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高考写作,1评分标准2内容框架,第四部分:
书面表达(满分25分)假设你是卜曼宜,你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机,因有质量问题,要求该公司更换。
请根据下列要点,用英文写一封电子邮件。
要点:
问题:
手机不响铃,不能发短信;该产品已售完,无法更换;型号新,无配件,无法维修。
3.要求:
公司应尽快予以更换。
注意:
1.词数为100左右;2.参考词汇:
配件sparepart3.电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入你所写词数);4.已给出的电子邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡。
WhenIboughtithome,Ifoundtherewereseveralproblemsaboutthequalityofthemobilephone.Thereisnoringinthenewmobilephone,besides,itcannotbeusedtosendshortmessages.WhenIwantbacktothelocalcompany,themanagertoldmethisproducthassoldoutandthatIwasntabletochangeit.Whatsworse,thisstylemobilephoneisanewproduct,thereisnosparepartandcanttoberepaired.Theseproblemsworriesmemost.Ihopeyourcompanywouldchangeitformeassoonaspossible.,【分析】基本表达清楚;时态运用恰当;采用了些简单连接手法;内容较连贯;准确性不够。
15,第四部分:
书面表达(满分25分)假设你是卜曼宜,你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机,因有质量问题,要求该公司更换。
请根据下列要点,用英文写一封电子邮件。
要点:
问题:
手机不响铃,不能发短信;该产品已售完,无法更换;型号新,无配件,无法维修。
2.要求:
公司应尽快予以更换。
注意:
1.词数为100左右;2.参考词汇:
配件sparepart3.电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入你所写词数);4.已给出的电子邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡。
However,someproblemsarepresentedwiththismobilephone.Inthefirstplace,whentherearephonecalls,themobilephonejustcantring.Inaddition,shortmessagescanneverbesent.whenIcamebacktothemallforexchange,Iwasdisappointedtobetoldthatthismodelhadbeensoldout.Worsestill,itisanewmodel,thusnosparepartisavailableatthemoment.NowherecanIhavethisphonerepaired.Maybetherearesomealternativestohandlethiscase,butIhopeitcanbedealtwithandsolvedassoonaspossible.Inbrief,mypersonalviewpointisthatyoureplacethismobilephone.Imlookingforwardtoyourreply.,【分析】全文共九个句子,其中有两个时间状语从句,一个并列句;一个倒装句;一个表语从句。
运用了however,inthefirstplace,inaddition,worsestill,inbrief五个过渡性词汇。
运用了available,alternative两个较高级词语。
25,1评分标准,keeptothepointaccuracy(spellingandgrammar)brightpoints(words,phrasesandsentence)natural,2内容框架,1真题一(环境保护一次性筷子的使用)(howtomakeyourcontentlogical)2真题二(周末集体活动介绍一个地方)(howtomakebrightpointsforyourarticle)3真题三(讨论动物园是否应搬出市区)(howtomakeaccuracy)4历年真题翻译练习,真题一,假如你叫李华,是一名高中学生。
根据下面内容,写一封倡议书,呼吁人们停止使用一次性筷子。
注意:
1开头和结尾已给出。
2字数100左右。
3参考词汇:
rejectthrowawaychopsticks,写作步骤,1扩展-逻辑性-分段2翻译-亮点-词与句3检查-错误,假如你叫李华,是一名高中学生。
根据下面内容,写一封倡议书,呼吁人们停止使用一次性筷子。
注意:
1开头和结尾已给出。
2字数100左右。
3参考词汇:
rejectthrowawaychopsticks,目前状态导致结果采取措施,1扩展,砍伐森林会导致很多严重的环境问题。
面对这样的情况,我们应该采取一些措施来保护森林了。
目前,中国的森林正遭受着严重的破坏。
2翻译第一部分,Doyouknowwhysandstormsandlandslidesarehappeningmorefrequentlythaneverinrecentyears?
Accordingtotherecentstatistics,中国正面临着严重的森林破坏问题。
中国的森林覆盖率仅为13%,但是中国每年要生产大约450亿双筷子,而这些筷子就需要我们砍伐2500万棵树。
有环保主义者警告,照这样的速度,中国可能在20年内就要砍伐所有的森林。
面临着森林破坏问题覆盖率大约450亿2500万警告灭绝,beconfrontedwiththeproblemofdeforestationbecoveredwithapproximately45billion25millionwarndieout,中国正面临着严重的森林破坏问题。
中国的森林覆盖率仅为13%,但是中国每年要生产大约450亿双筷子而这些筷子就需要我们砍伐2500万棵树。
有环保主义者警告,照这样的速度,中国可能在20年内就要砍伐所有的森林。
Chinaisconfrontedwiththeseriousproblemofdeforestation.13%ofchinaiscoveredwithforest,butchinaproducesapproximately45billionpairsofthrowawaychopsticks.Thesechopsticksneedustocutdown25milliontrees.SomeenvironmentalistswarnthepublicthattheforestofChinawilldieoutafter20yearsbythisspeed.,Chinaisconfrontedwiththeseriousproblemofforestdestruction.13%ofchinaiscoveredwithforest,butchinaproducesapproximately45billionpairsofthrowawaychopsticks.Thesechopsticksneedustocutdown25milliontrees.SomeenvironmentalistswarnthepublicthattheforestofChinawilldieoutafter20yearsbythisspeed.,Confrontedwiththeseriousproblemofdeforestation.13%ofchinaiscoveredwithforest,howeverapproximately45billionpairsofthrowawaychopsticksareproducedbyChinaannually,whichmeansthatweneedtocutdown25milliontrees.Therefore,someenvironmentalistswarnthepublicthattheforestofChinawilldieoutafter20yearsbythisspeed.,被动语态,定语从句,连词,分词作状语,第二部分,砍伐森林会导致很多环境问题,例如,水土流失,废气排放增多,温室效应。
人类将会遭受一个由自己带来的灾难。
砍伐森林水土流失废气排放增多遭受,Excessivedeforestationsoilerosiontheincreaseemissionofcarbondioxidesufferfrom,砍伐森林会导致很多环境问题,例如,水土流失,废气排放增多,温室效应.人类将会遭受一个由自己带来的灾难。
Excessivedeforestationwillleadtoaseriesofenvironmentalchanges,forinstance,soilerosion,theincreaseemissionofcarbondioxide,especiallythegreenhouseeffect.Itssurethatthehumenwillsufferfromadisaterwhichiscausedbyourselves.,第三部分,所以,我们是该采取一些措施来保护我们的森林资源了。
itstimethatsbdidsth.,万能措施一,Thelongtermgoalofenvironmentalprotectionistopreventthecreationofpollutantsandwastesandtoproducedurable,recyclablegoods.,万能措施二,Inviewofsustainabledevelopment,theexploitationofmineralresourcesshouldbeunderstrictgovernment.,万能理由三,Mankindshouldjoinhandinhandtocreateaninhabitableworldforthemselvesandtheiroffspring.,3检查纠错,Doyouknowwhysandstormsandlandslidesarehappeningmorefrequentlythaneverinrecentyears?
Accordingtotherecentstatistics,theyreduetothedisappearingofforests.Dearfriends,doyouknowtheywereeatlenbyyouwhenusethechopsticks?
Everyyearitproducts45billionchopsticksfromChina.Theforestsonlycover13percentsinChina.Theseneed25millionoftrees.SomeonewhocarestheenvironmenthasalarmedthatChinamayuseoutallofitsforestsaccordingtothisspeed!
ItmeansthattheenvironmentofChinawillbreakdownentirely.Sopleasethrowawaychopsticksnow!
usingthethrowawaychopsticksmaykillourforests.Chinawhoseforestsonlycovers13%ofitsland,produces45000000000throwawaychopstickseveryyear.Thisneeds2500milliontreestobecutdown.Whatsworse,someenvironmentalistsevenwarnedthatifwecontinueusingthesechopsticksatthisspeed,itwillbepossibleforChinatouseupallitsforestresourcesinonly20years.(Atthattime,wehumanbeingscouldnotliveontheplannetanylongerandtherewaybenolivingthingontheearth,either.Whatafrighteningthingitis!
)Soweshouldnotusethechopsticksanymoreinordertomakeabetterenvironmentforouryoungergenerationandforourselves.Dearfriends,letstakeactionfromnowon!
必备词汇,disaster,flood,hurricane,lighting,thunderstorm,tornado,volcano,wave,ash,furniture,feather,fur,latitude,equator,longitudebury,occur,strike,ruin,erupt,eruption.current,tropical,violent,previous,常用表达,污染大气无节制地开发资源乱扔垃圾砍伐森林冰川融化土地沙漠化渡过灾难回收再利用垃圾减少废气排放最大化地利用资源,pollutetheatmosphereexploitnaturalresourcesexcessivelylitterarounddeforestthepolesmeltdesertificationsurvivethedisasterrecyclethegarbagereducetheexhaustemissionmaximizetheuseofresources,真题二(仿写),假定你是一名导游,你将接待一个外国旅游团。
请你拟定一份100词左右的导游词向客介绍青岛。
要点如下:
1.青岛位于山东半岛的南端,面积10654平方公里,总人口699万;2.青岛三面环海,大海是青岛的魅力所在;3.古代名人如李白,蒲松龄,康有为等的足迹遍布青岛各地,留下了华美的诗文。
4.青岛是一座现代化城市,现代化的工厂和楼房林立。
参考词汇;半岛peninsula,ParisisthecapitalandlargestcityofFrance,situatedontheRiverSeine.Itisoneofthemostbeautifulcitiesintheworldandisvisitiedbymorethaneightmilliontouristseveryyear.coveranareaofwithapopulationof,QingdaoisabeautifulcityofChina,situatedinthesouthofShandongpeninsula,coveringanareaof10,654squarekilometersandwithapopulationof6.99million.,FranceisEuropesthirdlargestcountryandfacestheUnitedKingdomacosstheEnglishChannel.FlorenceisanItaliancitywhichbecamefamousbecauseoftheRenaissance.,Qingdaofacestheseawhichbecomesfamousbecauseoftheblueseawater.,ManyofFlorencesmostbeautifulpaintingsandsculptureswereproducedbygreatartistssuchasLeonardodaVinciandMichelangelo.GreecesbestwriterslivedinancientAthens.Theirworkhasinfluencedwriterseversince.poetessaycelebrity,ChinasbestwriterstravelledaroundancientQingdao.ManyofChinasmostbeautifulessaysandpoemswereproducedbygreatartistssuchasLiBai,PuSonglinandKangYouwei.,internationalpossessmodern,QingdaoisabeautifulcityofChina,situatedinthesouthofShandongpeninsula,coveringanareaof10,654spuarekilometersandwithapopulationof6.99million.Qingdaofacestheseawhichbecomesfamousbecauseoftheblueseawater.ChinasbestwriterstravelledaroundancientQingdao.ManyofChinasmostbeautifulessaysandpoemswereproducedbygreatartistssuchasLiBai,PuSonglinandKangYouwei.Qingdaoisainternationalcity,whichpossessesagreatmanymodernbuildingsandfactories.,1连接词2框架词3内容词,1连接词汇表列举:
forexample、forinstance、thatistosay表补充:
besides、inaddition、moreover表对比:
on(the)onehandontheotherhand,inspiteof表原因:
becauseof、thanksto、dueto、owingto、asaresultof表结果:
therefore、thus、asaresult、so表结论:
toconclude、inaword、inbrief、tosumupinanutshellinconclusion表转折:
however、nevertheless、yet,different,moreandmore,face,emphasize,many,discussion,attention,happen,realize,various,varyfrom,growing,increasing,confront,attachimportanceto,vast,aoverwhelmingmajorityof,quiteafew,anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof,debate,controversy,focus,occur,beawareof,think,believe,hold,argue,maitain,harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,itisuniversallyackowledgedthat,tomymind,asfarasIamconcerned,important,essential,vital,significant,notable,support,beinfavorof,approveof,disagree,disapproveof,frownonsth,like,prefer,feelinclinedto,bekeenon,befondof,appealto,good,benefical,positive,favorable,perfect,pleasurable,bad,dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse,内容词汇,Solve,dealwith,copewith,handle,resolve,address,tackle,Damage,hurt,injure,harm,impair,undermine,jeopardize,Give,offer,render,impart,provide,supply,afford,Develop,cultivate,foster,Advantage,merit,virtue,benefit,upside,strength,Disadvantage,demerit,drawback,downside,weakness,Puzzle,bewilder,perplex,baffle,Protect,conserve,preserve,Key,crucial,critical,important,significant,vital,substantial,indispensable,imperative,Assure,ensure,guarantee,pledge,Eliminate,clear,remove,clearup,takeaway,smoothaway,Leadto,bringabout,resultin,cause,sparkoff,conduceto,procure,induce,gen