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toefl独立写作及范文

2013年1月13日托福考试题目是什么？

新东方网托福频道为大家搜集整理了2013年1月13日托福写作真题回忆及解析，助力各位考生备战托福！

　独立写作：

　　Itisimportanttomakesurethatothersknowaboutyourstrengthsandaccomplishments;ifyouarenotso,youwillbeneversuccessfulinlife.

　　Ifpeopleareunawareofyourtalentsandothergoodqualities,youobviouslywillnotstandoutamongyourpeers.Tobesuccessfulyounotonlyhavetoworkhard,butyouhavetomakesureothersknowyouworkhard,aswell.Ofcourseyoushouldletothersknowofyourstrengthandaccomplishments,butthebestwaytoletthemknowisbyshowing,notbyjusttelling.

　　Collegeapplications-orapplicationsofanykind-areaperfectexample.Collegeswantwhatkindofstudentyouareandwhatkindofstudentyouwillbeincollege.Youmustshowthemthatyouareagoodstudentandthatyouareinterestedinwhateveryouwanttostudy.Butintheessay,youcannotjuststatethatyouareagoodstudent,arehardworking,andenjoymathematics;youmustshowthem.Ifyouareinterestedinmathematics,thenyouprobablydidsomethinginhighschoolrelatedtomathematics,suchasthemathclub.Inyouressay,youmustbesuretomentionyourparticipationinmathclub,butalsoactivitiesyourmathclubinordertoshowcollegesthatyouwillbeactiveinyourmathematicsmajor.Ifyousimplystatethatyoulikemath,collegeswillnotbeasimpressed.

　　Itisimportanttoletothersknowofyourachievements;otherwiseyouwillnotbesuccessfulinlife.Thefieldofsciencecanprovidemanyexamplesofthevalidityofthisstatement.Inscience,communicatingyourdiscoveriesisasimportantasdiscoverythingsinthefirstplace.EverybodyknowsthatthescientistsWatsonandCrickdiscoveredthedouble-helixstructureofDNA.ManypeoplearenotawarethatthismodelwasfirsttheorizedbyafemalescientistworkinginthesamelabasWatsonandCrick.However,WatsonandCrickpublishedtheirfindingsbeforethewomanpublishedherownfindings.Inscience,creditisgiventowhoeverpublishesfirst,sotheWatsonandCrickaregivenfullcreditforthediscoveryofthedouble-helixstructureofDNA.Inordertobesuccessful,youmustletotherpeopleknowofyouraccomplishments.

　　Granted,thereisafinelinebetweenlettingpeopleknowaboutyouraccomplishmentsandsimplyshowingoff.Nobodylikesashow-off,soyoumustbecarefulnottorubpeoplethewrongwaywithyoursuccess.Peoplealwayssaythatactionsspeaklouderthanwords,whichisgoodadvicetokeepinmindwhenyouaretryingtoletotherpeopleknowofyoursuccess.Don'tjusttellpeopleyou'regoodatwriting.Startablogandshowpeoplehowaccomplishedofawriteryouare.

　　Thekeytosuccessistoplaytoyourstrengthsandtonotbeshyaboutshowingotherpeopleyourtalents.（460words）

1.27

独立写作范文：

　　Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?

Thelocationyoulivehasmoreinfluenceonyourhappinessthanthekindofjobyouhave.Usespecificexamplestosupportyouranswer.

　　Becominganadultisfraughtwithmanydifficultdecisions,suchaschoosingacareerandwheretolive.Stressescomewitheveryjob.Ifwhereyoulivedoesnothelpyouescapethestressesofwork,thenyouwillneverbehappy,nomatterhowgoodajobyouhave.

　　IhaveacousininCaliforniawhohasaterriblejobatahotel.ShecouldmovebacktotheEastCoastandmaybefindabetterjob,butshesaysshewouldnotdreamofit;shelovestheCalifornianweatherandlifestyletoomuch.Shetoldmethateventhoughworkisterriblesometimes,whenevershehasabaddayshejustgoesforawalkonthebeachandthenfeelsbetter.Therewillalwaysbesomethingstressfulorunpleasantaboutyourjob.Mycousinlivesbythephilosophythatthequalityoflifedoesnothavetodependonyourjob.Aslongasyouliveafullandadventurouslifeafterhoursworkhours,youcanbehappy.Inordertoaccomplishlivinglifecompletely,Ibelievelocationisveryimportant.

　　Evenifyouloveyoujob,therearestillplentyofhoursintheweekwhereyouarenotattheoffice.Ihaveafriendwholovestheoutdoors.HehasagreatjobinDenver,Coloradoworkingatageologicalinstitute.Heloveshisjob,butthemainreasonhechosetomovetoDenverwastobeabletospendhisweekendsmountainclimbing.Youcanbehappywithyourjob,butlivinginaplacewhereyoucanfindhappinessoutsideofworkisthebestwaytofindcontentmentinlife.

　　Granted,sometimesyoumustmovetoaplaceyoudonotlike,becauseyouwanttokeepajobyoulike.Sometimespeoplearetransferredbytheircompaniestolessthanideallocations.Companiesknowthatitisoftendifficulttoconvinceemployeestotakeapositioninaremoteorfarawaylocation,sotheyofferemployeesincentivestomovetotheseareas.Manypeopleusetheseincentivesofextrapayandotheramenitiesasameansofmotivation.Oftentimestheseassignmentsaretemporaryandtheemployeesreturnatthefirstchancetheyget.Maybetheyarenotdepressedtoworkintheselocations,buttheycertainlyaren’tthehappiesttheycouldbe.

　　Nomatterhowsatisfiedyouarewithyourjob,ifyouarenotinagoodlocation,youwillnotbeashappyasyoucanbe.

北美3.2

独立写作：

　　Peopleshouldstatetheirhonestopinionseventhoughtheyknowotherswilldisagreewiththeirviews.

　　Inordertobuildtrustwithfriends,coworkersandbusinesspartners,andtoachievebetterresultsinvariousprojects,somepeoplebelievetheytelltheirrealthoughtseventhoughothersmayholdcontraryopinions.IagreewithsuchapracticeforIbelievehonestcommunicationisthekeyforahappyandsuccessfullife.

　　Firstofall,weneedtotellourfriendsandfamilymembershowwereallyfeelandwhatwereallywant,soastoavoidmisunderstandingsandconflicts.Ifwetellliestoprotectother'sfeelings,wemayendupwithupsettingourselvesandinturndamagingourrelationshipswithfriendsandfamilymembers. Oncemyparentswantedtothrowmeabirthdayparty,invitingsomeofmybestfriendsatschool.Theylikedtheideaofhavingapicnicbyalocallake.IsaidI'dbefinewithapicnicpartythoughIdidn'treallylikeit.Ialwayshatedbeingexposedinthesunlightfortoolongandvariousbugsinwoods.Thatbirthdaypartyturnedouttobeadisaster,becauseIwasgrumpythewholetimeandwasrudetoeveryone.Noonereallyenjoyedthepartyallbecauseofmyhidingofmyrealthoughts.ThisincidenttaughtmethatIshouldbehonestwithmyfriendsandfamily.

　　Furthermore,weneedtotalkfranklywithourcoworkersandbusinesspartnersaswell,soastoincreaseourworkefficiency,explorefullbusinesspotentialandminimizethechancetomakemistakes.Differentopinionsshouldbeallowedinbusinessmeetingsandweshouldspeakoutloudouropinionsregardlessothers'doubtsandoppositions.SteveJobswasknownasboldandblunt.WheneveryonedoubtedhisideaofemphasizingiPhone'sfeatureonvariousgames,heinsistedhisideaandconvincedthosewhodidn'tbelieveinhim.Andhisideaturnedouttobeagreatsuccess.IfSteveJobshadn'tbeencompletelyhonestwithhiscolleagues,wewouldn'thavewitnessedsuchrevolutiontheAppleCompanyhasbrought.

　　ThoughI'mstillastudentnowanddon'thavecolleaguesatwork,thesamelogicappliestogroupstudyaswell.Whendoinggroupdiscussionsandpresentations,weshouldholdbackanyofourthoughts.Onlywheneverymemberofthegroupiscontributinghisorherideastothecollectiveproject,cantheteamreachitsfullpotential.Discussionsandargumentsarenotabadthing,becausewecanalwaysfindthebestsolutionandbereconciledwithfriends.

　　Allinall,Ibelieveweshouldtellouropinionsregardlessothers'doubtsandoppositions.

3.3

　Doyouagreeordisagree：

youngpeopletodayaremorelikelytogivetimeandefforttoimprovetheworldthanyoungpeoplewereinthepast.

　　Nowadayspeoplearehavingconflictingviewsaboutwhetheryoungpeopletodayaremorelikelytogivetimeandefforttoimprovetheworldthanyoungpeoplewereinthepast.Somepeopleholdthatyoungpeopletoday,duetoadeclineofmoralvalue,donotcareaboutmakingtheworldabetterplace.However,inmypointofview,youngpeopletodayare,indeed,morelikelytogivetimetoimprovingtheworld.

　　Firstly,thankstothedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,youngpeopletodayareabletoreceivemoreinformationaboutworld'scurrentsituationandmakeasoundindividualdecisiontohelpthoseinneed.Itishardlyimaginableifpeoplelive,sotosay,fiftyyearsago.Forexample,oneofmyfriendsiscurrentlyworkinginUNVolunteer,asubsidiarybranchofUNinchargeoforganizinginternationalvolunteerproject.Shetoldmethateveryyear,tensofthousandsofyoungapplicantsaresubmittingtheirinterestingoingtopoorplacesandhelpthoseinneed,andmostofthemgettheirinformationaboutUNVolunteerprojectsviatheirwebpage.Thetechnologicaldevelopmentofourworlddoesenableyoungpeopletogivemoretimetomakingtheworldabetterplace.

　　Secondly,today'seducationalsystemhasastrongeremphasisonstudents'extracurricularactivities,suchvolunteeringwork,entrepreneurialprojects.TakeChinaasanexample.Decadesagouniversitycurriculumhadastrongeremphasisonstudents'intellectualability,suchascalculationandinterpretation.Recentlyexpertsandcountryadministratorsstarttorealizethataneducationofmakingchildrenmentallybettershapedistheeducationmostjustified.Thus,China'seducationalqualityimprovesandthewholesocietyevaluatesstudentsinvariouswaysandencouragesthemtohelpothers.Inthisway,youngpeopletodayaremorelikelytogivetimetohe