专业英语四级写作分类模拟368.docx

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专业英语四级写作分类模拟368

专业英语四级写作分类模拟368

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1.ReaClCarefUIIythefollowingexcerptonreal-namePaCkagedeliveryinChinaandthenWriteyourresponseinNOLESSTHAN200WOrdSJinWhiChyouShOUIcI:

•SUmmariZethemainmessageOftheexcerpt,andthen

•COmmentOnWhetherSendingPaCkageShOUldrequirereal-nameregistration.

YOUShOUIdSUPPOrtyourselfWithinformationfromtheexcerpt.

MarkSWillbeawardedforCOntentreleva∩ce1ContentSUffiCiency，OrganiZatiOnandIanguagequality.FailUretofollowtheaboveinstruct!

OnSmayresultinaIOSSOfmarks.

UnderNeWCraCkdOWn,SendingPaCkageSNOWReqUireSanIDCarcl

ChinRSStatePOStBUreaUannounCedOnMondaythatitWiIlStarta∩ationwideCamPaigntoCraCkdownOnillegalactivitiesbyenforcingreal-nameregistrationforSenders.Thenation,snewrulesrequireSenderstoPreSentOffiCialID,especiallyWhenSendingfromaPUbliCplace,SUChashotelsOrtrainStatiOns.TherulesalsoStiPUIatethatPaCkageSShOUldgothroughanX-raymachineforaSeCUritycheck.

Chinabegantomullareal-nameregistrationPOliCyintheindustryafterParCeIStaintedWithtoxicChemiCalSkilledamaninEaStChinasShandongPrOVinceandPOiSOnedSeVenOtherSinDeCember2013.

AStaffmemberSUrnamedChenWOrkinginaPOStOffiCeinHOhhOtSaidthatSenderSmusttaketheirOnginalIDCardStothePOStOffiCe・"TheCOUnerSWiIlSCanandrecordyourIDinformation.SendersClontneedtoWOrryaboutPerSOnalinfom∩ationbeinginSeCUre.Forinstance,thereWiIlbeSPeCiaIIy-assignedPerSOnneltokeepandmanageallthisinformation,πCherladded・

HOWeVerfmanyNetUSerSStiIlexpressedConCernOVertheIeakOfPerSOnalinformationinreal-nameregistration.ZhUHong,anassociatePrOfeSSOrtOIdthemassmediathatWhetherthereal-nameregistrationSyStemWOUldholdbackPaCkageSCOntainingillegalOrhazardousgoodsisnotclear.,,WeCantracetheSenderSnowWithPhOnenumbers.RegiStenngIDCardSmightOnIySPeedUPthePrOCeSSabit".

答案：

［范文］

Real-NameParCelDeliVeryfSeCUrityGUaranteeOrPnVaCyThreat?

ASeVereinCidentthatParCeIStaintedWithtoxicChemiCaIShadkilledamanin2013CaUSeClChina'sStatePOStBUreautoenfOrCereal-nameregistrationforSendersUSingthenationalCOUnerSerViCe・Thatistosay,theSendersarerequiredtoPreSenttheirOffiCialIDWhentheydelivergoods.However,inSPiteOfthenewrules,thereisStiIlaCOnCernOVertheIeakOfPerSOnalinformationinreal-nameregistrationandthenewSyStemisnotassuredtoholdbacktheClangerCaUSedbyillegalOrhazardousgoods.TherefOrefasfarasIamCOnCerned.real-nameParCeldeliveryisnecessarybutmuchmorenewregulationsShOUIdbePUtforwardtodealWiththenewPnVaCythreatitbringsabout.

TherearemanySenOUSthreatSevenafterthestate'sPOliCyisCamedout.FirStIyIinSOmePrOVinCeStheParCelSWithfakeSendernamesareStiIlacceptedandmostCOUrierSfailtoCheCkWhatisinSidethePaCkageS・SeCOndly,manyOftheSenderSrefusetoWOrkWiththeCOUrierSlbecausetheythinkitisUnSafetoUnVeiltheirinformation,BndthereforetheCOUnerSCanhardlyVenfytheirrealinformation.ThirdlyltheWOrStPrObIemisPrObablytheIeakOfthePerSOnalinfoImatiOn.IfyourPhOnenumberisIeakedtorealestateagents?

youWiIlhavetoreceiveIOtSOfharassingPhOneCaIISlSOmeOfWhiChmayevenindicateyourname1youraddress,yourWOrkPlaCelandevenyourPerSOnalaccount.

ASChinamovesintotheeraOfE-COmmerCefCOUnerSerViCeSaregraduallyturningintoaninSeParablePartOfOUrIife・AttheSametime?

becauseOftheIUrkingPeriISmentionedabove,moreStrategieSShOUIdbedesignedtohelptheSenderSandthedeliverySerViCeSbetterCO-OPerateWitheachOtherinOrdertomoveinamuchSmOOtherWay・

［解答］考生在下笔之前应先审题，明确写作要求：

针对“寄送包裹是否应该实名制”这一热议话题，首先总结材料中的主要观点，然后提出个人看法。

文章结构可安排如下：

第一段：

简要概括材料中所指明的现象。

因为快递运输过中岀现的事故，我国近来出台以下政策,要求寄送包裹的人在寄送时要使用身份证进行实名登记。

然而该政策并没有完全消除所有的危险，依然有不安和信息不安全的现象存在。

我个人的看法是，寄送包裹应该实名制，但应该加强法规，以减少隐患。

第二段：

国家的政策实行之后仍然有很多问题。

第一，在某些省份依然有人使用假名；第二，很多寄件人不配合政策，不愿意提供实名；第三，最严重的问题就是实名制后出现大量个人隐私被盗用的问题。

第三段：

重申观点——使用快递不可避免，实名制也是必须，怎么保护好自己的个人信息，让寄件者和快递公司更好地合作是我们要考虑的问题。

2.ReadCarefUIIythefolIowingexcerptOn2.5-dayWeekendinChinaIandthenWnteyourrespOnSein

NOLESSTHAN200WOrdSlinWhiChyouShOUIeI:

•SUmmariZethemainmessageOftheexcerpt,andthen

•COmmentOnWhether2.5-dayWeekendPOliCyShOUldbeadoptedinChina

YOUShOUIdSUPPOrtyourselfWithinfoιτnationfromtheexcerpt.

MarkSWillbeawardedforContentrelevance,COntentsufficiency,OrganizationandIanguagequality.FailUretofollowtheaboveinstruCtiOnSmayresultinaIOSSOfmarks.

ChinatoImPlement2.5-DayWeekendSThiSSUmmer

TheStateAdnniniStrationOfTOUriSmismullingOVeranewplantoCreatetwo-and-a-halfdayWeekendSacrosstheCOUntrySOmetimebythesummer.TheideaistogiveemployeesmorefamilytimeandalsoStimUIatetourism.AnumberOfProVinCeSandmuniCipalitiesacrossChina,includingHebeifJiangxiandChongqing,haveissuednewPOliCieSfCaIlingOnCOmPaniestoCreate2.5-dayweekends・

SinCebeingannouncedinNoVember;theideahasbegUngainingtraction.,,lt,sagoodthingforus,becauseWeCanObViOUSIytakemoretimetorelax.11"Ithinkit,sagoodidea.ThereareSOmanyPeOPleCOmmUtingOnFridays.ThetrafficisUSUaIIyVeryCrOWded.π

LiUSimin,DePUtySeCretaryGeneralOftheBeijingTOUnSmSociety,SayShaving2.5-dayWeekendsCanhelpSatiSfypeople'sdesireformoreShOrttrips.However,henotesthenewPOliCyisIimitedinSCOPe・,,ThreekeyPOintSCOntminedinthisPIanSUggeStit,sOnlyabenefitforaCertaingroupOfPeOPle-FirStIyfit,snotarule1butratheraSUggeStion.Secondly,thePlanisCOneIitiOnal.LaStIyfit,sOnIyappliedtotheSUmmermonths,ratherthantoallyear.BeCaUSeOftheseStiPUIatiOnSltheCOVerageOfthe2.5-dayWeekendSisgoingtobeVeryIimited.,,

UnderthePrOViSiOns,a40-hourworkingWeekisStillrequired,meaningemployeeswhoget2.5-dayWeekendsaregoingtohavetomakeUPthehoursSOmeWhereelseduringtheirWeek.答案：

［范文］

NONeeCltoImPIement2.5-DayWeekends

2.5-dayWeekendSinSUmmerhasarousedadebateamongthePUbliCasitCOnCernspeople'sfamilytimeandVaCatiOnplans.ManyPeOPlebelievethatIongerWeekendWiIlbringUSmoretimetorelaxandboosttourisminClUStry.HOWeVerIthisPIanisOnlyappliedinSUmmerandisnotCOmPUlSOryforallCOmPaniestSOithasIimitedStimUlatiOnfortourism.FrOmmyPerSPeCtiVel2.5-dayWeekendsShOUIdnotbeadoptedinChina

FirStIyfeventhoughthePIanisPartiaIlydesignedtoencourage"leisuretime,"PeOPlearenotnecessarilygivenmoretimetoSPendWiththeirfamilies,becausetheyneedtomakeUPthehoursSOmeWhereelseduringtheirWeek.SOthePlandoesnotmakeanySenSeifWOrkerSneedtoWakeUPearlierandStayUPIateduringtheOtherfourdays.SeCOndly,itisnotWOrthWhiIeWaStingahalfdayOnFnday.IfemployeesareallowedtotakeOffatnoonOnFriday.itmeansmostWOrkerSWiIlbeinaStateOfWeekendinthemorningOnFridaXWhiChmayCaUSeIOWefficiencyinwork.MeanWhileICOmPaniesWiIlIOSehalf-dayPrOdUCtiVityWhiChisagreatIOSSforSmallandmediumenterprises.SOWeCanPrediCtthatmostPriVateenterprisesWiIlnotimplementthisnon-cor∩pulsoryPOIiCy・

AIlinallt2.5-dayWeekendsareneithernecessarynorViabIeinChina.SOOUrWeekendShOUIdbetwodaysagainthisSUmmerTSameastheyWereever.

［解答］本题给出的材料是针对是否应当推行两天半周末进行讨论，呈现了两种不同的观点。

根据题目要求，先总结双方的观点，再给出自己的看法。

文章可按下列结构来安排：

第一段：

先整合概括正反双方的观点，然后表明自己的论点——在中国，不应采取两天半周末。

第二段：

陈述自己的理由。

首先，两天半周末并不能真正带来更多休息时间；第二，两天半周末实际上会造成半天工作时间的浪费。

第三段：

总结全文——在中国，两天半周末不可行。

3.ReadCarefUIIythefollowingexcerptOnClOSingPUbIiCtoiletsinUKandthenWriteyourrespOnSeinNOLESSTHAN200WOrdSlinWhiChyouShOUICI:

•SUmmariZethemainmessageOftheexcerpt,andthen

•COmmentOnWhetherPUbliCtoiletsShOUldbeClOSedinUK.

YOUShOUIdSUPPOrtyourselfWithinformationfromtheexcerpt.

MarkSWillbeawardedforCOntentreleva∩ce1ContentSUffiCiency，OrganiZatiOnandIanguagequality.

FailUretofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinaIOSSOfmarks.

PUbliCTOiIetS"WipedOut"inPartSOfUK

SOmeUKHighStreetSandPUbliCSPaCeSnoIongerhaveanyCOUnCil-runPUbliCtOiIetSjtheBBChaslearned.AtIeaSt1,782facilitieshaveCIOSeclacrosstheUKintheIaStdecade,FreedOmOfInformationrequestsfound.

TheLOCalGOVernmentASSOCiatiOnSaidCOUnCilSWeretryingtokeeptoiletsOPenbutfacedSqUeeZedbudgets.PUbliCtoiletshaveexistedOnUKHighStreetSformorethan150years,butthereisnoIegalrequirementforIOCalauthoritiestoPrOVidetoilets1meaningtheyareOftenClOSeCldownifCOUncilsfeeltheyCannotaffordtheUPkeeP・

RaymOndMartin,OftheBntiShTOiletASSOCiatiOn,SaidPrOViClingtoiletsWaSabouthealth,WeIIbeingequalityandSOCialinCIUSiOn."It'salsoaboutPUbliCdecencyandPUbliCdignity—Wedon'tWantPeOPIebeingforcedtoUrinmteinthestreets,"heSaid.JoanDeanSaidherhusbandBnanJWhOhasParkinsorfsdisease,WaSIefthumiliatedWhenheWethimselfafterfailingtofindatoiletOnatriptoLeVenshulme,inManCheSterIWhere18toiletshavebeenCIOSedintheIaSt10years.

ALOCalGOVernmentASSOCiatiOnSPOkeSmanSaidCOUnCilSWeredoingeverythingtheyCOUIdtokeepPUbIiCtOiletSOPerχinClUdingrunningCOmmUnitytoiletSChemeStOenablePUbSfrestaurantsandShOPStomaketheirtoiletsavailabletothePUbliC・CUtSmeantCoUneiIShadIeSStoSPendOnCOmmUnitySerViCeSandthenextfewyearsWOUIdcontinuetobeaChalleng巳heSaid・答案：

［范文］

ChangeSforPUbIiCTOiletS

AtightbudgethasforcedCOUnCilStoClOSethenon-PrOfitSerViCeStheyPrOVideinCIUclingPUbIiCtoilets.However,OffiCialSintheBntiShTOiletAssociationarguedthatpeopl