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最全的海文才子墨东博的作文模版

万学海文名师墨东博独家作文模板

写实派模板1

Asisillustrated/depicted/conveyed/revealed/betrayed/showninthepicture, （图的内容原则上用一个主从句表达, 功底.两句合一句的途经,1AND连结2WHICH或WHEREAS 连结3 非谓语 ）thetwopetneighborsgreeteachotherpolitelyandamicably,whereas （=WHILE/ONTHEOTHERHAND）thetwopets'ownersseemtoignoreeachother. Simpleasitis,thedrawingrendersusponderingawefully.（凑字数,其富余时,可省去）Accordingly,whatthisfar-reaching/thought-provokingpicturedepictsreflectsacommonphenomenonintoday'ssociety:

（反映的现实） pets,ratherthan/insteadofpeoplearoundthem,aresuchanindispensablepartintheirdailylife tothepointwhere （加以讲解） theyareexcessively/inordinately（负面词汇,作者的态度尽在不言中,回避使用 IBELIVE,ITHINK 之类的句式）fondoftheirbelovedanimalswhileneglectingthosewhocarethem, which hasarousedgreatconcernandshouldbegiven enoughconsideration. Itgoeswithoutsaying  thatitssymbolicmeaningthat （主题句,尽量避免使用1 主系表 2THEREBE结构主张使用下列句型,1NOTHING+BE+ADJ+THAN+TO+DO2ONNOACCOUNTCANWE3ITISTIME+S+V-ED4IT 无主句） indifferenceshouldbecleared  upamongpeople,withtheharmonioussocietyechoedvigorously  nowadaysinChina  oughttobeweighed/taken/ponderedseriously./earnestly/conscientiously

Whydowelayemphasisonthis（指代词表过渡）  severalpoints（名词复数,总分总的标志） analyzedbelowmightequipuswiththedeeperunderstandingofwhatweareheadingfor.Foronething,（分述标志词） sincewehavetoliveonanon-the-movelifestyle,wearedeniedchancestoshareourfeelingswithourfriendsandrelatives. Foranother （分述标志词）, withsomanydishonestiesgoingaroundinourlifeandthenindifferenceoccurring,wemighthavenochoicebuttoenjoythecompanyofpets. Andaboveall（分述标志词）, toomanytragedies-seeingsomeoneinmortaldangerwithoutliftingafingertosavehim-putonthestageinourdailylifealmosteveryday, Nobetterillustrationofthisideatouchedonabovecanbe maintained/taken/weighedthanthecaseaslistedbelow,（ 例证）acrowdofpeopleremainedappallinglynonchalance（=indifference,论据是论点的具体体现,主题核心词汇重复） tothepleaofamother,sinceshefailedtooffertherequiredamountofcashasapricetosaveherdrowningson,thewomanatlastwatchedhersonsinktodeath..Consequently/Accordingly/Onbalance/Therefore/Itfollowsthat,noissueinchinaisasbasicto buildupthesocietyinharmony as ironingoutindifferenceamongpeople.（此句为小节,1 与TS首尾呼应,重复原则growoutof=clearup2 为第三段起势）

Judgingfromwhathasbeenarguedabove,peoplehavecometorealizetheharmsofindifferencehasbeen,likePandora'sbox,thecripplingforceofestablishingtheharmonysociety.Itis,therefore,necessarythatsomeeffectivestepsbemadeto（点主题重复原则）narrowandbridgethegapamongpeople. Tobeginwith,（以法治国） thegovernmentshouldmakelawto establishthesocietyinwhichpeopleliveinharmony. Inaddition,（以德治国）peopleshouldenhancetheawarenessofconcernandcareeachotherespecially.  Onlybyundergoingthesemeasures,can wemakeoursociety,wherepeople,evennot  knowing  eachother,helpamongthem,appealtoeveryone.

写实派模板2

Asisillustrated/depicted/conveyed/revealed/betrayed/showninthepicture, （图的内容原则上用一个主从句表达, 功底.两句合一句的途经,1AND连结2WHICH或WHEREAS 连结3 非谓语 ）aladyandagentlemanarewatchinganartificialsceneonthetopofabuildingwithnumeroustowerblockssurroundingthem.（=WHILE/ONTHEOTHERHAND） Simpleasitis,thedrawingsetsusthinkingtoomuch. （凑字数,其富余时,可省去）Accordingly,whatthisfar-reaching/thought-provokingpicturedepictsisacommonphenomenonintoday'ssociety,（反映的现实） toomanyman-madeprojectssuchasskyscrapershaveexcessivelybeenbuilt,whereastoomuchnaturalresourcesincludingafforestedlandhasvanishedappallingly. （加以讲解）（负面词汇,作者的态度尽在不言中,回避使用 IBELIVE,ITHINK 之类的句式）. Thereisnodoubtthatitssymbolicmeaningthat （主题句,尽量避免使用1 主系表 2THEREBE结构主张使用下列句型,1NOTHING+BE+ADJ+THAN+TO+DO2ONNOACCOUNTCANWE3ITISTIME+S+V-ED4IT 无主句）itisimperativetochecktheblindactionsandactivitiesofhumanbeingsintheurbandevelopment,withnowadaysvaluesofscientificdevelopmentechoedvigorously.

whydowelayemphasisonthis（指代词表过渡） ?

severalpoints（名词复数,总分总的标志） analyzedbelowmighthelpusgainaninsightintothedramaticchangetowhichwehavebeenqualifiedtobearwitness.Tobeginwith,（分述标志词） overthepastdecades,mucharablelandhasbeendestroyedintherushforrapidurbandevelopment.Suchblinddevelopmenthasdamagedthenaturalbalancetothepointwherepeopleonlyliveinaboxoflifelesscementandsteel. Whatismore,mostpeoplestilllacktheconceptofscientificdevelopment.Someurbanplannersanddesigners  focustheirattentionsimplyontheirimmediateinterestsandproblems,whichhas  inturndegradedwrethchedlythequalityofourlivingenvironment.Asmanyfamousecologistspointoutthataclusterofhigh-risebuildingsinacityoftenoverburdenlivingcapacities,whichoncecouldaffordtoresidentsenough.（ 例证）Consequently/Accordingly/Onbalance/Therefore/Itfollowsthat,noissueinchinaisasbasicto giveanexpressiontoinherentspiritofscientificdevelopment as restraintunbridledurbandevelopment.（此句为小节,1 与TS首尾呼应,重复原则）

Judgingfromwhathavebeenarguedabove,peoplehavecometorealizetheharmsarisingfromindiscriminatedevelopmenthasbeen,likethePandora'sbox,thecripplingforceoffollowingthevaluesofscientificdevelopment.Itis,therefore,necessarythatsomeeffectivestepsbemadeto（点主题重复原则） laymuchemphasisontheharmsfromblinddevelopmentattheexpenseofthebalanceofecosystem. Tobeginwith,（以法治国） thegovernmentshouldmakelawtochannelconstructiontothetrackofvaluesofscientificdevelopment,for,ifnot,ourdescendantswouldbethrownintounexpectedcrises.Inaddition,（以德治国） peopleshouldenhancetheawarenessthatenvironmentalproblemscannotbeseparatedfromthoseofhumanwelfareandfromtheprocessofeconomicdevelopmentingeneral.  Onlybyundergoingthesemeasures,can wemakeoursociety,wherebirdsaresingingandflowersaregivingforththeir  fragrancehereandthere,appealtoeveryone.

写实类范文

2008年考研英语作文范文如下：

Asisillustrated/depicted/conveyed/revealed/betrayed/showninthepicture,thetwodisabledpersonswhosecrippledlegsareboundtogetherdoalotoftraveling. Simpleasitis,thedrawingsetsusthinkingtoomuch.Accordingly,whatthisfar-reachingpicturedepictsreflectsacommonphenomenonintoday'ssociety:

 thepeopleinoursocietywhoareinthedarkwanttoturnthecornerbuttheycannotsucceedbythemselvesrespectivelyandinturntheyhavetochoosetopulltogetherintimesoftroubleItgoeswithoutsayingthatitssymbolicmeaningthat nomatterwhatdifficultieswemayfacewhenweworkorstudyweshouldhelpeachother,withtheharmonioussocietyechoedvigorouslynowadaysinChina.

Whydowelayemphasisonthis?

Severalpointsanalyzedbelowmightequipuswiththedeeperunderstandingofwhatweareheadingfor.Ononehand, sincewehavetoliveonanon-the-movelifestyle,wemayencounterthisorthatplight,wherewewouldbeatalosstodoanythingotherthantoneedothersassistance. Ontheotherhand, ifwedonotofferhelpeachotherwhenweconfrontdilemmawewouldnotrealizeourdream..   Nobetterillustrationofthisideacanbe thoughtthanthecaseaslistedbelow, 69peoplewerecaughtinanunfortunatemineaccidentinHenanprovinceseveralmonthsago,theysurvivedincrediblyowingtotheirmutualhelpatlast.. Consequently,noissueinchinaisasbasicto buildupthesocietyinharmony as coordinationinfaceofdisaster

Judgingfromwhathavebeenarguedabove,peoplehavecometorealizethevaluesofmutualaidhasbeenthedrivingforceofestablishingtheharmonysociety.Itis,therefore,necessarythatsomeeffectivestepsbemadeto advocatespiritofsupportingeachother Tobeginwith, thegovernmentshouldmakelawtoencouragepeopletounitetogethertoovercomedifficulties. Inaddition, peopleshouldenhancetheawarenessofcaringeachotherespeciallywhentheywereyoung.  Onlybyundergoingthesemeasures,can we makeoursociety,wherepeople,evennotknowing  eachother,helpamongthem,appealtoeveryone.

B抽象派

B1-1主题宽泛型

Asisvividlybetrayedinthepictureinfrontofus,itislikeabridgethatbridgesvariousgapstobearoad.Justlikebeingconveyedinthesetofdrawing,thefactthatthebridgestandsforcommunicationandthegullyformisunderstandingamongpeoplenowadays  profoundlyindicatesthatcommunicationplays  anincreasinglycrucialrole  andbecomes  perhapstheonlyeffectiveapproachtodisputes,withtheworldbeingconsiderablydiversified.

Tothepopularmind,nevertheless,itisimmediatelyassumedthatwhencommunicationisargued,itisstillcommunicationamongtheoldandtheyounggeneration.thatismeant.Inordertoaccountforwhathasbeenmentionedbefore,severalcausesshouldbeputforward.Ononehand,alwaysrebellious,youngpeopleareseeminglyturningtoberatheroddwhiletheirparentsarequiteembarrassed,orevenunbearabletoseealltheseoffbeatbehaviors.Ontheotherhand,childrenmaydeemparentstobeconservedwhereasparentsmayassumethattheyoungaregettingwild.Nobetterillustrationofthisideacanbethoughtthantheexamplediscussedbelow, 例证.Consequently,noissueinchinaisbasictoindividualandnationalsurvivalprospectascommunication,thoughpeoplebearcolorfulthoughts,behaviorsandcustoms.

Accordingly,itisvitalforustoderivesomepositivemeaningsfromthisthought-provokingpicture.Itis,therefore,necessarythateffortsbemadetocommunicate.Tobeginwith,actually,giveneffectivecommunication,parentswillunderstandthatyoungpeoplearenotmadbutmerelyseekingforanidentityinthiscolorfulworld