破浪
•oweallmysuccesstothem把我所有的成功归功于他们
Usefulsentences:
•Inourhome,notasinglecomplaintcanyouhear.Itisfulloflove,warmthandharmony,which
isthesourceofallmyconfidence,wisdomandstrength.在我家里,听不到任何抱怨。
它充满了爱、温馨与和谐,这些是我自信、智慧和力量的源泉。
•Withtheirenlightenment,Ilookattheworldwithgreatcuriosityanddevelopinterestingavarietyofthings.
在他们的启迪之下,我带着好奇的眼睛看世界,并形成了各种各样的爱好。
•Theysticktotheprinciplethatexampleisbetterthanpreceptandtheypracticewhatthey
preach.他们信守“榜样的力量是无穷的”这个原则并凡事以身作则。
二、记叙文
2.叙事
A.写作结构指导
叙事型作文要牢记六要素,即人物、时间、地点、事件、过程及结果。
事件过程的叙述要有情节性,要娓娓道来,要通过多种句式使叙述生动。
B.常用句型
•Istillclearlyrememberthedaywhen...我仍然清晰地记得那天......
•Vividmemoriescomefloodingbacktothedaywhen...
......的生动记忆如潮水般涌来。
•NeverwillIforget...我永远也不会忘记......
•Iwillcherishthememoriesandmakethemrootedinmyheart.
我会珍藏这些记忆,让它们永留心间。
C.全国高考学生习作点评(2008年江西卷)
学校计划举行英语作文竞赛,主题为"WeNeedAdvicefromOlderGenerations"。
请根据下列要求写一篇作文:
你遇到了困难或问题,不知该怎么办。
你去请教一位长辈,后来问题得到了解决。
要求写清楚下面三点:
(1)当时面临的困难或问题是什么?
(2)你获得的指教是什么?
(3)结果如何?
注意:
作文总词数为100左右
范文
Therearetimeswhenyoumeetwithdifficultiesorfindithardtomakeachoice.Itisthetimewhentheadviceoftheoldergenerationsisofgreatvalue.
Takemyownexperienceasanexample.AttheendofSeniorTwo,Ihadtomakeadecisionwhethertomajorinartsorscience.Beinggoodatsciencesubjects,Iintendedtochoosephysicsasmymajor.However,mybestfriendLilychosegeography,sayingtherewouldbemorechancesforustobeadmittedintoakeyuniversitybecauseofrelativelyfewerexamineesinthissubject.ThenIwasatalosswhichtochoose.
SeeingIwashesitant,myfatherhadatalkwithme.HesuggestedthatIshouldchooseaccordingtomyowninterestandability,regardlessofothers'thoughts.Hetoldmemyinterestwillinspiremetotapmypotentialfullyandmyabilitywillgivememoreconfidencetoovercomedifficulties.
Withmyfather'shelp,IfirmlychosephysicsandLily,finallyunderstoodmeandrespectedmychoice.Fromthisexperience,Irealizethatoldergenerations,havingrichexperience,canhelpusyoungmenmakesensibledecisions.
D.实战演练
以“AnUnforgettableTraditionalFestival”为题,写一篇不少于120词的作文。
范文
AssoonasIseethetitle,itproducesanextraordinarysequenceofmentalimages.VividmemoriescomefloodingbacktotheSpringFestivaltenyearsago?
EveryonewasfullyoccupiedtowelcomethemostimportantfestivalinChina.Mymothershuttledbetweenmarkets,buyingfood,fruits,giftsandsoon.Tiredasshewas,sheneithercomplained,noraskedusforhelp.Itseemedthatshehadinexhaustibleenergy.Father,amanwhoseldomsteppedintothekitchen,shouldclaimhewouldcookdeliciousfishforus!
Tofulfillhispromise,hepractisedcookingsecretlyatnightwhenwefellasleep.MybrotherandIdidn'twanttositstill.Wespentawholeafternooncleaningthehousethoroughly.Notasingledirtycornerescapedoureyes.WhenMumcameback,shewassurprisedandsatisfied,sayingthatwechildrenhadgrownupandwereconsideratetoparents.OnNewYear'sEve,thewholefamilysataroundthetable,makingdumplings.Itwasthefirsttimeforuschildrentomakedumplings,sowedidnothaveenoughexperiencetobegoodatit.AllthegoodhumourreawokeinmymindasIrecalledthefunnyargumentswehadthatnightaboutwhomadegenuinedumplings.
Timeflies!
TenyearshasalreadypassedbeforeIknowit,butthewarmthandgoodfeelingsremaininmyheartandwillbethereforever?
B.语言亮点
Usefulphrases:
•welcomethemostimportantfestival迎接最重要的节日
•shuttlebetween穿梭在……之间
•inexhaustibleenergy无限的精力
•besurprisedandsatisfied感到惊喜和满足
Usefulphrases:
•AssoonasIseethetitle,itproducesanextraordinarysequenceofmentalimages.Vivid
memoriescomefloodingbacktotheSpringFestivaltenyearsago.
一看到这个作文题目,我的脑海里就浮现出了一连串的图像。
记忆如潮水般回到十年前的
春节。
•Tiredasshewas,sheneithercomplained,noraskedusforhelp.
虽然很疲劳,但她并不抱怨,也不要求我们帮助她。
•AllthegoodhumourreawokeinmymindasIrecalledthefunnyargumentswehadthatnight
aboutwhomadegenuinedumplings.
当我回忆起我们那晚就谁包的饺子最正宗进行有趣的争诊时,所有令人发笑的场景在我脑海里重现。
•Timeflies!
TenyearshasalreadypassedbeforeIknowit,butthewarmthandgoodfeelings
remaininmyheartandwillbethereforever.
时光飞逝!
不知不觉十年过去了,但美好温馨的回忆依然没有消逝并将永远留在心间。
二、记叙文3.叙事言情
A.写作结构指导
第一段:
引出记叙的主体事件。
第二段:
事件和故事的叙述要有情节性,要通过多种句式使叙述生动。
千万不要用说明或议论的套路,比如first,second,lastbutnotleast等表示层次的连接词就不适合在叙述中出现。
第三段:
用一到两句话总结此事给自己留下的深刻印象或对自己产生的影响。
B.常用句型
•Theunforgettableexperiencemakesmeconvincedthat...这次难忘的经历使我深信……
•Ireallybenefitalotfromtheexperience,whichinspiresmeto...
这次经历的确使我受益匪浅,它激励我……
•Ithinkitismydutytobeactivelyinvolvedinitanddomypart.
我认为我有责任积极参与,尽自己的一份力。
•Icannotlookon,doingnothing.我不能袖手旁观,什么也不做。
•Toensureitssuccess,wemadeadetailedplan.为确保成功,我们制定了一个详细的计划。
C.全国高考学生习作点评(2009年北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华,为响应绿化祖国的号召,你班4月12日去郊区植树,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,介绍植树活动的全过程,给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以"GreenActioninOurClass"为题的英文稿件。
注意:
词数不少于600提示词:
郊区suburbs
范文April12isunforgettablebecauseourclasscarriedoutameaningfulactivityonthatday.
Inthemorning,webicycledtothesuburbstoplanttreesasarranged,talkingandlaughingalltheway.Despitethecoldwind,nobodyletoutacomplaint.Uponarrival,webegantoworkimmediately.Everyonewasactivelyinvolvedinit,withsomecarryingandplant